When he first spoke to me of the Pure one,
"When he first spoke to me of the Pure one,
[missing quotation mark]
"Sudy his path, his words,
"Study his path, his words,
[typo]
by perception, reality shape is carved, chip by chip."
by perception, reality's shape is carved, chip by chip."
[missing possessive]
"I ca try to make some arrangements,"
"I can try to make some arrangements,"
[typo]
"That would be an amusing,
"That would be an amusing sight,
[missing word, best guess based on context. This is Jia Hong commenting on Ling Qi trying to guess as to the meaning of his message to Huisheng]
The fading of the tension of the sovereigns power.
The fading of the tension of the sovereign's power.
[missing apostrophe]
The vast crowd in th throne room
The vast crowd in the throne room
[typo]
for elders and youth too both enjoy
for elders and youth to both enjoy
[typo]
and saw Diao LingQin raise her own hand
and saw Diao Linqin raise her own hand
[typo]
a cloying darkness the drank in Cai Shenhua's blazing light.
a cloying darkness that drank in Cai Shenhua's blazing light.
[typo]
The Empress; voice was different
The Empress's voice was different
[typo possessive]
away from the leviathan's of cultivation.
away from the leviathans of cultivation.
[typo apostrophe]
third and fourth realms
[missing space]
rows of tables filled drinks and refreshment.
rows of tables filled with drinks and refreshment.
[missing word]
As amember of the Imperial family
As a member of the Imperial family
[missing space]
Each of them has shown the character and loyalty well.
Each of them has shown their character and loyalty well.
[typo]
I am pleased to have them beside me," Mu Wuye."
I am pleased to have them beside me, Mu Wuye."
[extraneous quotation mark]
I trust my instructors judgement.
I trust my instructor's judgement.
[missing apostrophe]
It took Ling Qi a long moments pondering
It took Ling Qi a long moment's pondering
[missing apostrophe]
that Mu Wuye was torn on
[typo]
No their or his, if that was the preference, business.
No, their, or his if that was the preference, business.
[tweaked some commas. I think technically the one I removed should stay in place, but that's an awful lots of commas.]
Xia Lin dropped a hand on her shoulder bowed as well. "Yes, Sir Mu , please forgive this nosy woman."
Xia Lin dropped a hand on her shoulder and bowed as well. "Yes, Sir Mu, please forgive this nosy woman."
[missing "and" and an extra space I removed]
I have heard good things of fiancee's dedication
I have heard good things of my fiancee's dedication
[missing word]
