Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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I predict that within a year in universe, were going to see Ling Qi's romantic angle set in stone one way or another.

Xuan Shi with this storytelling angle certainly gives him a good advantage. Even if his connection to the seas makes Ling Qi's settled home less than advantagous.

Though Meng Dan having shared ties to the moon, the history angle making his love of stories being rooted more in facts might appeal to Ling Qi more...He has opportunities.

Then theres Bao Qian whose placement in this fevered race hinges entirely on how that "I will go find a spirit of the Summer or Autumn" Thing goes. If he successfully pairs with that seasonal theme....

Im looking forward to the blood that will be spilled here when the stakes raise.
 
Damn, I feel so sorry for MD and BQ, because Xuan Shi just rocketed ahead as far as I'm concerned. A deep introspective conversation that touched on both of their cultivation bases and showed how they both originate in the same core and diverge, showing how Ling Qi has grown so much and how he's been there for it, and now we're going to get his story standing under a beautiful waterfall.
 
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"This one's curiosity spreads, as the rising reflection upon the shore. What cultivation would be so well suited to mine ears?"

Ling Qi hummed thoughtfully. "Stories. Of all cultivators I know, you are the only one with a deep fascination for narrative…. I've been finding my contemplations falling that way more and more lately."
That's pretty much his Focus so it makes sense to talk to him about that.

"If it's not presumptuous… I wouldn't mind if we had this conversation in your own tongue, if you feel you could express better. Language isn't really a barrier for me anymore."

The Xuan, as one of the oldest clans in the Empire, had their own dialect and language… it was the reason they spoke with such a cadence in the main imperial tongue. Most of the provinces had as well once, but the isolation of the Xuan's islands had left there's far more intact.

He considered her thoughtfully. When he spoke next, the actual sounds were foreign, flatter and sharper than the flow of the imperial language.

"One is rarely called to speak/sing in the way of the waves beyond the slumbering isles. But it is tiring, the southern tongue is too flowing/quick for one's thoughts to keep up well one finds."

"The blood of the Living Isle presupposes one to pondering and thoughtfulness I suppose," Ling Qi said, stopping by his side at the shore, her feet making no impression in the dark mud, whereas his sank heavy into the earth.
Being able to speak other languages is really useful.

"True. It is the sounds, the lack of spacing. Less unique shapes, less exactness in the form of phrase and conjugation. Emphasis on tone, when one's voice comes flat and still by instinct. Ling Qi, you ask after stories. One accepts you have recanted your words, but whence this? Fiction is still not your love still."

"It is not, but I have come to see the lines are not so sharp. Fiction is… still fundamentally a thing of the message, of conveying the author's thoughts, the same as a courtly poem, striving to tell the reader of the beauty or tragedy or other feeling which lies in the writer's heart."

"One sees a truth in this. Ling Qi has chosen the path of a speaker. This is also the path of a storyteller. Fact is important, but if one cannot convince those who listen to the truth of it, then it is but dross, sinking into the abyssal black. The archives of the deep speak of this in our histories, the Hermit King was oft troubled by this, the light hold which dry and cold fact has upon the human mind."
I really like cultivation talks they're always great.

"You're still too practical in many ways. It amuses/provokes thought. The Lady Cai and Ling Qi are very similar, except in aesthetics."

She shot him an affronted look. "I respect my lady deeply of course, but I am not so dour as all of that."

He merely raised an eyebrow. The thunder of the falls was deafening now, as they stood practically under it, the pressure and the wet touching neither of them. "Yet you seek a reason, a hard and fast purpose, in all things. One does not think of these things always, in creation. To one who dreams, is it not enough to want to capture the distant unknown shore, the tale dreamt of in late hours?"

She pursed her lips. She couldn't fully deny that. Her first instinct was to search for purpose and meaning in a story, what its author was trying to say. And there was purpose, even if the speaker, the writer did not think of it.

Not all purposes needed to be grand. She gestured, and a slice of the mist cleared away. A slice of distant sky could be glimpsed, distorted by the shadow left by the Clearwater Mist, here at the center of the falls.
Needing a purpose is a similarity they both have and it's good to be aware of.
 
Looking forward to Xuanji meeting Hanyi. Mob Boss Snow Lady Vs. Young Mistress Chicken :V
 
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Did anyone else get cartoon Robin Hood and Maid Marion under the waterfall flashbacks?

In other speculations, Xuanji might have liked it better if we chosen the walk in the hills and geysers. Although I'm a little confused about where all their spirits are right now. Did they go out to the hills with Zhengui, somewhere else or are they just being really quiet right now?
 
Did anyone else get cartoon Robin Hood and Maid Marion under the waterfall flashbacks?

In other speculations, Xuanji might have liked it better if we chosen the walk in the hills and geysers. Although I'm a little confused about where all their spirits are right now. Did they go out to the hills with Zhengui, somewhere else or are they just being really quiet right now?

Clearly, Xuanji, Zhengui, and Hanyi are all peeking over from the cliff to get a view of the action
 
Announcement!
Heyo guys. I know updates have gotten a bit irregular here, and I'm sorry to continue that, with everything going on, and my own mental health in mind I am going to be returning to the two updates a week schedule this experiment with three works for churning through the realitively quick social updates of the recovery but I just can't keep up with it long term. So Updates will be back to Tuesday and Friday.

I will however be aiming for longer updates in the 2-2.5 k range to help make up for this. Thanks you again for reading and playing everyone!

This does mean the next update is going to be on Tuesday.
 
He frowned, returning to his examination. "Miss Ling is not a woman who cherishes frippery and ceremony."

Look, buddy, not every date can be a mind-blowing heart-pumping Rocket Turtle ride through deadly trials and dreaming skies.

She gestured, and a slice of the mist cleared away. A slice of distant sky could be glimpsed, distorted by the shadow left by the Clearwater Mist, here at the center of the falls.

I have other ideas on this snippet, but for now have this

Choose now, Do now, Tomorrow may not come."

resonance with recent reading, because I have the time to post while waiting for a plane

It is not a bad thing, what I say, the drive that seeks purpose and forward motion in all things captivates. It is heard in every song you compose of yourself

Doon't mind me just marinating in how much he listens to and thinks about her.
 
Heyo guys. I know updates have gotten a bit irregular here, and I'm sorry to continue that, with everything going on, and my own mental health in mind I am going to be returning to the two updates a week schedule this experiment with three works for churning through the realitively quick social updates of the recovery but I just can't keep up with it long term. So Updates will be back to Tuesday and Friday.

I will however be aiming for longer updates in the 2-2.5 k range to help make up for this. Thanks you again for reading and playing everyone!

This does mean the next update is going to be on Tuesday.

Perfectly understandable. Quality writing cannot and should not be rushed. Looking forward to the next update, whether it be on tuesday or any other day.
 
It is vitally important, for the sustainment of such a project, and especially the wellbeing of the author, that they take care to pace themselves.
 
Zhang Feng Discovers Ling Friendship
Had a few ideas for an omake, figure I'd actually try to write one.

Zhang Feng Discovers House of Ling Friendships

Zhang Feng was still very nervous, but she finally felt excited like Mother. It is real. I can be Magic, im-mortal like the real guards or nobles. And since Shu was also Magic, Mother will no longer need to save for aprint-ist-ship for him. Lei-Lei and Dong Chyou could also become culti-vators, so as far as she knew all her favorite people were happy.

"Shu! Feng!" her Mother called out to them to start their day. They had gotten to sleep in after the party last night. Mother had so many offers of congratulations, and the food was so fancy. Feng had thought the food was fancy enough since moving here, but last night? How much money did Lady Ling spend to have servants from outside the house bring special food?

"Feng?!" Mother called out again. It seems Shu was already awake, which was unfair. Her older brother was supposed to be the one in trouble, not Well-behaved Feng. She have to get up.

"Good morning daughter", Zhang Wen, her Mother, said with tiredness and warmness in voice. "I have asked to bring you to one of nannies today. There is some discussion I need to have with Madam Ling, the regards to the new...situation."

"Is everything alright Mother?", the words came rushing out. Feng thought things were better now. "... did I or Shu do anything wrong at the party last night?"

"No, I just need to ask the Madam a few things. Last night showed me that maybe this is even bigger news than I had thought, and I want make sure I know what your responsibilities are." Her mother took a big breath, and gestured for her to sit for her hair to be combed. "Lady Ling has always been generous, but I do wish to know more about how to help you and Shu do your best."

The combing reminded her of when she was really sick, and Mother bathed her and combed her hair everyday until she got the medicine. Ever since then, Mother fussed over Shu and Feng more, especially since coming here. She no longer left the house before the Sun rose, and returned when Feng could see the Moon if she was awake.

"Thank you, Mother." Shu had came into their sitting room, where they ate meals and Feng spent time learning to sew. Ever since the thingy in the basement, Shu was trying to be grown up. While Feng thought he looked silly before, her brother seemed more sure of his new behavior, ever since he found out he could be Magic. At least Shu was nicer now, because grown-ups don't tease their little sisters. Mother had said so.

"Shu, you ready to work hard today?" Mother said with pride, the kind that Feng got more often for being good. "I suppose telling the Lady your desire for guardsmanship means you're being serious."

"The Lady had asked what I wanted, but I did not think she would not have her own suggestions." Shu lowered his eyes to look into Feng's. "When you said you wanted to sew with Mother, the Lady did accept that as well. Maybe she wanted to know what we wanted."

"I have known the Madam for some years, and she has always been the type to return generousity when it was given. The older favors were smaller things though," Mother shrugged. "Maybe the Lady is willing to fund her Mother's projects, and this is a simple matter. I will see about asking today. Shu, come here."

"Mother," the closest thing Shu had to a whine since he wanted to be grownup slipped out. She had a habit of good-luck forehead kisses every morning, since the day Mother came home and found Feng sick and unable to sleep. Still, he did not argue and stepped forward.

"Work hard, son. I am proud of your diligence. Let Mother speak with the House of Ling and see what is needed. You just need to work on your exercises, the Lady did say she could help pick an 'art?' when you are ready." Mother picked up a piece of paper and an inkbrush from a well, more new fancy things they just had now. "I will add that to the list."

Shu, to Feng's surprise, embraced Mother suddenly. "I will work hard Mother. I will make you more proud. And when I am a bigshot cultivator guardsman captain for the House of Ling, you can rest. And I'll keep Feng out of trouble when I'm at it." Shu peered around her Mother and stuck his tongue out. And he thinks he's a grown-up. Feng could respond, but she was Well- Behaved. Better to not even acknowledge him anyway.

"Come along Feng, have a good day Shu." Mother took her hand and started to go where the Nanny would be, as Shu heading out to the garden.

Feng wondered what Nanny it would be today. She knew they had rest days, and that the Madam and Lady hired enough that no one had to work the way Mother used to. Everyone's Mother's got to see their children before the moonrise here.

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Feng was nervous again. Usually when she went to a Nanny, it was not Nanny Min. She knew Lei-Lei's grandmother usually watched the Young Miss, the Madam's other daughter. Feng had met the Young Miss before, but it was easier to ignore a windstorm. Ling Biyu painted and danced and ran fast enough the adults had trouble catching her. And yet sometimes she acted proper, even if her manners were just as rushed as almost anything else Biyu did.

Still, Feng could not know Biyu well. Hopefully she was nice. Nanny Min was Mother's friend, she was sure things would be fine.

"Good Morning!", a voice said right in Feng's ear, marking her jump. "Sorry, I did mean to scare you. I'm just so excited!" The Young Miss walked around her, looking like she was checking on Feng.

"Yes, I am okay Young Miss." Feng lowered her eyes, as was proper.

"I don't think we got to have all our manners today, Nanny?" Biyu asked, sounding concerned. "It would mess up my plan."

"I suppose since we will be playing in garden and our meals today are less formal, we do not need to follow every protocol." Nanny Min was in a fine mood today, but then again Lei-Lei was going to Magic too. Maybe grandmothers could be just as excited. "But what are you planning? You know your ideas go better when you ask."

"Then Zhang Feng, I say you can look at me without the weird posture stuff. After all, we are going to be friends." Ling Biyu stated, as if it was already true. Feng blinked, confused.

"Y-young miss, I am unsure..." Zhang Feng did tilt her head up to look. Ling Biyu still looked just as excited. "I have not had a lot of friends, before."

"I tried making friends when we got here, to the bigger house, but boys are dumb." The Young Miss said that like it was a rule somehow. "And playing games with Siss-y, well I know she let's me win sometimes. And I got my paints and stuff, but Siss-y is good at friends." She seemed sad, which did not match how Biyu normally was.

"I like games, and I'll play with you, but how is the Lady good at friends?" Feng did not know how someone made that possible.

"Well she is going to sum-mit, help people make piece and be friends. It's part of what she does now, Nanny Min watches me if Mommy is busy your mommy makes sure that I have clean dresses, and siss-y helps people make friends. It helps make piece. I have not asked Mommy what the piece is of though. Maybe Mommy's plum cakes?"

Ling Biyu seemed to have a lot to say. Feng did know that sometimes the Madam made a special dessert, one which the Lady and Young Miss had guarded like a Dragon's Treasure in a story. Maybe that's how people made friends? "Well the Lady does know a lot of interesting people." Feng felt it was important to try to respond. Otherwise Biyu might be able to keep going.

"Well, I'm glad you girls are getting along." Nanny Min sounded amused. "Your sister does make a lot of friends, just like your mother." Feng knew that already, that's how Mother got her position here.

"Is it just about being nice to other people who are nice to you?" If Nanny Min knew the secrets of friendship, maybe she would tell Feng if she asked politely.

Biyu answered instead. "I think that's part of what Siss-y and Mommy do. Sometimes Siss-y will help her friends, and then if she needs stuff they help." Then Biyu leaned in, almost more excited than before. "I think we need to do what Siss-y does with her friends. She takes them on ad-vent-ers."

Feng did not know what that was, but Nanny Min seemed mildly worried. "I am certain you and Zhang Feng can have a lovely adventure in the garden, but please let me know your plans Biyu. Your mother would be upset if you got hurt."

"Nanny, I want to show my paintings. And have a tea party, and play hide and seek!" Biyu then looked at Feng. "What do you do for fun? What's your favorite thing?"

She could only think of her answer from last night. "I like sewing with Mother. But your stuff sounds fun." Feng did sometimes have a tea party with her doll, but another person sounded more fun. And she had only Shu to play with before, and he cheated somehow at hide and seek, and never wanted to do a tea party.

"Well next time you bring your sewing art, and I will show you my paintings." Biyu then turned fully to Nanny Min. "I heard some of Siss-y's friends say once about 'Ling Qi style ad-ven-tures'," Biyu treated the big word with care, "where everyone wins a bunch of cool stuff. All of Siss-y's friends go on one with her. Will you help, please Nanny?"

"I can see about arranging a 'reward' for you adventurers, as long as you both are good." Nanny Min was more relaxed now.

Biyu grabbed Feng's hand and started leading her towards the garden. "We got to do our ad-ven-ture!" Feng agreed with Biyu, there was a reward at stake, maybe even a dessert. Biyu had said she wanted to see her sewing, no one but Mother had ever asked before. Feng was very proud of her work, and felt happy someone wanted to see it.

Maybe this is was friendship felt like.
 
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Biyu answered instead. "I think that's part of what Siss-y and Mommy do. Sometimes Siss-y will help her friends, and then if she needs stuff they help." Then Biyu leaned in, almost more excited than before. "I think we need to do what Siss-y does with her friends. She takes them on ad-vent-ers."
I really hope. That "Ling Adventures" becomes synonymous to experiencing a very stressful and powerful Tribulation in a couple of generations.
 
Oh that's so sweet! Thank you for writing it! Really cute to see the household still developing even outside of our direct purview. To see how we affect it, like with the focus on friendship and adventures that's so cute. Hope they can become best friends and we'll see it more in the story, Biyu needed some friends her age :)
Thank you again!
 
Tales of Sun and Steel 7
"The reports from the eighth patrol, Senior Sister!"

Gu Yanmei accepted the hide scroll case with a faint smile. Which she maintained despite the subtle… she did not wish to call it a squirm, but it was what it was, of the younger woman when their fingers brushed. She couldn't truly fault the inner disciples' discipline as the reaction was only barely noticeable, even to her eyes.

Inner Disciple Song Chunhua was an unassuming woman with dark hair bound up in two tight buns and a spread of freckles speckles across her nose and cheeks. She was not someone Gu Yanmei had judged so fanciful when she had selected her as an aide. Honestly. The people of the Emerald Seas had some strange notions which she still did not quite understand. Even with certain recent revelations, a marriage with the Song simply was not something she could pursue. Nor had the woman actually made any suit.

She supposed it was a harmless quirk though. Much less troublesome than some of the noblemen who looked at her with such eyes.

"And your estimation of morale around the way tower?" She asked, showing no sign that she had noticed anything.

Her office sat enclosed at the top of the tower erected here. Devised by the Sect's craftsmen and funded by the Duchess, they rose into the air, squat and blocky, reinforced and rooted in the power of earth and mountain stone. Aligned with the geomantic energies of the wall, and synched to the lines of power beneath the Argent vents, the formations empowering the plated glass windows of the office she occupied allowed her to see far indeed at a mere glance through them in any direction.

It did, however, blind her to the operations in the tower and its basecamp.

"The new soldiers on rotation are taking well to the climate, Senior Sister. Though many are still dispirited by what was seen in the southern sky yesterday. Their nerves are on edge, and they dream of fire," her aide said, bowing her head, the swooping sleeves of her silver gown almost brushing the floor.

Gu Yanmei pursed her lips. That too she could see, Chunhua was unsettled as well. This problem at least, she could solve. "There has been a missive from the Sect, yesterday's events have been reported on, and they are nothing to fear."

"Oh? The flames did belong to the General then?" Inner Disciple Song asked, lifting her head.

Gu Yanmei, glanced toward the eastern window, saw kilometers of rough scrub and snowy valleys rush by in her vision, rapidly panning over the mountainsides for any sign of unexpected human movement. She didn't let the examination stop her words.

"They were. A traitor of the Meng Clan sought to destroy the diplomatic summit and indicue division among the clans. They were destroyed, and the damage contained, with the foreign delegate's aide."

It sounded bizarre to her, though she had read the scroll herself, stamped with the Sect Heads personal seal.

"The summit has been a complete success, and relations established with the people of the 'White Sky' and their vassalized nomad clans. We will be informed with updated protocols for any meeting with any messenger or representative of theirs."

Song stared at her blankly for a full three seconds, unblinking, the largest break she had seen in the woman's composure thus far. "...The Duchess is wise."

"So she is," Gu Yanmei agreed. "You may speak your mind Junior Sister. I too am perplexed."

"It seems too fanciful, but I suppose if the discoveries in the histories were not… exaggerated, it is possible."

"I can only trust the scholars in this," Gu Yanmei replied. And her sister's strange friend who she did not feel the type to manufacture historical claims whole cloth.

"It is not less unbelievable than a Meng openly moving to betray her Grace," Song Chunhua muttered.

She peered at her subordinates' slightly hunched posture and pinched brow. Oh. The Song family were a viscount in the west of the province, weren't they? "While the report was not detailed, it did emphasize that the Meng clan as a whole is loyal, and the Duchess was aided in eliminating the rogues by her loyal subjects. The matter is resolved."

"I see, I am glad, Senior Sister. My apologies, that I was so undisciplined as to seem in need of reassurance," Her junior sister bowed lower still.

"There is no shame for being concerned over your home," Gu Yanmei replied. "Now…"

She caught motion, as her eyes wandered over the southern pane. She narrowed her eyes at the distortion in the clouds, her vision rushing across the boreal landscape. Wings stirred the clouds, the shadow of wings fell over the stony ground. The faintest blip of human qi revealed under the guise of the natural clouds.

"Sister Song. Contact in the south. Eight and four fifths of a kilometer south and off the road to the west. Likely spies or scouting rather than raiders."

Her aide straightened up immediately, the smile forming on her lips vanishing. Any hint of unprofessional emotion gone in an instant. "Understood. Rally the third outrider group and deploy?"

"Yes. Send Disciple's Heng and Zhu along in supporting roles."

"Yes, Senior Sister. Shall I raise the general alert level?"

Gu Yanmei considered watching the shadow disappear from physical sight, leaving only the qi she had sensed.. "To the second stage only."

They had to ration the stones fueling the defensive formations, and this could not be any real host, by her estimation. "Go, Disciple Song. Return for further orders once the outriders are deployed."

She bowed once more and swept out, leaving Gu Yanmei to track the motion she saw through the far seeing window.

She rose from behind her desk, her blade appearing in her hand in a flickering flash of sunlight, the dazzling gleam of the bared steel bright in the dim interior of the office., reflecting off the metallic circle of formation arrays set in the rear of the office. Stepping past the outer ring of etched characters, they shimmered with rose gold light, and Gu Yanmei felt the tug of the tower formations drawing upon her qi.

The red silk of her gown billowed up as the energy rose, flaring out as she allowed her qi to flow, the light shining from the floor expanding until the whole of the circle was lit. Her feet left the floor, and she drifted upward toward the final pane of glass, the one set into the tower ceiling.

These structures were not merely for farsight, but were also amplifiers, tied into the formations set upon the central Argent Peak. Devised by Elder Jiao, to draw on Sect Head Yuan's Way, even as he rested and meditated from the rigors of the first campaign.

Whatever strangeness was happening. Friendly words shared with foreign barbarians, traitors in the court, her duty to the Sect remained the same. There would be no more raids into the foothills, to the little towns of villages where mortals lived their lives and low cultivators worked. In the end, it was the same duty as the Lords of the Gu, against the Ashen wastes.

Her flames flared bright as the rose through the opening pane, surrounded by the formation lights, her vision tied into the tower farseeing still. And there she waited, flame licking over the metal of her blade.

Let the intruders be flushed out. If they proved too much for her juniors. They would face the purification of gold instead.
 
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