Well, it seems pretty obvious that the fights aren't rigged now that the Hyugas aren't fighting each other. It was already pretty iffy (see: Sakura and Ino fight) but this cinches it.
I don't see why you think so.

Without Kiba to tank for Team 8, Shino being ninjutsu-specced and Sakura's hand to hand being abysmal, Hinata will have had to step up.
And that's on top of the example set by Naruto's nee-chan. We have no way of knowing precisely just how capable she currently is, except that every member of the Rookie Nine is presumably trying to keep up with Hisana.

Seriously, in the First Databook?
Shino is Taijutsu 1.5, Strength 1.5 Speed 1.5. Sakura is Taijutsu 1, Strength 0.5 Speed 1 .
Hinata is Taijutsu 2.5, Strength 1 Speed 2.
That gives us some idea of their general competencies, and doesn't seem to change even post-Shippuden.

If someone has to handle hand to hand combat for Team 8, it's obviously Hinata's problem; the other two can get by if necessary, Shino with his bugs and Sakura with her chakra scalpel, but they won't be good at it.
After six months to a year of this, she may well be considered good enough to represent the village/the Hyuga.

Or there might be a conscious decision to hold her(and Neji) back to represent the village at the next exams, while allowing the Uchihas to shine at this exam. We won't know for a while yet.
 
After six months to a year of this, she may well be considered good enough to represent the village/the Hyuga.
Now even with the (possible) increased pressure to grow from Hisana and six months of having to step up to defend her team I just don't see Hinata matching Neji.

Thing is that isn't a problem. Neji might be the better fighter but he lacks the sort of personality Konoha wants to display. Hinata is a far better representative of the will of fire. So as long as she is good enough to not make Konoha look bad she'd be a preferable candidate to Neji.
 
I'll note that the Hidden In The Mist justu synergizes brutally well with the Gentle Fist style. If Hinata was able to cast it herself, I'd say that she'd be a genuine challenge to Hisana with it, forcing us to play blind keep-away with large scale wind jutsu.
Yes it does.
And against, say Sasuke, it would be a terrifying weapon.
Does nothing against sensors though.

So while Hisana would lose all the jutsu-copying and enhanced awareness, her chakra sensing to fall back on means she's always aware of just where the enemy shinobi is if she's paying attention. Might even detect jutsu being formed.
Her chakra natures are on the other end of the wheel, though (Fire/Lightning), so operation Blind Stinging Death Cloud would be more of a Team 8 group specialty.
Well, yeah; one of Sakura's natures is Water.
Then again, Hiding In Mist is only a D-rank technique; well within Hinata's capabilities even without learning the requisite chakra nature.
 
Now even with the (possible) increased pressure to grow from Hisana and six months of having to step up to defend her team I just don't see Hinata matching Neji.
Thing is that isn't a problem. Neji might be the better fighter but he lacks the sort of personality Konoha wants to display. Hinata is a far better representative of the will of fire. So as long as she is good enough to not make Konoha look bad she'd be a preferable candidate to Neji.
Match Neji? Of course not.
Neji is an honest to god jyuuken prodigy, trained by a taijutsu specialist. She isn't matching him.

Come close enough to be a creditable representative?
Yes; if she wasn't fighting Neji in canon, she'd have beat most of the girls besides maybe Temari.
And many of the boys, too; Kankuro wouldn't have made the finals.
 
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[x] You act with caution, not committing and trying to draw out intelligence on your opponent from his attacks
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[x] You attack ferociously, hoping to finish it quickly. The longer a fight takes, the riskier it is.
No. of Votes: 11

[x] Write in: "I have no hope of defeating the power I sense. I forfeit."
No. of Votes: 1

[X] Write-in: You will maneuver around to feel him out, then stake everything on one blow to pierce his defenses. (Why do you suddenly feel the need to yell out "ICHIGEKI HISSATSU..."? This must be Lee's fault.)
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Btw, i created an MS design which as far as i can tell is unique, so i thought i'd post it here. Not sure if this counts as fan-art, but whatever.
 
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Very similar to Shisui's, not that that's a bad thing. We're never going to see it outside what's basically a fail state, but it would certainly increase the severity of Itachi's flashbacks when he sees us.

We're like an unholy combination of his best friend and his girlfriend, and that would be the icing on the cake.
 
Very similar to Shisui's, not that that's a bad thing. We're never going to see it outside what's basically a fail state, but it would certainly increase the severity of Itachi's flashbacks when he sees us.

We're like an unholy combination of his best friend and his girlfriend, and that would be the icing on the cake.

Holy shit, i just did some research on Itachi's lover only to discover that their personality and motivations are eerily similar to Hisana's. It would be such a mindfuck for Itachi to meet us, I just can't wait! :D

I wonder how he'd react?
 
Very similar to Shisui's, not that that's a bad thing. We're never going to see it outside what's basically a fail state, but it would certainly increase the severity of Itachi's flashbacks when he sees us.

We're like an unholy combination of his best friend and his girlfriend, and that would be the icing on the cake.
Holy shit, i just did some research on Itachi's lover only to discover that their personality and motivations are eerily similar to Hisana's. It would be such a mindfuck for Itachi to meet us, I just can't wait! :D

I wonder how he'd react?
Itachi had a girlfriend?
Are you two reading fan fics?
 
Nope, she's canon.
(Though the "girlfriend" part seems like it was mostly just rumors about them, not an actual relationship.)
FFS whats with that death.

Its like Itachi and Sasuke Must be excused from doing bad things because they do minor nice things.

E:On reflection I could have phrased this better.

I felt reading through this that the character was written as an attempt to humanise Itachi and give him more charectar depth. However at the end of the story was an 'Oh shit she needs to die anyway moment'. So Itachi set out to kill her because he thought that this would make all the others easier, (implying that he loved her more than he does his parents I guess) and now everyone gets to see Itachi kill someone who he love/loved him and suddenly this Itachi seems worse than the emotionally detached one who only cared about Sasuke image, I had in my mind for him before. So he does something nice for her and that something is a microism of Tobi's plan.
Everyone gets to live in a Genjutsu = Bad, but one person =good.
It just kind of hammers in the Sue ish treatment Itachi gets where things he does are praised as good things even if they are against the morals and advocated beliefs of the story as a whole.
 
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Exams 4.11
Exams 4.11

Neji walked down the stairs slowly, his eyes looking at his opponent keenly. Gaara was strong, no doubt about it. Even without his bloodline limit active, Neji could feel the malevolence of Gaara's chakra. It surrounded the boy like armour; and the sheer strength of it was frightening. It might be his fate to lose here, without any proof of his power.

He simply frowned, and bowed to his opponent. Neither boy said a word as the battle began. Neji's bloodline burst to life, and as he blurred backwards he saw the complex chakra construct that surrounded Gaara. He had heard rumors of a 'perfect defence', but seeing it was something else. If only he'd mastered the kaiten by now, if only he could match perfect defence with perfect defence.

He had not, so he could no go on the offensive right away. For it was the fate of all perfect things to revealed as mundane and flawed. No defense was unbreakable, no attack unblockable. There was only the nearly perfect and their weaknesses.

Sand tried to coil around Neji's leg, but his glowing blue palm slammed into it. The sand blew apart, the chakra holding together gone. In a second, it had reformed but that was more than enough time for Neji to reposition. This dance repeated half a dozen more times, with each palm strike Neji's understanding of his opponent grew.

No words passed between them, only steel as Neji threw a brace of kunai at his opponent. They sailed through the air, oddly slow for a prodigy like Neji. Then, in the blink of an eye, Neji was behind Gaara. Sand was already moving to block the kunais headed towards Gaara, and Neji lunged forward. Sand rushed up to meet him, and it was only a judicious use of his incomplete kaiten that allowed him to escape with his arm.

Chakra exploded from the tenketsu along his arm, unshaped and wasteful. Gaara's sand was blown back, and Neji blurred away from him.

"Oh yes, Hyuuga, you shall do nicely. I wonder, will you prove my existence?!" Gaara shouted, his once stoic face now mad with bloodlust. Tendrils of sand rushed at Neji, who stepped between them with an almost unearthly grace. His hands were sheathed in a lavender blue light as they cut sand from the air.

Neji knew now how he must win, if his fate was to be victorious in this battle. He stepped calmly through Gaara's onslaught, and struck at the air. It answered his call, one of the few ranged attacks of the gentle fist blow apart a lance of sand. He struck the air again, smashing apart another lance; closer to Gaara.

The boy screamed, and Neji struck the air again. This time the lance had only begun to form. Again, and he struck the shield of sand itself this time. Neji was burning away his chakra reserves at a tremendous rate, but he knew that this was his only chance - Gaara's endurance vastly outstripped his own. The boy seemed to have a limitless store of it, and Neji had to expend more to defend himself than Gaara had to to attack. The only conclusion he could reach was that he would have to strike a decisive blow.

Naji's palm slammed against the air once more, and Gaara's shield was blown away entirely. Now, with Gaara in range of his divina-

Sand slammed into Neji, far faster than Gaara had moved it before. Neji's left leg broke with an awful snap, and he screamed as he slammed into the opposite wall. He saw sand slowly gather around Gaara, and through the haze of pain he was afraid. Had the boy been toying with him this whole time?

"Weak. I suppose I'll have to dispose of you, now..." Gaara said, more to himself than anyone else. Neji's vision started to darken, and all he could see was a flash of green.

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Hisana's hands left her sword as Gai plucked Neji from the arena and the match was called. Gaara looked like he was going to push the issue for a moment, but merely turned and walked away. She felt her heart rate go back down, felt everything settle back into place. She'd been ready to make use of her seal to save Neji, if it came to that, but Gai would never have let Gaara kill him. Still, he'd been seriously injured - but, as a part of her was forced to admit, he'd done better than Lee.

Still, the show must go on. Sasuke was called down to fight Kiba. It wasn't a very long bout, as Sasuke essentially took Kiba apart in under ten seconds, but the fighting was ferocious. Ino put up a decent fight against Tenten, but the older girl managed to avoid leaving Ino an opening for her clan jutsu long enough to win the fight. Next up was Sakura vs Temari. Hisana watched in amazement as the pink haired girl almost won through some clever genjutsu and home made sealwork. Temari, however, was a beast of a kunoichi - Hisana didn't realise that she was this strong, reading the manga.

Naruto then beat Choji in a jovial contest, and after that Hinata defeated Kankuro. After Karin defeated a genin from Waterfall she'd never heard of before, Hisana started paying less attention to the matches. Oh, she had a great number of new jutsu to refine from watching the fights, but she was eager to get to training. She had so many ideas to work on, and only a month to do so. Soon enough, the battle was over and it was time for her to go down and draw her number for the third exam.

Hisana was due to fight Temari in the opening match, Hinata was due to face Tenten after, then Karin against Lee, then a fifteen year old from Suna named Gennai against Shikamaru, then Shino against Sasuke. Lastly, Naruto was to face Gaara. Even though she was concerned by that, Hisana was also glad that the famous Talk-No-Jutsu might have a chance. Gaara could be reformed, and if he was he became Konoha - and Naruto's - most steadfast ally.


Temari was an absolute master of wind ninjutsu, Hisana knew, and no slouch up close either. Hisana then remembered her forest destroying attack from the Sasuke Retrieval arc; and started to wonder why she'd doubted the girl's strength. It was to be a difficult battle, and Hisana knew she couldn't afford to go all out during it - she had a far more difficult battle to prepare for afterwards.

Choose Four Projects to do during the one month break between the second and third exams. Kakashi will be teaching you things, but alternating with Sasuke. This is what you work on when he's not teaching you.

[x] - Fuinjutsu:
[x] - Paperless exploding tags seem like a very useful skill, and one that you might be able to develop.
[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal

[x] - Ninjutsu
[x] - Learn more Fire Release techniques
[x] - Learn more Wind Release techniques
[x] - Learn Wind Release techniques from the Ravens
[x] - Learn some of the jutsu you've copied with your Sharingan (See character sheet)

[x] - Genjutsu
[x] - Learn more wide area Genjutsu
[x] - Learn more Sharingan genjutsu

[x] - Kenjutsu
[x] - Improve the ranged aspect of your chakra flow
[x] - Try and utilize your fuinjutsu knowledge to improve your sword.

[x] - Iryojutsu
[x] - Attempt to learn the Chakra Scalpel to a level allowing medical use.
[x] - Attempt to improve your Mystical Palm jutsu.​
 
[X] Rounding Out
-[x] - Learn more Sharingan genjutsu
-[x] - Paperless exploding tags seem like a very useful skill, and one that you might be able to develop.
-[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal
-[x] - Learn some of the jutsu you've copied with your Sharingan (See character sheet)

Pushing Sharingan Genjutsu to B-rank should be a decent improvement to our combat capability. Paperless exploding tags gets us started on the path towards all sorts of paperless seals, which is an incredibly powerful and flexible skill to have. The refinement to the Final Hurricane Seal should allow us to both store more chakra and not have to blow our entire capacity in one go. Finally, refining the Chidori should give us a strong finishing move for use in case of Gaara/etc. in the presumably upcoming invasion. (Also, Yoroi's jutsu seems like something interesting to play with, and finishing up Sakura's Chakra Scalpel and the various other jutsu will be nice. Especially if we can adept Gunshot Barrage's homing shots to fire/wind jutsu.)
 
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I have thirty XP saved up. XP for Clone has not yet been awarded.

I'm putting 4 into getting Sharingan Gengutsu to B rank, 20 into getting Storage seals to B rank, and request that @Tekomandor puts the remaining 6 wherever fits best for Shunshin practice (Ninjutsu? Chakra Control?).

As for actions, I'll be evaluating them on two scales, for both general utility and effectiveness against Temari.

[x] - Fuinjutsu:
[x] - Paperless exploding tags seem like a very useful skill, and one that you might be able to develop.

They are a very useful skill. Combined with our chakra string trick, remotely detonated tags will let us gain large amounts of explosive power that doesn't drain chakra reserves. That said, against Temari in particular, projectiles aren't going to cut it, so this might be better left for later.

[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal

Making the seal less "all or nothing" reduces one of the major issues with it, and let's us artificially effectively have far larger reserves for every fight, instead of saving it for the most critical ones.

Since the cover on our seal is practically guaranteed to be blown during the Konoha crush, we won't need to hide it anymore either, and needing the stamina for multiple big fights was explicitly called out as something important very soon.

[x] - Ninjutsu
[x] - Learn more Fire Release techniques
[x] - Learn more Wind Release techniques
[x] - Learn Wind Release techniques from the Ravens
[x] - Learn some of the jutsu you've copied with your Sharingan (See character sheet)

Fire jutsu are more effective against Temari, but less effective for our style in general than Wind Jutsu - especially abridged handseal, summon relationship increasing Raven Jutsu.

I personally think that we'll have enough other tricks available that picking Fire jutsu now, just for Temari, is sub-optimal. That we should be pushing for as much contact as possible with our summons for eventual Sage Mode is the clincher.

As for the last option... The majority of the copied jutsu don't stand out to me as particularly amazing. The two exceptions are the Chakra Scalpel, which I'll come back to, and the Chidori. So. Do we want the Chidori, in case of Gaara?
I'm inclined to say no, since we won't ever be as effective with it as someone with a natural lightning element as Sasuka, and doubling up is potentially redundant, but it's not a decision to make lightly.

[x] - Genjutsu
[x] - Learn more wide area Genjutsu
[x] - Learn more Sharingan genjutsu

Sasuke is the Genjutsu guy for general utility, and my points will already bump Sharingan Genjutsu up to B rank. More investment will always be better, but I'm not sure now is the time.

[x] - Kenjutsu
[x] - Improve the ranged aspect of your chakra flow
[x] - Try and utilize your fuinjutsu knowledge to improve your sword.

Hmm. This is our primary attack mode, so we should advance it whenever possible. The first choice is boring but practical, the second... the second has a lot of fun potential, especially considering all the points I just dumped into sealing. I'm inclined to go for it.

[x] - Iryojutsu
[x] - Attempt to learn the Chakra Scalpel to a level allowing medical use.
[x] - Attempt to improve your Mystical Palm jutsu.

We can always improve the Mystical Palm, but right now it's usable at the level of a trained medic. However, given how biology-dependant our sealing has been up to this point, continuing to advance in Iryojutsu is probably an excellent idea. Refining the Chakra Scalpel is a particularly choice for doing this, as it also progresses us towards being able to use that level of refined cutting power with our sword more generally.

As such:

[x] Plan Redshirt
-[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal
-[x] - Learn Wind Release techniques from the Ravens
-[x] - Try and utilize your fuinjutsu knowledge to improve your sword.
-[x] - Attempt to learn the Chakra Scalpel to a level allowing medical use.
 
Propably won't match Temari Jutsu vs. Jutsu, though maybe the Raven's have some defensive Wind techniques to defend ourselves. Genjutsu and Swords will propably be our main means of finishing that fight.
Tenten we'll propably be able to counter like Temari did in canon, as long as we don't underestimate her Gai-learned Taijustsu and she doesn't pull out some seal bullshit we should be fine. Hinata, stay out of melee if we can. (Visual) Genjutsu won't work either, leaving ninjutsu. Again, unless Hinata manages the Kaiten till then, we should win eventually, as long as we're careful.
After that should be one of unknown Suna guy, Shikamaru, Sasuke, Shino, or Sasuke. Can't say much for Suna guy until knowing what he's capable of, but given that Shikamaru and Sasuke are both in that bracket, I don't think I'll worry alot about him. Shino, likewise, I may be doing a disservice but I still find him unlikely to get past Sasuke. If he does, Wind techniques should hard-counter him.
Now. Shikamaru and Sasuke. Shikamaru, ah, little to do to improve our chances except gid gud in general, and be perceptive and on alert enough to figure out his traps before they snap shut. Sasuke, different reason but similar conclusion, git gud in general. He's too versatile to have a big weak point (I think?), and we're both intimately familiar with each other's fighting styles.
Lastly, if we make it that far, Naruto and Gaara. With both, we'll need as much stamina as possible so we won't simply be outlasted. Naruto may have a slight weakness in Genjutsu combat? Gaara, Wind techniques may be our best bet to neutralize his sand, and wind-enhanced melee to get through his defense.

So. What are the common points? Genjutsu against Temari and Naruto, and to stay even with Sasuke. Wind ninjutsu against Temari, Hinata, Sasuke's lighning and Gaara, especially defensive ones. Stamina in general and against Naruto and Gaara, both from our seals and from our copied Chakra-stealing jutsu.

[X] Rounding Out Alt
-[x] - Learn more Sharingan genjutsu
-[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal
-[x] - Learn some of the jutsu you've copied with your Sharingan (See character sheet)
-[x] - Learn Wind Release techniques from the Ravens
--[x] - focus at least partially on defensive and countering techniques against other Wind attacks, against lightning, sand, projectiles, and if possible fire.

Sealless seals seem tasty and I can get behind getting them soonish, but to get the full payoff we'll need to invest more spare time than we have before the exams and I just don't see a specific big usage in 'mere' sealless explosions.
Ranged offense increase is covered by both the 'Learn copied jutsu' option and the general improvement with Wind from training with the Ravens.
 
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[x] Plan Redshirt
-[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal
-[x] - Learn Wind Release techniques from the Ravens
-[x] - Try and utilize your fuinjutsu knowledge to improve your sword.
-[x] - Attempt to learn the Chakra Scalpel to a level allowing medical use.
 
[X] Rounding Out Alt
-[x] - Learn more Sharingan genjutsu
-[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal
-[x] - Learn some of the jutsu you've copied with your Sharingan (See character sheet)
-[x] - Learn Wind Release techniques from the Ravens
--[x] - focus on defensive techniques against other Wind attacks, against lightning, sand, projectiles, and if possible fire.
 
Hisana didn't realise that she was this strong, reading the manga.
That's because Temari doesn't do anything in the series aside from beat up other girls and then sit on the sidelines like a good kunoichi.

At least you're being true to form here olol

I am not sure I agree. I didn't get the sense of terror at Neji that Lee got.
That's part of doing better, it means Gaara is less likely to go hunt him down in the hospital!

[x] Plan Redshirt
for now at least
 
[X] Rounding Out
-[x] - Learn more Sharingan genjutsu
-[x] - Paperless exploding tags seem like a very useful skill, and one that you might be able to develop.
-[x] - Try and create a system of parallel storage arrays instead of one central one for your Final Hurricane Seal
-[x] - Learn some of the jutsu you've copied with your Sharingan (See character sheet)
 
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