The child lives the mother and Ras die, there was no kindness here simply an evil man who's broken a member of your family.
And What a Dance it Was (NO SV, War is Coming, Prepare)
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@Ghost in the sun since you seem to have the Gift of Apollo especially active tonight, with this
And no matter how Ruthless and Angry Lucien may be, I really doubt that it would be possible for him to even think of such a thing, and much less actually doing it.
Any suggestion for my write in?
Unless you are suggesting cutting the baby from his mother´s womb, that is going to be basically impossible.
And no matter how Ruthless and Angry Lucien may be, I really doubt that it would be possible for him to even think of such a thing, and much less actually doing it.
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Since Rhea before she passed away asked Lucien to take care of Daemon, and she had a similar talk with her husband about how Lucien brought the best of Daemon and to stay by his side... Maybe something touching a bit more of that promise?
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Isn´t "Rhae would have wept if she saw you like this" enough?
Maybe, actualy this scene is particulary similar of Dorne when Rhea rescued him, and Daemon was so broken he just whished for... Death.
If I had to write an actual dialogue ( I am horrible at it) the points I might touch would be:
How when Lucien was just a child, Daemon was ready to draw Dark Suster against his own grandfather the King and anyone else who tried the same to protect Lucien and now after all this years Lucien would do the same for him.
How watching Daemon in this state is like seeing Rhae wither away but worse because she didnt have a choice but Daemon can fight whatever is happening... And not leave his family to mourn him.
Baela and Rhaena wanted him home, once Daemon told him how he was unwanted by his family, how he felt more like a second son tool to be used... And in his secret drunk way the wonder he felt when Lucien a child loved him, not for being a Rogue, A Prince, A Tool... Well now there's two other people who loved Daemon for who he is and needed him home while the others around would always see him as a paw. Be a Rogue you are meant to be and have the courage to take what you always wanted: A home, the place you wish to return to.
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Ok, this is my write-in, If you have any suggestions I am open to them.
[X] "Daemon... Father... What has happened to you? Where is Caraxes?"
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
While your suggestions are pretty good, this is a speech more than anything... I don´t think that we are expected to say more than a few sentences here, we are in the middle of a (presumably) enemy camp I don´t think we have that much time for pontifying
[X] "Daemon... Father... What has happened to you? Where is Caraxes?"
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
While your suggestions are pretty good, this is a speech more than anything... I don´t think that we are expected to say more than a few sentences here, we are in the middle of a (presumably) enemy camp I don´t think we have that much time for pontifying
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Man everytime I write something related to the write in It ends up looking like a dog blood drama.
Edit: Clearly the most efective word is an action so lets: [] Slap Daemon until his wits return.
Edit: Clearly the most efective word is an action so lets: [] Slap Daemon until his wits return.
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Come on guys vote for something...
Or make your own write-ins, the sooner you vote the sooner we will be able to start killing motherfuckers and save dad.
Or make your own write-ins, the sooner you vote the sooner we will be able to start killing motherfuckers and save dad.
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[X] "Daemon... Father... What has happened to you? Where is Caraxes?"
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
[X] "Daemon... Father... What has happened to you? Where is Caraxes?"
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
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Yeah, he neutered the Militant Faith... Well, then I have no idea because in the official materials, there are barely anything about the old days of Valirya or other tyrants in Essos.
You re missing the [ before the X...
Thanks, corrected it.
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[X] "Daemon... Father... What has happened to you? Where is Caraxes?"
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
I do
-[X] "I came for you... You have been lost for far too long father, come back to me, to your daughters, to your brother, to all the people who love you and miss you back home"
--[X] Please, no matter what has happened, it is still not too late to come back... Rhea would have wept to see you like this.
---[X] (Ask grey Ghost to look for Caraxes and ask him for help)
I do
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Well... It seems that, as a good pirate, Valarr stole the luck of Daemon for himself and his homies...
Let´s see if we can rescue Daemon, then we can join them in their celebration...
I want to, let´s see if the Emperor is dead it would make everything so much easier for us...
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Huh just realized that the Dothraki know of us, did he get that information from Ra's or do tales of Lucien's legend stretch across the Grass Sea?
I'd also like to see how they're doing if Pirate Dad is rolling this well, ain't nobody getting close to Westeros for awhile after this one. One man destroyed their while career
I'd also like to see how they're doing if Pirate Dad is rolling this well, ain't nobody getting close to Westeros for awhile after this one. One man destroyed their while career
So is our dad now the black beard or Davy jones of the sea and pirates
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They claimed a city in the name of a peasant rebellion led by some minor noble…
Romance of the three kingdoms style.
Both.
But Daemons legend is a little bit bigger then ours.
He's become a legend the Oakenfist wishes he was.I'd also like to see how they're doing if Pirate Dad is rolling this well, ain't nobody getting close to Westeros for awhile after this one. One man destroyed their while career
He's the Valaar Vaeltigar.
I think that Daemon told the Khaal about Lucien himself, it's not like the moment he was gone to Essos his body was snatched.
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TBH I think that the best comparison would be with Sir Francis Drake or Madame Ching Shih... Who were two of the only legendary pirates that were intelligent enough to retire on time and died famous, rich, and of old age...
Dad, whereas your initiative is something to admire, don´t get tangled in not Imperial Chinese politics, it never ends well...
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Funny thing is about Francis Drake: he never actually stopped. He was fighting with the English fleet during the Armada.
He was still commanding ships until the day he died. And people are still looking for his sealed stone coffin.
He didn't really do it though… the peasant women whom he was protecting and concubines that are staying are.
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So, this minor noble... would be in a decent position of taking the power in Yi Ti once the Heirless Emperor kicks the bucket?
Because that could prevent the death of millions right there...
But Really I want to read the interlude/rumor mill to see what is going on in Valarr´s immediate vicinity.
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