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Narwhal Doesn't Need Inuyasha's Collar.
There were at least two instances in which the "Sit!" was used to save Inuyasha, pulling him out of the way of attacks he couldn't dodge or parry otherwise.

I threw the collar issue in as a partial joke until I really sat down and thought about it.

Aside from the girl just spamming the command a dozen times in a few seconds after a man with 50 years of isolation makes an innuendo, it was useful 2 out of... how many times? It was the slapstick part, so 2-6 times an episode wouldn't be too exaggerated.

As for the sensual possibility of it, having a weak human call you beloved, forcing you to your knees before her glory as she ignores your power and heritage?

...Yeah, that could be interpreted. Better keep Narwhal away from those things.
 
I wonder what he'll do to fill out his powerset, since the 'faith' power seems like it actually covers the entire magic system of the place.
 
I wonder what he'll do to fill out his powerset since the 'faith' power seems like it actually covers the entire magic system of the place.
He'll probably pick up some secondary aspects to his Faith powerset by scanning various Yokai and using 'Consumption' on a few things then pick out some new powers that help synergise/bridge those secondary aspects to his existing powersets. As for what those secondary powers will be..? That I'm not too sure of. A lot of what comes to mind may actually synergise too well and inevitably end up collapsing/combing with shit already present which could destabilise his soul...

On an unrelated note, that ability to basically eat bad emotions and malice like he was from the Well? When upgraded to a decent level that is gonna be super OP once he starts going to certain worlds. Seriously, in DxD? Learn Senjutsu and just consume the world's malice instead of learning to withstand it. Happen to get a Heavenly Dragon Sacred Gear? Also, use the same process to purify Juggernaut Drive. In Naruto and become/want to help a Jiinchuriki? Eat the malice the Tailed Beast has accumulated. In RWBY? Eat the fear, negative emotions etc of everyone nearby to become basically invisible to the Grimm's malice sensing bullshit. In Fate and corrupted Grail mud giving you troubles? Those curses are basically empowered by "All of Humanities Evils" so just eat the Evils empowering the curses. Free feast, thanks for the grub Angra Mainyu. In basically any world where you have to face a personification of your negative emotions or "inner darkness"? Go all "bitch I eat people", activate 'Consumption' and let her rip.

This Baku shit, while funny as hell now, is a total gamechanger/breaker later, after all, there are a shit-ton of settings where "facing your inner darkness", an ability causing a berserk rage or some sort of super negative emotional backlash, needing to achieve a state of emotional tranquillity or having to endure the negative emotions of others is a gate barring you from certain powers. Now with enough upgrades that gate can basically be eaten and turned into a secondary power-up. It is so broken.
 
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One issue I'm having with this story is the lack of conflict. There has been a lot of shonen training but no fights or political intrigue. It's just going from candy land to being a fluffy pokemon.
 
Nah, Narwal has a horn so almost half-alicorn ...
She was included intentionally ;)
You're right, she and alicorns are always horny...

One issue I'm having with this story is the lack of conflict. There has been a lot of shonen training but no fights or political intrigue. It's just going from candy land to being a fluffy pokemon.
This is just the third jump and there are more dangerous ones planned in the future.
What you're reading is very detailed power creep.

Also, it's a quest to recreate the Kaleidoscope. We're looking for time magic.
MLP was used to shore up anti-master resistance and now we're seeing the continuation.
 
Today I don't feel like doing anything.
When Kagome and Inuyasha jumped back into the 'Bone-Eater`s Well', Adam didn't even bother to get up.

His power was scanning it anyway, and the raw amount of spiritual energy (tainted or not) was more than enough to keep him happy just lounging around here.

When he woke hours later, he found that at some point someone (Probably Kagome's mom, she was awesome) had picked him up and placed him on a pillow, which was resting on a towel.

So... back to sleep.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

It had been... several days.

At some point, the small white flower blossoms had swept around his pillow throne and began to fill the boundary surrounding the well. Not enough to completely cover the ground, but it was noticeable.

He didn't need to sleep, negative energy didn't force him to go to the bathroom, and he didn't get thirsty.

So... he just slept next to the well.

Kagome's bro, Sota, had come around a few times to give some head pats. Asako had actually brought her own pillow and hung out for an hour or two while drinking tea. It was nice.

The old man (Grandpa!) would stop by to gather more blossoms for his own needs.

But days drifted by as he siphoned literal years of decay, sadness, death and despair.

His second power guided by his spiritual soul was almost automatic, nearly missed as he drifted away and consumed with glee.

'Purification.'

Using the kami he gained and produced to refine the spiritual concept of a creature to a more pure state. It was odd... a bit like sorting. If he wished he could actually purify evil into a more refined form just as easily as he could refine purity or cleanliness.

It was about... analyzing an object, person, relationship, or concept. Then, distinguishing some part of it as an impurity...and cleansing that impurity.

Used on a soul, it could clear outside influence or remove unwanted traits.

Used on a metal alloy, he could rip it apart into the pure metals used to smelt the bar.

It was surprisingly flexible, and meshed well with 'Tithe'. Portions of the purification process would be sent to conversion, consume, and all the other abilities that could use free energy. It showed up in his Gate soul as the white rope that the 'Tithe' charm hung from, and seemed to bind the Gate in some unknown way. Neat.

Anyway, it was loads of free power with no ethical issues. Eating a well of despair was a surprisingly simple way to rapidly build up spiritual power without having to eat humans or demons or force kids to have nightmares.

Honestly, he was strong enough that he could probably find ways around eating, drinking, sleeping, and so forth ALREADY. But when a feast of darkness just... sat there? Dinnertime!

It was a bit embarrassing to realize how much of an effect it was having on the barriers though.

With 'Purification' combined with 'Consume' and 'Conversion', tainted energy was being drained rapidly... which created a 'flow' or 'current' of power towards the shrine.

And any positive energy was being held by the outer ring on the shrine, with further buildup within the Well and the house thanks to their own rings. Any negative energy was being converted, mostly consumed by Adam himself, then released into the ever growing ward system.

Anyone with spiritual sense would see something like a growing tornado, sucking in sadness, strife, fear, and other energies from miles away. Funneled like black soot into the shrine, where it was shredded into white power and white blossoms.

Point is, very minor spiritual creatures were following the flow of energy and finding this place to be something like a paradise. One of the tiny red haired wood spirits, something 'Harmony' informed Adam was called a 'Kijimuna', had actually got its courage up and petted him!

It was nice.

Not sure why exactly all the creatures were treating Adam as boss here though. Maybe they recognize the barrier energy as his? Even now he could feel various creatures and spirits claiming sections of the shrine as territory. They were not being a pest, so not his problem.

He felt the growing power charges gather as his scan/feast continued.

The well was... odd. It wasn't like a tube, with one end mystically leading one into the past. It wasn't a tunnel, that one could travel through to reach a new world. It wasn't a set of gates or anchors, that could open a connection to join the two for a pathway.

It was like having two pockets in the exact same point but not.

If you put a coin in pocket one, that coin was already in pocket two because they were the exact same pocket... even if pocket two was 500 years in the past!

The framework of spiritual magic that allowed this was fascinating. And pretty. The spiritual power was provided in the past from corpses and the power was given form in the future, when Kagome first traveled through... but due to how both time spans connected, that order was not needed. In a way, it was very much like quantum entanglement, in that one change appeared on both particles at the same moment regardless of distance.

Well, not really, in fact those two things were silly different. Why was he thinking about that stuff anyway? He wiggled deeper into his pillow, trunk absently pushing flower blossoms off his belly.

It was like more like... um. Two possible realities where only one thing changed, and that change was also the joining point of... of... something.

Anyway, the well was fun to examine as his power drained away the spiritual corruption.

Oh, and while including the converted kami, the faith his soul generated, the power 'Tithe' was adding, AND the darkness being consumed from the well... the shrine was ALSO donating energy directly to Adam!

As a being both physically present AND spiritual in nature, most prayers or hopes being directed to this shrine that didn't directly specify a cause or deity just... floated on over to him.

More, there were multiple visitors to the shrine over the last few days that had noticed the convincing 'statue' near the well... and some asked 'it' to watch over their dreams or guide them from sickness.

He frowned slightly, wiggling his hips on the pillow. On second thought, healing those people and consuming their nightmare seeds was probably why the number of local Baku related prayers had gone up.

Well, no big issue. Probably.

His spiritual soul Gate was changing, oddly enough. Once the snow globe of faith filled the bottom with flower blossoms of kami, the pile began to compress. Large flowers shrank to tiny specks. Not sand or rice size, but like... buttons.

Millions of buttons.

If anything, compressing the kami into the smaller forms increased Adam's unconscious draw of faith energy nearby significantly.

Idly, his right ear flapped over to scratch his eye. Becoming a sinkhole of faith energy was... probably a big deal. And he should probably get up and do something about it. Eventually.

Then again, consuming the energy didn't lower the amount available really. It sped up the conversion and purification process, it encouraged even more energy to arrive, it increased the resonating between all the tiny units.

It was strange stuff. The more faith you had, the easier to inspire more. As long as you didn't waste the starting capital, it had an exponential growth curve really.

Squirming on his cushion, Adam chose another stream of black despair to snack on. This stuff was more sticky than the rage or denial pools, had better texture.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Life was better, Asako decided, when you had tiny elephants.

She finished folding the laundry, breathing deep. Crisp, clean air, far cleaner than air should be this deep in the busy city.

According to Father-in-Law, who had been having fun examining the 'Spirit Barrier' set up by the little Baku, the new 'defenses' were less meant for security and more for healing. Detoxification.

It was only because of how strong they were that they had also become strong defenses against the darker parts of society.

That stranger who had been seen weeks ago lurking in the neighborhood had not come back, nor had that group of delinquents that occasionally fought for territory. And when she left for grocery shopping, she noticed that even the vegetation on the few abandoned properties seemed healthier. Stronger. Her herb garden was doing fantastic!

She gathered the basket and moved inside, humming.

It wasn't obvious to those without a life steeped in spiritual matters. But the air itself seemed lighter after these few days.

She noticed that kids nearby the shrine felt safer. Were more willing to play in the sunlight. Couples took more walks, although she wasn't sure if they knew why it seemed like such a good idea.

And the wildlife variety had picked up. Birds were visiting more and more often, and when walking near the back of the property she saw a fox exploring the taller grass. Most likely a fox.

It was probably for the best that she was unaware of the number of people visiting the hospital for minor wounds and burns over the last few days. Several gang members had severe hand issues when their weapons almost exploded from heat, and one man who arrived screaming in pain turned out to be a fairly famous child rapist who had been in disguise... although that guy might not live long enough to enter custody.

The strange phenomenon was creating a low level wave of communication in the city, as the lowering trend of reported crimes became more noticed. Some attributed it to the hard work of local officials, others claimed a new gang was moving into the area and was wiping out competition in preparation.

Most odd was how a young man selling peanuts from a cart found a surge of customers when he traveled near a local shrine. He wasn't sure WHY everyone kept buying a couple of bags without eating one, but money was money and this area of town was looking much nicer these days anyway.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Adam blinked at the bowl filled with peanuts. "Squeak?"

Sota sighed. "Look, I said he doesn't eat those."

The three visiting girls were ignoring him completely, as they used their phone to take photos and video of the cute thing.

Sota frowned at the continuing questions. "He's a pygmy elephant that Grandpa is taking care of because of how much he looks like those mythical Baku spirits." "No, he has a special diet from the vet. He won't be able to... No, STOP adding peanuts!" "Seriously, I just finished telling those last two girls that he... please back up, don't crowd him!"

Adam blinked at the growing group of girls. Had... they been here the whole time?

Sota sighed, seeing the Baku wake up. "Alright, he's awake now. Can everyone please back up a little? We don't want to scare him. Grandpa says he shouldn't be handled by strangers."

Why was Sota always stuck with the strange jobs? Apparently Grandpa was worried problems would come up if someone didn't watch over the Baku. Which was initially boring, as all the tiny thing did was... sleep. And wiggle. For days.

Then Sota's luck ran out, and one of Kagome's visiting friends from school popped up with more homework for her 'sick' friend to handle later, and nearly stepped on the darn thing.

The cute was too strong, and more friends were called.

He held out a hand. "Look, could you all just back up and... NO, he does not eat peanuts! Why are you getting more peanuts!?"

Adam blinked at the crowd.

He looked at the growing mound of peanuts, overflowing the bowl.

Adam didn't even have a stomach. What was the point of this?

He absently picked a peanut up with his trunk, causing the crowd to go silent at his movements.

Hmm? Oh. It counted as an offering! This thing was FULL of energy!

Sota groaned as the tiny elephant instantly shoved the large peanut into it's tiny mouth, devoured one instantly before giving a tiny burp-squeak.

Crud.

The crowd's massive squee of adorable fanaticism washed over the unlucky child as several girls dashed off to get more cuteness-pellets and the others rabidly recorded the scene.

Sota gave up and headed inside to get adult backup. Maybe mom or grandpa could help.
 
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Several gang members had severe hand issues when their weapons almost exploded from heat, and one man who arrived screaming in pain turned out to be a fairly famous child rapist who had been in disguise... although that guy might not live long enough to enter custody.
The three visiting girls were ignoring him completely, as they used their phone to take photos and video of the cute thing.
Does anyone know Inuyasha enough to know if they have a veil / statute of secrecy / mist / etc? I doubt the bad intentions ward would be enough to convince most normals of the supernatural, but criminals / gangs would probably realize what's going on and accept it. As for Adam, well the schoolgirls are hanging around watching and filming him, how long until he floats up in the air or does other blatantly supernatural stuff? It's not like the family asking him not to would actually have any effect...
 
It was probably for the best that she was unaware of the number of people visiting the hospital for minor wounds and burns over the last few days. Several gang members had severe hand issues when their weapons almost exploded from heat, and one man who arrived screaming in pain turned out to be a fairly famous child rapist who had been in disguise... although that guy might not live long enough to enter custody.

Their weapons became hot enough to burn... And HIS weapon also burned enough to put him in the Hospital... Justice comes in many forms.
Just remember students, do not hit other students with your schoolbooks or think of them as weapons or you might not be able to hold onto them for class.
People, if you consider your 'words' to be weapons against your competition, you may find the burn to be more severe on your end --of your tongue.
 
You know what would be awesome is if Yu Yu hakusho was in the same place as inuyasha i would love to see yuske but heads with inuyasha.

Hmm. both universes do have a lot of things in common just enough for it to be plausible that they're both living in the same universe.
 
It was strange stuff. The more faith you had, the easier to inspire more. As long as you didn't waste the starting capital, it had an exponential growth curve really.
Will he still be able to collect faith from this universe once he has left? I can imagine the ascended from Stargate having a conniption if they see this mortal drawing in absurd amounts of faith energy like an Ori.
 
I also want to know at what point in the timeline this is so it is either after the dark priestess cursed kagome or more likely since inuyasha mentioned being poison is after one of the band of seven poisoned her.
 
Does anyone know Inuyasha enough to know if they have a veil / statute of secrecy / mist / etc? I doubt the bad intentions ward would be enough to convince most normals of the supernatural, but criminals / gangs would probably realize what's going on and accept it. As for Adam, well the schoolgirls are hanging around watching and filming him, how long until he floats up in the air or does other blatantly supernatural stuff? It's not like the family asking him not to would actually have any effect...

To answer your question if there is a society to keep the spiritual hidden no.

At lest nothing was ever mentioned in the anime/manga to my knowledge.

And now that we have more info we can get a better idea of the timeline. With Kagome being poisoned recently that may mean it is near the end of the first series before the Final Act anime. Since I recall her being poisoned by this group of bandits brought to life by Naraku with the Jewel Shards.

Actually I wonder why the scan didnt say anything about the Shards since Kagome usually always has some except for afew times Inuyasha took them and sealed the well. But that doesnt seem to be the case this time.

Anyway thanks for the cute chapter can't wait till the next one.
 
Does anyone know Inuyasha enough to know if they have a veil / statute of secrecy / mist / etc? I doubt the bad intentions ward would be enough to convince most normals of the supernatural, but criminals / gangs would probably realize what's going on and accept it. As for Adam, well the schoolgirls are hanging around watching and filming him, how long until he floats up in the air or does other blatantly supernatural stuff? It's not like the family asking him not to would actually have any effect...
Not really, Inuyasha's setting is more one of those 'magic leaving the world' scenarios.
 
You know thinking back on the show i wished they did more with the time travel angle it seems such a waste. I think they only did one or two episodes relating to it. I would have loved to see an all grown up or old Shippo wailing on inuyasha for all punches to the head to poor shippo.
 
Thermodynamics could go away, she had things too do!
to do
They were sold out everywhere, and in some places per-orders were through the roof!
pre-orders
He had just put them into a 'Human-Pin' with small sheers to experience the tragedy of Tractor life.
Human... pen? And I think that's shears.
Adam's silver armor with blue edges rapidly change to mirror the mans outfit
changed, man's
and as it is so cheep it will end up flooding the market easily.
cheap
Adam got to share the expirmental game consoles being developed
experimental
All those old, abandoned games were available for download and offline use for either a one time cheep fee or a low, continuous subscription.
cheap
The console was currently shaped like a Mellon, by the way. The actual forbidden fruit in the bible was a Pomegranate he thought, but it had been years since he checked. One of those historical shows mentioned it once, maybe.

Anyway, marketing said Mellon.
melon. And why is it capitalized?
It was a... quite kind of anger.
quiet
As for the house, Transparent 'windows' framed as the box like house with red 'bricks' warped and expanded.
"framed as" to "formed", transparent can be lowercase
You didn't tell me how exactly the breech in security occurred.
breach
Three types of per-written contracts
pre-written
although that one has stranger restrictions
strange?
I receive daily briefings from software that analyzes the current news through a custom machine I constructed, I called Golden Garden.
constructed, which I called the
Due to the default instillation of security sensors
installation
Bad news: It far more restricted than a person with powers.
It (was/is) far more (depends on context, which I failed to grab)
Her powers not only mutated her body, but have been actively hunted anything moving in the surroundings.
have been actively hunted --> have been hunting/actively hunted
And go yell at Squishy. In what way was 'My Little Pony' the best choice to protect him from psychic death angels!?
Okay, this is officially the best thing ever. And as a timberwolf, which is quite new and interesting. But a world with the God-Empress of Ponykind is a great place to get things to confuse the crap out of Worm powers, and Glimmer should have some interesting spells for time travel too.
but Luna could control star formation as well
I think that's actually only fanon. But okay.
He glanced at has paw
his
The fact that the two Pony God's didn't care that much showed the power of the local rulers
Pony Gods can be lowercased, don't need the apostrophe. Also is it possible to find an alternate wording? At very minimum I keep getting The Hulk references...
No idea if this was a cannon universe or not
canon, unless that's a horse pun.
Scootaloo was leading the trio away from the two possible lovebirds. "Rainbow Dash read me a story once about how strong emotion allows you to do anything... or something. Might have been strong motions? Or lotion?" Her sentence drifted away before she gave up. "We got distracted in the middle of the story telling somewhere. Point is, you can date a tree if you believe hard enough."
Oh dear. I was expecting this from Sweetie, if at all. One would think that Rarity would be the one to have a dirty mind! But the conversation is hilarious.
Triple Dang it. "Nothing. Ignore both of those. Those memories never happened."

Luna gave him a dry look. "If you only noticed two of the memories you sent me, then you are VERY bad at telepathy."

Dangity dang dang it.
Giggle. Snicker snicker. :)
Twilight twitched as she moved more components of her ever growing magical bomb. Too focused and too stressed to even comprehend that one of the leaders of her home kingdom was going to feed this doomsday weapon to child's house. She subconsciously WISHED she was too stressed to hear Pinkie Pie debate with said leader about what flavor 'Explosion' counted as when it came to baking.

Friends are important. Do not strangle friends.
This is so off-the-wall that it fits perfectly. Poor Twilight.
She nodded as the 'clubhouse' began uprooting itself for more marching. "It is impressive what annoyance can inspire a powerful mage to do when a friend will not accept 'no' during a time of crisis."

Poor Twilight Sparkle. Nice 'candle' though.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

The worst part, Twilight thought, was how RIGHT she was.

Pinkie Pie was waving her limbs wildly. "NO, that is TOO left!"

Twilight held back a sigh and shifted the magical explosion more the other direction. The frosting and candle frameworks had actually stabilized the entire mess, with the candle acting as a slow burn release valve and the frosting reinforcing the sides that were most likely to rupture.
Huh. It CAN get worse! :rofl:
Twilight Sparkle grumbled inside. Against her own desires, that was likely true. Magic was an emotional power, and on special occasions or dates could easily modify existing spells or events and had been documented doing so for years. She had wasted weeks trying to disprove the theory, believing that the ponies in the area were affecting the spells subconsciously... and had to admit failure.

Changing the 'frosting' to say 'Happy Birthday Mai' reduced the spell load by eight percent.

What the hay.

Knowing the theme that this raw power wanted made the act of stabilization far more attainable. A 'plate', more 'candles', little frosting 'flowers', more and more the explosion (while still producing oceans of nearly-uncontrolled power) calmed into a decorative foodstuff.

She wanted to kick something. Stuff like this was the hardest part of her 'Magic' cutie mark. It was why she was forced to leave the castle in the first place and meet new ponies.
I can really sympathize. From the backstory you've written, her talent allows her to ignore the effect of emotion and to some degree magic itself on a spell, letting her handle it all by reproducible and logical formulae... Sooo, now that it's acting basically on its own (seemingly MLP also runs on Narrativium), this would be really exasperating. Also funny.
Every time he ran across one of these 'thin' books he grew nervous. They looked 10 pages long and had thousands of chapters inside. Thankfully, that meant that these 'Huge' books were actually the smallest in the library, as the author didn't feel the need to magically compress the stupid things.
Huh. That actually makes sense.
The arguments between Mai and Adam about what types of plants to grow and how many species should be shifted around kept him entertained as he absently followed Twilight's ongoing directions... wait.

He focused on the blushing purple pony. "Twilight, I KNOW that is a stripper pole."

Her eyes were full of innocence. "Uh. Science pole?"
Okay, seriously what is going on here?! Stop corrupting my innocence! :D
And there was milking cows... wait, did cows talk here? Or was that just part of the underground perversion he kept running into?
I try not to think about that either. I'm fairly sure they do in canon, and that scene with the Ursa and the water tower was horrifying. Those are not sounds one wants to hear when milking a cow. Also, try looking up how they get cows to actually produce milk, at least over here...
Warning: I suggest not actually doing that because the implications may keep you up at night.
That said, the old pony had reacted to him asking for the recipes by trying to convince him that they were 'Family Secrets', that her granddaughter Applejack was single, and suddenly all the drinks were (while still tasty and apple focused) VERY alcoholic.
:rofl: Dangit, Granny!
although from conversations Mai had overheard this was direct result to how nice pony magic reacted to purified power.
a direct result? Also, you can probably remove the word "nice" or change it to "well"
Anyway, I now have several magically powered persona's in my soul
personas
Also, this has offically gone into "lolwut" territory. Funny, but also just bizarre. Not at all what I was expecting from a sidetrip to that setting.
she heard from the gossip that Twilight Sparkles had been spotted on the way home
Sparkle
That it would synergies well with 'Fire Manipulation', 'Conversion', and 'Transfer'
synergize
while this Ream which was so filled with magic would slowly adjust the spell hardware to better fit the giant clubhouse
realm
he is allowing the weakest and most extraneous sections to feel pressure. Temperament.
Tempering
Really, telling those cute boys that she had explosive flatulence!? Off and on for FIVE MONTHS!?

She didn't know what was worse. Those who avoided her due to those rumors, or those who were supportive!

When a handsome boy secretly started to confess to her about his own debilitating diarrhea episodes, it took everything she had to accept his condolences with grace and good will. And as bad as it made her feel, she couldn't treat him the same after finding out that he had a custom tailor to help stitch the massive clothing holes caused by his condition.
Uhh... IC, this makes sense as she also had to deal, but it's kinda TMI. OOC, this is still TMI.
Nightmare Moon an Narwhal were too busy cooing over the images and videos to join in.
and Narwhal
Also, that's just sad. Persuade thine mental gestalts to stop getting distracted by the cute and halp! :D
Spiritual significant things happened here.
Spiritually
But uh... bad people might catch on fire. Like... real fire. Not just demon people either, if a murderer showed up there might be a sudden torch issue.

Meh, should be fine.
Yes, this is fine. It's fine. Nothing to worry about.
With a gentle flip, he made a perfect landing.

"Squeak!"

He blinked. Looked down.

Alright, a near perfect landing. "Is this a cat toy?"
*died*
Then again, Kagmoe was a reincarnation
Kagome
 
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