Distant Stars. (a WH40K/Xianxia civ Quest).

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Prayers to Kuvara
Haku had a meeting to attend to.

Yokoto already left earlier today.

It was nearly sunset.

Spreading her wings, and moving past the curtain, she flew out of the skyscraper, the wind picked this minute to blow, ringing through the holes in the structures, causing the expensive curtains, serving as outer walls covering the rooms for privacy, but transparant from the inside, to flapped in, the wind reaching every room as an almost musical note passed through the city.

With the advancement cameras, less and less people bothered using exterior walls, more so in this building, no one was so foolish as to try to steal from cultivators.

For doing so risked not only your life, as it was considered a crime bordering on treachery to disrupt their work, but because no one wanted to pay for that sin when they met Kuvara in the afterlife.

Mortal crimes brought about mortal punishments, stealing from cultivators in relation to their duty was not a mortal crime.

And, besides, rain was barely a drizzle in this city, as Kuvara made sure, too much rain was bad for the vegetation, so there was no fear of their work being continimated.

Bells of magical ice, were attached to her feathers, adding to the melody.

Extremely dense ice, to more easily have materials to work her techniques, but getting the sound they made to harmonise with the sounds the palace they lived in was a minor task she took, when she tried to figure out if sounds can be used in runic creation process.

She looked down and saw the tracks of inner city trains, with vegetation on either side, moving materials from place to place, other Keku flew below her, some gawked from afar, to see her at with any details at this distance they would need tools, they landed on one of the many perches that dotted the walls of the city to look, but would probably soon be in their way to the same place she was, tourists probably, or maybe pilgrims, those were getting more common latelly, and iMore so today in particular.

Most that lived in the city were used to seeing a cultivator.

Than again, people gawked at her more than most, so perhaps they were native.

The palace stood in the distance, the only building in a city of skyscrapers taller than the runic institution.

It stood in a small island in the middle of a lake, with rivers snaking their way through the city, if she saw the end of them she would see they connected to the sea and the mother river, the longest river on the continent.

She squinted and saw a runic array in the courtyard, a tribulation array of her own make, made after the improvements she enjoyed from in her ascension.

Many were already flying around the lake, hundreds of thousands.

A great flock flying around the palace, the winds blew as if a hurricane was coming, the great flock moving more air than was possible without aid, hundreds of thousands of wings flapping.

The heat of so many flying so close by and the winds they created should have made them all land, but they didn't need to.

And as she got closer, the touch of divine might entered her, spillover of the divine qi and she heard the songs of safety with her enhanced senses.

Wishes of luck and goodwill, prayer for the safety of souls and for victory.

The prayers for Kuvara were not a somber affair, for Kuvara wasn't a goddess of stillness, she was the wind, she was flight, she was the awe a Keku felt when he saw the world below him and the desire to reach ever higher.

When people prayed for her safety, they sang and moved.

And as she spread her wings a snow storm came with her, excitement seem to take over those closer in the crowed, they flew faster where they saw her and she joined the congregation, above the masses of Keku, as one of the direct soldier of the gods, an angel for the eternal emperor Shitaku, and as she did so she felt the changes herself.

Her own excitement grew as well, her weariness from the failed experiments going away, her joy at her success and confidence taking prominence.

The flames of desire, a trick her grandmaster started using a few years after prayers for Kuvara started, that the divine qi expanded in the technique could return its cost and more with his efforts, a way to both get more divine qi and take a center stage, as well as all around improver moral.

She knew the fractions they got of the qi had shrunk as Kuvara grew closer to the people's hearts in those prayers.

Which was both good and bad, princess Kuvara needed the power, but with less divine qi, grandmaster could prepare the empire itself less.

It was a balancing act between the physical and not, a loss in either was not acceptable.

The movement around the palace was likewise arranged, a prominent kid had discovered a new art called Feng Shui, and he was currently attempting to arrange prayers in such a way that the sheer mass of Keku will allow him to create a living Feng Shui structure, made of hundreds of thousands of Keku.

But so far results were minimal, if they existed at all.

But tonight celebrations were not purely done for Kuvara, she didn't have time to join every day after all.

No, it was a celebration of great step towards resisting the end, for the emperor have found a great victory, demonic cultivators located, rips from which enemies will come closed.

A great pile stood in prepared stations, tokens of dead Keku, the first pictures taken of newborn chicks and more, a great pile of emotions and significance, for when called, the keku made the sacrifice to help.

In the last month a great massage sounded through the empire, asking the Keku to give of themselves not money or resources, but objects of sentimental importance.

And the Keku did, some cried and some were overjoyed they could help, it was not an order, but a request, and as the months passed, more and more was given.

Some even offered themselves, sacrifices to help their race, but those were denied.

She thought of her own token, the one she took from her family home, because she was not yet old enough for her mother to give it to her, of gifts from her master, of her first rune and more.

She would not give those to the fire, not because she was unwilling to make sacrifices, but because she knew that if the fire could take them, other things might too, one day she may make the sacrifice, but she know it would be for something of her own creation.

She saw Yokoto from afar, her own feat if supernatural might drawing attention and worship.

And she just let herself become part of the crowd for once, enjoying the pure joy of flight and wishing safety for Kuvara, even if she couldn't truly bring herself to truly pray.
 
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Haku had a meeting to attend to.
Honestly with the amount of omake you've pumped out, you really should consider submitting one to the Summerfest competition, even just getting the participation award is a nice cherry on top youve alredy dont most of the work after all.

Anyhow.

[] Kuvara gets extra faith (and as such a bonus to her actions).

[] Gain a fang shui pattern that deals with generating extra faith for Kuvara.

[] Gain a rune script that utilizes divine attention to work.
 
Your current economy is 2.643K or 0.01% of the needed and to bring your capacity to the needed level would require 33,000~ permanent cultivator ap to be invested.

uh. That's a LOT worse than I thought, especially the AP thing.

But what about...

Note N2: this doesn't take into account divine Qi or mutations to make things easier, or various advancements that might be discovered which could help, divine intervention or the utilization of high-grade materials.

...yeah, that. mutation could likely help a lot,or higher step abilities affecting the entire race, sort of a super-boosted version of our current insights and core insights...Possibly a Keku domain could help?

But yeah, super long term thing.

Still, we can at least in the short and medium term still expand training and teaching. The Awakening pills in particular should help us escalate numbers fairly quickly, especially if we refine it and improve it more. Same for the tempering pill.

After all at the very beginning of the quest we had an option to teach up to 10 or 20 times our current numbers. What restricts us is for the most part available teachers, but with some of their needed attention being replaced by pills, by taking advantage of unforgettable lessons given by Shikatu-clones, and possibly even by a teaching institution (eventually at least), we SHOULD be able to reach that 10x or 20x number of cultivator recruits in a few decades.

Uri, just to understand if this is feasible, what would be required for the above idea? Shikatu's lessons can't be forgotten by definition, how much of a difference would spending a divine charges on teaching clones to try and give every new cultivator at least one personal lesson?

A mandatory 12 year course (basically for the duration of all low level education) can likely awaken 20%~ of your population, if the average talent shifts to Pi (1) that only rises to 22%~
Basically replace P.E. with Meditation classes? It's not the worst idea, honestly. Though getting enough teachers for those courses would be problematic.
 
Poor qm, almost doubling the omakes in 1 turn
Hey I'm not complaining, I welcome them, each and very one is a great shoot to the motivation.

And they help expand the world beyond the limited screen time I can give it to move things forward in a reasonable pace.

Uri, just to understand if this is feasible, what would be required for the above idea? Shikatu's lessons can't be forgotten by definition, how much of a difference would spending a divine charges on teaching clones to try and give every new cultivator at least one personal lesson?
Depends on how much you spend but giving all your cultivators private lessons would cost thousands of charges, it would also be very effective at speeding up their normal cultivation and avoiding problems.

It would speed things up by about 30%~
 
[] Gain a rune script that utilizes divine attention to work.

That seems most interesting, kind of suprised there aren't pillar pick, but I probably wouldn't pick it even if it was, pretty satisfied with the state of Haku's pillars, especially considering her insight already boosting her.
 
Depends on how much you spend but giving all your cultivators private lessons would cost thousands of charges, it would also be very effective at speeding up their normal cultivation and avoiding problems.

It would speed things up by about 30%~
yeah, maybe only viable in the very long term if our divine charge gain truly explodes.

On the other hand something like "private lessons for all third/second steps (and notable talents)" would be far more viable. All third we could probably do now already, really (well, if we had the appropriate insights).


7 Third Steps, so presumably only 14 divine charges to cover them all, assuming one action each is enough.

All second steps (60) would be 120 charges, which is not currently viable... but our divine charges production IS still going up, and we don't even need to teach them all in a single turn, so if we split them and taught them in different decades... or just the decade after they succeed at the tribulation...

It's viable in the medium term I think.
 
Honestly, most fun part of the omake was trying to think about Keku architecture, I liked the image of a city made completely of skyscrapers without walls, just covered by colourful curtains, with perches on the outside of said buildings serving as resting places, a three dimensional city where streets could go up as much as forward.

Also liked fleshing out Kuvara's prayers, the first image that comes to my head when thinking of public prayers were people or standing and sitting in a group, holding their hands together, solemn and silent.

But that didn't feel like what we saw of Kuvara, it felt like the opposite of her, so trying to imagine what praying to a goddess of wind would be like was fun.
yeah, maybe only viable in the very long term if our divine charge gain truly explodes.
It will never be viable.

Not without our cultivators being an even tinier fraction of our population.

A much more feasible goal is taking all the teaching actions, aka, teaching first steps as a whole, rather than as individuals, I doubt it would be worth it even if we did have the divine qi, would much rather to throw it at meridians or something if we had such absurd amounts and no apocalypse in sight.

Giving lessons to second steps is more feasible, but we already got sixty of the guys, that 120 divine qi, almost completing the twelve meridians with their current numbers and those will only grow, don't forget they aren't static and our divine qi ris with the population, meaning we will never have enough, we will always have the same fraction.

I suspect personal lessons will be viable only for third steps, divine qi will grow, but so will the costs of cultivation and the number of third steps.
 
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Honestly, most fun part of the omake was trying to think about Keku architecture, I liked the image of a city made completely of skyscrapers without walls, just covered by colourful curtains, with perches on the outside of said buildings serving as resting places, a three dimensional city where streets could go up as much as forward.
Like I said thinking of how a species having wings affect the culture and architecture and their entire development is a real fun part of designing this quest.

I find it really appropriate for the large cities to just be a way to create a melody with the wind.

It just feels right.

But that didn't feel like what we saw of Kuvara, it felt like the opposite of her, so trying to imagine what praying to a goddess of wind would be like was fun.
Yeah, she isn't one for sitting around, a still wind is a dead wind.
 
Giving lessons to second steps is more feasible, but we already got sixty of the guys, that 120 divine qi, almost completing the twelve meridians with their current numbers and those will only grow, don't forget they aren't static and our divine qi ris with the population, meaning we will never have enough, we will always have the same fraction.
We have 60, but we don't get 60 per turn.

Like, let's look at turn 12 end:

A net gain of 5 new second steps.

So, assuming just ONE personal lesson per second step... it's actually doable.
 
So, assuming just ONE personal lesson per second step... it's actually doable.
Yes, but that sounds frivolous and wasteful.

Also, our divine qi doesn't rise ten a turn, that's the minimum to keep up with five a turn.

It is just too wasteful, even after the apocalypse, we will have enough to cultivate that those levels of divine qi will likely be used to speedrun us to the peak of the fifth realm, and probably make gains on the sixth.
 
Yea, spending time creating a technique, a cultivation guide etc. would help them way more than thousands of qi worth would, since they automatically apply to everyone. (or, spend that divine qi on keku pillar insights)
 
Yea, spending time creating a technique, a cultivation guide etc. would help them way more than thousands of qi worth would, since they automatically apply to everyone. (or, spend that divine qi on keku pillar insights)
Giving the divine qi to second steps will probably give them more than anything we can teach them.

Like, a reminder Shitaku completed body tempering in three years without anyone teaching him, so let's say because he was first step, one ap, but really, that was a more third an ap to reach the peak, and with zero cultivation knowledge.

Shitaku is a genius, but it gives you a good indication of the level of power two divine qi have.

Two divine qi can probably push a second step all the way to be ready to ascension, or at least close to it.
 
Hmm, actually, once the tears open, won't the entire world be flooded with 'Qi'? I wonder if that would help cultivators, or create more places of power. Hell, turn the entire planet into one for the duration.
 
Good point, I was referring mostly to using that qi for teaching rather than anything else. Them using divine qi would probably be equivalent? Over a long enough time, the cost and benefit would most likely equalize.
I personally think the idea of giving the qi if we have other uses for it wasteful.

We are going to need a lot of qi to speedrun cultivation.

If we wanted to boost our guys, developing cultivation in general is more efficient, if we are really friendly, let them keep the qi we are usually spending to buy cool gadgets.

But like, Oketeku got divine qi knowledge fifty, so they will probably need to wait a long while for it.
Hmm, actually, once the tears open, won't the entire world be flooded with 'Qi'? I wonder if that would help cultivators, or create more places of power. Hell, turn the entire planet into one for the duration.
We already know the world's qi density will reach the level of a place of power within century or three, if I remember the timetable correctly.
 
If we wanted to boost our guys, developing cultivation in general is more efficient.
100%. Our greatest strengths are the lores and insights we get from them, they're the cultivation equivalent to tech. Cultivation lore and its insights are faster speeds, safer tribulations, and probably even quality in the future. Then there's also immortal cooking and feng shui that should help with basically all cultivation-related stuff. And techniques, which we haven't touched at all.
 
100%. Our greatest strengths are the lores and insights we get from them, they're the cultivation equivalent to tech. Cultivation lore and its insights are faster speeds, safer tribulations, and probably even quality in the future. Then there's also immortal cooking and feng shui that should help with basically all cultivation-related stuff. And techniques, which we haven't touched at all.
Going back, apparently we can teach insights in a lesser forms as techniques, which means that we might be able to teach our guys to use the black flames, but I am not sure if it is the same for divine insights.
 
Going back, apparently we can teach insights in a lesser forms as techniques, which means that we might be able to teach our guys to use the black flames, but I am not sure if it is the same for divine insights.
Some insights can be taught, some can't, a part of it is the available knowledge and expertise might not be there but there are some (especially divine insights) that need whatever it is that makes insights special to function.

The black flames are amongst that number.
 
So I picked the divine rune, how does it work, would we get to know what she does in the update? Something else?
 
oh, actually I wanted to ask for a new informational post if possible Uri.

Basically: What each category of people KNOWS.

As in:

1)What do Mortals know about cultivation, about Shikatu, About the apocalypse, about demons, demonic cultivators and the chaos gods, about the afterlife, about places of powers, about Kuvara and Okertatu, about the fact aliens exist (Okertatu told us that basically), about divine qi and how prayers make Kuvara and Shikatu and the cultivators stronger, about things like Alchemy, Feng Shui, Immortal Cooking, Spiritual Herbs?

2)What do first/second/third steps know?

3)What do the Hunters know?

4)What do the 5 Sects know?

5)What do the Nobles know?

6)What do our army generals know?

7)What about our mortal civilians in positions of authority?

8)What about relatives of cultivators?

9)What about mortal scholars?

Basically what is public knowledge and what is only known to specific groups (and which ones)?
 
Who knows what.
oh, actually I wanted to ask for a new informational post if possible Uri.
Ask and yeh shell receive.

Keep in mind that this is a general overview and there are exceptions for everything.

Mortals:

Random villager:
cultivators? Yeah, I know of them, never saw one but my pa did almost forty years ago. The apocalypse? A bunch of horse shit if you ask me. Alchemy? Feng shui? Immortal cooking? What's that? oh I know of spiritual herbs, my cousin went to a special education course in the big city and came back knowing how to cultivate them, now every month an armed convoys comes around to gather his harvest, he's now the richest person in the city the lucky bastard. I don't know about no gods aside form Kuvara and the emperor.

Random urban resident: cultivators? Yeah, I see them flying around, even got to talk to a few especially when they tasted me for talent, I was taught a few basic identification methods for demonic cultivators but I never saw one. the apocalypse? The cultivators seem to believe its real and If they do I gauss it must be true?, I know of alchemy, at least that it's a thing no idea what is actually needed and produced. I don't know about no gods aside form Kuvara and the emperor. I like the emperor, I traveled once to the palace got to see one of his court sessions, it snice to know your ruler cars for you.

Highly educated person: yes, yes, I know everything there is to know about cultivation, from how to do it, to the basics of the crafts of cultivators, soul pillars? What's that? I suppose that other gods might exist, there certainly been enough over the course of history its statistically improbable that aliens don't exist, the apocalypse is obviously real the final date for it is within our lifetimes, you would not give a specific time table if you wished to deceive.

Hunters: I talk to cultivators regularly as part of my job, I was taught to identify all the sings of the four great enemies and their servants, aliens? That's classified.

Generals and high-ranking civilians: we've been briefed on all the relevant parts of the situation and the capabilities of our forces; expansion operations and wargames have proceeded steadily.

Relatives of cultivators: our family members reveled a few tidbits but has mostly kept tight lipped about the specific details.

Cultivators:

First step/five sects:
I know everything, form the enemy we fight to the tools we have. Okertaku? Who's that?

Second steps/third steps (including five sects ones): know everything except exact specifics.

Nobles: the apocalypse is obviously a fake justification; we know of all cultivations craft disciplines but we only focused on alchemy and spirit herbs. Divine Qi? No idea what you talking about. Shikatu is obviously not a god, Kuvara might actually be.
 
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