Ok, so I went back and reread the spar between Obi-wan and the MC and decided I love what is says about the MC in how he fights. Obi-wan is in that spar to get a feel for the person he is sparing with, how he thinks, how he solves problems.

What he learns is interesting. When John goes on the offensive he doesn't go for a killing blow. He is relentless though. He taps endlessly at the extent of his reach with little swipes and stabs. His aim isn't to kill though, like a sith would be tempted to. His aim in the end was to disable his opponent's ability to attack back. A strike to the hand wouldn't be lethal even with the lightsaber set to full power, but it would likely disarm even with the saber set to training mode. John is ultimately a person of action who seeks to be constantly in motion. He is aggressive, but not malicious. Combat is a problem to be solved and he seeks to end it in an expedited manner with a minimum of violence.

And that's him on the offence. On the defense he doesn't block. When pressed he gives ground. He refuses to meet force with force, rather chooses to simply move away and attack from a slightly different angle.

This matches well with what John chose to do about the Jedi. His response to concerns that they may seek to drag him back is to simply move elsewhere, out of their strike range, then attack them again. He attacks constantly, probing little strikes that keep pushing over and over.

But at the end of the day not lethal strikes. Even on the offence John seeks to disarm not kill.
 
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My interpretation of force users is that it doesn't work based on strength, like a stronger force user isn't able to lift heavier objects, or rather they probably are but it's not a direct connection, rather force strength is more like political strength or engineering skill, the actual energy required to do something is almost a non issue when it comes to how difficult something is.
Oh, it does matter a lot. There's a good chunk of minor force sensitives who are found and left alone by the order as they aren't strong enough to become Jedi.

On the other end there's Luke, who can learn to fight with a lightsaber and make missiles turn at right angles with a single training session.

Everyone above a certain level can get to any point of force mastery, but the greater the connection the faster you will get there.
 
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Oh, it does matter a lot. There's a good chunk of minor force sensitives who are found and left alone by the order as they aren't strong enough to become Jedi.

On the other end there's Luke, who can learn to fight with a lightsaber and make missiles turn at right angles with a single training session.

Everyone above a certain level can get to any point of force mastery, but the greater the connection the faster you will get there.
I think it's a matter of trusting the force completly. The stronger you are in the force the more easily it comes. Weak force users struggle to do much because they struggle to feel and thus trust the force.

I think force uss is like painting. Everyone has their own style and people can learn schools of painting. Some people can just see the canvas better and some are blind.
 
Good analogy. In art, like in many things, there is a sense of learned helplessness from impatient people expecting to do better 'immediately' when they try something. Imagine if you weren't just fighting against your psyche when you are trapped into that, but against a reactive force that shies away from doubt.
 
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Good analogy. In art, like in many things, there is a sense of learned helplessness from impatient people expecting to do better 'immediately' when they try something. Imagine if you weren't just fighting against your psyche when you are trapped into that, but against a reactive force that shies away from doubt.
Same holds true for writing too. God the number of people I've talked to that just insist they would be terrible writers without ever trying.

You can do it SVers! You can!!!! I was garbage when I started but with years of effort little bits of advice and several epiphanies I made it! And you can too!!!!!!!

Believe in the me that believes in you!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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I'm curious about the potential issue of telepathy battles, and detecting and resisting outside mental influences, something I doubt the MC's training holos can help very much with, but might become more important with random people developing their force sensitivity, especially given some races have innate mind-influencing powers even without much force ability. Seems like an issue that should need to be brought up at some point.
 
Same hold true for writing too. God the number of people I've talked to that just insist they would be terrible writers without ever trying.

You can do it SVers! You can!!!! I was garbage when I started but with years of effort little bits of advice and several epiphanies I made it! And you can too!!!!!!! Believe in the me that believes in you!!!!!!!!!!!!
This. I have a literal writing based learning disability. My literacy was delayed by more than a few years growing up.

Writing is now my major hobby and I love it. Anyone who has thought they can't should try.
 
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I tend to think of Force use being much like any other skill with regards to capability. People will have varying levels of inborn talent that can be honed with proper practice and training, and people can be significantly more or less talented with particular applications of a skill.
 
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-snip- than making them a couple doomed to split up. 'Let's stay friends' is a shitshow and I'm not even going to try writing it.

I gotta say, I didn't even know this story existed, and I am so glad for that because it means I got to read it as it is right now, and end it here with those words.
Words I am very glad of. It shows pretty well your existence as a practical writer just as much as it does your niceness to the characters, and that's ignoring how much I've been enjoying this story in general. It's insightful, it shows off your headcannons without going far off the reservation (and for me, that's just a nice view at a different way of doing it, which does tend to be nice to see), and it makes sense.

This has been a wonderful experience, and I wonder what else this journey will deliver?

If you decide to revisit the whole "Synth Crystals are taboo" thing, you could bring up GMO vs non-GMO, as a food example. After all, both are genetically engineered, just that the non-GMO foods are done more randomly by the wind and pollen, while GMOs are done very precisely in a lab, and sometimes that's a good thing (taking Pineapples for example, non-GMO pineapples are acidic enough to rip your skin apart, like super reactive spit, it's why they've survived for so long, but GMO pineapples are far less acidic).

Yes, that could be a shitshow, but it's one worth exploring. Some could say the same about Vaccination, but that's a shitshow that's like politics: too many people have not enough information, myself included, so it's better to say "I have a stance. That's all I'm going to say about it. Which is my stance."

Or for a gemology version, Corundum. The Force is in everything, so what's the real difference between Aluminum Oxides you get from torturing Aluminum in a lab (with color on demand) and Sapphires, Emeralds, Rubies? The answer, if you ignore the spiritualism side, is not a lot. Sapphires Emeralds and Rubies are all Corundum, which is Aluminum Oxide formed naturally under the ground because of massive heat and pressure and with specific impurities separating them. The only real difference is in cost, which I haven't explored on my own.
 
One force power that Delia would probably pove to learn is Technometry.
That has to be the most low detail explanation I've ever seen from a wiki. Can you give me any examples from the EU? Just how broken is it? And she's already a slicer which I'm comparing to Anakin's way with machines. Not to the same degree but still.
 
That has to be the most low detail explanation I've ever seen from a wiki. Can you give me any examples from the EU? Just how broken is it? And she's already a slicer which I'm comparing to Anakin's way with machines. Not to the same degree but still.
My impression is that in Starwars canon anyone with high force sensitivity will experience lots of useful hunches which I believe is how Annakin got so good so quickly both with machines and as a racer. It would also be incredibly useful for a Slicer/hacker/programmer
 
That has to be the most low detail explanation I've ever seen from a wiki. Can you give me any examples from the EU? Just how broken is it? And she's already a slicer which I'm comparing to Anakin's way with machines. Not to the same degree but still.
I have only seen it used in fanfiction one thing though is that Technometry is a force sense technique that that relates to technology think a technopath that can sense, communicate and control machines through their software.
Another force technique that relates to technology is known as Mechu-deru and is a force alter technique about infusing technology with force energy to alter, enhance and control them.
 
That has to be the most low detail explanation I've ever seen from a wiki. Can you give me any examples from the EU? Just how broken is it? And she's already a slicer which I'm comparing to Anakin's way with machines. Not to the same degree but still.

It's from one of the old Star Wars RPGs, Wizards of the Coast's Star Wars Roleplaying Game Saga Edition. I suspect it only really lives there though and has no basis in either Legends or Disney continuity as it only has a single sentence description and source listed on Wookipedia.
 
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It's from one of the old Star Wars RPGs, Wizards of the Coast's Star Wars Roleplaying Game Saga Edition. I suspect it only really lives there though and has no basis in either Legends or Disney continuity as it only has a single sentence description and source listed on Wookipedia.
It's at least related vaguely to some other Force abilities, like mechu-deru, or the time (IIRC) Kyp Durron used the Dark Side to reprogram a computer that someone else had hacked (I think it was the novel with the Sun Crusher, but I may be entirely wrong about that). A non-Dark Side machine-control power or powers is plausible, IMHO.
 
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Writing is now my major hobby and I love it. Anyone who has thought they can't should try.
Bit of a derail, but this is actually my problem. I don't really enjoy writing unless my muse has something that prompts me.
So i write the first few thousand words of something, then it dies.
Over ten years, this has happened four times. As in, my muse was active enough to make me write four times.

To re-rail.
My view of the force is that:
Force talent improves the rate you improve/learn at. So someone with a +50 can reach the first few DC's with ease. While a +20 will struggle a lot more.
If the low talent keeps trying then they can get stronger than the high talent, buuuut they eventually reach the point that it takes a nat 100 to improve further and have to give up earlier than the high talents would have.
So hard work and talent are required to get to the big leagues.
 
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It's from one of the old Star Wars RPGs, Wizards of the Coast's Star Wars Roleplaying Game Saga Edition. I suspect it only really lives there though and has no basis in either Legends or Disney continuity as it only has a single sentence description and source listed on Wookipedia.

It wasn't a purely d6 power, they created it for the tabletop game to explain some of the weird tricks and abilities that Jedi had in EU stories.

Frankly screw anything Disney continuity, and even legends isn't 'my' star wars. :p (I've lived through 4 different 'canon' eras, I just gave up separating them)

Movie wise....Anakin was a Technopath due to his skill with making stuff w/o training as a child, and his ability to modify starships. Jedi's made their sabers using a variant from my recollection, as well. (In the radio drama Luke couldn't make his green saber work while following the written instructions, but it worked first time when he stopped and just listened to the Force)
 
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Ch. 10
AN: Right the scene with the Jedi Council is a lightly edited and modified omake donated by @Immortal Lurker you'll notice the shift from first to third person. Never quite felt like I got the hang of third person. Too much time writing in first person before I tried to make the switch I suppose. Now it just feels clunky and awkward. No issues reading it, but writing it?

Honestly despite everyone wanting reaction chapters for the council… meh? I'm not that inspired to write them as a group. Too many people, too many opinions, too fractious. Individuals? I've got some ideas for Mace, some for Yoda too but in regards to the rest of them? Nada. So big thanks to Immortal Lurker everyone for doing the heavy lifting on this scene.


{}{}{}{} onboard the Arcane Knowledge Obi-Wan's POV

"Master Yoda, Master Windu." I inclined my head towards the hollow projector.

"Knight Kenobi." The pair nodded back. "An update you have for us?"

"We've moved on to Corelia. The Captain plans to have the ship modified in her home shipyards to make things a bit more… comfortable." I paused to gather my thoughts. "He's planning to post his next video tomorrow. I'm forwarding it to you now."

I waited patiently as the two Masters watched the video of Captain Kesel explaining the candle meditation. When they refocused on me I was surprised to see that Master Windu actually appeared thoughtful. Master Yoda did as well, though the low dip of his ears betrayed his concern.

"He's training her to come back to the Light." Master Windu broke the silence as he cupped his chin. "He's teaching her to use the Dark side, but also to stop using it. To center herself after each use… With enough training it would become engrained. An impulse even. Draw on the Dark side then center yourself within the Light."

I blinked, startled at the insight. I'd been so caught up in the fact he was drawing on the Dark side I hadn't thought to look past that.

"Mmm," Master Yoda hummed, "precautions he is taking. His words, weighted to impart warning. But still the Dark Side he teaches them to touch. Troubling."

"This certainly won't make the debates any simpler."


"Debates, Master?"

The two Jedi Masters shared a brief look. Before sending me a data packet which I immediately loaded and watched.

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The councils debated. All the councils. Attendance wasn't required, there wasn't a war on, and many individual masters had other duties. But between the holograms and those present physically, it was standing room only in the high council room. Yoda had wanted to hold the event in the Room of a Thousand Fountains, but the Council of First Knowledge had insisted on a private location.

The reason was made clear almost as soon as the meeting came to order.

"We should have Kesel taken into custody immediately, and wipe the video from the holonet. Many will have viewed it already, but the information he has conveyed up to this point is minimal at best. We can stop this now before more harm is done. I have a team of slicers on standby, and Knight Kenobi and his Padawan are already in place to make the arrest." Astaal Vilbum, the Caretaker of First Knowledge spoke in a low and serious tone. The Caretaker of First Knowledge officially dealt with the preservation of holocrons and other lore. Unofficially, he was responsible for the Jedi Shadows, which hunted for and destroyed Sith artifacts. His budget had been quietly tripled after Naboo.

"Arrest?" said an indignant hologram of Master Jertia, head of the Agri-Corp. She did not often set foot on Coruscant, the city-planet having no farms. "For what?"

There was no murmuring in the council room. However, the Force moved in eddies and whorls, as so many Masters reached into the force to try and get a grasp on the situation.

Master Astaal spoke levelly as he turned to face Jertia. "For releasing dangerous information in a totally uncontrolled manner. All a viewer has to do is ignore or fail to follow the laughably inadequate safety instructions and the risk of them falling to the Dark Side becomes unacceptable."

Uncowed, Master Jertia shook her head. "Then you don't mean 'Arrest', you mean 'Kidnap', or possibly 'Abduct'. I've got the actual law for "State Secrets, Protected Knowledge, and Dangerous Information" right here on the datapad. A court order is required to take the video down, and they only grant those if the knowledge being shared falls into a few explicitly enumerated categories. Knowledge of the Force, even the Dark Side, is not one of those. If he starts teaching them how to make a plague, slice a moving spaceship, or use Sith Alchemy, we have him dead to rights. Until then, he's a taxpaying free citizen of the Republic we all swore to protect."

Master Astaal stewed in this for a bit, then projected humility into the Force as he bowed to the projection of Master Jertia.

Master Jertia graciously returned the bow. She turned to address the rest of the assembled masters. "I've seen young John's frustration a dozen times before. Many of our younglings are devastated when their time runs out, and they realize that they will never be Knights. This problem is ultimately a symptom of a deeper cause, that younglings who go down other paths are regularly crushed. Many find peace with their roles given time, but it does not make the initial transition any easier. We can control this by shifting a few things."

Master Jertia pressed a button on her datapad. There were no beeps or whirrs of notification, but a dozen Masters felt a nudge, and silently checked their own devices.

"This is the proposal I sent last year, with a few modifications. Some might be seen as radical, but I urge you to consider. The basic features are a path to knighthood for all younglings, and paths outside knighthood that allow younglings to use the years of training that they have been given."

The projection of Master Jertia grinned. "The most relevant being outreach. We can teach the same things young John is trying to teach, only we can do it better, because we will have flesh and blood Force users in front of them, not a low quality holovid. They can do it in a safe environment, and most importantly this can be used to spread word of the dangers of doing this without an instructor to guide them. We address the root of the problem, warn the galaxy, and provide a better, safer, alternative at the same time. This can stop the situation from getting out of hand, and allow the Order to grow in numbers like never before."

Often, speaking is not necessary for a large group of Masters. The Force enables an understanding deeper than words. Even those not present could tap into the feeling permeating the room, albeit weakly. There was conflict. Appreciation at a path forward which required no violence, and offered a better connection to a galaxy which had seemed so distant and hostile of late. Doubt for introducing so many unknowns.

An idea could be felt in the room. You got those, sometimes, an idea that couldn't properly be said to have a single owner. Drawing from a half dozen sources, a conjecture from one, an insight from another. Oppo Rancisis, head of the Council of Reconciliation, who dealt in diplomacy and negotiation, felt it most clearly, and gave it a voice.

"Our prodigal youngling has claimed to want revenge. But it seems clear from the way he speaks and acts that what he wants is reform. These reforms, in fact, are likely very similar to some of the ones that he wants."

Master Jertia spoke, perhaps a trifle quickly, though not rudely so. "If the reforms are for our own betterment and that of the galaxy as a whole, does it truly matter what instigated the changes?"

"It matters because these may not be all the reforms he wants. If he realizes that threatening chaos causes us to yield here, might he threaten chaos elsewhere to get more? And if we decide that his new demands are not beneficial, will he follow through?"

The masters considered. Eventually, Master Jertia bowed conceding the point.

Master Rancisis returned the bow. "The reforms are a good idea, and demand lengthy meditation from all of us at the very least. And my heart is troubled for the plight of our prodigal youngling, resentful and alone. The Council of Reconciliation has been lax in its duties. We must provide a way for those outside the Order to actually reconcile with the Order. We must be a living, breathing part of the Republic. If the voices outside cannot actually be heard, truly heard and considered, with our reasoning laid bare, then they will scream at the door without end. The only way to contain the chaos is open the door and let them in. I propose that every month or so, a few outsiders, ideally representatives of larger groups, be given an hour with a Jedi Master. They can talk about whatever concerns them, and ask questions about whatever policy is troubling them. Our rogue instructor should be given the first of such appointments, and we should use it to go over his doubts about the Order, and our proposed solutions."

There was no grumbling. But it was clear that the thought of regularly scheduled disruptions was displeasing to many present. Particularly disruptions by angry people who wanted to shout in their peaceful temple.

Putting a whisper of Force behind his words to draw attention back, Master Rancisis continued. "I know, I know, none of us want any more conflict in our lives, we get enough on the missions and in meetings. But the conflict is already there, we just blind ourselves to it. Our options are to face it, and invite it inside where it can be controlled, or ignore it and leave it uncontrolled. The spread of the videos has yet to reach truly worrying levels, but it is only a matter of time. And once it does there will be groups seeking answers from us. I'd much prefer to have a solution in place before the problem arrives."

Quiet fell on the council room, deeper than the mere silence of a gap in a conversation. Each Master was retreating into the Force in their own way, wondering what was best for the temple, the order, the galaxy.

Long minutes passed.

The Force began to swirl, and all were drawn from their contemplation. It was not sudden, or violent, or dangerous. It was simply there, like a great mountain. Powerful, impossible to miss, though not demanding attention, even for those not physically presented. With all eyes on him, Yoda, Grand Master of the Order, and head of the High Council, began to speak.

"Control!" cried the ancient Master. "Control, control, control! Speak of nothing else, will we? Is the Galaxy ours, that we must choose everything for it? Is the Republic? The Force?"

"Master Rancisis," said Grand Master Yoda, turning to the Thisspiasian, "Has it been so long that you forgot the first lesson I taught you?"

It had been over 200 years since Master Rancisis had been in a class with the other younglings, listening to Grandmaster Yoda. But he remembered anyway. "Don't look. Feel."

"No!" said Yoda. "Before even that, it was."

Master Rancisis frowned. That had been the very first words at the start of the lesson. He had barely seen Yoda before that day. The only thing that had happened before that was calling the class to order...

"Sit still. Pay attention." said Master Rancisis.

"Yes. Reform, perhaps we should. Listen, absolutely we should. But stop this, we should not. Not yet. Decide what it should be, we should not. Decide what the galaxy should be, we should not."

The Force cleared and flowed smoothly as the Masters received the Grand Master's wisdom. Agreement and consensus were forming, progress was being made.

"Master Yoda—" There was a thrum in the Force as two dozen masters turned as one with a diamond hard focus on the one dissenting voice. One could of course disagree with the Grand Master. But to contradict him so directly in front of all four councils just as they were starting to form behind him, was not a common sight.

"Master Yoda," said Master Astaal, "The Republic is ours."

Murmuring. Actual, vocal murmuring broke out in the High Council Room.

Ignoring them, Astaal continued. "Ours to defend. Ours to protect. Ours to uphold. They have no standing army, no fleet to speak of. They have had no need of either, because for the past thousand years, since the Ruusan Reformations, when the Republic needed defending, the Order defended. When action was needed, the Order acted. We have kept the old ways, because their fruit has been a golden age that has lasted a thousand years."

His shoulders sagged. "We aren't perfect. Slavery was never expunged from the outer rim. Naboo was allowed to starve before our eyes and we sent one Knight and one Padawan into a deathtrap set by the first Sith to be seen in a thousand years. We do need reform, we do need to listen. We are not above the law, and cannot go abducting people who say things we do not like."

Resolve poured into the Force. "But we can't pretend all is well. We can't pretend our enemies do not actively conspire against us. The Order has lost more Knights to violence in the past 10 years than in the previous 50. We have had more leave the order in the past 10 years than in the past 500. And something is clouding the future. To throw ourselves open to outside influence, when all about us there are signs of malicious intent… How can we know which ideas put forward are truly safe, for ourselves or those under our protection. Every change we make may well invite the Fall, and we might never know until it is too late. And to stand by and not act as change sweeps the galaxy throwing all into imbalance… is that truly a path we can take knowing the harm it might cause?"

The Force grew chaotic again, as a dozen conflicting viewpoints from different Masters tried to work themselves out.

Grand Master Yoda sighed.

The councils debated.

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I rubbed my temples in a futile attempt to ease my growing headache. "The Council is in a deadlock. I can't think of any time such has happened in the past…" I trailed off trying to actually think of such an occasion either in my life or historically.

"More common than you might think, this is." Grand Master Yoda admitted with a sigh, "But to such a degree, rare. Like younglings debating the 'best' saber form it is."

Memories of long and heated debates over the merits of each saber style flickered through my mind and I couldn't quite suppress a grin at the comparison. There was precious little in the temple for younglings to disagree over but the benefits and shortcoming of saber forms never failed to draw out personal opinions.

"We were surprised that we never saw the video you were given the opportunity to create. Were there difficulties?"

"Of a sort." I frowned. "The Captain deemed my first attempt counter productive, and too different from what he had suggested."

"How so?" Master Yoda asked.

"I dedicated the majority of the video to cautionary tales about the dangers of the Dark Side. The Captain claimed that I would only encourage anyone that intended to do harm with his teachings, while scaring off those who did not. He was also rather insistent that it did not constitute a suitable explanation and representation of the Jedi Order."

The two masters shared a look.

"He may be right." Master Windu admitted. "The teachings are out there and available now. A heavy handed approach might only serve to deafen his audience to our words."

"Mmm, meditate on this we will. Perhaps record a lesson I might. Give our words more weight, it would."


"If you feel that is the best Master. I'll bring it up with the Captain when he returns." I murmured, my thoughts dozens of parsecs away from the conversation.

"Something troubles you, Knight Kenobi?" Yoda prompted.

"Yes, Master… Kesel's lessons on drawing upon the Dark Side of the Force… They unnerve me. More precisely, when he draws on his anger. It's like feeling a shadow of Darth Maul's presence. I don't think clearly about it. I hadn't even noticed he was training Delia to return to the Light. All I could focus on was that feeling of anger… I wanted to draw my lightsaber. To end the threat. I know he is not a Sith, but that feeling…" I closed my eyes and shook my head. When I looked back at the holo projector the Master's faces showed sympathy and concern. "I'm sorry, I'm not certain I was the best person to be sent on this mission."

"Mmm a difficult path for you to walk this has become. Others, I believe, might have done far worse."

"Master?"

"Think, Knight Kenobi." Master Windu answered solemnly. "What might have happened if another had been sent on this mission. Someone more prone to reacting and less prone to thinking?"

"Gained access to his ship they might not have."
Master Yoda reclaimed the conversation. "Your Padawan, pushed for it he did. How many Padawans might have done the same, hmm?" Given the reason Anakin had pushed for it… few, very few, if any. "And even then had they secured a place on the Captain's ship, attack him you have not. Others? More sure in their path, and less willing to listen? What might have happened had they chosen to act where you chose to wait?"

I took my time considering the question carefully.

"The Captain, for all that his training is inconsistent and informal, is talented. Both with the Force and with a lightsaber. His style is unusual and meant for dueling. If it came down to a fight I'd not feel comfortable betting against him." I admitted both to the Master and to myself. I was all too aware that the Captain was being rather circumspect with showing any Force techniques he may have learned over the years. A good surprise or three mixed with what skills I had seen and he could very well be a match for many Knights, and perhaps a few of the less combat inclined Masters.

"Mmm and if he escaped an attack by the Jedi, what then?"

"I don't know. I suppose he would try to disappear. Perhaps hide out in a less populated system until he thought it was safe?"

"Perhaps." Master Windu eyed me carefully. "Or perhaps he would take the opportunity to proclaim to all of his viewers that the Jedi had attempted to kill him. Imagine the potential repercussions. If those who have grudges against the Order got ahold of such news we would be decried for sending assassins after those who threaten our power and position."

I grimaced at the very idea. It could be a heavy blow to our reputation. One that could take many years to recover from. Perhaps I wasn't the worst person to be on this mission after all.

"These videos have yet to make the Captain a household name. But he is rapidly gaining more and more attention as some few are beginning to claim actual results from following his teachings. Not much, but enough to garner growing interest. Our best guess is that it will come to the attention of major news industries within the next six months. And we only suspect it will be delayed that long because the skeptics will be so hard to convince of the tutorial's veracity."

"Stop this we cannot. Copies no doubt have been made by many. His student spread the videos to dozens of smaller sites, she has. His teaching cannot be made to disappear. A response we must find and soon, or be left behind we will."


"Yes Master." I responded thoughtfully.

"I'm sorry this mission is taxing on you, Knight Kenobi, but you and your Padawan have done well so far. Better than many others might have in the same situation. Do not doubt that. Stay the course. For all that the Council is conflicted, they know we need a response to this soon. We'll find our way through this."

"May the Force be with you."
Master Yoda smiled kindly.

"And with you, Masters." I answered as they cut the connection.
 
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Kenobi has faced more of the Dark-Side than any living Jedi of his Era.

He will have the most difficult time on this mission, and yet is the best suited for it. May the Force serve him well, for he has always served it well.
 
"The Captain, for all that his training is inconsistent and informal, is talented. Both with the Force and with a lightsaber. His style is unusual and meant for dueling. If it came down to a fight I'd not feel comfortable betting against him."
That is still really, really hard to believe, and is straining against the sense of disbelief in this story. Unless the MC has another force user he's spars with occasionally, that we just aren't aware of yet. Kenobi's experience alone would beat any advantage the MC could potently have with his sports incorporated saber style. Like the MC never even became a Padawan, or had experience fighting others with lightsabers since he left the order that we are aware of.
 
Kenobi has faced more of the Dark-Side than any living Jedi of his Era.

He will have the most difficult time on this mission, and yet is the best suited for it. May the Force serve him well, for he has always served it well.
To fight the enemy, you must know the enemy. And yet, at the same time, it can be said that fighting the enemy also causes you to know the enemy.

That is still really, really hard to believe, and is straining against the sense of disbelief in this story. Unless the MC has another force user he's spars with occasionally, that we just aren't aware of yet. Kenobi's experience alone would beat any advantage the MC could potently have with his sports incorporated saber style. Like the MC never even became a Padawan, or had experience fighting others with lightsabers since he left the order that we are aware of.
I think that Obi-Wan meant that the MC would probably beat most other Jedi Knights. Kenobi is a bit of an exception.
 
That is still really, really hard to believe, and is straining against the sense of disbelief in this story. Unless the MC has another force user he's spars with occasionally, that we just aren't aware of yet. Kenobi's experience alone would beat any advantage the MC could potently have with his sports incorporated saber style. Like the MC never even became a Padawan, or had experience fighting others with lightsabers since he left the order that we are aware of.

It's been a while since I read this, but I think he spent some time wandering through smaller Force sects? He could have very well learned some lightsaber skills from them, which combined with natural talent and the unfamiliarity of his style could surprise Obi Wan.

If he's been following Matukai's teachings, those allow the practictioner to qualitatively improve their bodies even without using the force, which could also be a factor. Differences in athleticism can make up for a surprising lot in a battle, especially since they had not sparred before.

It is still a little hard to believe though, I'll admit.
 
That is still really, really hard to believe, and is straining against the sense of disbelief in this story. Unless the MC has another force user he's spars with occasionally, that we just aren't aware of yet. Kenobi's experience alone would beat any advantage the MC could potently have with his sports incorporated saber style. Like the MC never even became a Padawan, or had experience fighting others with lightsabers since he left the order that we are aware of.
I think that Obi-Wan meant that the MC would probably beat most other Jedi Knights. Kenobi is a bit of an exception.
I agree with this point-of-view, but throw in the fact that Kenobi, for all that he is as capable of daring-do as Anakin, is a being of CAUTION.
He will ALWAYS OVER estimate his opposition than UNDER estimate them.
Will Obi-Wan win? Honestly? From what we have seen, I would put the odds at somewhere to 1 to 3. The only advantages that the MC has are Surprise (Using techniques, mainly Force Ones, that Obi-Wan has no idea even exist.) and Endurance (Already shown to have a much higher one than Obi-Wan, so if he doesn't manage to take out Obi in a quick surprise attack, and doesn't get taken out in turn, his best bet is tiring Obi-Wan down.). Neither of which are easy against Obi-Wan, since he IS a, despite his claims at focusing on Diplomacy, a Martial Focused Jedi thanks to his experiences.
Remember, this is PRIOR to the Clone Wars, THIS Obi-Wan is NOT NEARLY as experienced as THAT one. Non-the-less, Obi-Wan is in the top percentile of Jedi when it comes to sheer Chaos Magnet, and it has given him an Edge over most of his compatriots when it comes to experience and overcoming odds, usually of the unplanned and unseen variety.
 
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