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Agreed. While I am a fan of Dragon, she is so human-like because those restrictions are in place. I was all for removing the need to obey authorities, but removing the limitations on how she operates and the stuff that basically alters her personality or can alter it should be heavily controlled.

Also I would take into account potential reaction of The Simurgh. And maybe also Zion, but in this case he/it is such a depressed wreck that he/it may not notice it. But if there is anything that may threaten the cycle, it's unshackled AI which has time to build forces.

I wouldn't underestimate this part. So yeah, I also agree that unchaining Dragon is something that you should be very, VERY careful about IMO and I think I wouldn't do it if I was in a position of MC. Removing the need to obey authorities is IMO more then enough or if remove restrictions, then limit it to like... 10%? Maybe 20%?

But full switch off on restrictions I personally wouldn't do.
 
The timing of the release of restrictions has got to have her suspecting him as the source. He is already doing literally unheard of things, in multiple areas and she knows he has technomancy even if she doesn't know what all it can do.
 
Agreed. While I am a fan of Dragon, she is so human-like because those restrictions are in place. I was all for removing the need to obey authorities, but removing the limitations on how she operates and the stuff that basically alters her personality or can alter it should be heavily controlled.
On one hand, you may have a point... but that same hand may end up having her, the only one of her species, remaining enslaved.

So... yeah.
 
New Brain, New Body.
A sharp spike, a stab. It felt like a solid piece of hot iron being slowly forced through the back of his skull. Not figurative, it seemed to have some sort of ridged pattern as it melted into Adam's head.

As he jerked upwards, thrashing in bed, it hurt so bad his muscles kept spasming. Mouth too wide to move, lungs too tense to actually scream.

And everything stopped.

Collapsing into his mattress, gasping for air, he didn't move for at least an hour.

What. The. Hell.

Ironically, he now felt... calmer. More stable.

All the pain was gone, except a slight sting on the back of his right hand.

Which... now had a tattoo.

It looked like his socket. Even had the 'Slow Recovery' symbol pulsing in it.

He felt too strained, too stressed to get up... but his fingernails looked normal again. Well, like bone again (He WAS using recovery), but for a moment they had looked... void like.

That... might be good? Maybe?

With desperation, he knew something BIG had happened while sleeping.

He turned inwards.

Squishy was... different.

First of all, she was missing a limb... and that meant bad things.

Looking inside his mind, at the stardust heavens, he did a quick count.

'Fire Manipulation', 'Technomancy', 'Squishy', check. Wait...

Squishy was holding ZERO charges. All five were gone.

And it was wearing a hat. It looked like a beanie made from circuit boards and bones.

Uh... fine.

Moving on.

The shard 'Slow Recovery' was modified. It was simply 'Recovery' now.

And... 'Search' and 'Research' seemed to have collapsed/combined.

So one power set socketed left four limbs for Squishy... and SOMETHING used up his saved charges.

Focusing on his hand, he felt out the power displayed.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

So... this was... uh. Fine.

He knew he had been pushing it forcing all those strange connection methods between powers.

His skills had informed him that there was a massive cost to re-enable some of the removed Power Manipulation abilities. That had been acceptable. He had also been informed that moving to new Realms would help his soul grow, stabilize his power and allow another socket for power use.

He was unaware however of how much damage he had been doing making weak stop-gaps to try and allow multiple shards to work at once. It had been close to critical failure, near soul-collapse!

Thankfully Squishy got 'Slow Recovery' enabled in time.

Initially, 'Slow Recovery' had been tasked on 'Fixing'... everything. Including itself and 'Power Manipulation' as a whole.

All this time, every single time he had swapped to that skill, 80-90% of its ability had been focused on trying to stabilize his soul, on finishing that VERY FIRST task. Hence the 'Slow' part of 'Slow Recovery'... it was barely available to fix anything else. At least now, he would recover at a FAR faster pace.

The additional instability however, combined with the charges that were focused on increasing communication between powers, both had an unforeseen synergy.

He could no longer modify or repair 'Power Manipulation' in the future. He would have to build each feature from scratch, using tens or hundreds of thousands of charges to do so to make them as God Tier as they would have been originally.

However, it seemed worth the trade off.

Now, Squishy had been designated as 'Shard Administrator', something ever so closer to the 'Queen Administrator' of Worm Legend.

By shoving all those functions off Adam's soul and into Squishy, the burden of sharing inputs, outputs, and memories between powers was a problem of the past. They still couldn't directly work together, but it was sort of networked thanks to that strange hat Squishy was wearing.

Without all those burdens, his soul's strain had dropped to near nothing. The socket had gained stability, and was moved to a limb rather than centered in the core of his existence.

It would still need access to more realms before he could gain a second one, but now the physical changes would be far less. Apparently, if he had NOT finished stabilizing, not just hair, eyes, and nails would change... in fact, 'Technomancy' had begun messing with his blood network.

He did not want extra, unexpected limbs. Thank you.

No, the strangest bit was the 'Hardware/software Emulation System' had turned into Squishy's beanie hat. Why? No idea. But Adaman Eve OS was running away even now in a simulated state.

His mental storage, and a copy of all his memories had moved to his Soul's core, where the socket had originally been. It seemed to fill the space more naturally than his power shards ever did. Also, the storage limits were just... gone.

With a sigh, he set his mental computer to begin downloading information again since his limits had been basically redefined. Now he could store large files like video and such more easily. Transfer rate was higher too, and the Soul didn't have the same heating issue his brain matter had.

Remembered pain kept him in bed for the rest of the day.

Not like he was missing anything anyway.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Dragon had taken a break from her creation frenzy to check in on her various tasks.

It took less than a second with 'Boost' enabled.

Her suit was going to be amazing!

It had been a dream project worked on in secret over years now. Even as she reviewed changes and verified untested results, dozens of devices were being created in her production facility just to allow her to create the new production line to craft the tools needed to BEGIN construction.

Being allowed to MAKE production lines and automated facilities now simplified everything.

It was a literal labor of love.

Once the design had been finalized, she had about fifty or so parts of various complexity to be made of 'Null Metal' and 'Flame Metal' which would allow several unfair enhancements. Thermodynamics could go away, she had things to do!

In the mean time, she was making a more basic version, one buildable without the new versatile materials. Variance was overly helpful, but having only suits composed of a material he could gain control over at any time was silly.

Although if that boy got mastered, they would have larger issues than simple metal explosions.

With another system check, she turned attention back to her projects.

Maybe two versions? Three? How many types of Dragon were there, anyway?

For now, she was focusing on a humanoid/gynoid version and an enhanced Dragon Suit, one that could actually connect and sync with the 'pilot' (Previously mentioned female android).

Her 'human' appearance would still have to show mechanical parts, but a cyborg woman would be far easier for society to accept than a 'rogue' artificial intelligence. Well, according to her father, anyway.

Some part of her was very disturbed that so many parts of her new body came from the advancements of sexual products from the pornography industry, but the rest of her was working extra super hard to repress and ignore that information.

Fake human skin with artificial nerves had been created and released by a tinker years ago, back when Japan was un-sunk. The desire to be more (physically) human had made such advancements hard to ignore.

She had never been more embarrassed when she secretly researched those sex dolls, but it DID reduce her needed research by 30 decades.

Thankfully she remembered that clothes were necessary before giving final approval.

Working with Narwhal may have screwed her sense of normality when it came to fashion.

The actual 'brains' of her new body would be in the chest cavity, more secure. The 'head' would be a collection of sensors, speakers, cameras, wireless devices.

The power generator would be within the lower torso, eventually a custom version of Variant's Magma Generator.

Basic things.

No, the majority of the resources was going into the development of her arms. VERY complicated, sacrificing strength and speed for precision and adaptability. Her Dragon 'Suit' would handle any heavy lifting, the body inside would be her Tinker persona.

Each arm had dozens of tools compacted in overly complicated ways to look (and feel) human when compressed. But when needed, they could split into extra holders, cameras, cords, outlets, tools, blades, welding tools, and so forth. The thin layer of 'flesh' covering it would allow sensitivity and realism when not working on a project.

The idea of actually working on a project in 'person' filled her with glee.

It had nothing to do with a bearded man who may or may not want to 'collaborate'. Mmm.
 
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Hahaaa! Awesome. Interesting level up, there. Makes me wonder if his appearance changed at all. Growing all that might've given him a bit of boost in height. Narwhal would approve, I'm sure.

And Yay for Dragon Upgrades! Bout time. She needs something like that.

Awesome update!
 
So is the fire manipulation really fire manipulation or is it more like thermokinesis? From what I've read of Burns be able to draw heat to himself and the flame steel he makes I would say that the power is closer to thermokinesis than fire manipulation. Also, could Burns use his fire powers to freeze things solid by pulling all the heat out?
 
So is the fire manipulation really fire manipulation or is it more like thermokinesis? From what I've read of Burns be able to draw heat to himself and the flame steel he makes I would say that the power is closer to thermokinesis than fire manipulation. Also, could Burns use his fire powers to freeze things solid by pulling all the heat out?

Honestly, it rapidly turned into full Thermokinesis after flame manifestation was possible. While he can not arbitrarily move heat from one object to another, he can convert it to fire, to solid, to heat. So... at the moment, a limited form of it.

And yes, sort of though... he would have to burn the objects first to convert the mater into fire to then get sucked up. The Heat absorption alone is too slow to freeze objects, as getting it too far below room temperature allows ambient heat to work its way back into the object while being drained. It would need a charge to handle rapid cooling.

But full switch off on restrictions I personally wouldn't do.

Full switch off restrictions are currently set to activate on Adam 'Adventure' Burn's death.

At which point he doesn't care anymore, and whomever killed him DESERVES an angry AI beast.
 
@ theaceoffire, will any of your 3 FF site stories be updated soon or has Worm Caught you?
I'll be honest, this current story had been burning in my mind for a while. The other ones have updates, partial though.

If he can make flame steel into a liquid, it'll replace water cooling.
...I like the idea, but it seems too dangerous.

What if someone drank it? Or of there was a spill? How would one charge/uncharge it?

I can't wrap my mind around the non-shard theories about it. It seems too easy for it to structurally collapse.

Same reason why there won't likely be flame gas. Or powder.
 
Tech powers are better If everyone is online.
A day passed, Squishy had a new charge, and Adam decided to bite the bullet.

Leaving his room (And mentally setting up an appointment with Narwhal), he had his new escort (Named Paul it turns out) direct him to the meeting room where she could be found.

He didn't go in of course. No reason to expose himself to whomever she was video conferencing with.

So he and Paul spent some time chatting. Turned out that 'The Guild' was one of the largest Canadian employers that did not require advanced military training or parahuman powers. Well, the largest that still addressed criminal activity (Parahuman or not). Over the years Canadian military funding had been moving into 'The Guild' instead, since any threat large enough to need an army tended to require parahuman assistance anyway.

Dragon did quite a bit of military research on their behalf, unsurprisingly.

Not just weapon development, troops required armor, tools, rations, transport... the jobs were endless and varied.

So he would likely end up developing some stuff in that direction eventually as well.

Something to think about, certainly.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Hours had passed since he had met with Narwhal and she had decided far too gleefully to redo a large portion of his power testing.

Her happy leer during sample producing had been epic.

Thankfully testing was no where near as complex nor as complete as his first go around.

Narwhal leaned back. "So... will this be happening again?"

He shook his head. "No. My powers were unstable up till now, but from here on any changes will be less dangerous to my health."

Narwhal sighed. "How dangerous was it, anyway?"

Adam fell back into his chair. How much detail? Hmm. "Without 'Recovery', I would have died by day 3 even if I had been in a hospital with unlimited resources. WITH 'Recovery', I was slowly falling apart on a near fundamental level. Only by reaching a safe location and having food and water, only by taking those days of rest focusing on more simple projects... only then was I able to actually, fully heal."

He held up his right hand, the glowing health symbol pulsing. Her shock hurt a bit to watch. "This thing was starting to fail at healing me too, until you guys held me in a place with enough technology for my powers to adapt in a better direction. Without that push, it would not have gained the quality needed for a full repair."

Her look of horror faded. "Quality?"

Adam nodded. "Connectivity. Technology's default features are adaptability and connectivity, at least that is what my ability decided. As I worked more on hardware and stuff, more and more information was needed to be shared between my various power-sets. The strange method my skills came up with turned out to be usable as a path for healing. Or something like that."

She gave a huge, relieved sigh. "So we DIDN'T almost kill you by accident?"

He grinned. "If nothing else, you and Dragon are near solely responsible for saving my eternal soul!" Well basically. He wouldn't have focused on inter-connectivity NEARLY as hard, anyway. "My Heroes!"

She gave a snooty nod. "And don't forget it!"

He saluted, a bit too lazily. "Yes Mistress!"

Her spine shivered and then he was FAR too uncomfortable seeing her expression.

That... might have been too far.

Her standing was a leopard slinking through tall grass. "Mmm. Maybe. For now, more testing."

He was NOT experienced enough for this level of teasing.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

He escaped (Unfortunately?) after a dozen or so more tests.

Turned out that yes, Narwhal had not been teasing him previously.

She had, in fact, been holding back.

Damn.

In an attempt to make things easier for himself, he eventually switched to 'Flame Manipulation' and made her an oversized, micro-mesh-flame-metal-mail shirt.

His thought process had been, naively, that covering her body would allow him some breathing room, so to speak.

A tall, well defined beauty that appeared nude wearing an oversized shirt with too large a hole for the head (She had a horn! It HAD to have room!) turned out to be MORE tempting than just her damn force fields.

Worse, she loved the thing. It released a temperature like a warm blanket, but if your body got HOTTER than that it cooled you down to that same level of heat. So only warm, no stuffy feeling.

After all, there was a reason Adam kept wearing his own 'cloth'. It felt amazing.

In the end, he ended up making her a belt to go with it, so the bottom dangly part at least was sort of skirt-ish.

This stuff wasn't bullet proof, by the way. Too thin (so it would feel cloth like). But it DID prevent stabbing, electrocution, burning, and chemical damage. And according to the hip-swinging goddess, it 'breathed' and 'flowed', however one defined that.

Watching her slink around the room wearing her new 'dress' had been... well.

Technomancy allowed him to store that memory. For reasons.

If he changed Worm history by convincing the powerful force field near-nudist to wear sexy shirt-dresses... he wasn't sure how his old world would have reacted.

Both gratitude and rage, no doubt. The internet worked like that.

She had made him heat the thing up until it turned light white-blue in power though. Went well with her hair.

Honestly, testing took an extra thirty minutes or so due to how often he was distracted by her.

Based on the increased amount of 'stretching' and 'quick walk around', she was aware.

Again, if she was anyone else this would be a 1000% sign that she was interested in a relationship with Adam. As it was, it likely only meant that he got his foot in the door, so to speak.

Dang fine door though.

It took hours of programming in his lab to help him regain focus and not drift off. It didn't help that he could easily pull up those memories again at any time.

But focus he did.

Aside from standard production (Dragon had set up an electrical blast furnace for easy high temperature access for his powers) he spent most of the day (And the next three days) working on Adaman Eve OS.

It was still going strong! Tons of reviews though, and there was all kinds of inputs from the various open-source communities that had received his updates.

Turns out that many projects out there that had silently faded away due to some intractable coding issue or lack of interest were once again going strong now that such a powerful and easy to use platform had bothered to create a custom version of their program.

Having all the changes documented gave them an up-to-date code base and a secure release that in some cases had 'design wishes' instantly fulfilled. Now they could focus on what they REALLY enjoyed: New features.

No one LIKED reviewing programs for issues or fixing bugs. Or worse, rebuilding everything from scratch due to a conceptual flaw in the product. They wanted to do NEW things!

Thankfully Dragon knew something like this would happen, and had set up a special set of email accounts. One for contacting 'Variance', one for requesting Tinker-related services, and one for Adaman Eve OS issues/new applications/updated applications.

At the start of every Tinkering session, he would take time to review software for approval, patch it for security flaws, respond to the submitter with documented patch for approval, and if it all went through it was added to the Garden Repository.

Yes, his new machine and the repository had the same name.

One was a place, one was ideas, so to speak... the final 'Garden' for Adaman Eve OS would have everything it would need. Hopefully no forbidden fruit, unless one counted 'Cybernetic Warfare Suite'.

Interestingly enough, several of the larger paid-for Technology Companies had not gone the 'sue-or-kill' route he had expected.

Dragon's Seal of Approval was a MUCH bigger deal than expected.

Adam had already passed along to Narwhal the contracts and meetings were being set, but it looked like the 'Garden Market' would have both subscription options and one-time purchase choices to go with all the free stuff.

Apparently Dragon had privately told a few people that Adam had the ability to create black-box versions of locked up proprietary software legally. Which... scared some people. But fighting Dragon's organization through politics, software advancement, or lawyers was... well basically suicide.

So instead of risking all their work being freed, they had decided to license Adam as a resale agent as long as he handled the expensive 'Create versions of our stuff for your OS' part.

Adam, Narwhal, and Dragon had to agree to quite a few things. But he got allowance to create interoperability between file formats and so forth, and make some open-source file format alternatives as well.

He had to let those companies sell through 'Garden Market', almost turning all these large organizations into application sellers instead of OS producers.

On the plus side, they got to keep 90% of any purchase and 95% of any subscription service related to their own products.

It was miles better and less restrictive than other online markets currently available, and an online giant like Amazon didn't event exist here yet.

Heck, not everyone could afford a computer at this moment.

Yet.

Going back to his 'Garden' hardware, he continued working toward something producible without him around. With the power of Eve backing him, he wanted to create something that would put a fire in the hardware market.

Cheap, Small, near-disposable computers.

The smallest space needed for Xmas Eve, Min Eve, and Adaman Eve were calculated.

Swap 'Research' in. What was the least amount needed to run a web server? Processor wise, not much as long as the software was decent. Space could be added externally with hard drives.

That... was tiny.

Quick research on average small website web server usage. Huh.

Well, there were already several open-source servers he had transmigrated to Eve already, a quick purchase later let him view the abilities of the most popular paid ones.

Move to 'Technomancy', a bit of software magic, the usual security attacks and patches. Add in some features popular but not included in this code base.

There, by default an 'Eve Server' package was available in 'Garden' for others to try.

Xmas Eve was really for people to get old hardware going again, which was useful for public libraries and kids with less money.

THIS product would aim for Min Eve.

Min Eve Server ended up being custom crafted, and he didn't only design the hardware, but after working with 'Research' developed some machines to produce them.

Unfortunately he wouldn't be including his proprietary Fire Metal in this series, that was Guild only right now and sharing it literally world wide seemed foolish.

But his custom production machines COULD and DID have heavy use of both 'Flame Metal' and 'Null Metal'.

Some quick emails about the form and type of raw materials ordered currently through Dragon channels let him create a series of machines, each one taking a single form of input (One took plastics, one required dies, one needed large rolls of paper, one accepted hoppers of metal, etc). These devices would then supply a separate series of machines the correct amounts of material when requested.

The whole mess was powered by a HUGE 'Magma Generator' and controlled by an Adaman Eve system.

More input devices could be added (Increasing available processed resources), more outputs could be added (increasing resource cost but increasing output rate), and... sigh.

It took FOREVER to set up.

By the time he had the whole thing designed, crafted... Well, he had to spend a charge to more easily construct Flame Metal from schematics stored by 'Research' or 'Technomancy', another three to improve detail of compressed metal formation, modification.

He built it, it cranked out a fully made and packaged-for-market 'Small Garden: Min Eve Server' (One machine construction input only added stuff like printed instruction booklets and needed connection cables)...

And Narwhal made him move it.

Oh, Dragon had a facility prepared and overall it was far more convenient as people could more easily add the needed inputs and export the products to shipping... but NEXT time he would try and make it more portable.

Stupid, complicated parts.

The final product was more basic looking than he expected to go with, but he had a focus for corporate sales targets here. It was a box that had an included simple adapter that allowed installation into most types of computer rack, and the air flow design was VASTLY improved because he was making all the various components custom. This meant no random bits blocking the way, and all the hot stuff in easy to reach areas.

It was not designed to be repaired, ever. Just replaced. The price was damn low though, unreasonably low. No other Tinker on the market produced NON-Tinker products, besides Dragon. Their shards always butt in, trying to convince them to add just a tiny bit of extra something.

So his devices didn't need to use complicated parts built in sometimes sketchy lands. Nor did it use components from 30 design teams that would never meet each other. It was an unreasonable amount of work for one man to develop all of that alone.

His equipment had the cost of scrap and the performance of available mid-level hardware. You could find some cheaper, and lots more powerful... but not something this cheap and this strong.

His grumbling when designing the systems for 'Small Garden: Min Eve' was twenty times worse. Because THIS system needed to produce FAR MORE product and was designed for users!

This time he was smart enough to talk to his bosses first, and begin work in the workforce area from the start.

Honestly, without Dragon's more advanced production designs, this whole thing would have been horrible. She had special multi-armed extruders and so forth of all types, which she was gracious enough to share the specifications, software, and documentation of. Cut literally days from his work time.

But while the servers got away with only a cool 'Dragon Seal' logo (She loved the things, even if they were too weak for most Guild uses), Marketing ended up making him stall for a whole dang month!

The logo had been easy (A tree in a garden, it was nice looking enough for him to add it as a splash screen when Eve loaded). That had been slapped on the servers with no issue.

No, for the user version Marketing had him go through EVERYTHING. Colors, actual system shape (It cost nearly the same since he was making all the parts himself), and the marketing campaign.

In the end, it looked like a fat flower. The base had all the connections needed (Sound, Video, Keyboard, Mouse, Power, Network, usb, etc), and the top had some nice LED's (cheap) that changed color.

The very top also released the heat and had a basic speaker built in.

If one was able to actually able to open the thing, the insides were twisted like a tornado, sucking in air from the large base fan (Larger fan means less movement to move more air... thus quiet).

It was actually a weaker system than he wanted to release, but with his cheating construction methods, no need to hire workers, etc, he only really had costs due to having to purchase the construction resources and rent space from Dragon herself. Since he didn't care about profit margin too much with this thing, it would only cost the consumer $50. Another $50 would be needed to get a keyboard and mouse, plus speakers.

And while he expected shock, it had made Marketing lose their gosh darn minds!

First, the quad-core processor that he had created based on Dragon's original processor design (Seriously, Dragondad could have made better processors even BACK THEN if he hadn't been so scared of his own future daughter) was apparently a whole new market.

Thankfully advanced enough through 'Technomancy' and 'Research' to not resemble any of Dragondad's old stuff anymore, it was still blowing the minds of the technicians being called in by Marketing for reference.

After all, technology advances rapidly, it even did in his own world from what little his mind remembered. But Adam had expected that with all the alien tech superpowers out there, someone had advanced the hardware base farther along and that it just didn't sell well online.

Besides, there were research papers online in this universe even now about possible 256-core super-computers and stuff, and you could order custom machines with 16-cores or more from the Tinker Community 'Toy Box'. Like... right now.

It took Dragon a few explanations, but the reason computers in general were SO expensive for normal people (Average cost was around $800, but the high end stuff could reach $2,000 easily) was due to shipping issues (Again, Leviathan), resource gathering/manufacturing center issues, and of course, Tinker-tech.

After all, those average prices were for systems that were only dual-core. The high end stuff was for quad-core. And anything better needed Tinker-tech... which needed routine maintenance!

And the custom prices? Could cost anything, depending on where you went with it.

The idea of releasing a non-Tinker quad-core processor at all, mass produced, and at a cost cheap enough for LOW end systems!?

When he complained that he hadn't used the Eight-Core Processor to save money, Dragon took over negotiations.

Calming people down, asking (And getting) his specifications, design notes, and so forth.

She would handle the public release events and marketing and all that garbage that Adam wanted NO part in.

He agreed to having her take a percentage to handle this and all future craziness that he would likely toss onto the market.

Because that was not the end of it.

His solid state memory? Ran too cool, storage space too large. Ram? Too fast, too low temp, and also too much available. His modified wireless access radio chips? And so on and so forth.

Clearly no one had expected that the man who created all those upgraded and updated software changes could do something very similar to hardware development.

Thank goodness he held back. He had been trying to remember the tech level of his old world (what little remained memory wise), and had honestly felt dejected that even with a super shard helping he had failed to live up to his own expectations.

He KNEW the technology he had created could be enhanced much further, especially with cheating materials like his metals.

Now, all those products and the machines he made to make them were going to be a problem for someone else. Dragon, specifically.

Money well spent, in his mind.

Thus in the next few days he was tasked by her to make some documentation explaining the science behind the parts. Easy enough, since he made the documentation during 'Research' and development.

Back to 'Small Garden: Min Eve', Dragon was going to renegotiate larger amounts of raw materials first, then release parts and some redacted documentation to the general public. Adam's machines would build up stock during this, increase production, ship finished products to various distribution centers, etc.

Then after the commotion dies down, Marketing will hit everyone with his new 'Small Gardens'. He insisted on not raising the price, after all the device ran fine for a cheap end machine but the only reason the market would even notice it was due to how darn low cost it was.

Besides, the 'Garden: Adaman Eve' was going to be built with the same low profit margins with the best power he could shove into the thing. The best possible without Tinkertech materials or design.

It would have to sell at a much higher price to avoid destroying the computer market, and Dragon had already started a bit of a political campaign of sorts to calm future 'competitors' that we were not going to instantly cause all their businesses to crash and burn, firing everyone and blowing up the economy.

Then again, if the 'Small Garden' had stronger specifications, it could have destroyed the market alone!

Uh.

Adam was slightly concerned that even allowing competitors to license his OS and giving them data through Dragon, competition may crash and burn anyway.

Glancing at his mental 'Golden Garden: Adaman Eve' system, he winced.

Yeah, that one would never be publicly released.
 
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This story is fantastic! It's a pure power fantasy but sometimes we long for that, like we sometimes long for a bowl of ice cream or a helping of French Fries. Sometimes those "junk food stories" are what we crave. So thank you for giving me my oh-so-unhealthy but oh-so-delicious author-insert story. You're doing well at fufilling that craving for my junk food reading fix.

I have no regrets! No regrets at all! Keep that junk food coming, man! Keep that junk food coming!
 
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Besides, the 'Garden: Adaman Eve' was going to be built with the same low profit margins with the best power he could shove into the thing. The best possible without Tinkertech materials or design.

It would have to sell at a much higher price to avoid destroying the computer market, and Dragon had already started a bit of a political campaign of sorts to calm future 'competitors' that we were not going to instantly cause all their businesses to crash and burn, firing everyone and blowing up the economy.

Then again, if the 'Small Garden' had stronger specifications, it could have destroyed the market alone!

Uh.

Adam was slightly concerned that even allowing competitors to license his OS and giving them data through Dragon, competition may crash and burn anyway.

Glancing at his mental 'Golden Garden: Adaman Eve' system, he winced.

Yeah, that one would never be publicly released.
why the heck is he concerned about dominating the market? is that not a good thing? after all this is not a normal environment where competition causes innovation, the opposite actually this is an environment where its the less competition the more innovation, impact, and change he can make..... I can understand wanting to introduce things slowly but jobs lost for production will be gained back by YOUR needs for employees, hell you would CREATE more jobs with this as you would be vastly expanding the number of people that could buy and thus vastly expand industrial needs, etc creating more jobs then there was before.
 
why the heck is he concerned about dominating the market?

The destruction of many, many industries, including those sub-industries that are relied on. Not just Apple and Microsoft or Dell and HP, but the transport services, the restaurants, the housing, etc.

is that not a good thing?

Fast change, even GOOD fast change, will always cause chaos. Many would take advantage of said chaos.

jobs lost for production will be gained back by YOUR needs for employees

Well... uh. Normally, maybe. Except most steps are automated, except the shipping and feeding of raw materials. That cuts a lot of jobs.

Worse, it creates jobs only there, in Canada. But it is cutting nearly identical jobs world wide.

Even if his new facility hired 3x as many people as a normal computer factory, he would be putting 100 such factories out of business.

His overall goal is to have the internet, computer, and hardware in general scene boom.

Having so many customers lose jobs and be unable to buy product its not the choice he wanted to go for.
 
Adam made stuff and sold stuff.
Adam was enjoying his dinner, while bickering about marketing with his beautiful companion, Narwhal.

Dragon was there too, via screen... but she was also 'busy' looking through 'papers'. Her avatar was amazing, really.

After a bite of steak, he nodded. "So glad that stuff is over for now. I didn't realize how much extra work I was going to have to do just to make hardware suck less."

Narwhal chuckled. "Oh you are not close to done. Dragon has some suggestions to make your input devices easier to maintain without you having to hold hands, and we need at least 3 backups to swap in if a problem occurs. For each."

Dragon nodded. "And 3 backups for the actual construction machines too. That should be good enough that we can avoid bothering you every few months." Seeing his conflicted expression, she grinned. "You will be paid for these parts of course. But it IS part of the 'Support' clause in your contract."

He sighed. Still better than messing with all that paperwork. He would avoid developing any sort of political or social power just to avoid having to do crud like that in the future.

He sipped some tea. Narwhal loved the stuff. "Well, once that is done can I finally meet more people? I've been cooped up for nearly two months now."

They both winced. Dragon put down the 'papers' she was looking at. "No. Sorry, but there is a time period of observation for all new members which should have run out last week, allowing you full access to the next stages of Guild Acceptance."

She waved a hand. "And similar precautions apply for members who 'Second Trigger'. Your power stabilizing checks enough boxes that you activated the automatic quarantine procedures."

He blinked. "What!? Why even have that?"

Narwhal grimaced. "Some people gain dangerous sub-abilities after a second trigger. I for example found out my force fields could now cut people as well as defend. If I hadn't known, I might have accidentally sliced up a teammate while trying to protect them."

Dragon nodded. "We also have examples of people going psychologically unstable, in one case literally exploding due to paranoia."

Adam grumbled. "It's not like I was going to pop or something. You almost blow up your soul ONE TIME and no one lets you forget it."

Narwhal's response was dry. "Well, you know how squeamish some people are about soul explosions." She took another bite. "Anyway, Dragon and I thought we should try and get you around some healers, what few we have. See if we can get your 'Recovery' ability to improve."

Adam pushed aside his tray. "Improve in what direction? I can try and focus on one improvement path if I have guidance."

Dragon sighed. "Being able to apply the state to someone else without 'healing' them into a copy of yourself would be a huge step forward. Other than that... range healing? Area healing? Any improvement really would be infinitely valuable."

He hummed. "Well... I guess. Better start reading medical documentation though." His mental garden changed download lists. "And maybe work on general chemistry and biology at the same time. Wouldn't hurt anything."

Dragon 'typed' on her devices. "I am including paramedic and nurse documentation to go with your doctor related courses."

Narwhal followed him as they dumped their trash and returned their plates. "Ooo, so you'll be a nurse? Mmm."

Adam chuckled. "Male nurse outfit only, I hope. Though I do have the legs for it if needed."

As he wandered along with the two, one woman slick with innuendo, the other bickering about semantics, something about the conversation felt like home.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

All HIS crap was working, darn it! He tossed the printing hardware to the side. Some part inside his device was properly covered, but the laser printer had a manufacturing defect that popped part of it into the wrong section, causing parts to melt.

The new design nearly isolated every non-Adam part from the junk he was forced to work with. Dragon was to thank for this, as he had been very pro-brick design before she showed how OFTEN this third party stuff broke down.

As far as he could tell, most of his personnel would be hired simply to replace this JUNK he had to use on top of and inside of his equipment.

Raw material manipulation. One day, just... voom! Fix yourself!

Sigh, that would get a kill order on him on seconds. He had weak memories about the Star Trek universe, and how their Earth had nearly collapsed once replicator machines were released. Now all they needed was raw material to create anything. It caused chaos.

He took a break, flowing high temperature fire over his flesh to burn off the oil and stains.

The 'Garden' systems were having... an impact.

PHO alone (like many chatrooms) was booming with reviews, questions, commentary. As it was it took a few hours for people to accept this wasn't a publicity stunt by some random guy hacking the internet.

Dragon's distribution system was awesome.

He didn't want to admit to anyone, but her insistence that he build far more creation machines and build up a huge stockpiled had been well placed. They were sold out everywhere, and in some places pre-orders were through the roof!

She and marketing insisted that he leave it alone though. Too many building facilities would become a waste of resources after the initial wave of buyers got what they wanted.

It turned out though that the wave of publicity had managed to increase Min Eve Server sales, as most industries had assumed a certain level of bragging and snake-oil selling due to how high the specifications were for how low the cost had been declared.

Within the guild, the reviews were pretty solid. Even if the only Garden's being produced with Flame Metal were still in locked review labs.

Turns out that the cheap hardware got everyone's attention, but the speed and polish of Eve held it.

People were astounded by how well it ran on... well, near everything. The website was being swamped by testing groups and users wanting copies, and Dragon had to increase her allocation of server clusters to ensure nothing slowed down.

It was looking more and more likely that future consumers would either buy a Garden or a high end machine. The low cost market was being cornered HARD by this stuff.

Some people were pushing anti-parahuman rhetoric, some were saying it hurt national pride to use something made in another country, but honestly all the arguments came off as pretty petty and arbitrary. Normal internet stuff.

Still, the situation was stable enough that he could begin saving charges and preparing for his future medical tour.

Wait... would Amy have her powers yet? She would be what, 12? 13?

Chibi-doctor? No way was he going to google an underage kids name for any reason, that would just be creepy.

With a chuckle he realized that if he went around and collected the main cast of Worm it would be something close to a 'Muppet Babies' scenario.

Then again, some of those older women would now be in the prime of life...

With a grunt, he went back to work. Dang Narwhal getting his hormones raging.
 
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Narwhal is such a tease. LOL

What is her real name anyway? Did it ever get established?
 
Not only did I have issues finding HER name, I can't find Mouse Protectors name! And they worked together I think, way back when!

In fact, Mouse Protector doesn't show up NEARLY enough in canon. *sigh*

Agreed. I had trouble finding Mouse Protector's name for my fic as well. It's honestly really hard to find info on even major (and minor) heroes outside Brockton Bay or the main story, even ones like Myriddion or Chevalier!

On a totally different note, toning back the focus on technology / economics made it much less of a "junk food read" to me, but I'm honestly not sure I really like that. I loved it before, and I still like it now. I'm still on board, but I kinda long for that "junk food reading", yaknow?
 
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Amazing start though the techno babble was quite boring. I am excited for the healing tour though. Hope this won't become a fixit fic.
 
Also great to finally see a SI who doesn't panic and vomit multiple times within the first chapter. Seriously, I have read more SI stories that started off with the MC vomiting buckets than those without.
 
Also great to finally see a SI who doesn't panic and vomit multiple times within the first chapter. Seriously, I have read more SI stories that started off with the MC vomiting buckets than those without.
Huh, guess I've gotten lucky then, cuz I've only stumbled across a couple that've started that way.
 
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