Crake
I AM THE STORM THAT IS APPROACHING
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We both get eachother's points here, I think, my problem is that the quoted bit, while true, means that your plan depends on the inevitable failure. It feels odd/bad to rely on the destruction of the Imperium.
Also, I don't want moonsong to have a reason to ever desire to destroy the Imperium, as that would be annoying at the least.
I agree that she'll be happy as long as there is an out, but I don't understand why choose to make it be one we really don't want to happen (even though it will, inevitably), as opposed to choosing something that... isn't that.
As an alternative, how about several hundred/thousand years of service, after that she can leave (negotiating fairly what is hers, and what is Imperium property, as said), and that she is only Captain of the Moonchaser while she is a Captain of the Imperium. When she leaves, the ship, the fighters, all of it remains in the Imperium
Italics on the bit that is a response to your point, and a potential solution. Hopefully.
I agree that this ship, keeping it in the Imperium is the main point, but I hope that the above suggestion is suitable, or that it sparks off some super amazing idea
To elobrate my point to other threadgoers, it comes from this:
"Court of Stars is bound by oaths of fealty and of aid, but to the fey who cannot lie these oaths are hard as adamantine chains and thus oft resented as in Crimson Lotus' case"
Moonsong will be fine for a few hundred years, probably a few thousand since we make a point of being nice to her. I'm not so sure about a few million.
So, we can just make the deal contingent on ownership of the vessel always being to the Imperium, rather than make it inevitable that, unless the Imperium has fallen, Moonsong is going to want to destroy it (or helps someone else do so).
This seems overly complex, and only about as thought out as making her pledge service for as long as the Imperium exists.
If it's so concerning, have her make the pledge to Viserys, then tell her she is always free to approach him if she feels his lordship has something or another to be desired. There are no slaves any more than another Vassal is, and while they have responsibilities to the Imperium and their Liege we have stretched the limits there already and plan to do so more, with lords letting officials run their fiefdoms for them hopefully in the long term. Also cheekily recommend that we would appreciate it if she didn't try to negotiate her exit contract with regicide.
We don't have to elaborate what we reward treason with, we exude it with every searing agonizing maximized breath.