Magical Girl Escalation Taylor (Worm/Nanoha)

tossing your hair at the same time that the spitball someone – likely Madison – sends a spitball through the space you previously occupied.
Remove bolded.
as if you were looking a memory from long ago.
looking at a memory
"Because there are some people who don't deserve even being alive. They're wastes who drag everyone around them down into worthlessness just by being there."
Ironically enough, this applies to her and Sophia.
"Why did you not defeat them?" Perfect Storm asks, the first word it has said
first sentence
Putting word there is kind of awkward, at least to me.

I don't know why, but quests with long updates somehow make me feel sad-ish, whereas fics with long updates make me happy. I don't even....

As for education... time to be the spoilsport.
Hive 5.4 said:
Lisa tested for her GED and got it, no courses involved.

Brian's taking courses online, but Taylor can't go that route until she's both turned 16 (because of restrictions in her state) and gets parental permission (which would have been awkward when she wasn't really talking to her dad about what was going on).

It'd be an option for her in the fall, and it's something that's likely to come up in either conversation or her line of thinking.
Here's a link to more I collected:
Saiyan in Brockton (Worm/DBZ Self-Insert) | Page 73

Before people start bitching, this is from the comments section. It was made on November 15th, 2011. Hive 5.4

Unless there have been some changes, all Taylor can do is study ahead.
 
Last edited:
[ ] Research homeschooling and G.E.D.s – You're done with Winslow, but you still need proof that you're getting an education. The last thing you want is for your heroing to be curtailed because you're too busy dodging truant officers to look for crime.
 
Last edited:
[X] Research homeschooling and G.E.D.s – You're done with Winslow, but you still need proof that you're getting an education. The last thing you want is for your heroing to be curtailed because you're too busy dodging truant officers to look for crime.
 
[X] Research homeschooling and G.E.D.s – You're done with Winslow, but you still need proof that you're getting an education. The last thing you want is for your heroing to be curtailed because you're too busy dodging truant officers to look for crime.
 
So, question: what are truancy laws like in USA? If Taylor flat out drops out of school, what kind of response she might expect? What kind of consequences might Danny be facing? Assuming someone wants to go after them using that angle to, say, separate them and place Taylor into someone else's custody, or get Danny in jail.
 
[X] Get the paperwork for official independent hero team status – It's a good thing you didn't talk to the PRT the night you found Perfect Storm, isn't it? Your dad may not like you speaking up for the team, but it needs to be done. Better to ask for forgiveness than permission.
 
So, question: what are truancy laws like in USA? If Taylor flat out drops out of school, what kind of response she might expect? What kind of consequences might Danny be facing? Assuming someone wants to go after them using that angle to, say, separate them and place Taylor into someone else's custody, or get Danny in jail.
Is high school mandatory in Brockton Bay?

Here it isn't, so I kind of assumed so without thinking it through.

Also, wow. Trying to place Danny in jail would go hilariously wrong. Taylor would learn real quick how to ruin someone's day.
 
As for education... time to be the spoilsport.
Here's a link to more I collected:
Saiyan in Brockton (Worm/DBZ Self-Insert) | Page 73

Before people start bitching, this is from the comments section. It was made on November 15th, 2011. Hive 5.4

Unless there have been some changes, all Taylor can do is study ahead.
Exactly. She plans to homeschool until she can take the test for her GED.
So, question: what are truancy laws like in USA? If Taylor flat out drops out of school, what kind of response she might expect? What kind of consequences might Danny be facing? Assuming someone wants to go after them using that angle to, say, separate them and place Taylor into someone else's custody, or get Danny in jail.
All right, let's see some Google-fu….
1. For the purposes of this subdivision, "truancy" means an unexcused absence from school or class and "unexcused absence" is an absence [without parental or administrative permission] which has not been excused in accordance with RSA 189:34, II(a).

Truant officers shall, when directed by the school board, enforce the laws and regulations relating to truants and children between the ages of [8] 6 and 18 years not attending school or who are not participating in an alternative learning plan under RSA 193:1, I(h); and the laws relating to the attendance at school of children between the ages of [8] 6 and 18 years; and shall have authority without a warrant to take and place in school any children found employed contrary to the laws relating to the employment of children, or violating the laws relating to the compulsory attendance at school of children under the age of 18 years, and the laws relating to child labor. No home school pupil nor any person between the ages of 6 and 18 who meets any of the requirements of RSA 193:1, I(c)-(h) shall be deemed a truant.
So she would be dragged back to Winslow. Nothing in here that would affect Danny, though it might be in a different bill.
Home Education, Defined
I. Instruction shall be deemed home education if it consists of instruction in science, mathematics, language, government, history, health, reading, writing, spelling, the history of the constitutions of New Hampshire and the United States, and an exposure to and appreciation of art and music. Home education shall be provided by a parent for his own child, unless the provider is as otherwise agreed upon by the appropriate parties named in paragraph II.
II. The department of education, resident district superintendent, or a nonpublic school shall work with parents upon request in meeting the requirements of this section.

Notification and Other Procedural Requirements
A parent may provide home education to a child or children at home, subject to the following requirements:
I. Any parent commencing a home education program for a child, for a child who withdraws from a public school, or for a child who moves into a school district shall notify the commissioner of the department of education, resident district superintendent, or principal of a nonpublic school of such within 5 business days of commencing the program.
II. Notification made by the parent pursuant to paragraph I shall include a list of the names, addresses, and birth dates of all children who are participating in the home education program.
III. Written notice of termination of a home education program shall be filed by the parent with the commissioner of education, and, in addition, the resident district superintendent or nonpublic school principal within 15 days of said termination.
IV. The commissioner of education, resident district superintendent, or nonpublic school principal shall acknowledge receipt of notification within 14 days of such receipt.

Records and Evaluation
I. The parent shall maintain a portfolio of records and materials relative to the home education program. The portfolio shall consist of a log which designates by title the reading materials used, and also samples of writings, worksheets, workbooks, or creative materials used or developed by the child. Such portfolio shall be preserved by the parent for 2 years from the date of the ending of the instruction.
II. The parent shall provide for an annual educational evaluation in which is documented the child's demonstration of educational progress at a level commensurate with the child's age and ability. The child shall be deemed to have successfully completed his annual evaluation upon meeting the requirements of any one of the following…
After that is a list of various rules in determining exactly how the test should be administered and recorded. When dealing with a high school student, it would likely just be self-study and annual evaluation (which, technically, Perfect Storm could help you cheat on). Nothing too onerous, especially not with PS having downloaded all of Arcadia's text books.
 
Last edited:
So, on one hand, I could propose we just drop out, not bothering with a GED. After all, we already have a career as a mobile WMD platform to look forward to, and various dictators around the world can care less about our high school diploma (I assume so, at least). On the other hand... Truancy is just the kind of stuff wards are probably supposed to handle, and I can just see Sophia volunteering to go after us.
 
On the other hand... Truancy is just the kind of stuff wards are probably supposed to handle, and I can just see Sophia volunteering to go after us.
What. Where did you get that idea? Feels more like the prelude to a bad plot than anything (have we ever seen or heard of Wards taking care of truancy in canon?).

They even only have half as much school as others.
Okay, so the biggest thing I struggled with, this chapter, was this one piece of information that I was trying to fit into the flow of dialogue. I just couldn't seem to get Piggot or one of the Wards to bring it up without it feeling awkward or breaking up the flow of dialogue, and as exposition it felt forced.

How it works with the Wards is that most have the benefit of a 'co-op' program. Only a half day of classes, while they (supposedly) work for a given business or branch of government during the other half of the day, getting real life experience. At a given team member's discretion, mom and dad may be in the know or not, as far as what they're really doing.

All that said, remember, this is government. Making things more difficult than they have to be and covering one's own ass is going to be a recurring theme. Individual tutoring for kids that could be running/flying off on patrol every few minutes is not only hard, but it's an easy target for any politician that wants to come across as being out for welfare of the kids. So if a 'concerned' poliitican or member of the media points to these kids and asks why they aren't in school, the people running the program (like Piggot) can say they are, without perjury or prevarication. Giving them the structure of at least a half day at school just makes things a lot easier to manage and defend.

So yeah. Why did almost the entire team show up, against Tattletale's expectations? Most of the Wards weren't even in school at the time.

For New Wave, it's more about that whole accountability bit. They're celebrities, and that comes with all the constant attention and criticism to everything they do. Having your kids home schooled is going to make your group seem very insular when New Wave wants to sell the opposite impression. It's also quite likely that the various New Wave kids just want to go to school. Victoria likes the attention, and Amy is probably quite happy to have a legitimate excuse to get away from everything. I won't get into the other kids of New Wave just yet, but they probably have their reasons too.

From a writing perspective, though, you want your characters to be relatable, and something virtually everyone relates being a teenager with (for better or worse) is high school.
Interlude 3
 
[X] Check in with your new team– Dad did say the Privateers were going to start their raids as soon as possible, and right now, you'd love to have something to shoot. Especially after you tell him you're dropping out of Winslow.
-[X] Still, despite wanting to shoot something, perhaps it would be better to go from there to get the paperwork for official Independent Hero Team status first. You just need to get your Dad's approval for it, since he's the team leader.
-[X] Meanwhile, ask Perfect Storm to start compiling the paperwork for homeschooling and GEDs. You can start working on it this evening.
 
What. Where did you get that idea? Feels more like the prelude to a bad plot than anything (have we ever seen or heard of Wards taking care of truancy in canon?).

They even only have half as much school as others.

Interlude 3
I don't see how them having less school hours is relevant/ I meant that wards, who are not supposed to be child soldiers, or at least seen as such, would be ideal, from PR perspective, to deal with truancy, ie to go after truants.
 
I don't see how them having less school hours is relevant/ I meant that wards, who are not supposed to be child soldiers, or at least seen as such, would be ideal, from PR perspective, to deal with truancy, ie to go after truants.

...maybe, but only under the assumption that they're doing so to see if the truant person has joined a gang. Because, let's be honest, with the number of truant students in any low-quality public school, do you really think that the Wards going after truants would do any good?
 
I don't see how them having less school hours is relevant/ I meant that wards, who are not supposed to be child soldiers, or at least seen as such, would be ideal, from PR perspective, to deal with truancy, ie to go after truants.
And you somehow think Piggot would allow a person like Shadow Stalker to go after students just ditching class? Seems like a cruel and unusual punishment rather than standard procedure (there still isn't anything that supports such a thing canonically).
 
And you somehow think Piggot would allow a person like Shadow Stalker to go after students just ditching class? Seems like a cruel and unusual punishment rather than standard procedure (there still isn't anything that supports such a thing canonically).
As far as PRT is aware, Shadow Stalker has turned her life around, is attending therapy and is in general trying to make the best of the chance they gave her. So, if she shows concern for one of her classmates, and wants to investigate? Yes, absolutely. They'll allow and applaud it.
 
As far as PRT is aware, Shadow Stalker has turned her life around, is attending therapy and is in general trying to make the best of the chance they gave her. So, if she shows concern for one of her classmates, and wants to investigate? Yes, absolutely. They'll allow and applaud it.
Which still rests on your supposition. You still haven't provided any canonical details that would support that.

I still don't see why you're clamoring for this to happen. Do you have a thing for making Taylor enraged? Because this seems like a good way to fuck up her vigilante status. Sophia not having to clamp down on her instinctual reaction due to witnesses would start a fight with Taylor, one where she would probably out herself.

I'm amazed by the stuff some people propose and ardently argue about. Do you really want to give ideas to a QM who wrote about Candyland?
 
Can I suggest moderation then? Just you know, try not to go too far onto either side of the spectrum so that things don't go pear-shaped.
 
I'm not sure exactly where magical girls from nanoha fall on the power scale because I've never watched the show, but I'm guessing she could go S9 on all their assess and there wouldn't be much people could do about it. Maybe? Tell me if I'm wrong.
It kind of depends, but Nanoha probably is at least as powerful a Blaster as Legend, in terms of raw destructive abilities.

And that was Season 1 Nanoha.
 
Do you really want to give ideas to a QM who wrote about Candyland?
…I'm not sure if I should feel complimented or insulted by this. :confused:

Anyway, to cut off the brewing argument about truancy enforcement: no, the Wards do not handle that. It's part of mundane law enforcement while they are agents of cape law enforcement. Since nobody except the New Wave kids attends school in their cape identity, there is no cause for them to be involved without breaking *dun dun dun* the Unwritten Rules.

But joking aside, no, that won't be an issue, especially since applying for homeschool status in New Hampshire looks to be so simple.
 
…I'm not sure if I should feel complimented or insulted by this. :confused:
Maybe both. I don't even know. The intent behind its existence seems to be causing revulsion in the reader, in which case you did a great job. I hold nothing but contempt for its existence.

On the other hand, I'm afraid of your talent for such a thing seeping into Worm of all places (yes, I'm aware such a thing would be forbidden by forum rules). You can see how I'd be worried about Taylor's reaction to this situation Yog is proposing.
 
[X] Research homeschooling and G.E.D.s – You're done with Winslow, but you still need proof that you're getting an education. The last thing you want is for your heroing to be curtailed because you're too busy dodging truant officers to look for crime.
 
Maybe both. I don't even know. The intent behind its existence seems to be causing revulsion in the reader, in which case you did a great job. I hold nothing but contempt for its existence.

On the other hand, I'm afraid of your talent for such a thing seeping into Worm of all places (yes, I'm aware such a thing would be forbidden by forum rules). You can see how I'd be worried about Taylor's reaction to this situation Yog is proposing.
Well, like I told JadeKaiser over on SB, you guys have all but guaranteed that this will be a light-hearted quest, so you shouldn't have to worry about that being an issue. Probably.
 
First progress report.

[X] Research homeschooling and G.E.D.s – You're done with Winslow, but you still need proof that you're getting an education. The last thing you want is for your heroing to be curtailed because you're too busy dodging truant officers to look for crime.
No. of Votes: 29
imhotep99301
Argentorum
CrummBumm
Dreth
Edboy49
EdinoiZ
filipinosberman
Izanagi_Mikoto
Kioras
KR-Nexus
Leanansidhe
LightMage
megrisvernin
Scope
Shadlith
tertius
TheForgottenOne
Vilegrave
gigshare
bluekun
Captain Hunt
Demonlorddraco91
IMCRAZY64
JoeStratnoff
kitsune9
MrLZRS
sdarian
TriggerBlaze345
Yog

[X] Check in with your new team– Dad did say the Privateers were going to start their raids as soon as possible, and right now, you'd love to have something to shoot. Especially after you tell him you're dropping out of Winslow.
-[X] Still, despite wanting to shoot something, perhaps it would be better to go from there to get the paperwork for official Independent Hero Team status first. You just need to get your Dad's approval for it, since he's the team leader.
-[X] Meanwhile, ask Perfect Storm to start compiling the paperwork for homeschooling and GEDs. You can start working on it this evening.
No. of Votes: 20
JadeKaiser
Akritedes
Cape
Chocolote12
cl20
Counter_Guardian
D.Rockstar
jwolfe
KokuenDG
LokiTheDarkGod
R3APER
Shulta
Slavania
Twei
Ultimate Pheer
WeaponX1023
Winged_One
zeromass
VorpalMedia
Crimson Doom

[X] Get the paperwork for official independent hero team status – It's a good thing you didn't talk to the PRT the night you found Perfect Storm, isn't it? Your dad may not like you speaking up for the team, but it needs to be done. Better to ask for forgiveness than permission.
No. of Votes: 12
Silver sun 17
acerbicCatharsis
Citino
Frosty Wolf
Archeo Lumiere
Conjured Blade
RoninSword
SwiftRosenthal
The Stormbringer
tygerbright
veekie
wingstrike96

[X] Check in with your new team– Dad did say the Privateers were going to start their raids as soon as possible, and right now, you'd love to have something to shoot. Especially after you tell him you're dropping out of Winslow.
-[X] Ask Perfect Storm to compile the laws on Homeschooling so you can talk about it with your Dad tonight.
No. of Votes: 1
Major Session

[X]Go home and run some more training scenarios. You need to make sure you can take down criminals non-lethally once the Privateers start raiding.
No. of Votes: 1
Auks
Total No. of Voters: 63

tl;dr: Right now, it looks like a small majority of you wants to go to the library and do the research on homeschooling by yourself while a lot of the rest want to pass the work off to Perfect Storm. I'm kind of surprised how many people are taking the school stuff this seriously; that was a last-minute addition to the options that I was sure wouldn't get any traction.
 
[X] Check in with your new team– Dad did say the Privateers were going to start their raids as soon as possible, and right now, you'd love to have something to shoot. Especially after you tell him you're dropping out of Winslow.
-[X] Still, despite wanting to shoot something, perhaps it would be better to go from there to get the paperwork for official Independent Hero Team status first. You just need to get your Dad's approval for it, since he's the team leader.
-[X] Meanwhile, ask Perfect Storm to start compiling the paperwork for homeschooling and GEDs. You can start working on it this evening.
 
[X] Check in with your new team– Dad did say the Privateers were going to start their raids as soon as possible, and right now, you'd love to have something to shoot. Especially after you tell him you're dropping out of Winslow.
-[X] Still, despite wanting to shoot something, perhaps it would be better to go from there to get the paperwork for official Independent Hero Team status first. You just need to get your Dad's approval for it, since he's the team leader.
-[X] Meanwhile, ask Perfect Storm to start compiling the paperwork for homeschooling and GEDs. You can start working on it this evening.
 
Back
Top