Crake
I AM THE STORM THAT IS APPROACHING
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I can understand that point of view.
I mostly put those parts in because the current view of Viserys is "unreasonably paranoid Dragon King who is trying to fuck with the Faith diguised as a begging brother of all things while holding my friends hostage".
As far as impressions go this is a very poor one.
Would something like this be a little better in your opinion?
[] Plan LG Viserys
-[] She is right. Your actions were wrong and too hasty. Accept her pledge, release your prisoners and leave the Conclave.
-[] Ask Danielle to push for allowing mages to self regulate without the Seven looming over their shoulders.
-[] Ask to meet with Danielle and Lucan, as well as any other Chosen of their choosing, at some sort of neutral location of their choosing to discuss the realities of being caught between a War of the Gods and how best to resolve our differences.
-[] Extend an invitation to Danielle (and her companions if she so chooses to invite them) for a tour of Sorcerer's Deep
Took out all the justification and most of the hardier requests, which might be more palatable.
The problem with this plan is there is no build up, they have this image in their head of us as the villain. We need to prove that we're just as nuanced and three-dimensional as they are, as Viserys bitterly found out. That involves eating some humble pie, taking our knocks, and being reasonable and patient with them. They will ask their questions, we will answer them, we will ask any of ours, and then we'll get down to the nitty gritty of our motivations.