The Long Founding (Warhammer 40k)

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I was thinking that the Eternal Guards battle cry is to long but then I remembered that the Imperial Fists battle cry is "Primarch-Progenitor, to your glory and the glory of him on earth!"
 
I was thinking that the Eternal Guards battle cry is to long but then I remembered that the Imperial Fists battle cry is "Primarch-Progenitor, to your glory and the glory of him on earth!"

I feel that author of this plan mistook Chapter Creed (tenets of Chapter's beliefs) and Chapter's Battlecry (what Chapter's members shout before/during charging at Xenos/Mutant/Heretic)

For example, Iron Warriors's Legion Creed is "Unbreakable Litany":

"From iron cometh strength
From strength cometh will
From will cometh faith
From faith cometh honor
From honor cometh iron
This is the Unbreakable Litany. May it forever be so"

The Iron Warriors's Battlecry is much shorter: "Iron Within, Iron Without!"
 
Markings of the Dark Peregrines and Light Bringers:
Very Asoiaf, hell the Light Bringers are basically the Karstark


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I very much doubt, but I will try to keep it not non-canon aside from her telling Grimm about Guliman early (if she exists in canon, I think that she shared the fate of her seniors and got punished by mail sorting just without luck of flood of unsorted mail, so she found for after two years, not two months of searching.)
I mean she could be canon to the quest and just not be am isekai. And the omakes could.be a "what if" she was an isekai. Literally working backwards but hey its fun so.who cares
 
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Just once I would like Lucius to win a fight against someone important. No Pyrrhic victories just a flat out win. What is Lucius now? He's nothing. Right now he is cannon fodder for someone to defeat in order for their reputation to increase. I used to like Lucius. Not anymore. I don't like it when he constantly gets beat. I don't like when this big bad is actually a mewling kitten. I don't like when of Slaanesh's main champions(who is supposed to comparable to typhus, Karn, and Ahriman) is treated as a joke.

Make Lucius scary again because the way he is now beating him is not impressive.
 
Just once I would like Lucius to win a fight against someone important. No Pyrrhic victories just a flat out win. What is Lucius now? He's nothing. Right now he is cannon fodder for someone to defeat in order for their reputation to increase. I used to like Lucius. Not anymore. I don't like it when he constantly gets beat. I don't like when this big bad is actually a mewling kitten. I don't like when of Slaanesh's main champions(who is supposed to comparable to typhus, Karn, and Ahriman) is treated as a joke.

Make Lucius scary again because the way he is now beating him is not impressive.
pleases , if Lucius was any good he wouldn't need a respawn hack to still be alive , you don't hear about the other 3 champions needing to respawn all the time like Lucius now do you
 
Adhoc vote count started by undead frog on Sep 23, 2024 at 12:37 PM, finished with 241 posts and 75 votes.

  • [X] Plan: Eternal Guard
    -[X] Chapter Name: Eternal Guard.
    -[X] Chapter Colours: Dark Orange with Bronze trim, helmets and fists.
    -[X] Chapter Symbol: Bronze sword, pointing downwards with two hands holding it, the left blue hand (Roboute Guilliman) and the right bronze hand (Rogal Dorn).
    -[X] Chapter Creed: "We are the unbreakable shield against the dark!"
    --[X] When fighting with Ultramarines: "As Dorn commanded, we guard against the dark as one!"
    -[X] Blademasters: The Chapter's Marines have honed their skills with the blade, and are among the finest swordsmen in the Imperium.
    -[X] Entrenchment: The Chapter is better at erecting and maintaining fortifications than average.
    -[X] Boarding Specialists: The Chapter's Marines are truly masters at boarding voidcraft - even by Space Marine standards.
    -[X] Extra Thunderhawks: The Chapter has access to additional Thunderhawks, of both Gunship, Transporter and Annihilator models, giving them superior heavy air power.
    -[X] Extra Terminator Armor
    [X] Plan: So we had one blade mastery; what about the 2nd one? But with Entrenchment
    -[X] Chapter Name: Grim Blades
    -[X] Chapter Colors: Dark blue with white/yellow detail
    -[X] Chapter Symbol: Emperor's sword fused with the Star in a circle
    -[X] Chapter Creed: "Stand Vigil over Stars"
    --[X] When fighting with Ultramarines: "As Dorn commanded, we fight against the dark as one."
    -[X] Blademasters: The Chapter's Marines have honed their skills with the blade, and are among the finest swordsmen in the Imperium.
    -[X] Entrenchment: The Chapter is better at erecting and maintaining fortifications than average.
    -[X] Boarding Specialists: The Chapter's Marines are truly masters at boarding voidcraft - even by Space Marine standards.
    -[X] Heavy Weaponry: The Chapter is well supplied with heavy weaponry, and can field a larger proportion of Devastator squads.
    -[X] Extra Thunderhawks: The Chapter has access to additional Thunderhawks, of both Gunship, Transporter and Annihilator models, giving them superior heavy air power.
    -[X] Extra Terminator Armor
    [X] Plan: Grimm's Response to a Failed Boarding Against a Primarch
    -[X] Chapter Name: Knights Mortalis
    -[X] Chapter Colors: Gunmetal Grey with Silver Highlights
    -[X] Chapter Symbol: A Silver Battering Ram
    -[X] Chapter Creed: "Once More Into the Breach"
    -[X] Blademasters: The Chapter's Marines have honed their skills with the blade, and are among the finest swordsmen in the Imperium.
    -[X] Boarding Specialists: The Chapter's Marines are truly masters at boarding voidcraft - even by Space Marine standards.
    -[X] Entrenchment: The Chapter is better at erecting and maintaining fortifications than average.
    -[X] Extra Thunderhawks: The Chapter has access to additional Thunderhawks, of both Gunship, Transporter and Annihilator models, giving them superior heavy air power. (5 points)
    -[X] Extra Terminator Armor
    [X] Plan: So we had one blade mastery; what about the 2nd one
    -[X] Chapter Name: Grim Blades
    -[X] Chapter Colors: Dark blue with white/yellow detail
    -[X] Chapter Symbol: Emperor's sword fused with the Star in a circle
    -[X] Chapter Creed: "Stand Vigil over Stars"
    --[X] When fighting with Ultramarines: "As Dorn commanded, we fight against the dark as one."
    -[X] Blademasters: The Chapter's Marines have honed their skills with the blade, and are among the finest swordsmen in the Imperium.
    -[X] Deepstrikes: More so than even other Space Marines, this Chapter has gained a mastery of the orbital strikes Adeptus Astartes are famous for.
    -[X] Boarding Specialists: The Chapter's Marines are truly masters at boarding voidcraft - even by Space Marine standards.
    -[X] Heavy Weaponry: The Chapter is well supplied with heavy weaponry, and can field a larger proportion of Devastator squads.
    -[X] Extra Thunderhawks: The Chapter has access to additional Thunderhawks, of both Gunship, Transporter and Annihilator models, giving them superior heavy air power.
    -[X] Extra Terminator Armor
    [X] Plan: Astral Fists
    -[X] Chapter Name: Astral Fists
    -[X] Chapter Colors: Orange Primary, Black Secondary
    -[X] Chapter Symbol: A Orange Fist on Black Background
    -[X] Chapter Creed: "Once More Into the Breach"
    -[X] Marksmen: Even among Space Marines the marksmanship of the Chapter is top of the line.
    -[X] Boarding Specialists: The Chapter's Marines are truly masters at boarding voidcraft - even by Space Marine standards.
    -[X] Extra Thunderhawks: The Chapter has access to additional Thunderhawks, of both Gunship, Transporter and Annihilator models, giving them superior heavy air power.
    -[X] Extra Terminator Armor
    [X] Plan: Swords of the Void
 
Make Lucius scary again because the way he is now beating him is not impressive.

If Lucius was truly impressive he would not need a Rez Haxx Trick and would be instead considered in the same leagues of our Swell Guy from Khorne WITHOUT the "Lucius is Eternal because every time he is killed whoever killed him or contributed to his killing is possessed by his soul".
 
"The perfect being, huh? There is no such thing as perfect in this world. That may sound cliché, but it's the truth. The average person admires perfection and seeks to obtain it. But, what's the point of achieving perfection? There is none. Nothing. Not a single thing. I loathe perfection! If something is perfect, then there is nothing left. There is no room for imagination. No place left for a person to gain additional knowledge or abilities..." ~ Mayuri Kurotsuchi, "Bleach" anime

Summarizing, "Perfection" is actually Stagnation
 
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