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Huh, guess I've gotten lucky then, cuz I've only stumbled across a couple that've started that way.
As a fan, share any that start right?

I once read a novel where the main character assaulted a valley full of dragons, search for and found a village full of people, learn multiple skills and gain an inventory full of all kinds of rare stuff, and was still arguing that it was all a dream for like dozens of chapters.

That is like anime harem protagonist level of stupid.
 
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connection to her power glowed with the twinge of technological
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That's my main ship too but I'm hoping to see some stuff with Dragon too. Maybe with Technomancy involved?
I'd like that too. He has the hardware and software simulation capacity to host a fork of her virtually. He can host an instance or backup. There was a story that did that. The main character in that story had a friendship with Dragon, and had her permission to create a fork of Dragon called Nessi that among other things replaced the romantic and affection based associations with Colin with himself.
moral building events
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Let's go to the zoo!
By the time paper work was straightened out and he had the supply chain for his new product established, Adam had a full set of charges.

Also known as: Four.

Each day since it filled up he had been subtly enhancing 'Recovery' in preparation for his 'Exposure Tour', as Narwhal insisted on calling it.

Tiers of 'Recovery' now existed: 'Stabilized', 'Standard', 'Peak', and 'Enhanced'.

'Stabilized' would ensure that no further loss of functionality would occur, but wouldn't try to repair non-lethal issues. So no limb regrowth, minor bruise correction, etc.

'Standard' healed you to fully functional human (Or whatever average your species had). 'Peak' would make you as close to a high level super-human as one could be without actually changing from base DNA or human organs, etc.

'Enhanced' would use all the information from 'Recovery', 'Research', and 'Technomancy' to try and go beyond limits while staying roughly to the four-limbed model as possible. He may end up with extra eyes or organs or something.

He could set the level of healing, reducing himself to a near crippled state with 'Stabilized', healed or better with 'Standard' or 'Peak', or in very dangerous situations, go crazy with 'Enhanced'.

The next charge was a mass storage system. When he had extra resources (water, food, metal, etc), it would store it in this dimensional space (Squishy played with it, looked like a meatball) for future healing. It took a second charge for it to also store metal and stuff for his 'Enhanced' form.

So he was really ready to get going.

He was NOT expecting an old, beat up Recreational Vehicle.

Dragon was grinning. "We can't just take a cargo plane or something, can we? You are a new cape, and we need subtlety."

Adam sighed. "Road trip?

The vehicle floored it. Dragon whooped! "Road Trip!"

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Riding in a self driving vehicle was unnerving.

Adam kept glancing at the wheel, SURE that something was about to go wrong.

Dragon found it all hilarious, as the various screens showed. "I've scheduled pit stops at various attractions along the way, so even with just us two it won't be too boring."

He gave a wink. "You and I, m'lady? Hark, I hath been abducted by yon Dragon!" At the chuckle he continued. "So who are we going to be working with?"

She sighed. "There are... very few true healers of any type, and over half of them are actively working for Villain organizations. The first though, we are going to have you spend some time with Scapegoat."

He blinked. "That... sounds like an unfortunate name."

Dragon pulled up a profile. "His power is to transfer wounds of any type to himself, and then onto others. As an emergency measure, we have a set of already brain-dead coma prisoners, each with existing death sentences, to accept the damage he builds up if he is unable to heal himself in time."

Adam looked over the details. "Going to guess here, but I assume that while working with him I will be the recipient?"

Dragon nodded. "Aside from your amazing level of regeneration, if your power triggers on his ability it would be the best variation to collect long term I think. You would become something like a damage sponge."

He moved on to the next profile. "Isn't this a Villain?"

She sighed. "Yes, Lizardtail works with the Villain Accord. However, Accord will likely be willing to cooperate under truce conditions with some minor concessions I could make with him." Seeing his look she shrugged. "If you can absorb the damage from others thanks to Scapegoat, Lizardtail's power would be the next best upgrade. He can apply his ability in a field around himself."

Dragon pulled up some pictures with modified circles. "Closer is better of course, but area healing would be amazing if you can pull it off."

Adam frowned. "I... might be able to do that without him. Do we have access to any Rogues or Heroes with other area of affect abilities? If I stay in healing form, that may be enough."

She blinked. "Hmm... Well, the third healer on my list has a sister with a wide area emotional affecting ability. Also, it is in a area where a tinker friend of mine has set up shop. I was intending to introduce you two anyway." She nodded. "I will arrange for Scapegoat to ship down to Brockton Bay, and we can hit four birds with one stone... or something like that."

He blinked. "They are all in one place?"

She shook her head. "I had a few other people with healing similar abilities, but most of them are chemical tinkers or create biological replacements. Useful, but not directly complimenting your abilities." Dragon sighed. "Also, one of them is in the United Kingdom and is being a jerk about cooperation anyway."

Adam shrugged. "Could be worse. When is our next break?"

She grinned. "Buffalo Zoo!"

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

It was not exciting.

The animals themselves were nice, and we were technically in the USA now.

Basically it had a petting area, and lots of birds and reptiles and stuff.

It honestly felt a bit like a school trip, and Dragon had him put on a headset (with camera) so she could talk and stuff while he wandered around.

He even had those fake glasses so she could project a hologram of her being nearby.

If she was still trying to look normal, this type of stunt was not helping her case... But she was clearly having fun, so who cared.

He leaned on the railing. "So... we are in New York. I'll be honest, I thought it was was farther away."

Dragon 'leaned' as well. Her 'body' was toned, but she had more of a 'girl-next-door' look than athlete. "Places on maps don't always line up with our heads when we visit. I find places seem closer than they are when I am flying from place to place."

He watched a baby leopard roll around. This exhibit was expectedly popular. "So where is this Brockton Bay anyway?"

She flicked her hair back. "North of Boston, so Massachusetts basically. Coast side. I'm thinking about setting up a new lab there, now that I have made some advancements in my tech base."

He blinked. "Advancements?"

Dragon blurred, reappearing as a... sexy cyborg thing. Mostly normal face, slightly robotic eyes, an outfit a bit tighter than expected. "I'm still stuck in my base, but some of Dad's old stuff became surprisingly useful recently. I have been working on a full recovery, but at least with this update I will be able to do something like a full body drone instead of the more simplistic remote sensors and stuff."

He shifted his eyes away. "Alright, I know you've been around Narwhal far too long. I mean, I am glad you are wearing pants at all, but those curves are deadly."

She lit up (thankfully NOT literally, who knows how many LED's she had hidden). "Aww, thank you Variance! I admit this model was focused toward a friend of mine who has stuck by me in my worst moments. I'm hoping to surprise him."

Adam rubbed his eyes. "Well, I am going to take a wild guess here and assume you like this guy a lot. A whole lot. To the point of designing sexier bodies to pop over and say 'Hi!' lot."

She bounced her... she bounced. "Too much?"

Adam thought back to the man in canon focused on efficiency, who dedicated his life to trying to prove his own worth. Maybe he deserved a mind-blowing gorgeous woman surprising him once or twice.

"No, I think you nailed it."

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

They had almost made it to the edge of the New York state line when a large collection of what appeared to be combine tractors mixed with rusted cars acted like a huge Gundam and tried to flatten the RV.

'Tried' was the important part.

Adam had been stuck in the RV for literally hours.

It was... boring.

So when the 'Yellow' coated RV suddenly turned into a forty foot long Golden Kaa... it made an impression.

Seeing a man with blazing fire for hair and blood red metal eyes stare down at you from double your height... well.

It wasn't a fight.

Thankfully the tinker (Named "Track-Tor, the Invincible!") was not in the now burning wreckage. He apparently went for flammable filler when constructing his 'Farmbot of Doom'.

The thing went up near instantaneously when Kaa bit it, and the fireball had been epic!

It might have been meant as a final 'F.U.' to whomever defeated Farmbot, but watching Kaa eat the flames and grow larger kind of demoralized Track-Tor.

He was just sort of staring at the crater as we waited for PRT to show up.

Adam was just... unsure how to feel about this. "I thought only people like Mouse Protector went for the corny stuff?"

Dragon shook her head. "No, unfortunately people like this pop up fairly routinely. Not all powers leave you with a stable mind."

He had ended up catching four other cars before us, but those people were all fine. He had just put them into a 'Human-Pen' with small shears to experience the tragedy of Tractor life.

Yeah... this should have been mentioned somewhere in the canon lore, if this level of nuts was routine in some places.

When he found the Villain's Lair (Tractor production factory, why not), it was filled with various tractor-related gadgets and tools.

Why he had made a fruit juicer connected to a car-sized tractor, Adam couldn't understand.
 
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Down by the (Brockton) Bay.
This road trip was CLEARLY for Dragon's benefit.

He didn't even KNOW there were this many museums.

Also, he had been under the impression that there was only one 'Worlds biggest ball of twine', and in reality that was likely true, but there were innumerable 'County's largest ball of (Fill in the blank)' that they had visited.

Does this count as trolling?

Thanks to having significant disposable income, he now had far too many souvenirs. And a day or so of driving... ended up taking a week.

She justified it as having to wait for Scapegoat to make his trip down there anyway, so why rush?

All that aside, he spent some charges over these days on a technological front, both to keep the narrative of 'My power grows based on those around me' and to eventually prepare a home for either Dragon or a similar AI.

If she ran on the virtual OS, he would have a companion like this even in other worlds... and not being alone was nice.

So an upgrade to Squishy to allow interfaces from other shards ('Search' windows? Floating desktop from 'Technomancy'? Yes please!) was followed by a charge to 'Technomancy' to allow time acceleration in the hardware simulation.

The other charges went into improving the simulation itself. The ability to allow hardware creation via software in the simulation would allow a future AI to craft new hardware for herself without him having to be in the way. The ability for a software designed Avatar to show up in Sqishy's interfaces so Adam could see/hear/touch/taste, etc.

It was all illusion, at least until he could find some hard-light technology here, but illusion could improve the quality of life.

The ability to record tastes and play back those memories when eating lower quality food. To allow the body to correctly smell the area for danger, but present something pleasant for his mind. And so forth... It was getting to the point where he was considering creating an 'Illusionist' skill tree just to see how useful it could be.

Adam had vague memories of mind manipulation in a series of books, 'The Dresden Files' or something close to that. With nothing more than mental tricks one could 'see' through fog or frosted glass, ignore uncomfortable weather or clothing, pretend food was still warm and ready to eat, and so many other small details.

Then again, there were no weak powers really, only lazy or uncreative users. Probably.

Seeing Brockton Bay on the road signs felt like heaven though. Even after remodeling the RV, traveling was getting old. Out of boredom he had burned out the inside entirely and replaced it with custom 'Flame Metal' parts... comfortable and safer if they had to fight some giant baker or ham sandwich or something.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

The city itself looked high quality. Probably because the section ENTERING the city would get the most focus on not looking run down and filled with baddies.

Still, the quality of repairs went down hill as they drove toward the bay area.

Gang signs went up. Broken windows showed up more. People in hoods, shuffling, standing in shadows... well, sketchiness in general started ratcheting upwards.

Adam glanced at the empty chair. Since his 'upgrade', Dragon was able to just stream a video feed as if he had the portable camera, which she found fascinating. "So what is our first stop?"

She sighed, 'sitting' in the driver's seat. "First, we check in with local PRT Headquarters, get you set up with rooming and usually a lot of paperwork." She smirked at him. "Luckily, we got that out of the way already."

Images of the stacks of documents he had gone through fled in his mind. "Yes. Lucky."

Dragon chuckled. "So we are heading over to Downtown, near one of the High Schools. You can leave the metal in the van until we have to leave, I've arranged other vehicles to get us around while in the area."

He siphoned metal into a slowly whitening backpack. "Better be armed. Internet says this city is crazy dangerous." Plus, 'Flame Manipulation' made his hair look awesome.

Adam flicked his wrist, a bright blue Kaa hissing. "Yeah, and with a layer this thick I should be safe from knives and bullets from the neck down." A shift and most of his skull was covered in a helmet.

The eyes and mouth areas were actual flame, so he could see and breathe and stuff. The holes in the top allowed his hair to flame through.

...Shift the top layer of metal to lower temperatures... and now he was a combination of red plates with blue edging. Sweet.

Dragon jokingly sniffed. "Bit cliche, isn't it? You look like an average knight in that getup."

Adam chuckled. "How about this?" Guild symbol on the chest and back, add it to the gloves, change some of the flames to bright white for a skeletal look... Neat.

She was... less impressed. "Please lose the Skeletor look, He-Man."

Fine. Smooth white surface, blue square flamed 'eyes', red flame hair, space gap to expose mouth and bottom of nose. "Meh, should be good enough." The under-layer was scales of Null Metal, as an extra layer of protection.

Really, it was only possible to move this weight thanks to 'Flame Manipulation' in the first place. If he swapped out skills he would be way slower.

Adam flexed a bit... mmm. The outfit was comfortable, and the slight restriction against his muscles added a layer of something powerful to his movements. Exoskeleton, basically. "When do I get to meet some heroes?"

Dragon sighed. "Not soon. To hopefully speed up the process of power adaption, we set up a small apartment in this base next to the small hospital. You, Scapegoat, and a young healer Panacea will have rooms there and work together to heal cases."

She 'led' him into the facility. "Tinkers will be allowed to visit, since you already posses a powerset for that, but other than that we are keeping the number of visitors very small until we can understand how you will interact with their abilities better."

He blinked. "Isn't Panacea like 12 or something?"

Dragon nodded. "Thirteen, which is why the three of you have your own rooms for this test. If all of you were consenting adults, we would have three beds in a small area to increase power bleeding chances."

Seeing his shocked look she rolled her eyes. "Not that type of consent, although I am sure Narwhal would love the idea. Just... room-mates, basically. The current setup will be Apartment-mates, for the record."

Adam opened the door to his temporary home to see a man-goat.

He closed the door.

Adam took a calming breath. "Right, when you said 'Scapegoat', I feel that you left his profile images out on purpose."

She looked ecstatic. "Maybe?"

He sighed and opened the door. "Is it a mask? Because that is a very realistic looking animal head."

"Baaa."

Adam rubbed his eyes. "You all suck."
 
Why not sensual healing?
Scapegoat turned out to be a cool guy, really.

Still, mask aside, conversation was a bit lacking until Dragon led their new apartment-mate over.

Adam glanced over when the door opened.

Panacea was short, big-eyed, and peaking into the room like her bright white healing outfit was somehow subtle.

She. Was. Adorable.

Adam raised a hand. "Yo! You here for the healing party?"

Scapegoat also waved. "Baa."

...He COULD talk, but he (so far) has been using a dry erase board. It was... trying. Also, he wasn't sure if this was canon or not, Scapegoat wasn't exactly in the main cast.

But it was annoying.

Panacea squeaked before forcing herself to stand (sort of) tall and give a weak smile. "H... Hi! Yeah, I was told we were going to learn about healing and stuff. I'm still adapting to my abilities, and my family said this could help."

Wow, she took the whole man-goat thing in stride... made him feel like a wuss for freaking out a bit. "Yeah, come over and take a seat." A hand wave had Kaa slide over and convert into a mixture of chair and hammock.

Her gasp was satisfying. See man-goat? THIS is how you act impressed! "So I am Variance, I can use power-sets I gain from either dire need or the environment around me. This dude is 'Scapegoat', and he can absorb and transfer damage to heal."

Scapegoat nodded. "Baa."

Sigh. "Anyway, Dragon was hoping that I could enhance my healing power by being around others doing similar things. Oh, and you can call me Adam, Adam 'Adventure' Burns. No point in a secret identity when my head is on fire. Or bald, or paper, or whatever."

Panacea giggled. "Well, I'm Amy I guess. My family's team has decided to go open with identities to encourage Heroes to be more publicly acceptable." Seeing my look she shrugged. "And well... I gained my powers in kind of a public place anyway, so the secret was out before we could decide otherwise. My sister actually got hers during a public basketball game!"

She sighed. "I guess we weren't subtle."

Adam chuckled. "Well, I should get to meet your sister at some point as well. Dragon and I am hoping that being around her will encourage my healing to become area-of-effect, like her emotion stuff."

Amy blinked. "Huh." Turning to man-goat, she squinted. "Is that a mask or not?"

"Baa."

Adam pointed at the whiteboard. "He says it is one, just made from an actual goat with some tinker-tech to make it move right. I'm not sure why he would bother."

Man she was laid back at this age. He leaned on one arm. "So I slowly gain power each day, and have to choose one power-set to use at a time. How do your skills work?"

Amy seemed slightly uncomfortable. "I touch people and I know how the bits work. And I can change stuff." She seemed to close up a bit. "Not brains though."

Adam nodded. "Probably too complicated I guess. Not even advanced medicine has a full understanding about brain development or recovery, and the stuff adapts to basically any input given enough time. Can you at least understand the brains you see?"

At her cautious nod, he continued. "Then there you go, that is useful. You could help a doctor by having him take a brain scan or something and you can point at it to show which areas are damaged or whatever. That could save lives without forcing you to take on the risk."

At her stunned expression he held out a hand. "On a side note, my whole body changes pretty heavily when my powers are switched out. Could you let me know what it looks like on the inside when I do?"

A hand waved a board between us.

'No interactions before evaluations are done. Orders by Dragon.'

Adam blinked. "Ah. Thank you for the heads up, Scapegoat."

"Baa."

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Healing was... interesting.

A patient would enter, the three healers would each individually diagnose him or her, documenting their findings. A doctor on staff would review the works, they would have a debate (with the patient listening) about the best and healthiest methods of treatments without and WITH powers.

Thankfully the documentation Dragon had passed over was very thorough, Adam could keep up with ease. More surprisingly, so could Amy. How old was she again? Sheesh, overachievers.

The actual healer would bounce between Panacea and Scapegoat, with Scapegoat holding Adam's shoulder, passing along all kinds of painful damage. Not that Adam flinched or anything, compared to soul surgery this was down right pleasant.

On the positive side, Scapegoat wrote down that he had managed to get rid of 100% of his injuries for the first time in several years thanks to Adam's amazing levels of regeneration. Normally some of the more deadly but benign injuries would be stored in Scapegoat's body until a certain level built up, at which point he would dump it on a Villain or death-row inmate.

So Adam was both morally and politically a great choice as a damage sponge.

On a side note, his 'Recovery' power-set had interested Amy, as she was confused how his body parts worked exactly. She got permission from Dragon to inspect via hand holding, but there was no DNA instructions forcing his eyes to look like that and no organs in place to construct fingernails made of bone.

Also, in 'Recovery' mode, he had NO hair. The ability to grow hair vanished.

For some reason that disturbed Adam.

Anyway, it only took a few minutes of annoyance before he swapped his heavy and annoying 'costume' into Null Metal chain-mesh shirt and pants with 'Fire Manipulation' before swapping back to 'Recovery'.

Constantly putting on and removing gloves got old quick.

Near noon, he got tired of being a damage dummy and used one of Squishy's charges to permit 'Recovery' to be externally applied, another charge for it to be able to 'scan' others and ensure any external 'Recovery' uses would not be based on Adam's existence.

No need for sudden twins, after all.

Announcing the 'change' brought the heal train to a crawl as they were moved to a nearby lab for more detailed scans while he 'attempted' to heal some volunteers.

Said volunteers seemed much less stressed when informed that there were two extra healers nearby, just in case.

The first healing... uh. Didn't go well. Didn't hurt the patient, but all her teeth fell out and new ones showed up.

After only a TINY amount of totally freaking out, everyone calmed down and Amy confirmed that the woman was a picture of health.

Still, Adam insisted on going back to standby until the next day. He had already used a charge secretly to convert and transmit any waste biomass like that into his bio-storage in the future, allowing his healing to give a more magical 'Things just changed' vibe rather than risking having a human shed like a lizard or something.

An extra day would allow him to have two reserve charges AND give everyone a chance to calm down a bit. Hopefully.

Thankfully the woman was still grateful, as her dental history had been... epic. No wonder his power decided it was faster to just remove and replace.

A new day, a couple of less traumatic healing moments, and Adam was now participating and helping out as each person entered, got evaluated, and healed.

It was during one of the rest breaks that their idle conversation led toward contracts, and Adam found out that Panacea had a terrible one! Even man-goat agreed.

Adam knew Carol was not exactly on the girl's side, but what lawyer would allow such unfair legal restrictions? Such low payments? High requirements?

With Dragon's help and Adams insistence, the three healers and five or so doctors ended up spending the rest of days three and four drafting a generic 'healing' contract, something that was unneeded before due to only having a few in existence it could apply to.

Dragon liked the finished product, which required mandatory breaks, pay rates, and monitoring of minors until of age and more.

She convinced Adam fairly quickly to use some of his massive treasure trove to fund a global charity funding healing in all forms in general, especially in Truces and local emergencies.

After all, many healers were not exactly legit but Adam still wanted them willing to help out.

And... he had cash.

Piles of it. More than expected. To the point where he now had a personal financier agent who only had Adam as a client.

Oh sure, his products were doing well. Sold out everywhere sold, so far. Hitting the media by storm.

But no, his current liquid cash was due to some craftiness by Dragon herself. Not only was she selling the schematics (Garden systems being spread was the whole point after all!), but she was setting up agreements and such with local big-shots, to delay deployment of the Garden systems in certain markets.

The payments needed to shut Adam's company down temporarily grew in cost over time though, so one way or another Garden systems would be sold on a global scale.

But this both provided more income in the short term and allowed the still accelerating production line to handle the current and future surge in orders.

So yeah, money. Already he had his financial guru buying up debt, foreclosed buildings, and near-bankrupt businesses. Both here in Brockton Bay and up in Toronto Canada.

Money wouldn't follow him easily when he left this reality, so investment was the plan.

Anyway, the global fund and charity would not only handle relief funding after Endbringer attacks but would pay basic salaries to any Parahuman with healing related abilities, bonuses if they volunteered at shelters, clinics, or hospitals, and more.

Healers who volunteered for dangerous situations would gain automatic life insurance and healthcare, relocation of family if desired, and a budget if their power required certain items to work toward healing. Healing Tinkers both existed AND needed funds and tools.

By the end of the week Dragon was already pushing the right buttons to speed the new charity 'Open Hands' along, and surprisingly Legend himself endorsed the charity during an interview. How she arranged that, no idea, but it hit the internet like an explosion.

During the same week...

After a certain number of people, it just got boring. There were one or two who had genetic disorders that Amy had to disable before his healing could fix stuff, and only a couple of crazy moments. Although one guy was CONVINCED he was dying because his friends shaved his head while everyone was drunk. How he got through security, Adam had no clue.

Amy had given him a bright red, black, white, brown, AND yellow Afro after some angry arguments, but the weirdo loved the thing and refused to allow anyone to remove it.

Just... what the hell.

Once it was confirmed that Adam could heal on contact (Although he didn't bother doing 'Peak' or 'Enhanced' options), they introduced 'Glory Girl', aka 'Victoria Dallon', to hopefully convert his healing to area-of-effect.

It went poorly.

Who even knew what 'Capraphobia' was?

Glory Girl didn't have it in the damn canon story, he new THAT much.

Amy was still pouting at the closet. "Vicky, come out already! You're hurting his feelings."

Adam glanced at the man-goat, rolling silently on the ground with his board covered in 'HA!'.

He's probably fine.
 
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Hahahahahahaha scapegoat is hilarious got to say this through, when will Adam get panacea powers So he can make crimes against nature?
 
Adam's early motivations.
Hahahahahahaha scapegoat is hilarious got to say this through, when will Adam get panacea powers So he can make crimes against nature?

Pure Biokenesis is not going to be soon, since he lost the ability to steal copies of powers.

What is going on here is something more basic: He is building a narrative, a background, so other parties will believe he needs either dire circumstances or be around people with similar powers to get new ones.

Reasons:
  1. No one knows that he could instantly gain 'Bio-weapon' skills or 'Nuke the planet' abilities.
  2. Everyone will assume his limits, and underestimate his adaptability. Good for Slaughterhouse 9 and other psycho groups.
  3. Gives him an excuse to build relationships with people who have similar skills, without the whole 'You stole my nitch' thing. In fact, they gain credit as 'inspiring' his power.
  4. Programing alone can create infinite loops and dangerous errors, Amy's power is terrifying even to her. If he goes that route, I am sure he will be investing dozens of charges to include safety, the ability to test, undo, project future changes, etc etc etc.
 
Capraphobia.... :lol:rofl::lol:rofl::D

Good to see him planning around Carol's insanity. Should help, hopefully... and he made it global! Outstanding!
 
Does the Recovery power contain mental/brain chemistry component?
'Cause that would be extremely useful after trigger events...
 
Who even knew what 'Capraphobia' was?

Glory Girl didn't have it in the damn cannon story, he new THAT much.
Spend a charge so that he can make an unstoppable goat projection. Hell, make it so that he can heal through it and send it to the children's ward so the kids can pet the goat and be healed at the same time in between showing up randomly to say hi to GG.

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And was it purposeful that you had Amy be the one to try to get GG to come out of the closet? The irony.
 
If you have a loyal army, you are a ruler. Live with it.
Eventually Adam had to create a flame metal cube framework with flame-mesh curtains.

Scapegoat convinced him to add the 'Do not feed the Goats' sign.

It complicated everything. Now every patient had to go through evaluation, go into the goat cage, come out for consultation, read the message boards poking out of the goat cage, and then go through healing.

If it was Scapegoat's turn, they had to (again) go into the goat cage.

Victoria was on the other side of the room, sitting with Amy... who was basically treating Vicky as a pet right now. 'Everything is alright', 'The bad goat is gone', 'Your new crown is very pretty', etc etc.

Since Amy seemed to be having fun, Adam let it go. He had to take breaks anyway because Dragon would have documentation brought in at regular intervals. Charities took a LOT of paperwork, even with an awesome Dragon + Dragon Lawyers backing you up.

Still, the day was progressing along nicely until a comatose person was wheeled in.

Adam was the first to call a break and gather everyone up.

...Scapegoat had a 'paper' bag over his head. He was still finding this hilarious.

Glancing at the others, assistants and doctors left outside, he looked at his boss. "Dragon, I am mostly sure our next patient is not injured. In fact, I am pretty sure they are a cape with some sort of problem handling their power."

The random fidgeting between the kids stopped, and the metal 'bag' was fully focused. Dragon frowned. "That... was not planned. We wanted to avoid exposing you to other powers until your whole process was better documented."

Adam spent a charge on 'Research', focused on dimensional scanning. This ability would eventually split off when he created 'Time' and 'Space' powers, but 'Recovery' needed it to heal anyone with abilities safely.

He nodded. "I want to have Amy give him a checkup while I am in contact with them both in 'Research' mode. I will need some experience sometime, and this patient has family consent for healing already given." He frowned. "Plus, it may be his power causing the issue in the first place."

The conversation went back and forth a bit, and in the end parents were called. Thanks to Victoria's bickering Amy's mom gave in and gave permission... so on-wards!

There was a minor pause when Adam's paper hair and text eyes formed. Well, except for Scapegoat who had somehow got a marker to put a smiley face on his bag. Amy was impressed that, unlike my flame form, this one DID have biological parts in place to 'grow' more hair and fingernails. So... it may be genetic.

Neat.

And then the bio-tinkering.

Following Amy's power actions was... fascinating. She was not just claiming meat and ordering it to grow or move or whatever, that would be reasonable. No, her power was creating tiny, VERY tiny dimensional portals, so small that with one charge 'Research' could only confirm they existed.

And from these tiny space holes were shards of crystal, too small for any instrument or tool Adam knew of currently available to analyze.

Each crystal was basically a nano-machine, a tiny robot that existed only long enough to make a fraction of a fraction of a change.

No wonder she could reconstruct random biological stuff into needed components, this was new-magic technological wizardry. The power worked on such a tiny frame of time and at such a small scale that only a power dedicated to observation (Thanks 'Research'!) could he even detect ANYTHING.

He waited till Amy decided that this WAS likely a power issue and she had given up before speaking. "Amy, could I talk to you for a second?"

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Pulling her to the side, he gave a small, reassuring smile. "First of all, I want to say how impressive your ability is to me."

Aww, her blush was adorable. "Secondly, my 'Research' skill informed me of something your power does that you, yourself, are unaware of."

Dang, her face was tightening up in fear and suspicion. He waved a hand. "Nothing bad, Amy. Something... interesting though. I want to tell you first so you can decide if you want anyone else to know. It is YOUR power after all."

She took a deep breath. "Ah. Alright." She seemed to settle herself. "Lay it on me."

Adam nodded. "You are not a healer, and you are not a bio-tinker or a biological manipulator."

Amy blinked. "What?"

He changed into 'Flame Manipulation' and held up a flame model. "Yeah, its strange. Your power is to select an area, like a person or animal or whatever, and allow your power to create very tiny machines that make very small changes before vanishing. It explains why most of your ability is research oriented, allowing diagnostics and advanced knowledge of how biology works when it comes to future potential changes."

Adam grinned at her stunned expression as she watched the floating flame robot. "In other words, most of your powers are in the end a very strong computer somewhere in space-time combined with manufacturing tools small enough to do surgery safely. Considering that metals and stuff can occur naturally in the body on small scale, it may be possible through effort to scan or even modify solid objects... though it could take a long time for any change, considering how small your tools are."

He twisted the floating flame machine image, dozens of other flame models he had seen blossoming into flame and floating nearby. "Honestly, you are more a robotics tinker with major biological knowledge and talent. Basically a secret Tinker in disguise."

It took a few seconds before he realized that she was... well, not fainting, that doesn't really happen much in life unless someone is dehydrated or has blood loss, but certainly blanking out while staring at the floating objects.

Adam sympathized, the things were fascinating. Some were rods, some had noodly things, a few were all joints. No idea what each one did of course, but neat.

He poked her shoulder. "So... I know a Tinker who is really good at helping out tinkers. Want to talk to Dragon a bit?"

We had to wheel the patient out and pretty much call a break after Amy allowed Adam to share the new information with Dragon.

And it just so happened that she knew a local Tinker who may have quite some knowledge of small, efficient machines.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Armsmaster was covered in blue armor with silver edges. Adam's silver armor with blue edges rapidly changed to mirror the man's outfit due to how much more awesome his was. Armor buddies!

In the other mans defense, he took it in stride. "Armsmaster. You must be Variance?"

Adam took the handshake and nodded. "Yes sir, but you can feel free to call me Adam when off duty. I'm the one everyone is going out of the way to help stabilize my powers and hopefully make them more team-oriented."

The nod was... well, efficient. Not sure what Adam expected really. "Dragon has given me a high level summary, but I would like details about the original discovery of Miss Dallon's actual power manifestation."

Adam blinked. "One moment while I change power-sets." Go 'Technomancy'! Black nails, cyber eyes, awesome hair... rad. "Do you have an email for a large file transfer? I can convert my memories and impressions into other formats very easily."

Something like approval came from the other man. Not verbal of course. The bearded tinker looked to the side... Oh, the sexy cyber must have been using Adam's 'vision' over the last week or so to practice something similar for use with Armsmaster's headset. "Dragon, give him the account information we use for project transference." A near inaudible beep made him pause, as some software gave him a notice. "I mean, please. And thank you."

Dragon's grin had something like a motherly vibe for a moment before she was back to full bounciness. "Of course, Armsmaster."

Whom had already begun unpacking the various transport packages and setting up some VERY complicated looking equipment for scanning.

Contact, data compression, requested formats? Yeah those would work. And send. "The raw data, with transcriptions and info summary, has been sent. I also included a high level summary, but I can give an overview for those of us with slower processing speed."

The grunt pretty much informed everyone that it was 'understood, but I am currently attaching wires to...' whatever that was.

Victoria (Whom Amy had insisted stay for moral support) raised a hand. "I have been lost for like... an hour now. Actually, I'm not even sure why we stopped healing people."

Adam nodded at the girl. Her aura ability was nearly negated with all the Null Metal he was wearing, it considered her power as a type of energy field, so only his exposed hands and head were getting the impact. No idea how Scapegoat was handling it, but based on the laughter he wasn't getting a 'fear' response.

Adam waved a hand toward Amy. "So with the low quality tools everyone had, it looked like this brilliant young lady..." A nod, and she seemed to squirm under everyone's glances. "She thought she was doing something simple like changing people to be healthier. And to be fair, her power acted like that. But in reality, what she was doing was determining what changes she wanted to make... then a really strong computer or something like one was making tiny robots to follow her orders."

He shrugged. "But the robots are tiny and can barely do anything, so they fall apart. They also use some of the parts she is getting rid of, like broken bones and stuff, to help create those small robots and the healthy bits that are made later."

Seeing her still a bit confused, he glanced a Dragon but continued. "Basically she has a tiny robot army that helps people."

Vicky was wide eyed. "She's a robot princess!?"

Amy jumped. "NO!"

Adam grinned. "She's a robot QUEEN."

Amy shoved him. "NO NO!"

Vicky squealed! "We can get matching crowns!"

Her sister pointed in anger. "Don't you make me get Mr. Goat!"

...It devolved from there.
 
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Sooo, I reread this fic, and in the chapter 'New Brain, New Body' you wrote that the powers Research and Search collapsed/combined. What is the name of the resulting power, what does it do , and how does Adam look when he uses it? I would call it ReSearch, and I think his hair and fingernails should look like the screen of a kindle. If I remember it right, his hair and fingernails look like glas while using Search. It would combine the appearances he had with both powers and highlight the role Technomancy played as a stabilizing factor during the, as Adam fittingly calls it, soulsurgery.

What do you think?

I hope I did not make any mistakes in this post, English is not my first language and I am always learning. If you find a mistake please write me so that I can correct it.​
 
What is the name of the resulting power, what does it do , and how does Adam look when he uses it?
'Search' is just part of the job of 'Research', and as a child power it got sucked in.
It now explicitly enhances the 'Research' ability, allowing local data and scanning of objects and people and such.
Originally search had a spyglass theme, but the only real difference to 'Research' is a slightly more glassy look to the eyes. It is not obvious.

I think his hair and fingernails should look like the screen of a kindle
Kindles do not exist because at this time Amazon doesn't exist.
And 'Research' has a larger overall theme than just Technology, space and time powers will be working with it too in the future.

Good points, and don't worry too much about the language issues, I have a few of my own.
I will say that the overall plot right now is a guideline rather than a chart, but I want each powerset to be a SET.
Some abilities may split or join, but Squishy can handle that stuff, Adam has more interesting things to focus on. Probably.
 
'Search' is just part of the job of 'Research', and as a child power it got sucked in.
It now explicitly enhances the 'Research' ability, allowing local data and scanning of objects and people and such.
Originally search had a spyglass theme, but the only real difference to 'Research' is a slightly more glassy look to the eyes. It is not obvious.


Kindles do not exist because at this time Amazon doesn't exist.
And 'Research' has a larger overall theme than just Technology, space and time powers will be working with it too in the future.


Good points, and don't worry too much about the language issues, I have a few of my own.
I will say that the overall plot right now is a guideline rather than a chart, but I want each powerset to be a SET.
Some abilities may split or join, but Squishy can handle that stuff, Adam has more interesting things to focus on. Probably.
Thank you for the clarification and the fast reply.
 
Please do not explain how Shards do their stuff. That's like George Lucas explaining how the Force works via midichlorians. In my opinion.
 
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