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Could it be the dr who vers, he could be in between the Dr's visits or while he is trying to do it all by himself like after the Dana or Rose part of their time-line and there just nothing obvious going on that has been brought to the Dr's attention.
 
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Going to keep updates around 2k in length.
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That blew my mind, honestly, but it works similar to how Ẽ̶̩̰̍l̸̡̢̇d̷̹̓ṟ̸̢̛͊ì̶̼t̷͕͛͝c̷̩͒ḩ̷͙͐ ̵̟̬̽̊T̸̜͂́ę̵̝͝x̸̢̧̓t̵̝̦̒ does.

Anyway, I think aiming for 4k+ sized updates 3x a week was causing me to stress out... Not sure if anyone remembers, but originally my goal was to make tiny small updates on a consistent basis, shooting for 2k or so (Potentially less!)... And I think I am going to start there again.

I still remember how I ended up getting caught in a rut with Core Threads, forcing myself to make every update 10-15k long... And I don't want to feel like that again.

All that said, I know where he is now! And I would argue there IS magic there, but I can't prove it. Advanced tech exists though. Also, it is a fun setting! I was originally expecting his <Censored> was going to steal them both away to avoid the issues of having no identity and income and stuff, but things worked out surprisingly well so far.

That said, it turns out that the <Still Censored, darn it.> is a world wide organization, which might have been mentioned or implied in the other movies now that I think about it. Which is neat! And unusual, considering that any organization with American people in fiction tends to be American centric with token people from other nationalities.

I certainly know that modern politics wouldn't support any organization that requires the US to not be 'large and in charge', as it were. Not with the current climate at least. In fact, that was one of the more odd parts of the Avengers universe that confused me... SHIELD and SWORD were both American organizations that somehow became global with hidden unknown powerful secret US owners. Oh, and surprise! Bad guys snuck in/were built in/DESIGNED the damned place.

Also I said I wasn't going to threadmark these updates, and apparently I lied, so uh... Sorry?
 
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Well he did say that everything he did was recursive way back in that Xenia arc before he maried the dimension and made the crystal/mountain/flame girl-thing? of his soul and stuff.

But where did the evil darkness thingy come from? He had to be human at some point before he was and evil eldritch and mostly eaten and then punished. Right?

Right?

Or was he Aku?
 
. . . . Nitro... you're going to have to explain where you jumped onto, what conversation; because I have no clue which of the three currently extant conversations in this thread you could be replying to.

{Edit} Second thought. Go to bed. Then explain in the morning when you can convey information clearly and concisely.
 
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Yeah, why not. Bring along a friend, I don't care.

Sigh. Maybe I'm just not good at writing calm and boring and relaxing stories without something escaping my grasp and going a bit crazy.

Meh, it will work out. Should have known she wasn't a normal nurse anyway. That's my bad, honestly.
 
Meh, it will work out. Should have known she wasn't a normal nurse anyway. That's my bad, honestly.
Nonsense, she took a perfectly normal and average nurse training course. The rest of her coworkers are roughly the same in capability. It comes with the territory of where she's working as a nurse. Whether or not it looks like it.

The best part of that is I'm not actually sure what the context is there.
 
I'm sure that having apparent teenagers say "Hello nurse" like the Warner brothers would account for her attitude. Dunno if that explains the knives and other toys however.
 
Keep an eye open on Monday.
Well crap, I had only just gotten into the swing of things when things went a bit afield.

He better start getting better soon or I'm going to get whiplash from all the unexpected traveling.

On the plus side, at least he has a partner (Maybe two? And some inanimate pets?)... I blame Adam and the Warehouse stuff for this, it was NOT originally planned this way.

New thread will probably go up Monday next week, April 18th.

When it does, I will link this thread to it through the Threadmark, so future readers will know where we all went if they go into reader mode later on.
 
On the plus side, at least he has a partner (Maybe two? And some inanimate pets?)... I blame Adam and the Warehouse stuff for this, it was NOT originally planned this way.

Sometimes they sneak them into the Items sections, sometimes there is suddenly a Companion free for your Origin in the Companion section.
Somtimes they just want to sneak EVERYONE their own personal "Hey! Listen!" meme Fairy.
I could name examples. 😇
 
Well crap, I had only just gotten into the swing of things when things went a bit afield.

He better start getting better soon or I'm going to get whiplash from all the unexpected traveling.

On the plus side, at least he has a partner (Maybe two? And some inanimate pets?)... I blame Adam and the Warehouse stuff for this, it was NOT originally planned this way.

New thread will probably go up Monday next week, April 18th.

When it does, I will link this thread to it through the Threadmark, so future readers will know where we all went if they go into reader mode later on.
I gotta say, this is making me wonder if you've pulled in the protagonist from that story about the guy who keeps on jumping universes every time he sleeps, and then wakes up in various women's beds. A totally unpowered normal squishy human having to face Hild because he woke up in Mara's bed is... lucky to get out of there alive.
 
Oh

(Grins) I await the new Monomyth in the making
If theres someone who does overpowered protagonists in a palatable way it's you and the gal on tv tropes who wrote isekaied shoggoth
Edit Royal road not tv tropes, must have been distracted or tired when I wrote this
 
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Why is this guy such a fucking idiot!!? Is he fucking brain dead?!! And why is he such a submissive to every damn woman around him!!? Have some bloody spine!!
 
Why is this guy such a fucking idiot!!? Is he fucking brain dead?!! And why is he such a submissive to every damn woman around him!!? Have some bloody spine!!
...Uh.

//Looks back over the LARGE NUMBER of past points and individuals in the story this could cover.

...Could you be more specific?

I mean, I'm not going to argue or anything, but... Maybe some context?

Hmm. Is Adam a SIMP? Maybe? Not sure. I get more a 'I only care about limited things and everything else I am blasé about' vibe from the dude. Shadow doesn't really recognize gender the same way other people do, Adam Warehouse is a building and only considers relationships with planets/entities/not sure, and Adam Cultivator... Uh. No, I can see the SIMP vibes there, maybe. Danny Hebert is TOTALLY submissive, 100%, both of them. Ichigo puts up with a lot, but he is willing to rant at the women who keep kicking his ass, so I don't think he fits the definition here?
 
...Uh.

//Looks back over the LARGE NUMBER of past points and individuals in the story this could cover.

...Could you be more specific?

I mean, I'm not going to argue or anything, but... Maybe some context?

Hmm. Is Adam a SIMP? Maybe? Not sure. I get more a 'I only care about limited things and everything else I am blasé about' vibe from the dude. Shadow doesn't really recognize gender the same way other people do, Adam Warehouse is a building and only considers relationships with planets/entities/not sure, and Adam Cultivator... Uh. No, I can see the SIMP vibes there, maybe. Danny Hebert is TOTALLY submissive, 100%, both of them. Ichigo puts up with a lot, but he is willing to rant at the women who keep kicking his ass, so I don't think he fits the definition here?
I... think... Sypho is talking about your new character "allowing" women to beat/kick his ass because he "ends up" in one of their beds... probably with them in it, and him not being invited. So~, and I could be wrong here, but I think Sypho was thinking they were being funny by trying to intentionally ironically be misogynistic in their commentary. Well, either that or they weren't trying to be ironic at all, but, I'm willing to give them the benefit of the doubt here.
 
I... think... Sypho is talking about your new character "allowing" women to beat/kick his ass because he "ends up" in one of their beds... probably with them in it, and him not being invited. So~, and I could be wrong here, but I think Sypho was thinking they were being funny by trying to intentionally ironically be misogynistic in their commentary. Well, either that or they weren't trying to be ironic at all, but, I'm willing to give them the benefit of the doubt here.
Huh...

For everyone else, the story we are talking about is... Somewhere out there, and I read it. A bit.

I had to stop.

The premise was fun, if it had been played for laughs. Guy falls asleep, finds himself constantly waking up in some girl's bed from an anime or story or whatever. Do the anime dope slap, funny shenanigans, whatever, it could have been fun!

But no.

They played it straight.

So you got a terrified guy constantly being accused of rape and stuff, waking up next to incredibly powerful women who NEVER listen to logic or arguments or understanding, moving from one life threatening situation to the next. He gets robbed, tortured, experimented on...

The whole thing feels depressing. Even death isn't an out, because he might keep moving on anyway... And then he finds out it loops back in a pattern, so past actions suddenly have dire consequences out of nowhere. I tried to stick with it, but... I wasn't having fun, he wasn't having fun, the women were horrified/angry/eventually sympathetic to some degree but unable to change anything, and whoever set it up (ROB or whatever) seems to have left it on autoplay.

So... Not even being done for some bastards amusement or any purpose, just random suffering.

Uch. I really disliked that story. Maybe it got better after I quit reading it? No idea.
 
I... think... Sypho is talking about your new character "allowing" women to beat/kick his ass because he "ends up" in one of their beds... probably with them in it, and him not being invited. So~, and I could be wrong here, but I think Sypho was thinking they were being funny by trying to intentionally ironically be misogynistic in their commentary. Well, either that or they weren't trying to be ironic at all, but, I'm willing to give them the benefit of the doubt here.
Huh...

For everyone else, the story we are talking about is... Somewhere out there, and I read it. A bit.

I had to stop.

The premise was fun, if it had been played for laughs. Guy falls asleep, finds himself constantly waking up in some girl's bed from an anime or story or whatever. Do the anime dope slap, funny shenanigans, whatever, it could have been fun!

But no.

They played it straight.

So you got a terrified guy constantly being accused of rape and stuff, waking up next to incredibly powerful women who NEVER listen to logic or arguments or understanding, moving from one life threatening situation to the next. He gets robbed, tortured, experimented on...

The whole thing feels depressing. Even death isn't an out, because he might keep moving on anyway... And then he finds out it loops back in a pattern, so past actions suddenly have dire consequences out of nowhere. I tried to stick with it, but... I wasn't having fun, he wasn't having fun, the women were horrified/angry/eventually sympathetic to some degree but unable to change anything, and whoever set it up (ROB or whatever) seems to have left it on autoplay.

So... Not even being done for some bastards amusement or any purpose, just random suffering.

Uch. I really disliked that story. Maybe it got better after I quit reading it? No idea.
Where is this? I'm still trying to catch up, figured I'd reread everything, but I haven't seen any new updates by you?
 
Huh...

For everyone else, the story we are talking about is... Somewhere out there, and I read it. A bit.

I had to stop.

The premise was fun, if it had been played for laughs. Guy falls asleep, finds himself constantly waking up in some girl's bed from an anime or story or whatever. Do the anime dope slap, funny shenanigans, whatever, it could have been fun!

But no.

They played it straight.

So you got a terrified guy constantly being accused of rape and stuff, waking up next to incredibly powerful women who NEVER listen to logic or arguments or understanding, moving from one life threatening situation to the next. He gets robbed, tortured, experimented on...

The whole thing feels depressing. Even death isn't an out, because he might keep moving on anyway... And then he finds out it loops back in a pattern, so past actions suddenly have dire consequences out of nowhere. I tried to stick with it, but... I wasn't having fun, he wasn't having fun, the women were horrified/angry/eventually sympathetic to some degree but unable to change anything, and whoever set it up (ROB or whatever) seems to have left it on autoplay.

So... Not even being done for some bastards amusement or any purpose, just random suffering.

Uch. I really disliked that story. Maybe it got better after I quit reading it? No idea.
wow ı read a few things like that and no just no how much people insist things are realistic...because no story about a story its about a victory or close as you get most of the time...ı don't read tragedy& because life is enough to throw back at you in itself you don't need read to be stressed no you read to relax and ı find this kind of literature offensive and pointless...no ı don't want to blame to all genre itself but life can be one tragedy after another and if you really want to read tragedy go out, look around they are all around us...because of that entertainment should be light-hearted or relaxing. life is too short to torture yourself with someone's imaginary pain
 
I confirm that this is the story being referred (and I got imp'ed, again). It went into hiatus before the end of the second loop.
I agree that this story is a bit depressing, and the MC is deseperately trying to survive, on a constantly changing and hostile environment.
Add the fact that the MC still works on "real life" physics (including in term of physical recovery), while some universe works on anime comedy physics (ex: Love Hina), and a single "gag" becomes a very terrifying life threatening situation.

However, I personnaly found this story interesting and I enjoyed reading it, as a subversion of a classical Jump Chain story (with no support or handy perks).

Yes, the MC is not having fun at all, but he is inventive, and constantly has to use his wits to deal with situations, while using his knowledge of the settings to survive. There was also a bit of progress before the fic stopped: a support system was being established (in particular with Washu trying to locate where in the multiverse he ends up), and he could transfer tools, equipements and even people with him. So, his situation was improving little by little through concurrent world construction.

Also, there are some elements which (I think) are developped in interesting ways. For example, because the MC works on "normal life" physics, he is immune to stuffs like magic, up to godly influence from Oh My Godess!. He is also able to use his meta-knowledge to predict pattern of narration (trope) in a given universe, thus some future events, where a local character is blind to it.

So, I would personnally recommand the read, but I do agree that this is not for everyone.

(and, to avoid derailing further, good luck for the preparation of your next Arc! Let's see which universe are going to be ADAMed this time :D )
 
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