The Midnight Incident
Part Five
Well… it worked. Not as intended but it worked. Good thing too, don't think the mooks can hold without the anti-illusion effect given how narrow our margins are.

What it did to your friends and family scares you. And you don't even want to think about what else could have happened before you woke up on Wednesday afternoon, without you being able to do anything about it. A new Dark Kingdom scheme, the Ministry trying something- trying this- a Jewel Seed running wild again, or some horrible thing from one of the Pretty Cures' enemies. It's hard to accept, but you were lucky that nothing like that happened later Monday night, or on Tuesday, or Wednesday morning. For forty hours, anything could have gone terribly wrong, and you'd have been powerless to help anyone.
A very Nanoha mindset.

She's going out there to fight an army for you, and you're not there.

It feels so wrong.
It is what Serenity would have been used to and comfortable with.

Shukra's amazing at this kind of thing, she'll stop it if she thinks she should. You honestly can't imagine her letting something like this really get to her, being a warrior is her whole… idiom, really.
How things have changed. At the start of the quest Serenity was the driving force pushing the childish crybaby Usagi to be more. Now we have reached the point where Serenity, naive over-pampered brat, is an active detriment.

Also kinda concerned that Serenity cannot differentiate between Shukra and Minako, despite living in Usagi's head.

Things stop going according to plan.
Once again Sailor Moon takes a brief diversion into slapstick.
...which never seems to happen to the other Senshi. Are they more serious or just less unlucky?
 
The Midnight Incident
Part Five
The BIGGEST most scathing criticism about this update that I can level is - there is zero under-the-hood explanation (read - rolls and or trait activations) as to why Usagi's flopping so badly against first sniping of the rockets and then snapping them in halves.

Like from the moment Old Princess Serenity butted into the SAM action, it's been a desire for explanation that burned inside me.

And I was denied.
 
The BIGGEST most scathing criticism about this update that I can level is - there is zero under-the-hood explanation (read - rolls and or trait activations) as to why Usagi's flopping so badly against first sniping of the rockets and then snapping them in halves.

Like from the moment Old Princess Serenity butted into the SAM action, it's been a desire for explanation that burned inside me.

And I was denied.
It seems pretty obvious what the issue is. Usagi doesn't actually know the spell herself; Serenity does. The previous times Usagi 'cast' it, Serenity was in the fact the one who stepped in and handled the sensory aspect. Which means that Usagi doesn't actually know how the whole spell works; Serenity does. I even saw discussion in the lead up to this of how this might very well come up, considering how Serenity's feelings towards actually harming living things have been made clear.
Edit, less a minute after I posted: You don't need a roll, trait activation, or whatever mechanical things are present for everything. Sometimes, the narrative provides all the explanation you need.
Edit, because I am apparently forgetful: Usagi does know enough of the spell to cast a single beam version of it on her own, but when doing so, she doesn't get the Esperry sense that Serenity's version comes with. She tried doing Serenity's version for the extra accuracy, and Serenity said 'nope, invalid target', which left Usagi doing her own version. Which is not what people were trying for in the vote.
 
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Thought: Properly and humanely countering the living rockets may have been locked behind narus presence, countered by a debuff: she would not apply that -20 "not a god" debuff to godbinding
 
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Ami: So, how'd you evade the Sealing?
Usagi: I dunno, I was too busy falling.
How's that one song go?

Suddenly, ghostly threads rise from the Tokyo streets
But with my magical powers they can't lasso me
It's a god binding seal and it wants me gone
But I am too dizzy to play along
So I think to myself, that I'd rather fall
No offense but at least it's predictable
Gotta stop stalling, I've got some falling to do~

—I've got some Falling to do
, by Lemon Demon (edited to fit the situation by me)
 
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Lol, Usagi pulling slapstick is fun even if very poorly timed.

Wait, wasn't the reason the Senshi are holding back because there was some concern about the god binding system? Shouldn't they just blitz the hell out of the enemy HQ now?
Also, why is the rest of the Japanese government either sitting in their hands or misappropriated?
 
Also, why is the rest of the Japanese government either sitting in their hands or misappropriated?
I mean, what exactly would the government be doing that isn't being done right now? The attack is only a few minutes old at most, and the nearby military base fired off the anti illusion flares basically immediately. This isn't a base in in an active war zone, they're not constantly in a state of readiness. It takes some time to wake up soldiers and get them into the jeeps.
 
Naru would have no way to catch or remotely interfere with the rockets in-flight. So whether or not she could do something with or for the homing spirits is fairly academic.
Most I can see her really pulling off (and this is assuming she's partial to doing it, life creation ex nihilo tends to be rather nerve wracking for the responsible) is creating a bunch of aerial denial drones to handle the rocket situation themselves, her usual magic draining thing tends to be fairly close ranged and she doesn't really have a way to fly
 
Shouldn't they just blitz the hell out of the enemy HQ now?

The enemy HQ is hidden at the moment. The Senshi could try and look for it but they didn't know how the sealing ritual worked so they chose to fight defensively.

That might change now that they know the ritual isn't as effective as they feared but time spent searching for the enemy HQ is time spent not fighting the enemies at MCAT's gate.

Also, why is the rest of the Japanese government either sitting in their hands or misappropriated?

This attack only started ~15 minutes ago at most. It's going to take time for reinforcements to arrive.
 
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Wait, wasn't the reason the Senshi are holding back because there was some concern about the god binding system? Shouldn't they just blitz the hell out of the enemy HQ now?
A)I'm not actually sure the Senshi or MCAT know where Enemy HQ for the battle is, the anti-illusion shells are an AoE thing.
B)They also don't currently know where the godbinders are; OOC knowledge is that they're in a vauge circle a chunk away from the main battle, because you do not get close to the angry god you're trying to seal if at all possible.
I mean, what exactly would the government be doing that isn't being done right now? The attack is only a few minutes old at most, and the nearby military base fired off the anti illusion flares basically immediately. This isn't a base in in an active war zone, they're not constantly in a state of readiness. It takes some time to wake up soldiers and get them into the jeeps.
While they're probably not too aware of it, there's also mindwhammy concerns in theory, even if practically the Empty Faces will be focusing on MCAT proper rather than Little Brother's troops elsewhere. Assuming they survive I imagine MCAT's going to be trying more heavily to research non-Senshi counters for that.
 
A)I'm not actually sure the Senshi or MCAT know where Enemy HQ for the battle is, the anti-illusion shells are an AoE thing.
Usagi at least had an idea of where some of the rockets were coming from, but then she got the whirligig treatment and probably needs to reorient a little and see a new launch to find it again
B)They also don't currently know where the godbinders are; OOC knowledge is that they're in a vauge circle a chunk away from the main battle, because you do not get close to the angry god you're trying to seal if at all possible.
I can see the argument for getting rid of the centralized command and likely communication element impacting the godbinder's effectiveness at least, hard to aim when you don't have eyes on target and the ability to transfer the actionable intel
 
It would probably be easier to trace the god binding spell back to wherever the spell casters are, and, well, you do not want to try and bind a god while they're kicking your arse.
 
So, when this is over, we find a book on WWII Russian anti-tank dogs and read it while drawing on Serenity's persona.
 
It would probably be easier to trace the god binding spell back to wherever the spell casters are, and, well, you do not want to try and bind a god while they're kicking your arse.
Well, sometimes you have to do things you don't want to do because circumstances have gone against you, I imagine they must have some plan for if the godbinders get rumbled, even if it's just some little bit of intel they dug up from the archives
 
which never seems to happen to the other Senshi. Are they more serious or just less unlucky?
Usagis just like that- as moon princess the universe gives her some amount of Toon rules
Usagi at least had an idea of where some of the rockets were coming from, but then she got the whirligig treatment and probably needs to reorient a little and see a new launch to find it again
They also seem to be doing decently effective shoot and scoot- their fire doctrine so far has been "pop out of your house, fire off one or two, duck back under your wards." This is why people were trying to get mercury out here, because calculating good counter battery was apparently dependent on her whoops wrong that'll teach me to check my references
 
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Noting that as long as we keep ducking around they're spending considerablr efforts trying to hold us still enough for a binding that probably won't work...its not a bad trade until we have good intel on where to smack.

Attention and materials spent on us aren't being spent on the defenders
 
In better news, a quick AnyDice query tells me Usagi can pretty much keep this up until the Rockets start getting to her...
...Or until she gets tired of teleporting. The most similar event like this in the past was when Usagi was rapid-teleporting and casting heal-bombs during the Uminari Tree Incident, and that did start to get her tired and disoriented fairly quickly.

Well, Moon could always just teleport to one of the Ongoro armies.

Really obviously. Using the spell that makes every rocket in the sky retarget onto her.
Of course, in theory she could equally well teleport to them holding the warheads of the rockets she's breaking in midair. But either she hasn't thought of the enemy's explosives as a weapon to use against Onogoro soldiers, or she's having trouble keeping track of where the ground forces are while being catapulted and whirled all over the sky.

...One thing, though. I suspect this little "rocket garden" violates many laws. Many, many laws. Even ignoring that they are missles being used by insurgents, what we got from Serenity and why she was so against shooting them down reads like serious animal abuse.
Well, we've seen at least one viewpoint scene from a Hinoyama clan member's own perspective. It doesn't sound like the training method for these little guidance-spirit things is necessarily animal abuse in and of itself (at least, no more than training a dog to do tricks by feeding it treats when it does things right would be). But loading the spirit into a missile chassis and throwing it at the enemy could be argued as animal abuse depending on your definitions.

I like how Flailingly Whirlingly Teleportingly Mobile contributes more to this roll than Significant Spoilers.
In this case, knowing how the spell works is less important than being practically impossible to target and lock onto, I guess.

How things have changed. At the start of the quest Serenity was the driving force pushing the childish crybaby Usagi to be more. Now we have reached the point where Serenity, naive over-pampered brat, is an active detriment.
I don't think that's really fair.

Serenity's problem or 'problem' here is that she's a gentle pacifist who was historically guarded by some of the most powerful warriors who ever lived, so she has, as Usagi's internal narrative puts it, the fighting instincts of a head of lettuce.

At the same time, being a gentle pacifist doesn't mean being lazy, unmotivated, or stupid. So Serenity can still be a powerful force for making Usagi productive, and even helpful in inducing Usagi to find her courage and be brave, while being actively a drag anchor on Usagi when Usagi is actually trying to fight.

The problem here is that 'Greater Moon Sparkling Sensation' specifically requires Serenity's mind casting the spell or helping to do so, and Serenity is of very limited use on a battlefield. Notably, Moon Sparkling Sensation still works as a typical magical girl combat spell without Serenity, it's just not something you can use to laser-shotgun stuff from three miles away.

Also kinda concerned that Serenity cannot differentiate between Shukra and Minako, despite living in Usagi's head.
To be fair, Minako is known to Usagi as a scrappy warlike powerful combatant that Usagi has a lot of faith in as a fighter, so the difference in Serenity and Usagi's minds may easily blur a little. Serenity would have, I don't know, centuries of memories of Shukra, whereas Minako is very much a new thing to her.

And we know Serenity's ghost has trouble with realizing that she's dead and it's the postapocalyptic future, because we've run into basically that exact thing twice now at a minimum.

The BIGGEST most scathing criticism about this update that I can level is - there is zero under-the-hood explanation (read - rolls and or trait activations) as to why Usagi's flopping so badly against first sniping of the rockets and then snapping them in halves.

Like from the moment Old Princess Serenity butted into the SAM action, it's been a desire for explanation that burned inside me.

And I was denied.
Seems simple enough to me. We ran into a limitation of Greater Moon Sparkling Sensation, so Usagi did her best to accomplish her objective via the other means available to her. Her best turned out to be pretty good, albeit very undignified.

This kind of thing is very rarely covered by dice mechanics in the quest, because the dice rolling engines are mostly present to guide the narrative of how well certain things work, not to provide a detailed D&D-style mechanical simulation of how every one of dozens of possible combat tactics behave.

Wait, wasn't the reason the Senshi are holding back because there was some concern about the god binding system? Shouldn't they just blitz the hell out of the enemy HQ now?
Usagi: "Great idea! Uh, where's the enemy HQ?"
 
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I was skimming through the latest batch of comments, saw these two words, and then imagined Usagi (after going through the spin cycle this chapter) pumping homemade rockets full of healing magic so MCAT can stockpile "no one dies today" missiles so Moon can be helpful with things other than being a teleporting heal bot.

Heals being delivered via random weaponry is already a favorite bit of video gamey stupidity, and Usagi is also an avid arcade gamer, so I'm sure she'd agree that this idea is totally awesome and brilliant and absolutely Can't Go Wrong™.
 
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