Magical Girl Quest - The Fire That Burns

So Gaia only makes gay or bi girls, magical girls, not she changes a magical girl's sexuality.

Also
Between Beginning and End
-Ignition Knight may synchronise with Eternal Knight at will.
What does Synchronising do? Is it making synchronised attacks, coordinating movement, or something else?
 
Knights Aria
Level 10
-When applying Infinite Advance to another Knight, multiply buff by 1.
-During combat, increase Ignition Knight and Ebony Knight's Magic Modifiers by 5% per level.

I not sure how multiplying a buff by 1 is helpful. Does it double the buff or is the first part supposed to be useless until Una ups its level?
 
Also
Knights Aria
Level 10
-During combat, increase Ebony Knight's Health and Base Resilience by 10% per level.
-During combat, increase Eternal Knight's Base Damage by 2.5% per level.

Knights Aria
Level 10
-When applying Infinite Advance to another Knight, multiply buff by 2.
-During combat, increase Ignition Knight and Ebony Knight's Magic Modifiers by 5% per level

Knights Aria
Level 10
-During combat, increase all Base Damage and Magic Modifiers of Ignition Knight by 10% per level.
-During combat, increase Eternal Knight's Base Resilience by 2.5% per level.

Is the red parts a mistake, I am not sure? It seems like it's not a mistake though.
 
INTERLUDE, THE PRINCESS
???, Austria, Sarah Meadows

"Sarah." You carefully hide a smile as Iona turns the corner, the quiet clinking of her armour having alerted you of her approach well beforehand. You feel her disapproving stare on your back as you slowly move your hand, the gaping wound underneath pulling itself closed as it passes, the awed gasps of your patient's family lifting your heart. You start humming a gentle melody as the girl's eyes slowly flicker open, stepping back just in time for her family to rush past you, embracing the girl in as tight a hug as they dare.

Your knight follows you as you step out of the room, holding in her desire to tell you off for a more private setting. Ah, well. You step into your room, unsurprised to find Tracy missing. She's probably on the roof, again. The door clicks closed and you turn to your friend, resisting the urge to sigh as you watch the stress roll off of her shoulders now you are back in her sight.

"Why?" Her hand clenches and unclench as she watches you, the little tell for just how worried she is. "You can't keep wandering off like this." Her eyes stray to the small scar on your arm, a reminder that you couldn't heal everything. "What if you were attacked again?" A warm feeling fills your chest, taking the edge off of the annoyance you quickly smother. She's just taking care of me, like she always has.

"It's perfectly safe here, haven't the two of you already made sure of that?" She splutters for a moment as you turn her earlier argument back against her, unable to resist a tiny exhale of air when you see her hackles raise. Oh dear. Her hands cease fidgeting as she gives in to her frustration, taking a step towards you. Maybe I pushed once too many times.

"You know exactly what we meant when I said that Sarah." Indeed, you do. The faint smell of blood still follows you, no matter how much you scrub. Your friend steps forwards again, building herself into a temper as she bites her lip, holding in her desire to shake you if the way her hands are twitching says anything. "Just... stop going out alone." You obligingly open your mouth, letting her say what she really wants to as she cuts you off. "Please." She gives in, crossing the last few steps and pulling you into a hug, a sad smile kept to yourself as she tucks your head under her chin. "You can't keep doing this to us, it's not fair."

She doesn't cry, not any more. But you can feel the little shivers dancing along her limbs, her fingers clenching and unclenching in the back of your dress. "I'm sorry." It's not much more than a whisper, but you feel her still at your voice. "I won't go out without you or Tracy any more." You can literally feel the tension flow out of her body as she sags onto you. A month ago, you would have fallen under her weight, but the gentle caress of your power helps you hold her up. "I just-" She shakes her head, cutting you off.

"I know." You smile. Of course you do. Iona had always watched over you, she knew, more than anyone, just how much you have longed for this. It was why she had been so accepting when you'd pitched your idea to leave, she would always be there to shoulder the world for you, whether you wanted her to or not.

A gust of cold air catches your by surprise as it races up your back, the previously closed window hanging open as Tracy swings in, flicking it closed behind her. There is a certain urgency to her movements, the calm frown on her face making your heart plummet, the words she speaks more a formality than anything else. "The Demons are coming and the soldiers have already run away, it's just us now." Iona sucks in a deep breath, stepping back from you as she summons her sword, the comforting feeling of safety settling over you as she straightens her back.

"How many?"

Tracy pauses, long enough to send flutters into your stomach. "Too many, there are a few I've never seen before either." She turns to you, reluctantly speaking the next sentence. "We need you on the front Sarah." You slowly nod, pushing away the feelings that will get in the way of what you need to do.

"We'll lose a few here then." They both nod, trusting your knowledge on the injured. "But, if we don't stop them they'll all die." You ignore the flicker of memory, of the last village. "Which direction?" Tracy smiles.

"All of them."
 
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You start humming a gentle melody as the girls eyes slowly flicker open
girl's
Her hand clench and unclench as she watches you
Either "hand clenches and unclenches" or "hands clench and unclench".
"You know exactly what we meant when I said that Sarah."
"we meant when I said"

Wut?

Feels awkward to use two different 1st person pronouns like this.

Should also be a comma before "Sarah".
Tracy pauses, long enough to sent flutters into your stomach. "
send
 
What were you right about?
While we were talking about this earlier, I told Rukia people would not remember that the Light is doing stuff and wonder why no one told them demons are already there.

That aside, they are not actually summoning demons; they are doing weird stuff with their own magic that I would have to re-read to explain somewhat properly.
 
I knew about the light, but we were not told what. Plus there wasn't anything in this interlude that connected the demons to the light. So no, I did not forget that the Light was doing stuff. It is just a case of lack of information to connect the demons with what the light was doing.
 
I knew about the light, but we were not told what. Plus there wasn't anything in this interlude that connected the demons to the light. So no, I did not forget that the Light was doing stuff. It is just a case of lack of information to connect the demons with what the light was doing.
Uh...

You flick through menus, bringing up old projects. "Golems, clones or drones?"

He looks over the list, smiling as he checks something else. "Why not all of them?" Your eyebrows raise. "I do believe that we have a relic capable of infinite replication on hand, do we not?" You pause, nodding slowly. "From what little we know, Demons fight as a horde, endless numbers attacking without care of their lives." An image of a stone tablet, a carved image of a sea of unearthly beasts crashing against a wave of humans. "What better way to prepare them for a Demonic invasion, than to fight as a Demonic invasion." He pauses, waiting for your rebuttal.
Edit: That is from longer ago than the last Update, but it was mentioned.
 
almost 5 months ago, which is ages. while the possibility the barrier is fading is of at least equal likelihood.
Could've been the first major demon assault after all.
I would have smacked Rukia for pushing the fall of the barrier ahead of schedule. You know it was three months a month IC-time ago, so there are still two months left.
 
Burning people from the inside out probably also counts as a war crime. I'm no expert, though.
 
INTERLUDE, THE GUN I
Firebase Amazon, Counter Force HQ, France, Nia Ihejirika

The other agents are busy cleaning their weapons as you wait for the commander to step in; you would, but you knew that your weapon was 1.35 Metres too long to fit into the room any way but lengthwise and if you did that then it would stop the doors from opening. Not that I need to. Your enormous weapon always appeared to you in pristine condition, regardless of how battered it is when you let is disappear. All signs point to it being fine if it breaks, but the only other example has shown that she can make swords as she pleases, which skews the results.

Your fingers itch as you see one of the older agents lovingly clean his new weapon, one of his arms locked in position by his armour as he props it against his knee, his other free of the metal glove as he digs bits of dirt and gore out of the chamber. The Commander would definitely let me have one, just in case my own fails for some reason, right? Some of the scout teams are saying there are new ones that can nullify magic, I'd totally need a backup, maybe a grenade launcher, and a machine gun or-

Your plotting is cut off by the door opening, the slightly hunched form of the commander ignoring the horrible smell emanating from the lot of you as he steps up to the podium, tapping the metal corner of the handheld computer he's holding to get everyone's attention. Like we all didn't know already. You ignore the unintentional slight to your skill and sit forward, waiting for your next assignment. More Demons, an undead monstrosity of some kind, maybe we'll even get back to fighting the wizards.

"Another horde, roughly twenty thousand this time." You tap your finger, imagining what sort of upgrades you could try to make to your beloved, you'll find a way to make them stick somehow. "A new type has been discovered by scouts, we're tentatively labelling them as part of the 'leaders' for now." You raise an eyebrow, a tentative sort of interest filling you as he keeps speaking. "We want you to lead the strike team that will be killing as many of them as possible, they seem to have a simple grasp over tactics and scavenging from the battlefield, expect small amounts of our own weaponry and maybe a few magical items."

You smile. "My collection always has room for more." Possibly demonified guns? Oh hell yes. The commander doesn't bother hiding his exasperation as you start humming to yourself, which really just tells you that he'll probably die soon too. Either that or he'll survive, really you were being a little presumptuous, it's been like what, eight days since they started attacking? You know better. You are good, better than everyone else at anything you try, but you know better than to let that start getting to your head. Every time I do she seems to appear out of nowhere to remind me.

You can't resist the urge to glance around and make sure she isn't here, but you also know she's perfectly capable of standing well outside of the base and watching you from her personal treefort. Ugh. "You leave now." Your group, satisfied with a solid four hours of rest, muster together by your transport, a helicopter of some sort that has big armoured plates bolted on and a pair of mounted grenade launchers set in each entrance. At least they don't seem to have any response to aircraft at the moment. Not that you have any doubt that they will, sometime soon, just not quite yet.

You and twelve others squeeze inside, the other four having to make do with clinging to the outside while locking their armour in place. A short few minutes later finds you two miles over an angry mass of red, the gunners liberally spraying grenades wherever they pleased as your ride starts hovering. And here we go again. Your baby appears in your arms and you immediately start to work on clearing a hole somewhere in the middle, the soldiers who had ridden alongside you throwing themselves out as you carefully weave your shots around their falling forms. And in three two one- You don't stop firing, even as they jerkily arrest their fall in a flash of blue, landing deep into the crowd.

Huh, what do you know. The first Leader identifies himself for you, practically throwing himself forwards, his large form easily ploughing through the lesser Demons around him. These guys are even easier to bait than the normal ones. You shift your baby, ready to pull the trigger when your visor bleeps at you, an angry red marker appearing over a more distant Demon, just as large as the other, but seemingly content to stand back. Tch.

[] Shoot the stupid one.
[] Take out the smart one.
 
(Counter Force) Magical Girl Endless Hail

Nia Ihejirika
Stats


Health: 750
Base Damage: 1,400
Base Resilience: 300
Magic Modifier: N/A

Affinity: Skill | Distance | Myth
Weapon

Eye of the Storm
Level 7
Attacks Per Turn: 4
Affinities: Skill
Ability: Ray | Full Auto | Double Tap

Spells

Burning Rain
Aim carefully and destroy your target from afar; can accurately fire over a distance of 1km per level.
Level 5
Base Damage: 2,500
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Distance
Ability: Ordnance | Detonate

Abilities


Unending Barrage
-If Ray is active, activate Full Auto once for each action that is used

Taking Distance
Level 5
-Once per turn, you may instantly retreat 50m in any direction; gain a free attack against anyone who was in your melee-range when this Ability is used

Skilled Gunner
-Sacrifice your next five ticks of Full Auto to negate an opposing action. (Can not sacrifice ticks from the following turn)

Gun Carrier
Level 5
-You are but an extension of your weapon; thus you are healthy and strong, so you may carry it into battle. Increase Maximum Health by 150 per level.

Gunner's Robe
Level 5
-It offers little protection, but will never slow you down; increase Base Resilience by 60 per Level

 
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