Orc Quest; or, A Critical Examination of Agency Through in Interactive Fiction (Warcraft)

Honestly, to me N'Zoth's Cataclysm plans (along with changes to Deathwing's character) were too unsubtle in comparison with what the other Old Gods were doing
I need to check the most recent Dragonflight lore at some point actually. I don't necessarily take account of new lore because some of it is very silly, but I'd probably say that there are various plans from various gods, and that they're keeping a lot of balls in the air at the same time (the tentacles help).

Neltharion was the Earth Warder, so the Old Gods were collectively screaming at him to drive him mad, constantly shouting 'breaktheworldbreaktheworldbreaktheworld' for thousands of years. Comparably, Nzoth was also cultivating the Naga, YS was doing stuff with the Mantid, others had their own pet projects of spiders, so there's a lot going on. If even one of these projects succeeds, you get a void corrupted titan and the Old Gods win.

However, happily I don't really have to think about a lot of this yet. Grok doesn't even know what an Old God is. I might make lore changes, might not, we'll see really.

Regarding the Blacks specifically, for the moment Deathwing is chilling in Deepholme, so the main actors are Nef and Ony. I would certainly say that outside a degree of filial obligation and fear of their father, they probably care very little for his plans, and are fine with just conquering the world for the Blacks, rather than doing any old gody stuff.
 
I don't know about the later WoW, but when Cata came out it was said DW's actions were masterminded by N'Zoth,
ah well looking at the wiki it says as In recent years, the whisperings of the Old Gods had gotten worse; the Old Ones' dread power steadily increased as C'Thun and Yogg-Saron stirred from their ancient slumbers, and the growing influence of the Old Gods magnified Deathwing's power ten-fold. so most likely he just became madder and lost his scheming part which is a shame
 
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Alterac 2
Alterac 2

[X] Tell Fordring about your call to the Light.

Tirion looks at your expectantly, face open, grey eyes shining with that inner power.

"Fairbanks came to me. Before the battle." you began, "He said in my direst moment I should call on the Light, he spoke of parables. I didn't think much of it at first. I find the Church laudable, but it is an alien religion to me."

Tirion nods, but does not speak.

"We fought our way through the Death Knights, some died, others took wounds. It seemed we might all perish." and you surprised a shiver at the feeling of the Ashbringer cutting through you.

You'd been looking at the ground, mumbling, but now you looked up at Tirion, "In a moment before the final battle I saw my own death, felt Mograine kill me. But we went on- I went on- I put it aside. At first it was going well, but the Four Horsemen were too strong and I told the others I'd occupy Mograine myself, hold him off so they might deal with the others."

"That was a bold thing to do, as skilled as Mograine was." Tirion acknowledges quietly.

"More skilled, I think, that me." you reply, "But he did kill me, my skill, my own power, wasn't enough. I felt his blade in me just as I'd foreseen. I lay dying, I remember feeling my heart slowing, and I called on the Light."

Tirion's eyebrows shoot up.

"I don't know what it was. I didn't mean to, I don't think, but I called out. I couldn't let it end there, let the others die, I begged for the power, and it came, I felt it. The Light healed me, gave me strength, and I rose and struck him down, shattered the Ashbringer and defeated him."

Tirion is frowning.

"Do you not believe me?" you asked him. You knew what you felt, but you couldn't deny it hurt to see his scepticism.

The old paladin smiles slightly, "If it was anything, it would not be that." He sighs, "No, it's just that I've counselled many in your position. Many who thought they'd touched the Light, and some who had, and I know how they felt when I told them it wasn't so." He pauses, holding up a hand, "I don't mean to say you haven't! No! Merely that I don't want you to be disappointed… Or me for that matter… Many times these past few years my faith has been shaken, many times have I felt the Light abandon me, but in truth it never did."

He sighs again. "Forgive an old man's ramblings. Now, let us think, did any see this? You fought Mograine among others, and indeed, as proof I suppose you seem uninjured. Despite your skill I would expect at least some injuries from such a bout."

"Yes, but I don't think anyone would have noticed. When I call upon the Spirit of Fire, that causes flames too along my blade."

"Why would-"

You hadn't realised, but sought to clarify, "When I feel the Light I feel it as pure flame. Some fire is oily, sooty, smoky. We know much of fire, our clan, and I know this is different. I can feel it now," and you touch your chest, "inside me like a candleflame."

Tirion is frowning again, this time in interest rather than scepticism. "I have never heard it described as such. But, I suppose it's true that fire produces light, and that the Holy Light might manifest as flame rather than radiance. Now though comes the test, can you produce this, as a Paladin I would be able to feel it easily."

You looked down. You clenched your fist, your hand shook, you could feel the pressure of your blood as your skin turned pale, the rage coursing through you.

Then it burned away. You relaxed the pressure, blood rushed back to flesh once constricted, and with it burned a ball of pure fire, golden and red and white, dancing there in the palm of your open hand.

Tirion flinched back immediately. Eyes widening, holding up his hand to ward it away.

Then he relaxed by a force of will, the power behind his eyes shining stronger as he drew close to the flame, holding out that once warding hand toward it.

"Incredible." he murmured, sitting back, hands on his knees. "I am sorry for my reaction then, I simply hadn't expected it to appear in that way, but yes, you have called on the Holy Light."

You didn't quite know what to think. "What does this mean?"

The paladin laughed, "Well, my young friend, it means you're the first Orc ever to call on the Light." He slapped his knee and laughed again, and it was jolly, strangely so in the middle of a war camp, strange enough for a few to look over at you. Then he looked at you, "This is a glorious day. If we were in kinder times there would be great rejoicing, but alas, I fear this only complicates your situation."

Tirion licked his lips, thinking, "I would ask you not to speak of this to anyone." And he looked about him, as if in fear of the Crusade's inquisitors springing from behind one of the tents. "If this were known, conflict and debate might arise, and to a weak nation that would be disastrous. I do not say that anything calamitous would happen immediately, but for the Light to answer the call of an Orc, when many perceive that it did not answer Lordaeron in the kingdom's distress, well, it would cause doubt."

"I see." you said in agreement. You'd not fully comprehended that.

"Even among your own folk, might they question you adopting what they see as human magic?" Tirion continued.

You didn't interrupt, but you disagreed there. Your Orcs saw strength as the truest goal, the means it was achieved wasn't actually that important, that's why warlocks and shaman, not traditionally strong or skilled in arms, were still greatly respected.

Tirion was still speaking, "Yes I think it best that no one knows of this. I shall tell Fairbanks perhaps, but I do not think Dathrohan should know. He can be unpredictable sometimes, he is much changed from the old days, in some ways for the worse."

"I'll take your advice." you said, you trusted Tirion greatly, perhaps he was the human you trusted the most out of those you knew.

Tirion drew breathe, letting it out in a long meditative exhale. "I am happy, truly, that this has happened, that your faith, your compassion and righteousness has been rewarded. The Light has boundless compassion, it is life itself, it is glory, and to know that your people can wield it, well… I've never regretted what I did for Eitrigg, but this just proves my thoughts even then."

Eitrigg had been an Orc who Tirion had sheltered out of compassion, even against his own paladin brothers. Fordring had been expelled from his order because of it, and had wandered for near a decade without support, and you were glad to give him some vindication.

"The Path of Light is righteous and just, and you are now the Blade of the Light." Tirion intoned, "Wield it as it should be wielded, and it will never fail you. The Light endures, the Light will never truly leave you, even when you feel it has, remember the Light. "

You both had other matters to attend to that day, and though he might wish to lecture you then, Tirion begged leave to put it off. There were certain rites, he said, that you might wish to undertake, certain rituals.

"Then again," he continued, standing to leave, "The Church's teachings may be strange to you. I will have to consult the archivists perhaps, to see how the religion spread to the Dwarves or Elves. This is another spreading perhaps, and it will be your duty to shepherd your people too."

You were not quite sure how that made you feel. Yes, you had felt this power, and from what you knew of the Church of the Holy Light, you generally approved. However, Tirion seemed to take it for granted that you would now go forth and preach.

No matter, that would be a matter for many years in the future.

"For the moment, all I may say is 'Welcome, brother'." Tirion said, and he clasped your hand with his own silver one, his glove a faded grey with silver embroidered into it.

After that you both left. Tirion wasn't a wandering hermit anymore, and went to his duties, and you made your way through the camp to Dathrohan's command tent.

Junior officers saluted you as a captain of the Crusade and knights of many kingdoms clashed gauntlet against breastplate when they saw you.

"Breaker." they chorused.

The name had gone round after your victory had made you famous. While you'd been known of before, Lord Bolvar's opinion of you and the accolades Dathrohan had declared after the Naxxramas had established you firmly as a champion of the Crusade, and while still some might disprove of your very race, all acknowledged your skill and contribution, both as an individual warrior, and as a warleader.

"Breaker." the name came again, but this time you recognised the voice.

Kalaran was standing scrumptiously between two tents, and beckoned you closer.

You doubted he was about to attack right in the middle of the camp and followed him into the little alleyway. While you could go between the tents rather than along the 'streets' of the camp, people rarely did so, simply because of the danger of tripping over all the guidelines which kept the tents up. Nevertheless you joined Kalaran, out of sight, and hopefully earshot of anyone else.

"You go to see Dathrohan?" the dragon asked quietly, his aspect somewhat tense.

You nodded, "I mean to march on Alterac."

"I'm aware." Kalaran replied, "Though I don't hold any power over you, I will tell you not to reveal my true form to him, for the sake of your own people, the humans, and mine."

You frowned, leaning back and regarding him.

You'd not necessarily considered telling Dathrohan anything about Kalaran being a dragon. It was largely immaterial to the current situation, but clearly he was concerned about it. "Speak then." you ordered.

"There are dozens of my kind throughout the Alliance." Kalaran explained rapidly, "None hold positions of power, we are magistrates on borders, merchants of middling renown, or knights in service of nobles as I am. I do not have time to explain the whole history of my Flight to you now, but know that we of the Black are few, and our power concentrated in Blackrock Mountain, alongside those of your people who serve Blackhand's son."

You'd not known that, but you kept your silence, for the moment anyway.

"We do what we can to prevent open war, for by oath and bond we are bound to fight alongside Blackhand's Horde. It is by our influence that open warfare is prevented between the Alliance and Blackhand's Horde, for my lord Neferian, knows that without our work tensions would rise. If you tell Dathrohan he will search for us and perhaps send forces away from this war against the Scourge. Worse, with Lord Bolvar's death, Lady Prestor is the Regent of Stormwind, and if you tell her she too will make war on my Flight and the Orcs both. I know you to be honourable. I would ask you, please, do not reveal me…"

There is a spark of desperation in Kalaran's eyes, and you knew he must feel as you once did, before Thrall's assembly, your clan in danger.

Kalaran didn't shy away from the spywork he was doing. No doubt these draconic magistrates he spoke of would submit false reports or quiet news of his kind's doings in the far reaches of the Alliance's lands, and no doubt others of his Flight conducted similar sabotage. You were within your rights to denounce him, but you could understand why he did what he did.

Your own clan had been far from blameless when Thrall had accused them of demon worship. You knew your father concealed much of what went on in your clan's stronghold in Desolace, was this yet another instance of that?

Furthermore, Kalaran hadn't harmed you as far as you could think. Indeed, he'd aided you in battle. His predictions weren't necessarily guaranteed, but he spoke of Lady Prestor, and who knew what she might do, in her distress at Bolvar's fall. You'd lied to Thrall for the very reason Kalaran sought your silence now, to prevent meaningless bloodshed.

Honour was satisfied, it didn't compel you either way, but the choice could still have far-reaching consequences…

Choose 1:

[ ] "I will keep my silence, for now."
[ ] "I cannot keep silent."

Commentary requested on both Grok's interaction with Tirion, eg your thoughts on how Grok should approach things, as well as commentary on the decision here. As previously, voting is open now. If it's very much on one side or the other I may close early, but otherwise it should be open for a few days.
 
[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."
in character grok doesn't know about onxyia and neferian true goals and this man did risk alot in groks eyes to reveal himself and in meta terms Don't want to give the dreadlord any info that helps him.
For grok and tryion it makes sense in a way for orcs to maybe be mistrustful of the light as human magic but i feel a lot of orcs might like it as a sign of power.
Also new title
 
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Torino is happy and will probably be sneaking this fact to others formerly of the Silver Hand, to bolster their own faith in turn…
*mutters in annoyance about Elune*

In terms of the Breaker thing, well. Neat title.

The Dragon thing…Hunh. Grok is now unofficially in the shadow wars between the Black Dragon siblings.
I can't help but think if Keldran had kept his mouth shut Grok might have forgotten who it was that did the dragon-shifting in the fight, leaving anyone who might question him extremely fustrated.
But uhh.
Do we out him?
I dunno man. Grok asked his honor and got a shrug. Part of me is thinking of Wrathion, last of the Black Dragonflight, after all the Blackrock Mountain funtimes and Deathwing.
Another part is thinking it feels like Nefarion would totally have one of his guys spin this sort of sob story if discovered.
But…

I notice there is something of a theme of keeping quiet here. Quiet about the Light at last coming to the Orcs, lest the survivors of Lorderon grow angry. Quiet about the Black Dragonflight lest he suffer Prestor's Wrath.

The former to me feels slightly like it boils down to how it's spun.
Like if Torino can successfully make peace overtures to Thrall that's accepted, he can reveal Grok's grasp of the Light as the Pure Flame as a way to sell it to the Alliance that truly this is a most Blessed Day!

The later however feels like something we probably shouldn't touch directly.

[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."

Edit: Torino=Tirion. Phone-posting strikes again!
 
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[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."

If honor is satisfied either way, at worst interpretation one faction among many in the conglomerate thar Grok is vaguely allied with has infiltrated the others and at best interpretation someone who put their life on the line in battle is trying to prevent war.

I'm not sure that Grok actually cares enough to make it his business honestly
 
I like how Grok and Tirion view Grok using the Light differently. Tirion is happy because it vindicates a lot of his choices but is worried about the political consequences. Grok didn't really think about human reactions to it initially and isn't really comfortable about the religious connotations, he does think Orks will be okay with it since it's just another source of strength and is okay with it since it's a source of strength that needs compassion. Also Grok feels and manifests the Light differently than a regular user which makes sense since he has a much different relationship with the Light, Tirion was kinda shocked with how Grok's Light manifested.

[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."
Grok in character doesn't know everything that's going on with the Black Dragonflight and Kalaran has saved his life so he'd likely keep quite out of honor.
 
[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."
He certainly just told us a bunch of lies (Grok projected his own trauma on the dragon's nervous sweating), but I think that the honorable choice is letting him go. He risked his neck fighting the Scourge by our side at the darkest hour (instead of flying away, teleporting, or whatever he can do), he is plainly intelligent and sapient, and we do not have any grudges or grievances against dragons. Unless they actually do some major evil, we have no real clause to target Nefarian's brood right now, in character. Heck, Deathwing himself, for all the evil he has brought to the other dragonflights, has historically been nothing but a trustworthy ally to the orcs by this point in history.
Yeah, he indeed should not have even started this discussion, it's not like Grok had any idea about the black dragons' secret invasion of Stormwind military until now.
 
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I'm in the middle of a reread so I might try to give you some more thoughts when I'm done. In short, this quest snipes me right in the nostalgia brain, and the nostalgia memories are vague and what is put out here is great and can wholly overwrite them. I swoon over Tirion Fordring in a mediocre mmo, let alone something with some meat to it. But you definitely hooked me from early on, through some combination of the mechanics and characterization.


[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."

We have no reason to get into a kerfuffle, and we should get on with our own stuff.
 
Would be real interesting to see what Grok tapping into the light as flames of light could lead to in reactions. Some in the alliance or horde could see it as joke intended heretical.
Furthermore, Kalaran hadn't harmed you as far as you could think. Indeed, he'd aided you in battle. His predictions weren't necessarily guaranteed, but he spoke of Lady Prestor, and who knew what she might do, in her distress at Bolvar's fall. You'd lied to Thrall for the very reason Kalaran sought your silence now, to prevent meaningless bloodshed.
You know I am now hoping for him and maybe his associates to tag along. Help me help you. He can learn much from a member of the black dragon flight.
 
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[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."

Well, he did help MC in battle, so orkish honor demands some sort of repayment
 
Hmmmmmmmm I think Tirion is a bit confused as to how we're going to be approaching this. In many ways this flame based manifestation of the light reinforces our ideas about the old funerary practices and flame callers, and that's certainly going to be the best leaping off point for us propagating the light through the hoarde.
 
Hmmmmmmmm I think Tirion is a bit confused as to how we're going to be approaching this. In many ways this flame based manifestation of the light reinforces our ideas about the old funerary practices and flame callers, and that's certainly going to be the best leaping off point for us propagating the light through the hoarde.
True. This could be another way to revive and modernise the funerary practices of a pyre master

wowpedia.fandom.com

Pyremaster

Orcs burn their dead. In a world filled with magic, magic insinuates itself in ritual. Founded in the mysteries of certain cults on Draenor, the pyremaster is the enactor of ritual. This funerary priest guides the dead through fire, through loss of flesh, so their naked spirits may conquer the...
 
I dunno man. Grok asked his honor and got a shrug.

I notice there is something of a theme of keeping quiet here. Quiet about the Light at last coming to the Orcs, lest the survivors of Lorderon grow angry. Quiet about the Black Dragonflight lest he suffer Prestor's Wrath.

I'm not sure that Grok actually cares enough to make it his business honestly
These are all true really. Fundamentally there's not a clear path forward, but because Grok is extremely focused on honour, that causes problems when the 'honourtable' choice isn't clear.
it's not like Grok had any idea about the black dragons' secret invasion of Stormwind military until now.
Meh I mean he's a reasonably intelligent guy. If there's 1 black dragon infiltrator, there's likely to be more, and that's a point to at least bring up with others if necessar.
I'm in the middle of a reread so I might try to give you some more thoughts when I'm done.
I would be interested in your thoughts when you're done, but no pressure. Additionally if you had specific questiosn that weren't clear etc let me know.
Hmmmmmmmm I think Tirion is a bit confused as to how we're going to be approaching this
Very much so! Missionary activity is a bit outside his purview.





Also we're on 11-0 for staying silent, which makes me inclined to close the vote soon. Let me know if anyone had any major objections to that and I could reconsider, otherwise will look to do some more writing later perhaps.
 
oh damn it's been a while since I read Grok'maw Suffering Quest and I'm glad I have. Heroes of the Storm really took me back to my love of Warcraft and I'm sad I haven't found any good ttrpgs set in it. I've finally caught up and I'm glad I have.

Anyway votes!
[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."
 
Elemental Connection
You already have a connection with the elements. You'll be able to strengthen this connection as you go on.

You have an existing connection with the Spirit of the Wilds, also known as the Spirit of Life, or just 'Spirit'. This spirit represents the soul of all living things, the most powerful element but also the most complex and unknowable. You'll still have to train this, but even experienced shamans have difficulty doing so. No added elemental ability, modification to Farseeing tradition instead.

You have a connection with the Spirit of Life. This spirit is present in all lifeon Azeroth and binds the other spitits together. Life is most frequently used by shaman for a variety of esoteric purposes such as Seeing, and is the least well known of the Elementals.

You have a connection with the Spirit of Fire. This spirit is present in all fires on Azeroth, and employed in any magic involving fire. Fire is most frequently used by shaman for destructive purposes and is the most active and belligerent of the Elements.

You have a connection with the Spirit of Earth. This spirit is present in the stone and soil of Azeroth, and primarily employed in Callings to strengthen and protect. Earth is most frequently used by shaman to enhance their own abilities, or alter the physical world. Will need training and meditation to discover spells.

You have a connection to the Light. You know little about this currently, but you can feel it, a pure fire in your heart. You called on the Light at your death, and used it's strength to strike down Alexandros Mograine. The Light is traditionally used by human priests and paladins to heal, as well as protecting the weak or striking down evil foes.
I get this gotta catch em all moment.

Otherwise I can't think of any reason to not spill the beans unless Grok intends to use Danrothan for his own purposes. He may not know he's Balthazar in disguise but while in disguise he has been rather of good assistance towards hosting the warband so dangling this surprise to him can do many other potential things of political intrigue despite Tirion's warnings.
 
Alterac 3
This one has a map and some political discusion. The choice doesn't lock you into future events, it merely dictates the specifics of the current considerations. Ask me if unsure.

Alterac 3

[X] "I will keep my silence, for now."

Kalaran was well enough controlled not to give sign of his relief, but the tension in his form eased somewhat and he nodded, "We will speak more of this in the future, there is much to discuss."

You nodded. If the Black Dragonflight did have that much influence in relations between the Horde and Alliance, it would be foolish to discount them.

You both departed in opposite directions, and no doubt Kalaran was as deep in his thoughts as you were in yours. You had Blackrock orcs in your warband, perhaps Tagorr the Dread knew something of their alliance with the dragons?

"Breaker." Dathrohan's Red Guards greeted you as you approached, and gave their salute. You responded, knowing you were anticipated and making your way into the Grand Crusader's tent.

"I mean to march on Alterac. It was one of my original purposes in coming here, and now the war against the Scourge has moved into a new phase, I mean to make my way to the old fortresses of my people and seek knowledge there." You announced without ceremony.

"I am glad to hear it." Dathrohan said politely. He was wearing his armour still, indeed you suspected that for a human that was more than just prudence as it would be for an orc. He wore it instead of robes of state or a noble's dress to demonstrate his commitment to the war. "It was said the Archimonde the Despised walked from a demon gate in the mountains of that kingdom, and the Alliance never had the strength or fortitude to drive your folk out. There may be remnants there, is that what you think?"

You shrugged a little, "Perhaps, but Jubei'thos fell there, and I would know how and who raised him."

"That certainly is needed, for all our sakes." Dathrohan nodded seriously. "Very well, let us see…"


"Here is one of our maps that I shall send with you. Here we are in Andorhal." the Grand Crusader said, pointing to a square at the top of the map. "Alterac composes a strong kingdom, surrounded by mountains that defend it. There are several passes, but the fastest route would be here." he tapped a cross, "The pass through the Alterac Valley is contested by the Stormpike Brigade and the Frostwolves. The alternative routes would be over the mountains themselves, or along the coast road to a lesser pass, but I wouldn't advise it."

"What are these?" you point to small crosses in the area marked 'Trolls lands'.

"The Winteraxe. Raiders like all Troll-kind. They freeze the river with their magics and raid our caravans as well. I've had to devote five companies of horse to simply defend the shipments coming up from Southshore recently. They shouldn't trouble you."

You looked over the map and noted that the former Blackrock settlements weren't on there. Perhaps they were higher in the mountains, away from Alliance towns and intelligence. It would take time to discover them certainly.

"What will trouble you is the Syndicate."

"I've fought them before." you replied.

"Yes, at Stromgarde as I understand." Dathrohan nodded. "They are merely the remnants of the old nobility of Alterac, who were always half-bandits themselves! Now their retinues follow them to continue to rob and thieve across Lordaeron. They've made alliance with trolls and ogres, as well as with some elements of the Scourge. Indeed, as I understand it they were stealing corpses to supply the Cult of the Damned in the early days of the Scourging of Lordaeron. For that blasphemous treachery, I would see them all dead… They squat in the ruins of the kingdom, at Strahnbrad, in the capital of Alterac itself, as well as in 'Gallows', once a military camp where we hanged the last king of Alterac."

Dathrohan sighed, "However, if these former nobles are pardoned and settled in Alterac again, the kingdom can be rebuilt in a single stroke, and that may be best. Know this though, if the Syndicate are destroyed in your quest, I for one will have no objections."

You nod, you doubted it, Dathrohan was hardly known for his compassion.

"There are presently three claimants for the throne of Alterac." Dathrohan continued, "Firstly, Aiden's son, Aliden Perenolde. He runs the Syndicate."

"The other heirs?"

"Isiden Perenolde, Aliden's brother. As far as we know he was turned to a Death Knight during the war, and his whereabouts are unknown. Alternatively, there's been some reports that he's in Gilneas. In any case you can discount him. The other party is more tricky though, in the years after the second war a cousin of the Perenolde line, a Lord Daval Prestor, found his way into the close councils of King Terenas, indeed, my lady Calia was once betrothed to him. Lord Daval's whereabouts are unknown, but you're familiar with Lady Prestor? Well, it may be wise for us to elevate her to the throne of Alterac, for if so her fate will be bound to that kingdom, and, if perhaps Varian Wrynn needs a new wife, all the better."

"Would you scheme before the kingdom is even taken?" you asked. While you'd not been surprised to know Dathrohan was already considering the issues of human politics, you were a little shocked by the mercenary attitude. Lady Prestor was recovering from a great loss, and Dathrohan seemed to wish to take advantage of that.

"I must look to our defences." Dathrohan answered, and the power behind his eyes was sharp and piercing. "There is much to be done, and Alterac's mineral wealth will feed the Crusade's forges in preparation for our attack on Northrend."

You nodded, it was worthy you supposed. You had lied to the Warchief for similar reasons after all.

"We come now to your part in all this." Dathrohan continued. "If possible, I would have you smash the Syndicate. Root them out of their fastness in Gallows and Strahnbrad, as well as Alterac proper. See them dispersed, but if you can try not to destroy them, for we'll need them one day against the Scourge. Take Perenolde alive and bring him to me, and I'll make sure he agrees to join the Crusade. Pacify the Frostwolves, for while your efforts at Hammerfall were fine enough, they continue to raid our supply caravans. If possible, once you've established yourself, lead your forces against the Winteraxe Trolls."

"I have not yet agreed to your request!" you protested. "It may be that I cross the mountains and find what I seek, but I must attend to the affairs of my clan."

Dathrohan sat back down, leaning back and raising an eyebrow, "Have you not?" he asked slowly, "Unless my estimation is much off, I have not taken you for a coward, nor a layabout." he spread his hands over the map, "War lies before you. A chance for your warriors to wet their axes, and gain glory by it. If you accept a commission, as you have in the past, much would be available to you from the Crusade's stores, for as a Captain I can give you more than as merely a diplomat. You are strong and valiant, and your honour is known. I ask you, as one warrior to another, will you truly go alone, with only a few companions to 'attend to your clan's affairs', or will you go at the head of a host? The Syndicate are likely to stand against you either way, and you surely know that without such a commission I cannot order Alliance commanders to stand down as I could if you were under my command? The Stormpike Dwarves guard the Alterac Valley, do you intend to cut your way through them?"

"I will not kill where it's not needed, and while against the Scourge, honour's course was clear, this is less so. I am an exile, far from my people, but that doesn't mean I must involve myself in every contest I see, nor that it would necessarily be wise to involve my people and clan in internal Alliance matters."

Dathrohan nodded slowly, "Perhaps, but as you say, you're an exile, as are many of your followers to hear talk of it. One day Stromgarde will advance on Hammerfall, one day the Orcs in the hills will be rooted out, for the Alliance can't leave such foes behind us when we advance on Northrend. Where then will they go? To the flames of their ancestors? Or to you, Grok'mash, Constable of Alterac?"

Dathrohan tapped the square signifying the kingdom's capital, "You are trusted among the Alliance leadership, and I doubt many would object to you taking command of that kingdom, so long as you kept faith with us and enforced the normal laws. You would have refugee, indeed a strong one within the mountains, and legitimacy to draw followers to your cause."

You were still reluctant. "I could not accept such a broad commision, not without first consulting my father as clan chief." you managed.

The Grand Crusade nodded, "Very well." he began, "I will say this then: Act as a Captain of the Alliance in Alterac, and you may take whatever forces you wish, for the Stormpike will not deny your rank. Act in defence of Alliance forces if you hear calls for aid, but otherwise concentrate on the Syndicate. Root them out, deliver Perenolde to me. I lay no duty to you to carry war against the trolls or your own kind. Perhaps we might discuss that later, but for now, your only proactive action need be against the Syndicate."

You frowned. Dathrohan's speech was full of advantages. And you supposed even if you accepted his commission to take the kingdom, you need not necessarily remain there afterward. However, if you refused it, you could still make your way through the kingdom, either by the coast road or through the mountains themselves.

"What say you then, 'Breaker'?"

Choose 1:

[ ] Accept an Alliance commission to take Alterac, guaranteeing cooperation from local Alliance forces, and support from Dathrohan's Crusade.

[ ] Refuse the commission. You dislike embroiling yourself further in Alliance politics, no matter how convenient it is for Dathrohan. This will make getting through Alterac more difficult for a number of reasons.
 
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[X] Accept an Alliance commission to take Alterac, guaranteeing cooperation from local Alliance forces, and support from Dathrohan's Crusade.
 
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