Magical Girl Escalation Taylor (Worm/Nanoha)

@Silently Watches Can Sextant be upgraded to include an AI, or would Tim getting a device with AI require building a new one? This is directly relevant to Part 4 (Why yes, I I am turning the bike into KITT:D. Just need to figure out if Sextant will plug into the bike, or if a new device will be built into it).
Sextant has an AI, just not a very advanced one. It doesn't have quasi-emotions like Raising Heart (and definitely not like PS/IAE), and it won't act against Tim's short-term goals to protect him or better serve his long-term goals the way Raising Heart did when she ejected a Jewel Seed to make Fate stop fighting Nanoha in season 1. It will, however, anticipate his needs and synthesize data.
@Always Late I've noticed a tenancy in this to start people speaking with lines like "Tim [chuckled/smirked/laughed/ect.]" Some pointers for better lines to use, so it's not so repetitive, in the grammar critique you're sure to write would be appreciated. (yes, I'm voluntarily summoning the wrath of the grammar nazi, lol)
Godspeed you poor fool. :(
 

I came here directly from reading WTR's latest update, so this confused the fuck out of me at first :p

I've noticed a tenancy in this to start people speaking with lines like "Tim [chuckled/smirked/laughed/ect.]" Some pointers for better lines to use, so it's not so repetitive, in the grammar critique you're sure to write would be appreciated.

I keep being told that I should simply use 'said' because people don't notice it while reading but still know who's talking.

Personally, I prefer to have the characters do something that showcases either their character or their emotions without outright stating them. (Pet peeve: I hate it when writers just tell me that their characters are 'shocked'. 'Shock' is an intense, possibly mind- or worldview-breaking emotion! At least give me widened eyes, a slack mouth or a pale face or something! *grumble grumble damn kids on my lawn grumble*)

What helps me when I can't preface a line of dialogue with an identifier is to simply stick it in the middle somewhere. I've found that people don't mind not knowing who's talking at the beginning of a sentence, as long as they learn by the end of it. It also implies a pause in the speaker's flow of words without having to explicitly state as much.

And my final pearl of dubious wisdom: Sometimes you can skip the identifier completely. When there are only two people talking you can give them short exchanges of 'naked' dialogue that are still easy to follow. Bonus points if the content of the conversation makes it obvious who's talking. Extra double bonus points if the character's voice can be used to identify him or her.

Needless to say, take all of my preceding advice with a grain of salt. I am by no means an expert.
 
Sextant has an AI, just not a very advanced one. It doesn't have quasi-emotions like Raising Heart (and definitely not like PS/IAE), and it won't act against Tim's short-term goals to protect him or better serve his long-term goals the way Raising Heart did when she ejected a Jewel Seed to make Fate stop fighting Nanoha in season 1. It will, however, anticipate his needs and synthesize data.
The more I think on what I'm planning, the more I think that I should just build a new device into the bike, rather than plugging Sextant into it... Eh, gonna be a day or so until I write it at any rate, plenty of time to plot....plan.
 
@Always Late I've noticed a tenancy in this to start people speaking with lines like "Tim [chuckled/smirked/laughed/ect.]" Some pointers for better lines to use, so it's not so repetitive, in the grammar critique you're sure to write would be appreciated. I tried my hand at some light banter between Paul and Tim as well (kinda had to at this point, or they'd seem too 2-dimensional), and you're right, that stuff is HARD to write, how'd I do? (yes, I'm voluntarily summoning the wrath of the grammar nazi, lol)
Godspeed you poor fool. :(
Come on SW, I'm not that bad.:(:V
But seriously @edale, while the rest of the omake and specific I won't to be able to get to for awhile due to classwork, but Dialog Tags I can totally help with. Manly by pulling out an article or two and telling you 'read this'. Thing is, there's a bit of a Grammar Nazi Civil War on that.:V
There are writers who say that you only need 'said' and 'asked', and any other tag is distracting. There are those who say that dialog tags can used to describe action of give context. @DonLyn's post and and this article are good middle-of-the-road positions.

So @edale, read these, figure out which position feels good for your story, and have at it. Hope this helps.
 
Come on SW, I'm not that bad.:(:V
But seriously @edale, while the rest of the omake and specific I won't to be able to get to for awhile due to classwork, but Dialog Tags I can totally help with. Manly by pulling out an article or two and telling you 'read this'. Thing is, there's a bit of a Grammar Nazi Civil War on that.:V
There are writers who say that you only need 'said' and 'asked', and any other tag is distracting. There are those who say that dialog tags can used to describe action of give context. @DonLyn's post and and this article are good middle-of-the-road positions.

So @edale, read these, figure out which position feels good for your story, and have at it. Hope this helps.
Oh dear God, what have I wrought upon myself!

HOMEWORK!!!!

I didn't even do my homework when I actually went to school! (being able to easy ace all my tests let me actually get away with that while still managing merit roll too, heh)
Godspeed you poor fool. :(
I knew not what I did! Save this poor fool from his folly!

:D:D:D
 
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And a quick glance at those links says.... I'm fine just sticking to those 3-4 tags... I think...

I much prefer when grammar has clear-cut rules...

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Tim's Tumultuous Tinkering with Tinker Tech: Part 4

"OK Tim, what did you want to show me?"

It had been several weeks since Tim finish fully restoring the motorcycle, but time to work on it was rare. Things had gotten really hectic after the last Endbringer fight, and it only got worse after the TSAB scout ship arrived.

Honestly, things still weren't straightened out with the TSAB people. Something about a missing Lego? Tim hadn't been paying that much attention the past few meetings, too absorbed in his various projects, but he still managed to take an hour here and there to work on his bike.

"Well Paul, it's quite simple. I thought you might like to see-"

Tim reached over and hit a few buttons on the bike's controls.

"This."

Suddenly, there was a loud whining sound, and Paul looked on in astonishment as the bike rose up and hovered a foot off the ground.

Paul looked slack-jawed over at Tim, and opened his mouth, but before he could say anything Tim spoke up.

"You see, since I designed that mobility upgrade for the power suits, I got to thinking, 'why limit that tech to power suits?' My bike can ride up walls and such, but what about if it gets knocked off the building? Sure there are some safety features in place, but this'll allow me to setup a controlled glide, and land on any surface within 100 yards."

The jets keeping the bike abruptly cut out, and the bike dropped to the ground with loud thump, Tim catching it before it fell over, and righting it on its kickstand before continuing.

"As you can see, it doesn't have the best fuel capacity at the moment, but it's an emergency-use feature only. For now."

"Wow," Paul replied, "Just... Wow." Paul was about to say more, but Tim cut him off... again.

"I know, right! But that's not all, I also completely reinforced the chassis with that carbon-fiber composite I created, and given this thing doesn't need to be worn, I could make the plates much thicker. This thing could tank a shot from a decently high caliber armor-piercing round without a scratch, you'd need something designed for tanks to take it out.

"I've also mostly figured out how to convert all the Tinker tech components to run off mana. Once I do that, I can install a generator, and have it run completely off of that!

"There's only one problem... Once I've done that, I'll have hit a road block. there simply won't be any way for me to improve it anymore as it is... I have so many ideas and plans, but there's simply no room to implement any of them!"

Paul decided to wait a moment this time, to see if Tim would start up again. After he deemed the pause long enough that Tim likely was waiting on him, Paul replied, "So, that's it? Another few tweaks and you're finally done with this?"

Tim smirked, "Oh no, it simply means I can't improve this bike anymore. Rebuilding it from scratch however..." And Tim's smirk turned into a manic grin, "Then I can build as many features into it as I want!"

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Bit shorter than I was aiming for, but this is where... I fell sleep (midway through typing a sentence no less); and if that's not a sign that it's time to stop writing for the night, I don't know what is.

Digital Blueprints for the point, if this earns one.
 
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And a quick glance at those links says.... I'm fine just sticking to those 3-4 tags... I think...

I much prefer when grammar has clear-cut rules...
You're using the English language mate.
No such thing as 'clear-cut'.:p
Honestly, things still weren't straightened out with the TSAB people. Something about a missing Lego?
... I got no idea either.
"Well Paul, it's quite simple. I thought you might like to see-"

Tim reached over and hit a few buttons on the bike's controls.

"This."

Suddenly, there was a loud whining sound, and Paul looked on in astonishment as the bike rose up and hovered a foot off the ground.
Loud whining sound, eh?;)
"You see, since I designed that mobility upgrade for the power suits, I got to thinking 'why limit that tech to power suits?'
FTFY.
My bike can ride up walls and such, but what about if it gets knocked off the building? Sure there are some safety features in place, but this'll allow me to setup a controlled glide, and land on any surface within 100 yards."

The jets keeping the bike abruptly cut out, and the bike dropped to the ground with loud thump, Tim catching it before it fell over, and righting it on its kickstand before continuing.
So its an emergency function meant for getting out of trouble, than getting into it.
"I know, right! But that's not all, I also completely reinforced the chassis with that carbon-fiber composite I created, and given this thing doesn't need to be worn, I could make the plates much thicker. This thing could tank a shot from a decently high caliber armor-piercing round without a scratch, you'd need something designed for tanks to take it out.
1. *butI'mnotdoneyet.jpg*
2. *locking on noise*
"I've also mostly figured out how to convert all the Tinker tech components to run off mana. Once I do that, I can install a generator, and have it run completely off of that!

"There's only one problem... Once I've done that, I'll have hit a road block. there simply won't be any way for me to improve it anymore as it is... I have so many ideas and plans, but there's simply no room to implement any of them!"
Ah yes, the problem facing every military aircraft since WWII: Room in the frame for upgrades.
Paul decided to wait a moment this time, to see if Tim would start up again. After he deemed the pause long enough that Tim likely was waiting on him, Paul replied, "So, that's it? Another few tweaks and you're finally done with this?"

Tim smirked, "Oh no, it simply means I can't improve this bike anymore. Rebuilding it from scratch however..." And Tim's smirk turned into a manic grin, "Then I can build as many features into it as I want!"
And that's basically how we go from the Hornet to the Super Hornet.
 
Something about a missing Lego?
... I got no idea either.
Lost Logia.

Honestly, I didn't expect everyone to get that right away.

Basically I'm implying there's some friction between Taylor and the TSAB team, because of PS, that's still unresolved. IIRC, at least one of the people on the TSAB mission has a history with PS. Trying to go into as little detail on that as possible though, since I have no idea how things will develop in-story.
"You see, since I designed that mobility upgrade for the power suits, I got to thinking, 'why limit that tech to power suits?'
FTFTFY.:p

At least I'm pretty sure there should be comma for that open quote...
You're using the English language mate.
No such thing as 'clear-cut'.:p
Imagine my frustration in trying to learn Japanese. The frikken rules change with the clothes the people are wearing!
 
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Ah, right.
Basically I'm implying there's some friction between Taylor and the TSAB team, because of PS, that's still unresolved. IIRC, at least one of the people on the TSAB mission has a history with PS. Trying to go into as little detail on that as possible though, since I have no idea how things will develop in-story.
Makes sense.
Given how many people with useable Lost Logia seemingly get off scot-free with just a little community service, there'd probably be a few people who're not so merciful.
FTFTFY.:p

At least I'm pretty sure there should be comma for that open quote...
Indeed, you are correct.
You can't see this, but I'm bowing.
Imagine my frustration in trying to learn Japanese. The frikken rules change with the clothes the people are wearing!
Now that's social rules.:V
 
"You see, since I designed that mobility upgrade for the power suits, I got to thinking, 'why limit that tech to power suits?' My bike can ride up walls and such, but what about if it gets knocked off the building? Sure there are some safety features in place, but this'll allow me to setup a controlled glide, and land on any surface within 100 yards."
My first thought was that he was going to combine the configuration shifting of Mass Weapons with Power Armor to make Moto Slaves.
 
And a quick glance at those links says.... I'm fine just sticking to those 3-4 tags... I think...

I much prefer when grammar has clear-cut rules...
Bwa ha ha ha ha ha!
My first thought was that he was going to combine the configuration shifting of Mass Weapons with Power Armor to make Moto Slaves.
Ahh, now there's a reference I can appreciate.
No clue what you're talking about.

And since I'm a filthy double-poster…
 
Maskless 6.7
[] Back in the Saddle – Okay, that's one crisis over with, other than the whole 'Lung is the Butcher now' thing. Before you get around to worrying about that, maybe you should deal with the local monsters? Put on your Batman cap and look around for where they could be hiding.


Maskless 6.7

Thursday, April 21

If there is one good thing about finding out that it was the Adepts who left that statue in your room – and, assuming Epoch was telling the truth, was not a threat to your civilian identity but merely the result of an unfortunate power – it is that you can force that mystery out of your head and focus on another one. That it gives you a distraction from wondering how you should deal with a cult of magic-wielding villains who want you to make them more effective at their crimes is definitely not part of your motives, not at all.

Anyway, to business. The Beasts.

The bystanders out shopping and the store owners closing up at five in the afternoon all watch you float above them, staff held out in front of you. This is the same block of stores where you first encountered the Beasts, and as a result you feel that it is the best place for you to begin your search. You don't think the Beasts lair around here, not with only a single attack, but they had to have some way of getting here in the first place, and they certainly didn't swagger down the street.

«How do you want to do this?» Samantha asks from her perch on your shoulder. «Just run around and ask the shopkeeps whether they had anything to do with the fake Case 53s?»

"Somehow I doubt that would do much good," you reply in a dry voice. "Anyone who is in cahoots with their maker isn't going to admit to it, and we'd just put everyone else on edge for no good reason. No, we need to be cleverer about it than that. Not to mention," you add as an afterthought, "we don't have any evidence that anyone here is a collaborator. This Typhon guy is a bio-Tinker, or that's what Miss Militia thinks, anyway. What's to say he can't do some other stuff besides make monsters, or that he can't trade a 'pet' for some other gadget he needs? If he had, I don't know, a few teleporters or something, he could move the Beasts wherever he wanted them."

«That would mean he deliberately targeted these places, though. Why?»

"I don't know. That's the biggest problem with my theory," you say with a sigh. "But if he isn't sending them somewhere, what is the alternative? That he's letting murderous monsters with superpowers run around wherever they want? Explain to me how that isn't worse."

Samantha has no reply for that, much as you would have liked one, and instead she focuses once more on the visible city. «You still haven't said what you're going to do to figure out where they're coming from.»

Holding your staff out, you ask, "Storm, can you look for any any complex tech that might be Tinker-made, or secret passages, or some other hidden way for things to sneak around?" The Device chimes in agreement, and a small ball of red energy starts growing at the end. "Okay, then. Wide Area Search."

Twenty seconds later, a hologram screen appears at your side. «Search complete. No abnormal technology found. No secret passageways found. Correlating with city records… No abnormalities found.»

"Damn. I was sure we would find something like that." Shaking your head, you dismiss the screen. "Where's the next stop on our list?"

Fifteen minutes see you hovering in the sky, your expression thunderous. "How. The hell. Are the Beasts getting from place to place?"

Your long hair rustles as the raccoon unfolds into a woman, her arms wrapped loosely around your shoulders from behind. "Did you honestly expect to figure it all out in one day? The Protectorate has surely been working on this from the time they first realized the Beasts weren't Case 53s. With all the resources at their disposal, did you think it was going to be that easy?"

"Yes!" you hiss. "They don't have Perfect Storm! They don't have magic! I—"

You throw your hat off your head and run your fingers through your hair. Cut off from the rest of your Barrier Jacket, the witch's hat lasts only a second or two before crumbling away into digitized flakes. Your hands get batted away before Samantha takes over that job. "What's really bothering you?" she asks.

"It's this… Epoch thing. I guess I got used to thinking I was, I don't know, special. Sure, there are other people with Linker Cores out there. Tim, Lacey. There's a whole planet of them somewhere, even," you add with a vague wave of your hand towards the sky. "But here, on Earth? At first, I was the only mage, and then I was the one who gave Tim magic. It all stemmed from me. But now, with Epoch, the Adepts, having magic of their own? Magic that they discovered all by themselves?"

"They want you to teach them, though. Surely you haven't forgotten that in only a few days."

"I know. I'm not explaining myself well, am I?" You shake your head. "It's… It wasn't fate or destiny or anything that led to me finding Storm. This is real life, not a fantasy novel. I'm no 'Chosen One', and Storm wasn't waiting for me to come along. It was just blind luck that I was there that day. Storm could have been picked up by anyone, and I'd still just be another random face in the crowd. That's what I am without magic. A nobody."

"Taylor…"

«Mistress not 'nobody',» Perfect Storm disagrees most vehemently. «Possess natural talent with magic. Quick to learn and master spells. High intelligence. High tactical aptitude. Unlikely that potential other users would adapt as well as Mistress. Worthy of power. Calamity Witch origin would be honored.»

That is certainly a longer speech than you normally get from your Intelligent Device, and you reach out with your left hand and give the red gem a gentle caress. You appreciate it trying to cheer you up.

"I definitely have no complaints about having you as my mistress, either," Samantha says with a light laugh in your ear. "Well, maybe a few, but they all have less to do with you being you and more with you being a silly human teenager with all the hang-ups that come with it. Nothing you can help."

You roll your eyes and tilt your head to bop against Samantha's. "Fine, fine, I get it. No more wallowing." She cheers and lets you go, and you wave your hand through the air to recreate your hat. Still, you wish you could figure this out, to salve your bruised ego if nothing else. You don't have the resources the city and the Protectorate does, but…

Wait a minute. Who says you don't?

"Storm, did you save the data from our searches? Pull it up again." Eighteen screens drift around you, and you grab one at random. "You correlated these scan with the city's records before. Grab all the information you can about this area and overlay it with the scan."

"What are you doing?" Samantha asks, looking over your shoulder.

"Tapping into the city's resources and combining them with Perfect Storm. What else?"

The screen turns into a mass of lines and squiggles and tiny text, and you take one look at it before glancing away. So maybe all the information was a bad idea. "Lose the text, please." The screen becomes more bearable, but you still have no clue what you're looking at anymore. "What did you put on here?"

«Recorded blueprints. Utilities. Tax records. Energy use—»

Too much, without a doubt. "I can't tell one thing from another here. It's all blending—" The screen becomes a morass of colors. "—together. Okay, that's better. This is everything?"

The Device chimes.

"We can cross some things off the list right now. Get rid of the roads and sidewalks." A grid of purple vanishes. "Trees, fire hydrants, water lines, power and gas, Internet…"

As you talk, the map returns to something more like what it looked like before, though it is still extremely red and pink. The pink is never outside the red boxes, so maybe interior layout? "Remove the buildings that have available public blueprints and that match those blueprints." Most of the blocks vanish, and of those remaining, you don't see any connections or extensions anywhere else. There are still some lines left, and you tap the deep blue one. "What's this?"

«Waste sewer.»

"The manholes are too small for the Rats to climb out of. The Slimes, maybe, but not the Rats. Get rid of them." Moving to the yellow, you tap again. "This one?"

«Storm sewer.»

"What about this?" you continue, all your focus on a yellow blotch sitting on the line.

«Maintenance access point.»

"Storm sewer, huh?" Didn't your mom tell you when you were little not to play in the storm sewers? You don't remember how big they were back in Brockton Bay, but if something gets clogged there, they would need to be large enough for people to get in and out. Might they be large enough for the Beasts? Tossing the screen back into orbit, you snatch another one. "Show me the storm sewers here."

Yellow runs over the map, and sure enough, there's another splotch.

You point to another scan. "There." A splotch. "And there?" A splotch. A quick grab earns you the first scan of the afternoon, and you stretch it larger. "And here?"

Not two blocks from the grocery store where you fought the Beasts is a bright yellow splotch.

"No wonder no one sees them coming or going," Samantha mutters. "They move around underground and only attack what's near an exit."

Which adds another point to the 'the Beasts are randomly attacking' theory, you realize with a shudder. "Give me a map of Philadelphia and show me where the storm sewers are. The suburbs, too," you add after thinking about the party fiasco.

One more screen appears, and your eyes widen at the twisted and long system of tunnels put on display.

Samantha pops her lips. "Well. This is gonna be fun."


+1 training to Dimensional Transfer (4/4 Master).
+1 training to Flare Blade (2/2 Master).

+1 Inspiration to Mobility.
+3 Inspiration to Mechanical Intuition (PURCHASED).
+2 Inspiration to Digital Blueprints.
+2 Inspiration to Basic Devices.

For my SV readers, check out DonLyn's canon omake, labeled 4.s in the threadmarks and located after 4.9. If you're on SB, you can now find convenient links to BOTH of the canonized omake. Or, you know, any of the other nine that have been written since the last update. I'm worried we might run out of points soon. :o

Since it's the end of the week, time to discuss your next two activities.

  • Secret Santa, Part 3 – You spent some time thinking about Epoch's offer, and you need more information before you make a final decision. Give him a call and meet the rest of the Adepts.
  • Back in the Saddle, Part 2 – The storm sewers, of course. There's no telling where in that twisting labyrinth Typhon has holed up. Explore the tunnel system and see if you can find the villainous bio-Tinker's bases. Write-in for whom to bring with you (Samantha is coming by default).
  • Ready to Rumble – Because of course villains have nothing better to do than cause trouble. Tensions between the Winter Hill gang and MS-13 are coming to a boil yet again, and the Protectorate is keeping a watchful eye on the situation. Be ready to jump in if a fight breaks out.
  • A Whole New World – You've always lived in a small corner of New England, but now you have powers that really let you get around. Take a little time to see the world around you.
    • Spatial Translocation: Write-in
    • Dimensional Translocation: Random or Write-in
  • Back to Our Scheduled Programing – Go on patrol and look for trouble. You can write in to go along with somebody/somebodies.
  • Hanging Out – Take a little time to yourself and spend some time with somebody/somebodies. Preferably doing something that doesn't involve burninating people. Write in the person, place, and thing.
  • Nose to the Grindstone – Spend a free period training in the simulator. May be chosen twice. Write-in for which spell to practice.
You know the drill. Vote opens in 24 hours.
 
Alright, I'm personally thinking we do the next Back in the Saddle action, and the Ready to Rumble action. We've left the situation with the Beasts alone long enough, and it probably wouldn't look too good if there was a major villain brawl and we weren't trying to break it up.
 
If there is one good thing about finding out that it was the Adepts who left that statue in your room – and, assuming Epoch was telling the truth, was not a threat to your civilian identity but merely the result of an unfortunate power – it is that you can force that mystery out of your head and focus on another one. That it gives you a distraction from wondering how you should deal with a cult of magic-wielding villains who want you to make them more effective at their crimes is definitely not part of your motives, not at all.
The threadmark for this is out of order.
 
"It's this… Epoch thing. I guess I got used to thinking I was, I don't know, special. Sure, there are other people with Linker Cores out there. Tim, Lacey. There's a whole planet of them somewhere, even,"
Wow. If Taylor realizes how wide the TSAB is, she's gonna be crushed.
"I know. I'm not explaining myself well, am I?" You shake your head. "It's… It wasn't fate or destiny or anything that led to me finding Storm. This is real life, not a fantasy novel. I'm no 'Chosen One', and Storm wasn't waiting for me to come along. It was just blind luck that I was there that day. Storm could have been picked up by anyone, and I'd still just be another random face in the crowd. That's what I am without magic. A nobody."
*opens mouth*
«Mistress not 'nobody',» Perfect Storm disagrees most vehemently. «Possess natural talent with magic. Quick to learn and master spells. High intelligence. High tactical aptitude. Unlikely that potential other users would adapt as well as Mistress. Worthy of power. Calamity Witch origin would be honored.»
*closes mouth, hugs Taylor*
You're awesome, Tay. Never let yourself believe otherwise.
The screen turns into a mass of lines and squiggles and tiny text, and you take one look at it before glancing away. So maybe all the information was a bad idea. "Lose the text, please." The screen becomes more bearable, but you still have no clue what you're looking at anymore. "What did you put on here?"

«Recorded blueprints. Utilities. Tax records. Energy use—»

Too much, without a doubt. "I can't tell one thing from another here. It's all blending—" The screen becomes a morass of colors. "—together. Okay, that's better. This is everything?"
Hooray for mass-hacking and batman computers!
As you talk, the map returns to something more like what it looked like before, though it is still extremely red and pink. The pink is never outside the red boxes, so maybe interior layout? "Remove the buildings that have available public blueprints and that match those blueprints." Most of the blocks vanish, and of those remaining, you don't see any connections or extensions anywhere else. There are still some lines left, and you tap the deep blue one. "What's this?"

«Waste sewer.»

"The manholes are too small for the Rats to climb out of. The Slimes, maybe, but not the Rats. Get rid of them." Moving to the yellow, you tap again. "This one?"

«Storm sewer.»

"What about this?" you continue, all your focus on a yellow blotch sitting on the line.

«Maintenance access point.»
... how did the Protectorate not think of that?
Yellow runs over the map, and sure enough, there's another splotch.

You point to another scan. "There." A splotch. "And there?" A splotch. A quick grab earns you the first scan of the afternoon, and you stretch it larger. "And here?"

Not two blocks from the grocery store where you fought the Beasts is a bright yellow splotch.
Because that make a ton of sense, if rather mundane.
Which adds another point to the 'the Beasts are randomly attacking' theory, you realize with a shudder. "Give me a map of Philadelphia and show me where the storm sewers are. The suburbs, too," you add after thinking about the party fiasco.

One more screen appears, and your eyes widen at the twisted and long system of tunnels put on display.

Samantha pops her lips. "Well. This is gonna be fun."
WAS ain't gonna cover that in one go.

  • Hanging Out – Take a little time to yourself and spend some time with somebody/somebodies. Preferably doing something that doesn't involve burninating people. Write in the person, place, and thing.
Question: if I made a vote to hang out with Dragon and give the TSAB the EB files, would the activity stop if Dragon said 'this is a bad idea' or 'I want to check with my superiors'.
Ready to Rumble – Because of course villains have nothing better to do than cause trouble. Tensions between the Winter Hill gang and MS-13 are coming to a boil yet again, and the Protectorate is keeping a watchful eye on the situation. Be ready to jump in if a fight breaks out.
... aw hell. More of dog-boy.
 
@Silently Watches, can we have the teleporting Adept join us during Back in the Saddle, or better yet, use Spatial Translocation to bring some of the heavier hitting Adepts along for the ride?
 
No clue what you're talking about.
MotoSlaves are from Bubblegum Crisis (late 80's era anime). Basically they're motorcycles that transform into power suits.

Also your threadmark for the newest chapter is wrong.


  • Back in the Saddle, Part 2 – The storm sewers, of course. There's no telling where in that twisting labyrinth Typhon has holed up. Explore the tunnel system and see if you can find the villainous bio-Tinker's bases. Write-in for whom to bring with you (Samantha is coming by default).
  • Ready to Rumble – Because of course villains have nothing better to do than cause trouble. Tensions between the Winter Hill gang and MS-13 are coming to a boil yet again, and the Protectorate is keeping a watchful eye on the situation. Be ready to jump in if a fight breaks out.
I'm partial to these 2 votes. Primarily because these 2 votes are the most likely to get us in combat, which means we'll be able to learn some new skills.
 
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@Silently Watches, can we have the teleporting Adept join us during Back in the Saddle, or better yet, use Spatial Translocation to bring some of the heavier hitting Adepts along for the ride?
I don't think the teleporting Adept will be of any use, because his power relies on having a mental image of whoever the person he's targeting is, and nobody has even a faint idea of what Typhon looks like. We might be able to get some of the Adepts to help us though, if we take their action.
 
Hm. I'm tempted to advocate for talking to the Adepts. Make them basically become a rogue group instead of a villain group. Liaise with the PRT to get it through.
 
The threadmark for this is out of order.
Also your threadmark for the newest chapter is wrong.
Thank you!

*grumble grumble stupid threadmark organization grumble grumble…*
Question: if I made a vote to hang out with Dragon and give the TSAB the EB files, would the activity stop if Dragon said 'this is a bad idea' or 'I want to check with my superiors'.
:evil: Oh, I don't think Dragon would have a problem giving the TSAB the Endbringer files.
@Silently Watches, can we have the teleporting Adept join us during Back in the Saddle, or better yet, use Spatial Translocation to bring some of the heavier hitting Adepts along for the ride?
I don't think the teleporting Adept will be of any use, because his power relies on having a mental image of whoever the person he's targeting is, and nobody has even a faint idea of what Typhon looks like. We might be able to get some of the Adepts to help us though, if we take their action.
Pathfinder, the Adepts' teleporter, would not be able to help for the reasons Reaper mentioned. You can bring a couple of the Adepts along (Epoch and Standstill/Thirteenth Hour) if you do Secret Santa Part 3 and Back in the Saddle Part 2 in the same week.
 
No clue what you're talking about.
MotoSlaves are from Bubblegum Crisis (70's era anime).
This, pretty much. However edale, the anime OVA aired from 1987-1991.

what is the alternative? That he's letting murderous monsters with superpowers run around wherever they want? Explain to me how that isn't worse."

Samantha has no reply for that,
Samantha has no reply, because it is worse. Monsters randomly attacking rather than being directed makes it far harder to guess their next target(s).

That's what I am without magic. A nobody."
Hm. I see we're having self-worth/inadequacy issues after Epoch's revelation. Well, natual I suppose, but given that he barely has anything worthy of being called a spell after years of practice, I wouldn't fret too much Taylor. I rather liked Perfect Storm's and Samantha's retorts to this as well.

Yellow runs over the map, and sure enough, there's another splotch.

You point to another scan. "There." A splotch. "And there?" A splotch. A quick grab earns you the first scan of the afternoon, and you stretch it larger. "And here?"
Ah, there's some nice investigation actions. We're narrowing things down somewhat. Given Philly's sheer expanses though, we've got a lot of tunnels to search.

  • Back in the Saddle, Part 2 – The storm sewers, of course. There's no telling where in that twisting labyrinth Typhon has holed up. Explore the tunnel system and see if you can find the villainous bio-Tinker's bases. Write-in for whom to bring with you (Samantha is coming by default).
  • Ready to Rumble – Because of course villains have nothing better to do than cause trouble. Tensions between the Winter Hill gang and MS-13 are coming to a boil yet again, and the Protectorate is keeping a watchful eye on the situation. Be ready to jump in if a fight breaks out.
Hmm. Definitely want to continue Back in the Saddle. A little hesitant/nervous about Ready to Rumble, though. Cadejo is almost certainly going to show his face again, and we need a better plan of attack than last time to avoid embarrassing ourselves again.
 
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If we do take Ready to Rumble, then hasn't it been said that turning of Flare Shooter's safeties would break Cadejo's Changer/Breaker form's teeth and claws?
 
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