Varder
Tired Cultist
- Location
- Hell
"Unlike you, I cannot flow like mist through a crowd," Xia Lin said sourly. "Nor filter out every vapid bray and complaint about being bumped into."
Skill issue.
"Unlike you, I cannot flow like mist through a crowd," Xia Lin said sourly. "Nor filter out every vapid bray and complaint about being bumped into."
I think that was like... 10 minutes early? Not good, not terrible...
Fixed
Yrs is their such a thing a Cyan grade paints????"Naturally," Ling Qi said looking curiously. "Such a wide range of shades… I imagine some of these must be difficult to reach, I sense a few wisps of third realm qi in a few of these mixes."
Well, I was running the numbers and I estimate that we could plausibly maintain a small household / village guard of ~12 reds and 4 yellows with maybe 12 GSS / year.Also what is the difference in purchasing power between 1 stone and 2 stones in these instance?
Remember, we make a net monthly income of 55 green stones even after the school investment.
Reminder that we also need to spend money on drugs, and haven't even gotten to supporting Ling Nuan yet, and also don't have our own minions to support yet but hopefully we will in time.Remember, we make a net monthly income of 55 green stones even after the school investment. Max spending for everything would only be ~10% of our surplus. And we are also sitting on a massive surplus of 765 green stones, which we should be spending on stuff instead of just sitting on. I do think it's a good idea to keep some liquid assets for emergencies or opportunities, but only 200-300 GS.
meet -> meat
at it
"any things" should be "many things,""It explains any things the lack of investments in our clan's lands, and the push for the younger generation to find careers in the wider province. As a final step…"
"well matched" and "builds on" are redundant. Looks like an editing splice, probably. "well matched to" would fit, but there's other variants.
Sixiang's
eyed"After speaking to starry eyes young apprentices who will surely be…
wants a comma after "building"the tradehouse was a simple two-tiered building its curved roof of plain ochre tile
Remove this quotation mark
and posed in respect
After this first mention, her name is "Chen Huan"
Thine -> thin ; worse -> woreThine as a pole, and about as gangly, he worse a smudged and stained smock
lose -> loose
that I could do better
side -> sound