The first section of the most recent chapter has a weird-yet-interesting sort of energy to it. It's like when a slightly insane zealot character, who hasn't been taken seriously by anyone for the rest of the book/ game e.t.c. has something happen that makes them suddenly calm down, take a few deep breaths, smile, then say something like 'It all makes sense now. I understand what I need to do.'
And at that moment, you can tell things are about to go horribly right.
On a separate note, I'm throwing my opinion in with the others on the genderbend. Considering I think there are more male-to-female Worm self inserts than actual female SIs, the idea sort of lacks personality and individuality when done on a whim. But then, if you've got something like a plot line coming up that relies on the genderbend, I'm perfectly fine with it.
Edit: oh, I've just finished reading all the other comments, and mine can be seen in a different light. For the record, I'm not getting angry, pretentious or whiny on the whole MTF thing. Really, if it isn't plot relevant I'll just be indifferent, not passionately annoyed.