OK,finally back and I have to say it was nerve-wreaking going though so many pages. I might as well start this with an explanation and two apologies. the explanation is about what the arc is supposed to be. It's not supposed to be about making you guys into a paladin, but an acknowledgement that not everyone you meet is one of four things things:
- Idiot
- Demon
- Idiot demon
- Person waiting to join Team Viserys
That is the core of what this is about, not forcing you into moral choices, not making you choose the moral option
Now for the first apology, connected to the above, it's not only the thread that has been falling into patterns, it's me too, or rather it's me
first. I made too many characters fit into the above categories. I justified the idea that Viserys is the only one with the Truth, I basically justified the disdain for everyone not willing to play ball with the thread. That's not the story I want to have. I want moral complexity and smart moral antagonists, I want making alliances to cost things and spark discussion.
This is a sharp right turn and I am genuinely sorry for everyone who did not enjoy the chapters
@Snowfire @Crake @TotallyNotEvil @egoo @Artemis1992 I apologize for how this came off and I apologize for bringing the thread to such a state with my writing that moving it back to a better narrative register was so jarring and unplesant.