So,
@Alexander89, is my second Defiler character and story acceptable?
Sure. +3 Xp for her. Uhm, how would you make a project to compose a song? I know how Craft works, but a song is Performance...
Could you maybe elabarate a bit on this? I understand that Akuma lose a good deal of adaptability due to being striped of free will and thus need close whatching, thus not being someone you would want as a commander or spy, but considering that they get a step up on the Exalted power scale, have custom made urges objectives and having a guy make one deal is normaly way more reliable than mataining a long term relationship I realy don't see were the worse than uselees come from, substandart copared to a free willed same esssence Solar/Abyssal/Infenal ? Thats for sure but them that goes for basicaly everything else to
Uhm...Ah, found it! I also got an inspiration: tell me if you like this Akuma rewrite.
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OF THE BIRTH AND EVOLUTION OF AKUMA - FROM SLAVES TO KNIGHT TEMPLARS
The akuma came into being during the Primordial War. A Night Caste named Gorol was the only surviving member of his circle in a battle that slew the fetich soul of the Primordial that would become the Neverborn known as the Abhorrence of Life. It is unknown what forces caused Gorol to willingly give himself to the cause of Malfeas, but a range of theories abound about tainted Primordial essence, survivors guilt, insight into the Great Curse, and others. Gorol's life as an akuma was, ultimately, a failed experiment. The Yozi refined the Investiture of Infernal Glory charm after seeing Gorol's transformation into a mad juggernaut in the image of the Yozi he served to prevent the corruption of their akuma from being so obvious.
They still stripped Motivation and free will from the candidates.
There was a Yozi who couldn't accept it. His name was Ta'akozoka, the Benthic Treasure, who survived the Primordial War out of pure luck, his would-be slayers incapable of realizing if a Primordial was truly slain or not. Ta'akozoka was greedy, coveting wealth above all else; as such he couldn't phantom the idea of slaves, because for him is only natural for all beings to covet and accumulate wealth. The failure of Gorol that so shamed Malfeas was proof enough, so he searched an alternative. He consulted with Mardukth, another who survived out of luck, and with Elloge: together those three Yozi pondered and experimented until a solution, both simple and efficient, was found.
Instead of tricking them, the future Akuma would be made to choose undying loyalty out of their free will, and become more than instruments-they would become heralds of Yozi's glory.
First, a prospective akuma requires a great deal of personal power. Only the most exceptional mortals and Exalts qualify; even then, they must also display qualities pleasing to petitioned Yozi: Ta'akozoka favors skilled bureaucrats that could raise wealth, Mardukth those who called the mountains home and are great tribe's leader, and Elloge searches for skilled authors of splendid literature and art. Their Third Circle likewise favors those who resonate with their own themes and can further the objectives of their progenitors.
The effects of Akumahood are simple. The character receives access to a specific set of their patron yozi's charmset, or spirit charms themed after the Third Circle demon that made the pact, and the benefits of Demonic Inheritance five. They can reach one higher rank of martial arts, sorcery, and necromancy - although most yozi refuse to grant this dark power to their servants - than they would normally be able to. They can raise their traits, notably essence, to one higher than they would otherwise be able to. Finally, their life is extended, granting a terrestrial's lifespan to a mortal, a celestial's to a terrestrial, and an unknown, perhaps infinite span of time for a celestial akuma.
In return for these gifts, the akuma receives an Urge. This is an additional motivation, chosen by the yozi and/or the investing third circle, with regard to their bargain with the akuma. This Urge is inviolate - the akuma is literally incapable of defying it. They retain their own motivation, although it grants MDV bonuses only as if it were an intimacy.
What can and cannot be rewritten is decided beforehand by an ironclad agreement between the would-be Akuma and the one who make the change. In general, the rules for those deals should be compared to the relevant yozi's desires, plans, and themes. Intelligent akuma make sure to include that their motivation and intimacies remain intact, for otherwise they will come out of the process unrecognisable. Therefore, the easiest way to 'win' an investiture is to find a yozi who has elements in common with you. A twilight caste researcher would not impress Malfeas, but could make a good case for SWLiHN, while a slave who seeks to impress his will upon a nation would find the reverse true. An excellent stunt or well written backstory should also improve their status - everything in Creation respects something done well. Generally, the better the match between the prospective akuma and their yozi, the better the deal they will get. The more useful a tool they can be, the better a deal they can argue for.
The three creators of this process look with approval at those who manage to strike the best bargain, for they see the hints of what they really search: willing, unfaltering devotion.
An akuma who completes their urge is, theoretically, free. They can receive a new one from a third circle demon of their patron yozi for only one willpower, but like the first investiture they must be willing: by Ta'akozoka's design, a new Urge can be assigned only if the Akuma bargain for a commensurate reward to the task asked of them. Akuma can receive more (power, money, prestige) only by being successful on the tasks given. This is an incentive that few can resist, and so it's that many Akuma fervently work to please their Masters as best as they can.
That those Akuma performs much better than any chosen by Malfeas or SWLiHN, is a matter than make Mardukth proud.
But it's the third, and final, part of this great design that was Elloge's work, and what all three Titans always eagerly wait to see happen:
Abnegation of the ego and total subsumation of yourself towards a cause.
It may happens that a scholar grew bitter by the state of the world, and search to bring it back to its former glory. It may happen that an Akuma, during their services, came to genuinely appreciate their patrons, and realized that the greatest thing they can do with their lives is to dedicate it to those who provided so much for them. Whatever the case, when a petitioner comes before a Yozi or a third circle soul of them, and declares to be ready to dedicate themselves wholly to the cause-that's when that the great archetype of Elloge comes to live.
The one petitioned converses long and hard with the petitioner, looking for deceit and peer into their spirits for hidden truths. If they are satisfied by what they see, they state truthfully to the petitioner what will happen to him. If they accept, a new and more powerful version of "Investiture of Infernal Glory" is used on them. Intimacies, Virtues and other parts that make up that person are left untouched, but they gain (if they don't have already) an Intimacy of loyalty and reverence to the Yozi they petitioned and their Motivation is replaced with a single variant:
"To dedicate my life to the cause of the Yozi"
Thus are born the Infernal Crusaders: Akuma granted the highest power, driven by religious fervor to further the cause of the true Masters of the Universe, their every breath spent to further spread the glory of the Yozi and restore them on the rightful throne even without an Urge to guide them. They can still be given one, but at this point it is merely a formality to inform them of their next duty.
Cecelyne was, understably, peeved by this player-right version of religion.
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What do you think? I tried to think of something that made sense under the lens of convenience: I started by the idea that there has to be some Yozi who aren't as bugfuck insane and debased as Malfeas and the rest of the Reclamation Architects. Still alien by human-standards, but with objectives less likely to screw everyone forever just for the heck of it. I was inspired by
this.
The Yozi won't care so long as the owners pay their Essence taxes, just like they do in Hell.
If you want to know what life with the Yozis let loose to do as they please will look like, look at Hell. It'll look like that. It's not going to be a nice place.
I actually have a few ideas about what a possible future-history epilogue of this quest would be like.
But until then, can we just play the quest as it is?