Kind of don't get why Lisa is still alive.
You've got her...
In the Bay. Dropped from force-field bridge. Fourth and fifth degree burns over 60% of body. Mostly cauterized. Burns exacerbated by saltwater. Infection guaranteed. Slowly bleeding out. Right leg broken from impact. Upper left arm broken by Lung. Throat raw from screaming.
Dealing with all that which, by everything I know, should have killed her already. Hell, just the drop from the bridge would have risked killing a healthy person, to say nothing of the impact splitting what's currently masquerading as her 'skin' open like a ripe tomato. And I'm not sure at all about her regaining consciousness considering the shock from the pain/damage, plus the massive blood loss. Plus, she's been bleeding/dying for at least a few minutes by this point, because Lung had to drag her all the way out of the cells to the bridge.
Then...
Lisa Wilbourn mercifully blacked out.
Which means there's even
more time spent bleeding to death before...
The waves had brought her closer to shore
She wakes up
again and is capable of dragging herself up onto a ship after more time dying the slowest death possible.
And, well... Why?
You wanted Taylor to nanowhatsit her, or this to be a change, or whatever,
and that's perfectly fine! Or at least it probably will be, because you're a good author but it's not like I have any idea where you want to go with this until you write and post it.
But you have Taylor specifically thinking about how she knows virtually nothing about the human body, and then spending over two hours
just to stabilize Lisa's brain, at which point the body is scrap anyway.
There doesn't seem (to my personal opinion) any reason to have Lisa suffer this much other than solely to have Lisa suffer. You could have had Lung hurt her half as much and still had the exact same results, but more believability in regards to Lisa actually surviving to the point help finds her.
At least, that's what it seems like to me. I hope I'm not missing something.
