BungieONI
Seven gremlins in a trench coat
- Location
- Lickwidget
- Pronouns
- She/Her
Its practice for me with non human third person, which I am finding works rather well for them in the sense it lets me have room to properly describe them. Like here.I really like how you captured the feel of sort of placid arrogance that's gotta come along with basically being at the top of basically all the food chains and them some. Also you do really well with portraying a deep inner life for your character both here and in your other pieces about the stranded saurus.
I have intent to make more for this series, and the other two I've written. I might do other Thunder Lizards but at this point I'm kinda attached to Iluikatl.