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I'd rather we recover the fleet before filming a live action Last Voyage so that if possible some of the ships could recreate their final stand.

[] High-fantasy drama showing a young woman's coming of age story in high society occurring in the midst of a pseudo-historical capitalist republic unravelling due to increasing authoritarianism and populism leading to fascism justified under the auspices of protecting the population where a chance encounter hands her a thread that reveals to her the political cynicism and games of the politicians in the republic.

[] Comedic democracy to fascism. Kind of 'Death of Stalin' but if it charted Hitler's rise. Or, since this probably resonates more, Death of Stalin but it's Imperial Japan's High Command and the destruction of Japan's tentative democracy. Complete with 'here's what they're all doing now' at the end that shows how the US pretty much ignored everything so they could focus on Korea and the Soviets.
 
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Recreate? These ships were at the bottom of the ocean for 30+ years after getting sunk in combat. You ain't getting 'em to sail again even if you wanted to, they are wrecks.
Aw, although that does give me an idea for a WWIII near(ish)-future movie where the ships return as ghost ships to do basically the same thing they did during WWII. That's probably a cheesy cult classic though.
 
Commiewood Proposal - The Four Corners--South (Vague Summary)
The Four Corners--South (Vague Summary)

Ashaum is an Agricultural World, rich in resources that the Fascist Empire has been exploiting especially hard for four or five years, but to a lesser extent before it became all Fascist for decades. In an obscure corner of this planet lives two tenant farmers and their nephew. Their nephew is secretly the son of a famed revolutionary who was killed, and is feisty and wants to get out into the galaxy to fight evil... even when he doesn't know who his father is. [A], said Revolutionary's sister, wants him to go out into the world but knows it isn't time. He's learning The Way of Universal Listening or something like that, a means of communing with spirits and reaching into other worlds to communicate with and understand the world and ask it politely to give up its secrets and powers.

One day, Death Trupen (or something) show up and kill him. Vibes should be: very Jackboot, but they also have laser-sword Katana sidearms and at least the commander might sound a bit British. Very pastiche.

A escapes into the wilderness where she's saved by a wise four-armed alien who should give off buddhist monk vibes, but based, and apparently was training Nephew before his death. They journey to the capital, looking for a smuggler [A] knows.

It is forbidden for any of the rich and great foods of Ashaum to be wasted on the peasants, and so the only food people get is Nutrient Paste or something. So the smuggler smuggles that, drugs, guns for revolutionaries, pornography, all sorts of stuff. Rough but has a heart of gold, unlike her robotic friend, tall and rather mercenary, at least at first.

Before they can get any further than cutting a deal, they find and save a revolutionary spy, from a Changeling-like sorta species, (and an enby, of course), who is trying to find someone.

Fifteen Years Ago, a General of the quasi-liberal Empire quit in disgust in a very public way, denounced the Empire and Imperialism. Now a new coalition of Liberal Democracies, breakaway states, and revolutionaries wants this person (man or woman, decide later) to join them as a figurehead and leader because there is news about an impending attack.

The General is in prison, having gotten in a bar fight... but refused to throw even a single punch. They rescue them after an action sequence, and then off they go!

They're attacked, and are forced to land on a desert planet with mines, where they discover that a strange rare metal is being mined for weapons of some kind, and they run across and defeat a Space Prussian Noble who has information about the plans and a location.

This finally leads them to planet three, where they infiltrate this military base and blow part of it up, escaping with the plans. Character beats include the Changeling Spy's identity issues, the Aunt feeling over her head because she's a farmer, the smuggler and Robot arguing about the nature of personhood, and plenty of slapstick.

They join up with the Revolutionary/Rebel/etc fleet, and stage an ambush on a planet that was destroyed by the failed superweapon test of the Fascist Empire, a gun designed to destroy entire planets that blew itself up in the process of destroying an entire system. In the ruins of this destroyed planet and asteroid field there's a big space battle and a land battle, and the Empire deploys their new weapons, the Not-Tigers.

Meanwhile our band of heroes flies in under cover of the conflict and the General has a confrontation with their old friend and now Grand Admiral in which they break their vow of pacifism and ultimately the Dreadnaught is destroyed.

Everyone escapes off it, the enemy is in disarray despite the power of their Not-Tigers, and some of them are captured.

Aunt is awarded a medal and vows to learn about the Listening Way, Smuggler becomes an irregular Partisan Captain, Mercenary Robot sticks with him but gets a salary and we learn that he's saving up to buy other robots their own freedoms (aww, he's not so bad.) Four-armed Alien is going to be Aunt's teacher, Changeling Spy is given a big secret award and now has friends, General doesn't want to lead a war but will use his knowledge for good, roll credits.

*****

This is a *very* vague outline, but.

Also, every single name is 100% provisional.
 
So for no particular reason that has nothing to do with writing omakes, I've found myself asking an important question:
What's our Capital City's Name?
Hell, what are any of our city's names? I've found reference to Guangchou being divided into seven districts, but I've found no city names whatsoever, and I don't want to tread on @HeroCooky 's toes on this.
 
[ ] COSMOS - A hard sci-fi version of Star Trek with strong social and political commentary, Cosmos follows the crew of the interstellar vessel Rosetta on their mission to explore the galaxy. Told in a 12 episode mini-series with overarching character development arcs but serialized A-plots.
Fools and Madmen - The Rosetta has been dispatched to mediate a dispute between two superpowers on an alien planet who are on the brink of nuclear Armageddon, and try to convince them not to repeat Earth's bloody mistakes.
Scarcity - When an alien virus renders the Rosetta's nanofabricators inoperational, the crew struggles to function in their new conditions of scarcity, and must rediscover how the communists of old managed to make things work.
Lingua Franca - A universal translator experiment causes the crew to lose all languages except their first, causing havoc among the international crew as they lose the ability to clearly communicate with each other.
The Golden Calf - The crew must translate anarcho-communism into a format understandable to a hyper capitalist species as part of cultural exchange. The resulting Corpo-Communism is an equal parts comedy and a cutting satirical critique of capitalism.
Triage - The Rosetta is dispatched to render aid to a space colony in the midst of a humanitarian disaster. The ship cannot deal with the sheer number of casualties and cascading failures, and the crew are pushed to the limit as they must decide who they can help.
Banned from Argo - The crew takes shore leave in frontier port, and things rapidly get out of hand as they vent the stress of an extended space voyage among the unprepared population of Argo.

[ ] Nigh Witches - A historical drama following the 588th Night Bomber Regiment during the Great Patriotic War, exploring the lives of the soviet airwomen - through with some embellishment for the big screen. An instant cult classic among lesbians everywhere. Notable for it's realism - Commiewood got a ton of actual footage of the actual planes IRL, and interviewed surviving members of the Night Witches.

[ ] Natchthexen - What if we made Night Witches... but we made them actual witches? (As above, but in a historical fantasy setting AU)

[ ] The Battlestar Potemkin - A complete re-imagining of the Soviet classic in a hard sci-fi setting where a rogue planet has destroyed the Earth and humanity was forced to evacuate into space where the Cold War began anew between the United Stations of America, and the Union of Soviet Space Republics.


[ ] Hellburner - Victorian occult space opera with demon-thermal powered steam rockets, girls dressing as boys to join spaceship crews, and Space!Colonialism.
 
Guangchou Map
So for no particular reason that has nothing to do with writing omakes, I've found myself asking an important question:
What's our Capital City's Name?
Hell, what are any of our city's names? I've found reference to Guangchou being divided into seven districts, but I've found no city names whatsoever, and I don't want to tread on @HeroCooky 's toes on this.

*giggles*

 
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An Action space opera revolving around two ideologically opposed nations fighting desperately against the encroaching empire. The show/movie should have protags from both of the defending factions, as they face the world that is larger than they thought, and get embroiled in internal conflicts that may or may not be enflamed by spies, and self-interested traitors. And yet, in spite of the fanned strife, both defending factions are filled with people whom want to do what's right, or simply to protect their homes and their family. To show why the empire invests in trying to keep them divided, have the separate forces being designed 'incidentally' in a way that supplements each other, while still feeling like a result of more natural development, with possibly even having different doctrines that led to such being a point of contention.


Well, got a bit more to the idea, but well...
Certainly still quite bare-bones here.
 
Songs of the City: Development and Production
Hey, d'you remember how my last omake was originally just the plot summary section of a wikipedia-style article? And how I said that I had most of the Production section done? Yeah, well...
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Songs of the City: Development and Production

Conception and Development


The concept that would later be developed into Songs of the City was initially conceived in 1972, when the creator Hu Chu Won was in his first year studying Fine Arts at Maobao University. This initial version was imagined as a comedic anthology series that would be published in the University's newsletter – in the style of newspaper comics – and would satirise the then-ongoing feud between the management of the Arts Faculty and the Theatre Department. This reimagination of Eastern Europe was designed to evoke the stories one of Hu Chu's adoptive fathers told of his native Belarus, which he had been forced to flee due to homophobia. However, the newsletter rejected Hu Chu's proposal, and he dropped the idea to focus on his studies. It was shortly thereafter that Hu Chu first encountered animation, when one of his professors showed her class a collection of Chinese and Russian animated shorts. Following this, Hu Chu and several other students interested by the films would collaborate with their professors to create one of Guangchou's first video circle: they would import and copy foreign animated films – including much of the Disney Animated Canon – and meet with like-minded students from other Universities at various Culture Festivals to both play and share them. It was during this time that Hu Chu Won met and befriended Sho Jo Weng and Mei Wei, becoming part of a group – a precursor to the legendary "Magic Circle" of Guangchou animators – who collaborated in order to learn how to animate by reverse-engineering the Principles of Animation. With the encouragement of these friends, Hu Chu began work on his own animated short – The River's Dance – in early 1973.

Following the Iwo Jima Crisis, however, Hu Chu Won would be distracted from this project upon learning that Maobao University had obtain high quality American film-making equipment as part of the settlement. Hu Chu grew increasingly fascinated with film-making, and considered reviving Songs of the City as a live-action film – going so far as to prepare a script and conduct some test shooting. It was at this stage that the darker sides of the story began to take shape, leading to the invention of the central murder-mystery plot as a narrative through-line. Hu Chu was unsatisfied with the project, however, and abandoned it in favour of renewing his efforts in animation. As a result, Hu Chu managed to complete The River's Dance in time for the 1973 Celebrated Universal Exhibition of the Fruits of the Labour of Guangchou's Peerless Artists and Entertainers in the Capital, where he and several other Magic Circle animators had arranged a screening wherein each would take turns showing their own animated shorts.

One attendee of this screening was Ai Wo, a young agent of Guangchou Security who had been sent to investigate the group for potential seditious activity. She was amazed by the group's work, and met them following the screening to share contact information and obtain copies of their work. Ai Wo then used these copies to arrange a second, internal screening within the Guangchou Security Department. This attracted interest throughout the government, and gradually became an impromptu fundraiser for the Magic Circle: indeed, one senior official who attended this internal screening would connect several TV producers with Ai Wo, which eventually resulted in a televised showing of the shorts in 1975.

Meanwhile, the Circle were hungry to graduate from making shorts onto animating a full feature-film. Several members of the group provided pitches for the project, including Hu Chu Won sharing the script he had written for Songs of the City. However, there were concerns regarding the size of the project, especially with several of the group's members still nominally being in full-time education. Therefore a compromise was agreed upon where each member was given scenes to work on at their leisure. The group immediately began storyboarding, and by the end of 1973 the film had entered the early stages of production. In this, the Circle were supported by Ai Wo, who was gradually feeding funds to the project from the stockpile accrued by the Government screenings. Not only did this financial support allow the group to dedicate their time to animation, but it also created interest and rumours within the film community of a fully funded Guangchou film. While come were disappointed upon learning of the film's animated nature, others were keen to join the animation team, leading to an influx of talent into the project – which only grew stronger following the Thai and Cambodian Brain Drains, with the now-legendary Thai-Indian animator Arjuna Niram joining the core Magic Circle in 1975.

Not long before the film reached completion, however, the Guangchou government began a scheme to generate domestic film production – designed to create the institution colloquially known as "Commiewood". During this time there was a scramble by the authorities to find adequately developed film projects to serve as flagships for the program. To this end, Ai Wo was contacted in late spring of 1976 by Lai Xien, the TV producer behind the screening of the Magic Circle's shorts. He was surprised to discover the group had not only begun development of a feature film, but were nearly finished. With the team's funds almost fully depleted, Lai Xien was able to give a much-needed infusion of cash: the team were able to hire professional recording equipment to record the film's score, foley and voice-track, as well as being able to work full-time during the final push of production. All of this allowed the film to be completed on time, and Songs of the City was officially screened for the first time on New Year's Day, 1977, at the Glorious Celebration for the Success of Guangchou in All Artistic and Cultural Fields Festival.

Animation and Sound

The development of Songs of the City was troubled on account of the film's informal early production. The initial core of animators – the first ten members of the "Magic Circle" – were not only separated across five different universities, but were also expected to maintain their studies while working on the film. Furthermore, due to Guangchou's inadequate telecom infrastructure at the time, and the group's infrequent physical meetings, most directorial communication for the film's early development was conducted by mail. To alleviate these problems, Hu Chu Won decided to divide the group into smaller teams, with each geographic group being assigned to animate scenes for one of the in-universe cities. During this time, Hu Chu would commute to from Maobao University to the neighbouring Fenxiao University to lead the Tembara team, while Sho Jo Weng led the Luthol team, Tai Fang the Prizgrad team and Mei Wei worked exclusively on the Morozsk scenes. This approach gave each team leader directorial experience, and also led to the film's uniquely experimental and varied animation styles; with each city animated differently, their individual atmosphere and tone are better reflected in the film's animation while emphasising the juxtaposition between locations.

However, this approach also created significant problems for production. Most notably, Hu Chu Won was forced to adapt the story to each team's different levels of progress and speed, rewriting the script several times to move scenes from Prizgrad and Morozsk to Luthol and Tembara. This created significant friction between the teams, exacerbated by the communication bottlenecks causing misunderstanding within the group. Accusations were made of scene theft, and several cuts of animation had to be scrapped after significant work. Production threatened to break down entirely in early 1975, but was saved by the intervention of Ai Wo, who managed to obtain authorisation for the team to use government channels to contact each other, as well as creating arrangements for the Circle to be brought together following the graduation of several of their members in the summer of that year.

Following those graduations, production became significantly smoother. Hu Chu Won, Ai Wo, Sho Jo Weng and Mei Wei all moved into a single office, while Tai Fang and the other remaining undergrad members of the group continued to work remotely – albeit with significantly more frequent visits by Hu Chu Won. Several of their trainee animators joined them. To commemorate their new status as a full production studio, the group renames themselves as the Lagona Production House after the view from their offices – becoming the first of several studio set up by members of the Magic Circle. Now able to work under the same roof, production of the film continued with relatively few issues, especially after the extra infusion of cash by Lai Xien. The animation of the film was declared finished in October of 1975, with a frantic period of editing thereafter to prepare the film for its release at New Year. Despite the problems it caused, Hu Chu Won would use modified iterations of this production style on his later projects, albeit with significantly more direct oversight. In contrast, several of his fellow Magic Circle animators would later use more traditional forms of staff management when producing their own films.

An entirely different set of problems plagues the development of the film's sound and score. Initially, the film was set to receive music and sound direction from Qiang Shi – an acquaintance of Hu Chu's from his earlier schooling – who offered to perform the role after having done so for The River's Dance. However, friction began to develop between Qiang Shi and Hu Chu Won regarding the soundtrack of the film; while Qiang wanting to mix of traditional Guangchou music and western orchestra to create a sense of familiarity and foreignness in the soundtrack, Hu Chu wanted to incorporate a jazz influence to reflect the film's period and its less rigid sense of reality. This tension would grow as production continued, and while Hu Chu would praise Qiang's work on the foley and soundscape of the project, he remained highly resistant to to the proposed soundtrack. This would come to a head in early 1976, when Hu Chu decided to hire a second composer for the film – the student and recent refugee from Cambodia, Kanleakhana "Hana-Chan" Chan. Hana-Chan would provide the jazz-influenced tracks that Hu Chu requested, while Qiang was further pressed into the sound direction and editing role. Qiang frequently complained about feeling degraded in the role, and left the project shortly after. Ironically, this gave Hana-Chan the confidence to stand up to Hu Chu's demands, pushing to keep and rework much of Qiang Shi's work on the film. Qiang was brought back on board, and collaborated with Hana-Chan to create the film's final score, which all three found satisfactory. The soundtrack was recorded in September of 1976, played by the Graduate's Orchestra of Fenxiao University in said University's music hall. While Qiang and Hana-Chan became close friends during this process, Qiang Shi refused to speak to Hu Shu Won for years following the feud, and adamantly refused to work on any future projects with him even after they reconciled.

Casting

During early production for the film, a temporary voice track for the film was created by the animators themselves, using their own basic performances as a basis for their animation and timings. As production continued, however, it became increasingly apparent that a professional cast needed to be assembled for the film. To this end, Hu Chu Won made overtures towards his friends from the Theatre Department – with whom he had made screen-tests for a live-action Songs of the City – but was rebuffed. Meanwhile, Ai Wo approached several more professional Theatre troupes, but none were interested in the work for the rates being offered. Without any further recourse, the Magic Circle decided to post advertisements for paid voice roles at their local universities, arranging open auditions across four separate locations. Over the course of a week in June of 1975, Hu Chu Won and Ai Wo would drive the length of Guangchou to attend these auditions, alongside the local members of the Magic Circle. These auditions proved to be a success – with unexpectedly high levels of interest in all locations – and the group were able to agree upon the voice cast.

Later that summer, at the Grand Commemoration of Guangchou Artists and Entertainers Following Their Ambitious and Laudable But Ultimately Futile Efforts to Help The Glorious Workers Beat the Summer Heat Through Distraction Festival in August 1975, the cast was assembled for the first time to create the provisional voice track for the film. While the team agreed that the new cast was a substantial improvement, the new voice-work did necessitate several minor alterations to the film's animation – which diminished the team's already dwindling funds. As a result, the actors were not contacted again following their initial payment, with several believing that the entire project had fallen apart. However, following the financial intervention of Lai Xien, they were contacted again, and were invited to record the film at the group's new Lagona Production House. While most of the cast returned, the actor playing Aleksandrov had unfortunately died in a climbing accident earlier that year, leading to Sho Jo Weng to reprise the role from the group's initial scratch audio. Over the following week, the cast recorded their lines for the public release of the film, experimenting with different techniques before finally settling on group recording sessions. Despite technical difficulties with the new equipment, the actors would later comment on this time fondly, and would all subsequently work again with either Hu Chu Won or one of his fellow Magic Circle animators in the future.

Several years later, all surviving members of the cast would return to provide their voices to the new language cut of the film, following the Language Rationalisation reforms.
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AN: Will be edited in after I've got some sleep. Of note: I conceived of the "Magic Circle" as something of a foil to Disney's Nine Old Men, as a group of young students who emerged as talented animators. I've made up a lot of names, including some suitably ostentatious festival names. Ultimately, though, this is just my exercise in justifying how an entire animated film could be released quickly as a flagship of Commiewood. I probably won't finish the rest of the wiki-style article, if only because the big sections left are Release and Reception - which I understand even less than communist film production - and an Interpretation, Themes and Legacy section, which feels a bit too self-congratulatory to write myself. More stuff later.
 
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[x] The Last Voyage
(A dramatic yet realistic re-enactment of the last days of the fleet of Guangchou, before the Imperial Japanese Navy got handed a humiliating defeat at the cost of all hands and ships of Guangchou. Let the world know the bravery of these men and women, and let their deeds inspire new generations of sailors.)
 
[x] The Last Voyage
(A dramatic yet realistic re-enactment of the last days of the fleet of Guangchou, before the Imperial Japanese Navy got handed a humiliating defeat at the cost of all hands and ships of Guangchou. Let the world know the bravery of these men and women, and let their deeds inspire new generations of sailors.)
Moratorium is still in effect as per the update.
 
The First Guangchou Movie will be:
[] Live-Action

Much more limited with what can be presented; however, you can show off so much more in terms of your nation without having the Wast completely dismiss it as propaganda. And, as a bonus, you will gain your first media darling with a successful release!

Man, those damn Wasterners! :V

Grand Commemoration of Guangchou Artists and Entertainers Following Their Ambitious and Laudable But Ultimately Futile Efforts to Help The Glorious Workers Beat the Summer Heat Through Distraction Festival

The GCoGAaEFTAaLBUFEtHtGWBtSHTD Festival?
 
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[] Love, Death, and Robots EXTREME EDITION

Someone has submitted a proposal to turn the whole event into a full-fledged movie festival. While the individual films won't be as grandiose as a single focused work, it is posited that multiple, smaller projects may help better showcase the potential of Guangchou's nascent visual media industry, but also its skills in various art styles.

Note: Would this be possible? Like LD&R in that it's a compilation of multiple animation styles, stories and/or genres. From horror to romance, from comedy to action. Everyone and anyone can contribute. The only limit is the filmmaking equipment.
 
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