@DragonParadox Something I noticed during Valaena's 'exact words' response to the Emperors magical advisor.
The reason I really liked this scene, and didn't know if it was intentional on your part or not, but it shows two character moments at the same time.
For Valaena, it shows she's cannier than even she gives herself credit for, because "personal interests" clause could broadly have been interpreted as a veiled threat, and indeed would have been. We are after all a practioner of "don't make me come over there" politics as much as the much nicer kind we take part in with the greater powers in the Planes.
The second was that the magical advisor was relieved that Bu Gai didn't just pick a fight with us by asking for something which is, without the context of our strength, was really audacious. And you didn't show Bu Gai's reaction to the threat, giving the impression if Bu Gai didn't take the dragonlord girl seriously before, he does now.
Whereas the advisor doesn't have a head for that kind of subtlety.