Great job on the omake @Crake, this is the kind of scene I wished I could have included but did not have time for. I love the feel of the outriders being a small part of the battle but crucially not an insignificant one.

Omake is canon (and I understand why you did not post it in PMs first given that I had just loged off for the night). That said I feel I do have to reiterate the rule about PMs for everyone since it is still quite new and it avoids trouble on any other omakes more controversial than just an alternate PoV.
 
Omake is canon (and I understand why you did not post it in PMs first given that I had just loged off for the night). That said I feel I do have to reiterate the rule about PMs for everyone since it is still quite new and it avoids trouble on any other omakes more controversial than just an alternate PoV.
I honestly forgot, though it reminds me you still haven't posted the one I sent you.

I will just have you post them though. I would have probably done the same with what I wrote except it was just an alternative PoV of an update yesterday, and could largely remain non-canon and still pull people into the conflict in a significant manner.
 
Canon Omake: On Black Wings
On Black Wings

Third Day of the Second Month 294 AC

The Burning One knew only rage for so very long. It had nearly consumed them to the point that even the cinders had burnt out, only a dim awareness of its right to life keeping it afloat, through all the moonless nights and the sunless days which would consume even barren rock in the end. Because it was fire, it was might and it was unbridled ferocity, it would fight and destroy and kill and consume all in its rage unabated, until even the ash had been swallowed whole.

When it had been called back to the world under the great flame and bounded by shallow skies, its rage was matched only by its sorrow. It knew as keen as any dirge its birthplace was just as the ashes it had swallowed. It had taken many moons to kill the tainted things, fire and claw and tooth shattered on endless scales. The Burning One was not bright with thoughts of why or how, but even it knew how to mourn if not to fear. The little one which had rode it had fallen to the other fire in the body while it had fought through it, but would never grow any stronger, only weaker, even though it had food and endless pastures to roam.

It rose into the air less and less, until almost nothing could rouse them to take flight again, experience the only joy it had left.

The last one to take the Burning One into the air was kin to the next, who had not many moons after breathed its last. He had twisted and spat and cried its rage at their new kin, and then bowed their head. For the first time in long ages the Burning One had its strength, its freedom to sore the skies and a worthy bond to cling onto, to keep its focus and anticipate clashes in the sky and death in the air.

It knew no concept of war, and only a vague semblance of what battle meant. Dimly it knew that was entrusted to the bonded, kin in not form but blood. It need only carry them to triumph of blood and bright claws.

Except the one he was bound to could take to the air on their own wings, was of form with the Burning One yet smaller in size, limited in ferocity, and they were not accustomed to the way of death in the sky, of tooth and claw and endless rage, aimed all to hurt and wound and crush and kill.

But the bound had one thing to its advantage. They were stubborn. And they would not give up no matter how much the mighty one struggled, which might have meant peril for all else.

Hours they fought the Burning One, and time after time every wound added was a wound erased, where they only grew more tired. Their rage was eventually spent.

It was content. This one will do, some instinct sang to them.

And so it was.

***​

The Burning One lifted its head at the approach of the bonded kin. They raised a wingless limb and rested their claw upon the beast's scaled nose.

"It's ironic," the bound one said, making an odd sound with their throat, almost too quiet to hear, but the Burning One had keen senses. "You are the dread of every Lord who ever perked up during history lessons as boys, to learn of the forging of the Seven Kingdoms. The terror which burned itself into the consciousness of millions over the Narrow Sea, and I only brought you back after I made you obsolete."

The Burning One's throat rumbled at that, it did not understand much of the sounds they had made, but the bond made the intent of their smaller kin known. Few would dare take them lightly, fewer still would survive an encounter standing this close. But they were safe, probably safer this close than further apart. It would die before losing another, until long past its rage was spent and the earth itself had ground to dust. It had come back from the sunless lands before, perhaps it would claw its way back a second time and burn what remained.

The bound kin looked up at the Burning One, almost wistfully. Then a playful glint entered their eye. "We don't need to terrorize the world together, three centuries and senseless slaughter and enough of that to go around. But we can fly, can't we, Balerion?"

Balerion hustled forward eagerly at the word fly, it knew that one well, and he jostled their bonded kin until they would mount them and then they would ride and claim the skies. The odd sound was made by the small kin, shoulders shaking and wingless limbs batting them off fruitlessly. "Alright, fine, you brute," they conceded, "I know when words are better spent elsewhere."

They didn't fly nearly enough to sate the Burning One, but in the long hours they did, they ruled the skies, not merely claimed them, and all who turned their gaze upon them knew it so, as was right.

And for a brief time the rage of the Burning One was replaced by the joy of the Black One again.

Its rage was spent, and it was content.

OOC: The only thing here that is mine is the title. The rest is a great Balerion PoVfrom @Crake.
 
On Black Wings

Third Day of the Second Month 294 AC

The Burning One knew only rage for so very long. It had nearly consumed them to the point that even the cinders had burnt out, only a dim awareness of its right to life keeping it afloat, through all the moonless nights and the sunless days which would consume even barren rock in the end. Because it was fire, it was might and it was unbridled ferocity, it would fight and destroy and kill and consume all in its rage unabated, until even the ash had been swallowed whole.

When it had been called back to the world under the great flame and bounded by shallow skies, its rage was matched only by its sorrow. It knew as keen as any dirge its birthplace was just as the ashes it had swallowed. It had taken many moons to kill the tainted things, fire and claw and tooth shattered on endless scales. The Burning One was not bright with thoughts of why or how, but even it knew how to mourn if not to fear. The little one which had rode it had fallen to the other fire in the body while it had fought through it, but would never grow any stronger, only weaker, even though it had food and endless pastures to roam.

It rose into the air less and less, until almost nothing could rouse them to take flight again, experience the only joy it had left.

The last one to take the Burning One into the air was kin to the next, who had not many moons after breathed its last. He had twisted and spat and cried its rage at their new kin, and then bowed their head. For the first time in long ages the Burning One had its strength, its freedom to sore the skies and a worthy bond to cling onto, to keep its focus and anticipate clashes in the sky and death in the air.

It knew no concept of war, and only a vague semblance of what battle meant. Dimly it knew that was entrusted to the bonded, kin in not form but blood. It need only carry them to triumph of blood and bright claws.

Except the one he was bound to could take to the air on their own wings, was of form with the Burning One yet smaller in size, limited in ferocity, and they were not accustomed to the way of death in the sky, of tooth and claw and endless rage, aimed all to hurt and wound and crush and kill.

But the bound had one thing to its advantage. They were stubborn. And they would not give up no matter how much the mighty one struggled, which might have meant peril for all else.

Hours they fought the Burning One, and time after time every wound added was a wound erased, where they only grew more tired. Their rage was eventually spent.

It was content. This one will do, some instinct sang to them.

And so it was.

***​

The Burning One lifted its head at the approach of the bonded kin. They raised a wingless limb and rested their claw upon the beast's scaled nose.

"It's ironic," the bound one said, making an odd sound with their throat, almost too quiet to hear, but the Burning One had keen senses. "You are the dread of every Lord who ever perked up during history lessons as boys, to learn of the forging of the Seven Kingdoms. The terror which burned itself into the consciousness of millions over the Narrow Sea, and I only brought you back after I made you obsolete."

The Burning One's throat rumbled at that, it did not understand much of the sounds they had made, but the bond made the intent of their smaller kin known. Few would dare take them lightly, fewer still would survive an encounter standing this close. But they were safe, probably safer this close than further apart. It would die before losing another, until long past its rage was spent and the earth itself had ground to dust. It had come back from the sunless lands before, perhaps it would claw its way back a second time and burn what remained.

The bound kin looked up at the Burning One, almost wistfully. Then a playful glint entered their eye. "We don't need to terrorize the world together, three centuries and senseless slaughter and enough of that to go around. But we can fly, can't we, Balerion?"

Balerion hustled forward eagerly at the word fly, it knew that one well, and he jostled their bonded kin until they would mount them and then they would ride and claim the skies. The odd sound was made by the small kin, shoulders shaking and wingless limbs batting them off fruitlessly. "Alright, fine, you brute," they conceded, "I know when words are better spent elsewhere."

They didn't fly nearly enough to sate the Burning One, but in the long hours they did, they ruled the skies, not merely claimed them, and all who turned their gaze upon them knew it so, as was right.

And for a brief time the rage of the Burning One was replaced by the joy of the Black One again.

Its rage was spent, and it was content.

OOC: The only thing here that is mine is the title. The rest is a great Balerion PoVfrom @Crake.
This is Balerion the good boy.
 
Wait, is this Balerion the Black Dread of Aegon the Conqueror? Or Balerion, Chief God of the Valyrian Pantheon?

And who is it speaking to? Viserys?

Yoda: "A dense retarded fool, you are."
 
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Adhoc vote count started by DragonParadox on Jul 28, 2020 at 6:51 AM, finished with 67 posts and 16 votes.

  • [X] Request a Moonchaser and it's complement of Wyverns and Manticores to unleash a full scale bombardment upon the Bandersnatch using Steam Cannons and Beetle Bombs (being Constructs they're unaffected by the AMF).
    -[X] Heralds will use their Fireball SLAs and mages will use their Long-range spells to soften up the opposition before our forces move to closer range.
    [X] Request a Moonchaser and it's complement of Wyverns and Manticores to unleash a full scale bombardment upon the Bandersnatch using Steam Cannons and Beetle Bombs (being Constructs they're unaffected by the AMF).
    -[X] Heralds will use their Fireball SLAs and mages will use their Long-range spells to soften up the opposition before our forces move to closer range.
 
Interlude DCCCLV: Battle of the Dead Fields, Part Three
Battle of the Dead Fields, Part Three

Nineteenth Day of the Second Month 294 AC

Three great ships moved above the battlefield, like stars of steel and adamantine in the dying light far above the reach of mortal magic they moved to smite Namaaru's foe with artifice and arcane fire, but these realms were not theirs alone and uncontested. Three and a half centuries past they had been the domain of the Great Sky Smith Anu-Simung, and though he had perished with the death of his children he was not gone. In death they rose, in death he dwelt, a thing of rage, spite and ruin.

This Moonsong knew as she motioned for her ship to advance above the field of battle for she too was a god-thing as every one of the fey kindred. She knew herself young still and still only a glimmer upon time's ever-flowing waters, but she did not balk for she knew also that only daring could seize the day. "Ready the launchers, don't bother with any magic tricks. Load up the little brother bombs."

Grim though the hour may be there was the odd snicker on the bridge, recalling Moonsong's explanation for why she called beetle bombs that. 'They kind of look like you, don't they?' she had asked the bulabar engineer. 'Only difference is that they cause havoc in a predictable way, not as much fun as the real deal.'

Part of Moonsong, and it was a very small part, worried that the queen of Sathar would take ill to her bombing her foes into oblivion. Namaaru was a little daunting in that 'corpse that didn't have the sense to stay dead' way that was usually sort of pathetic, and once in a great while genuinely frightful. Alas, she did not have long to consider the implications, for as the ships came above the advancing heart of the enemy formation and began to open their bomb bay doors a massive ribbon of the cold black cloud detached from the storm advancing on Sallosh and enveloped the three ships.

Not a ribbon, an arm, they fey captain realized, a chill running down her spine.

"What the Hells is going on down there?" she asked her navigator.

"Looks like a normal storm, Capt'n," the azer sorcerer replied. "Can't see for shit and there's a sort of undirected magic all over the place. What me to take us lower?"

"No attacks? Nothing going all twisty with the magic?" Moonsong asked shifting in her seat. It didn't make sense. Why make the effort to get them in this damn cloud if all it would have taken to get out again would have been to dive? Unless they wanted her to go down...

One by one her officers confirmed that the Moonchaser and her sister ships seemed to be in the midst of an entirely mundane thundercloud. While some lightning strikes had arched across the hull they counted less than gnat bites to the skyships.

"Do a clock check," the captain said suddenly, an odd thing to ask in the middle of a battle even for her. A 'clock check' refereed to the presence of high fidelity magical clocks on various levels of the ship to check for temporal anomalies in the stranger places of the other planes. The fey could read the question reflected in may pairs of eyes. Not something they would have to worry about under the sun of the mortal world, surely?

There was no sun in sight.

Confusion gave ways to growing worry. "Clocks are running a few fractions of a heartbeat... er, what'd they call them, seconds, slower on the lower deck," the ship's mage said shaken by the response she got from the monitors.

"If we dive through this it will be next week by the time we break out," Moonsong said cursing their enemy's wit, even as she grudgingly allowed that it was a trick worthy of a fey lord.

What do the Moonchasers do?

[] Try to clear away the clouds with their weather stations

[] Go up instead of down and then loop around the edge of the cloud, that should in theory get them back to the battle faster so long as the temporal anomaly is consistent

[] Call for help
-[] Write in


OOC: Moonsong just squeaked by on her checks, with a +2 for this sort of trick being very fey-like and thus familiar to her.
 
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Option 2 sounds crazy enough to work, but really only because a Fey is involved and narrative logic is in effect.

If the other two captains were in charge, I am guessing lack of "fey wisdom" would make them crash land into a God's divine realm or something equally ridiculous.
 
Battle of the Dead Fields, Part Three


Nineteenth Day of the Second Month 294 AC

Three great ships moved moved above the battlefield, like stars of steel and adamant in the dying light, far above the reach of mortal magic they moved to smite Namaaru's foe with artifice and arcane fire, but these realms were not theirs alone and uncontested. Three and a half centuries past, they had been the domain of the Great Sky Smith Anu-Simung and though he had perished with the death of his children, he was not gone. In death they rose, in death he dwelt, a thing of rage and spite and ruin.

This Moonsong knew as she motioned for her ship to advance above the field of battle, for she too was a god-thing as were every one of her fey kindred. She knew herself young still and yet a glimmer upon time's ever-flowing waters, but she did not balk for she knew also that only daring could seize the day. "Ready the launchers, don't bother with any magic tricks. Load up the little brother bombs."

Grim though the hour may be, there were the odd snickers on the bridge recalling Moonsong's explanation for why she called Beetle Bombs that. 'They kind of look like you, don't they?' she had asked the bulabar engineer. 'Only difference is they cause havoc in a predictable way, not as much fun as the real deal.'

Part of Moonsong, and it was a very small part, worried that the queen of Sathar would take ill to her bombing her foes into oblivion. Namaaru was a little daunting in that 'corpse that didn't have the sense to stay dead' way that was usually sort of pathetic, and once in a great while genuinely frightful. Alas, she did not have long to consider the implications, for as the ships came above the advancing heart of the enemy formation and began to open the bomb hatches a massive ribbon of the cold black cloud detached from the storm advancing on Sallosh and enveloped the three ships.

Not a ribbon, an arm, they fey captain realized, a chill running down her spine.

"What the hells is going on down there?" she asked her navigator.

"Looks like a normal storm capt'n," the Azer sorcerer replied. "Can't see for shit and there's sort of undirected magic all over the place. Want me to take us lower?"

"No attacks? Nothing going all twisty with the magic?" Moonsong asked, shifting in her seat. It didn't make sense. Why make the effort to get them in this damn cloud if all it would have taken to get out again would have been to dive? Unless they wanted her to go down...

One by one her officers confirmed that the Moonchaser and her sister ships seemed to be in the midst of an entirely mundane thundercloud. While some lightning strikes had arched across the hull they counted less than gnat bites to the skyship.

"Do a clock check," the captain said suddenly. An odd thing to ask in the middle of a battle, even for her, a 'clock check' referred to the presence of high fidelity magical clocks on various levels of the ship to check for temporal anomaly in the stranger places of the other planes. The fey could read the question reflected in may pairs of eyes? Not something they would have to worry about under the sun of the mortal world surely?

There was no sun in sight.

Confusion gave ways to growing worry. "Clocks are running a few fractions of a heartbeat... er, what'd they call them seconds, slower on the lower deck," the ship's mage said, shaken by the response she got from the monitors.

"If we dive through this it will be next week by the time we break out," Moonsong said, cursing their enemy's wit even as she grudgingly allowed that it was a trick worthy of a fey lord.

What do the Moonchasers do?

[] Try to clear away the clouds with their weather stations

[] Go up instead of down and then loop around the edge of the cloud. That should in theory get them back to the battle faster, so long as the temporal anomaly is consistent

[] Hail for help
-[] Write in


OOC: Moonsong just squeaked by on her checks, with a +2 for this sort of trick being very fey-like and thus familiar to her. Not yet edited.
Here's an edited version of the chapter, DP.
 
I don't suppose this time-dilating effect is something of mortal-wrought nature and reproducible given we get the mages that made it?
 
A god is involved, what would give you the impression any of this is the work of mortal artifice?

Edit: Also, we already know limited time dilation is possible. It's also just notoriously unstable. I'm practically expecting the Lannisters to have created a temporal anomaly out of sheer ignorance and desperation to create an advantage using it.
 
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I'm fully expecting Tywin to try to turn westeros into a smoking crater just to stop Viserys from having any of it.
He'll try. I think you underestimate the scale of magic necessary to have even a flea's chance of meaningfully effecting an entire continent. Maybe he could cause catastrophic damage to a single Kingdom.

Edit: Of course if he cuts a deal with Asmodeus, all bets are basically off. Nothing says world-ending threat like "surprise infernal invasion!"
 
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