[X] Equestrian Introductions: He's built a reputation for himself as a diplomat. Why stop now?

Well this is an amazing way to start a day. My favorite quest returning from the grave.
 
[ X] Paper-Pushing Prince: It's not a glamorous job, but someone needs to make sure the Army is fed, watered and armed. He won't earn any scars or combat honors, but he'll get a chance to play a part in the campaign, however small it might be.

[X ] Equestrian Introductions: He's built a reputation for himself as a diplomat. Why stop now?

I vote for both (if possible) he would be the Paper-Pushing Prince during the war, or at least the opening portions where logistics are a mess. Also I just can't see detatching a significant size force (which will be needed traveling into unknown/dangerous lands) to transport the Equestrians home while during a major campaign. After the war or at least while it's in the ending stages, then Equestrian Introductions will come into play.
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[X] Equestrian Introductions: He's built a reputation for himself as a diplomat. Why stop now?
 
[ X] Paper-Pushing Prince: It's not a glamorous job, but someone needs to make sure the Army is fed, watered and armed. He won't earn any scars or combat honors, but he'll get a chance to play a part in the campaign, however small it might be.

[X ] Equestrian Introductions: He's built a reputation for himself as a diplomat. Why stop now?

I vote for both (if possible) he would be the Paper-Pushing Prince during the war, or at least the opening portions where logistics are a mess. Also I just can't see detatching a significant size force (which will be needed traveling into unknown/dangerous lands) to transport the Equestrians home while during a major campaign. After the war or at least while it's in the ending stages, then Equestrian Introductions will come into play.
Your vote doesn't apply, since you dislocated the [] in both X's.
 
Gawains problem is that doesn´t quite think through his desire to "step outside his Father´s shadow".

He wants to be his own person and eventually his own Emperor instead of simply "Garricks son and Heir", but by blindly rushing into battle without actually understanding the grander context of what it all means he´d only step further INTO that shadow existence he so loathes.

First Gawain needs to realize that he needs to do something different in order to be treated differently because he and his father are *two different kinds of Emperor governing over a different kind of Empire each*.

Garrick started out as a Warrior King (later crowned Emperor), because that was the kind of ruler his empire needed.

From the very start, Garricks Gryphonia/Gryphus had to bathe itself in blood and war to forge its own path - first against Brochard and the threats of the wilderness, later angainst Sombra and his dark hordes. Heck, even the current war against Maretonia was born out of a desire to both protect his own and not to be seen as prey to other polities. Because of all this, Garrick literally transformed himself from a somewhat-scrawny and confused merchant into a veritable slab of muscle and battle-prowess, the steely gaze of whom could petrify too-eager males thinking of making passes at his daughters from a whole grand ballroom across - because that was the kind of ruler Gryphus *Needed* to become the peaceful and prosperous powerhoose it is now.

That´s the rub, though - NOW Gryphus at its core - while still undoutably ready to defend itself and militarily powerful when needed - has become a place, where far-reaching alliance a forged strongly and where intellectual marvels are born. That means that at some point, it will grow to need a more scholarly and erudite kind of Emperor to truly prosper. Gawain already is the right sort of heir - he just needs to realize that and stop trying to ape a kind of king he neither is nor needs to be.

That´s why I am voting thusly:

[X] Paper-Pushing Prince: It's not a glamorous job, but someone needs to make sure the Army is fed, watered and armed. He won't earn any scars or combat honors, but he'll get a chance to play a part in the campaign, however small it might be.

[X] Equestrian Introductions: He's built a reputation for himself as a diplomat. Why stop now?

Not really caring, which of those two wins, because both options play into his strength and the kind of Emperor he´ll be.
 
"You specialize with that Polearm. I specialize with my short-sword. Your weapon may give you greater reach, but mine has greater flexibility."
..flashback to ME 2 Garrus...

"So what are you going to do about it?"

His response was not what she had expected. Gawain's claws unclenched, his posture deflating as he chuckled bitterly.

"I can't do anything. My father told me he wouldn't allow it."

Ki Seong blinked, eyebrows shooting up to her forehead. She certainly hadn't expected that.

"He told me that having the Emperor, Empress and Crown Prince all on the same battlefield together was a recipe for disaster, that he couldn't, 'in good conscience', allow me to accompany the army on campaign."
and he's right. Having the King and Queen go is already a very hard to justify decision, but at least there are SOME benefits in the morale of the soldiers and our reputation back home.

The prince? No, that's just a bad idea.

He'd doubled down, dug in his heels, refused to concede, all but demanding to be given the opportunity to prove himself and serve the Empire, and generally acting like the spoiled, entitled brat that he'd spent his entire life trying to avoid being seen as. On more than one occasion, to his shame, he'd raised his voice in anger.

Against his father, the Emperor.
I think Garrick would have been MORE surprised if this didn't happen, honestly. I doubt he actually thinks bad of Gawain for it. He understands.

"I have to do this! I don't need your permission!"

His father had simply stared back at him and shook his head. In that moment...he'd looked so tired. Gawain had been struck by the sudden change in his father's demeanor, looking as if he'd aged years in the span of seconds. The elder Golden-Feather's response had carried an edge of weariness, but the Prince hadn't missed the steel in his words as he'd laid down the law to his own flesh and blood in the same way he'd laid it down to so many uppity nobles.

"That same speech has been made by how many sons to how many fathers? 'I don't need your bloody permission, you old fool, I'm gonna enlist anyway!' And what wouldn't those numberless fathers give to be able to say to their sons: 'Well, I'm the Emperor, so as a matter of fact, without my permission, you can't."
And how many of these sons are enlisting right now?

oh, the irony!

She knew that the expatriates of such a faraway kingdom were becoming increasingly eager to return to their homeland and loved ones, and that their avian hosts would doubtlessly be sending a party of diplomats along with them when they did. And Gawain was a seasoned diplomat who had earned a name for himself negotiating with foreign heads of state. She was certain that the Emperor would be looking to make an impression upon the Equestrian Princesses, and she imagined sending the Crown Prince and heir to the throne to greet them in the name of Gryphus would go a long way towards ensuring that that goal was met.
THAT'S WHAT I'VE BEEN SAYING ALL THE TIME!

Of course, that was the worst case scenario. The more optimistic outcome was also the more likely one: that Gawain would get the chance to show his worth as a diplomat, make contact with a newly met kingdom, and perhaps form a working relationship with foreign heads of state...a relationship that would serve him well when he inevitably took the title of Emperor himself. It wasn't completely without risk, but it was certainly safer than traveling to an active war zone...and no one would be able to accuse him of doing nothing while his parents put themselves in harm's way. It would almost be kind of poetic. The son working to make peace and foster diplomacy at the same time his parents were waging war.
yeah, there IS a risk, but the benefits...

Honestly I'd be tempted to offer the Neighponese to bring one of THEIR ambassadors too, but that might actually weaken our position a bit. I doubt the Yaks would be interested, and we're not THAT close to the Canterburians, even ignoring the changeling problem.

But then...there was a third option. Throughout history, in both Neighpon and Gryphus, there were stories and legends of Nobles and Royalty who would shed their finery in order to pass themselves off as ordinary citizens, donning the garb of peasants or common foot soldiers to personally inspect the state of their realm and see things from a more grounded perspective. If Gawain was truly committed to seeing a battlefield regardless of what his father said...

She dismissed the thought from her mind almost as quickly as it had come. Such a thing could barely be considered sane, let alone safe. The chances of him being hurt or killed would be even higher than if he had gone with his father's blessing, and if he didn't die on the field of battle he'd probably wish that he had once his deception inevitably came to light. And that was assuming that he would even be capable of pulling off such a stunt in the first place. His face might not be as well-known as his father's, but he was still the Crown Prince, and the odds of him being recognized and exposed were high.

She'd have to be insane to suggest such an idea to him, and he'd have to be even crazier to go along with it...but she couldn't deny that, if he did manage to pull off such a stunt, it would be a thing worthy of legend...perhaps even legendary enough to get him over his angst and inferiority complex.
..no. Just no.

Rear-echelon officer would be "I'll make myself useful, even for no glory at all!"

Equestria is "If I'm not allowed to be useful and get fglory THERE, I'll find something else to do"

Going incognito is "glory before reason". As a random soldier Gawain wouldn NOT make a difference. Not enough to justify the IMMENSE risk. It would also risk straining his relationship with ALL of his family.

Honestly, if discovered it's nearly enough of a good reason to REMOVE HIM from the heir position. A heir that's THIS careless with his own life, and the possible consequences on his empire, he's NOT ready for the throne.

Also I'm hoping for Gawain to connect with Luna. Maybe, if she's not appreciated back home, Luna can become an ambassador. I'm pretty sure the Gryphon would appreciate her more than she is back home, if things are as bad for her as it was implied.



[x] Equestrian Introductions: He's built a reputation for himself as a diplomat. Why stop now?

After getting a lot of IRL stuff sorted out and hiring an exorcist to banish the demons of procrastination, distraction and creative sterility that have been tormenting me for weeks on end, I can now submit to you this...thing.

Was this update worth the wait? Definitely not, but after nearly three months and multiple rewrites, I think it's the best I can make it, and I'm desperate to get past this creative roadblock and move on with the Quest to end this unscheduled and unwanted hiatus.

No Moratorium for the Votes.

Next Interlude will be Pearl's, then we get to see Equestria for the first time in this Quest. And then we go to war.

Now that I'm back in the swing of things, future updates should be coming out faster and at a more consistent pace. I thank you all again for your patience and understanding.
The update is good. It's not worth the wait, but that's just because the wait was THAT long. If the following ones will be faster, then that's more than fine.

You know, if this happen again, next time you could simply skip the interlude. Write a small summary along the lines of "Gawain argued with his father, but was denied. What will you do now?" and simply skip to the vote.

Trying for the perfect interlude is not worth months of hiatus, if that's the ONLY reason you're delaying (if the reason is instead real life problems, well, that's completely different and you should take all the time you need. maybe give us a monthly report or something though? Just enough to know that the quest has not been dropped?)
 
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I just realized something regarding pegasi cloud cities.

Either they must be built at least partially with a manner of material that would allow a non-pegasi to stand on a cloud, or they don't and suddenly they really fail at being fortresses against anyone.
After all, the invaders could/would just pop through any clouds otherwise! Can you think how it would be if the invader could just pop out of any wall, floor or ceiling? Even with the risk of going in blind through clouds to get deeper, the same would apply to some extent to the defenders, needing to check all directions at all times during a siege.

@Questor back to my questions: are pegasi flying cities built with such a material, or what known methods do they use to deal with non-pegasi flyers?

At least in canon not-pegasi EXPLICITELY can't walk on such clouds without a cloud-walking spell. I suppose it might have been different in military encampments.

Can you imagine if two pegasi had a not-pegasus child, though? Do they give birth on the ground, just to be safe? Do they have a special bed prepared?
Well, he was being molded to be anything, like Garrus.

well, except mage/biotic. Just like Garrus, actually.
I agree that it's a stupid option - I said as much in my own little decision between the two - but I highly doubt this would happen. If anything, I am fairly certain fighitng a war as a commoner would endear Gawain to his people. That is what has happened historically every time a royal has chosen to fight in a war without special command or the like. At most it sets a precedent for "chivalry" like the Kingdom of Vedina in Equestria at War where the heirs are expected to strike out on their own adventures and prove themselves on their own to the common people to succeed as heir. Overall it is absolutely a stupid and unnecessary risk, but I don't foresee it being negative towards our reputation. Quite the opposite in fact.

he would likely gain a good reputation with the commoners if it went well, true.

it would be a HORRIBLE reputation with the other (smart) nobles, the military officers, and probably even the wealthy merchants.

He COULD grow beyond it if he showed he matured after it, but that doesn't make it a wise decision.
Also, kind of disappointed there was no "I want to kill some x," "no, you don't son, killing is horrible," back and forth.
Gawain is better than that
 
it would be a HORRIBLE reputation with the other (smart) nobles, the military officers, and probably even the wealthy merchants.
Nah, the military would probably respect him for it as long as he doesn't go about it in a stupid way (meaning literally charging to seek glory, ignoring orders, and refusing to show initiative when necessary). The merchants would only care insomuch as him going off upsets the economy which would be rather minimal if he actually lives seeing as we are 90% state capitalist, especially due to the recent bout of state spending overwhelming private spending in the economy by a large amount. :V

The nobility...well that more depends on how loyal they'll stay when we can't fall back on having unified the empire for maxed goodwill and thus have to actually work for those good relations. I think we sometimes forget those are still mechanics since they haven't come in to relevance since pre-Wingbardy annexation times. They probably would be legitimately upset seeing as we don't have Vedina's chivalric tradition at the moment.

Still not the same thing as a "HORRIBLE REPUTATION" and being known as a by-word for idiot. That'd only happen if he failed. Most risky decisions in history are popularly looked on favorably when they succeed, regardless of the risk entailed.
 
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[X] Equestrian Introductions: He's built a reputation for himself as a diplomat. Why stop now?

As much as I love the idea of prince incognito I must go with the equestrian option, it's the best option available, it will build his legend and get him out of his parents shadows, Birb boi is still young and there will always be future wars for him to fight and earn his scars.
 
Nah, the military would probably respect him for it as long as he doesn't go about it in a stupid way (meaning literally charging to seek glory, ignoring orders, and refusing to show initiative when necessary). The merchants would only care insomuch as him going off upsets the economy which would be rather minimal if he actually lives seeing as we are 90% state capitalist, especially due to the recent bout of state spending overwhelming private spending in the economy by a large amount. :V

The nobility...well that more depends on how loyal they'll stay when we can't fall back on having unified the empire for maxed goodwill and thus have to actually work for those good relations. I think we sometimes forget those are still mechanics since they haven't come in to relevance since pre-Wingbardy annexation times. They probably would be legitimately upset seeing as we don't have Vedina's chivalric tradition at the moment.

Still not the same thing as a "HORRIBLE REPUTATION" and being known as a by-word for idiot. That'd only happen if he failed. Most risky decisions in history are popularly looked on favorably when they succeed, regardless of the risk entailed.
having a risky decision pay off doesn't make it a good decision. The common soldiers might respect Gawain for it, but an officer should understand just how high were the odds of a "common soldier" to die or be crippled in war are, and there's a reason why Garrick and wife are NOT fighting alongside the common soldiers, but usually stay in a more protected section of the army.

An army can't afford to take risks REGULARLY. Not when in TRULY matters, and not unless they have no other choice.

Gawain wouldn't even be an officer, just a random recruit! He might very well die in the first battle, and nobody would ever notice!

Merchants would disapprove because Gawain is risking a lot for very little gains, I think.

EDIT: just notice, even Ki Seong thinks it's a HORRIBLE idea!
 
[X] Equestrian Introductions

Just read the entire quest, and I feel like going of to battle is a poor plan. I know we have spare heirs, but I prefer a living son, no matter how hypocritical it is.
 
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