Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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She needs to have Su Ling as well on the adventure, otherwise it would just be a LQ Adventure instead of an LQ Adventure ™

Nah. Everyone has their own kind of Ling Qi Adventure.

With Suyin, it's max luck.
With Su Ling, it's max unluck.
With Ling Nuan, it's new spirits.
With Renxiang, it's loot + trauma.
With Xuan Shi, it's deep historical lore and understanding.

Guangli needs to find his definition of a Ling Qi Adventure ™, and he can't do that with others present.
 
Liked the bit of speculation about the Hui and the admittance that the story of Tsu and the Beast Kings is mutable, changing to mean whatever the story-teller wants.
I want Ling Qi to find an item spirit who was there at the beginning and who can spill all the tea, so that she can dunk on everyone who thinks they know what really happened with her superior knowledge.
Also it would make Meng Dan pass out from a historian-gasm, which is hilarious.
 
"Your thoughts are heard. Harmonious accord is well tread purpose."

"Was it yours once?"

"No. Little memory remains. But my purpose was not so accommodating."


She felt a grinding down in her bones, like the gears of a grist mill, crushing all which was placed between them, producing a fine, even powder for use in other things. What went in did not matter, unless it was so hard as to break the teeth of the gear.

It put her in the mind of Crucibles and flame, of the molten ore, undifferentiated, that was once a million lives and objects and thoughts

So, if I'm reading this right, the Dragon Gods plan wasn't just to create the Argent Vents and Spirit Mines by harmonizing the eight imperial elements.
But it was an attempt to turn the Wall into a second Celestial Peaks? An artificial cradle where everything is grounded down and placed on their proper place?
That's quite interesting.
 
In exchange for some as yet defined 'maitenance' we'll be granted some access to the crystal on the upper layers.
A typo on Maintenance or did Qi not quite have the word for it?

Li Suyin sagged forward, a huge bubble escaping her mask as she sighed. Xinghong was there in a moment, scooping her up in both sets of arms like a princess, mandibles clicking in concern and pride for his makers deed.

Or so Ling Qi understood anyway. She didn't think Li Suyin could really read her creation that well.

"Oh stop, this is just the retreat programming," Li Suyin grumbled, giving her a grumpy look.
Qi: "You know I can read the intentions right?"
 
Nah. Everyone has their own kind of Ling Qi Adventure.

With Suyin, it's max luck.
With Su Ling, it's max unluck.
With Ling Nuan, it's new spirits.
With Renxiang, it's loot + trauma.
With Xuan Shi, it's deep historical lore and understanding.

Guangli needs to find his definition of a Ling Qi Adventure ™, and he can't do that with others present.
And with meizhen, theres a child on the way afterwards :V
 
The truth of art is Communication. There are many paths to many ways. The Master of Communication seeks the parallel, the flow of many paths toward harmony.

In the end that was the purpose of expression, of art, to communicate an idea, to share something, even it was only a moment's pleasant distraction. It was the tool which bound communities together, through the stories they told each other. The stories that said who they are, and who they had been.

…And it was all stories in the end, the past was a foundation, but in looking back, one could not help but distort it, willfully or not. She thought that this might have been the root of what had driven the Hui to be what they had become. Realizing that everything humans were was built on a foundation of fiction and self editing narrative…

To truly internalize that truth invited so many deviations and twisted conclusions.

It was so easy to see how one could become enamored with the notion of molding it, treating the fabric of a society, a civilization as nothing but a canvas for your whims. It made it easy to descend into self-interested solipsism, forgetting that other people were not just characters in your plot, but storytellers in their own right.
She's look at history, stories and the path through many lenses and has understood why the Hui became a thing.

But at the same time, she could see where it had come from, the yearning for a story which all the Emerald Seas could tell.

How many beast gods were there? Twelve of course, for the pillars of the throne. What were the beast gods…? Well, whatever animal served the writer's purpose as a symbol, for the story they wished to tell about Tsu, and through him, the province.

Who was Tsu? A uniter, a man of great words and deeds, a builder of alliances. A great seer and wise man, the first and greatest tiller of the land.

Why did he do as he did? Who was worthy of words and who was worthy of spears? Who had betrayed the covenant. Who had been betrayed BY the covenant. Who was a brother, and who was an intruder in the house.

This too, depended on the story you wanted to tell.

+1 Creation XP

History was made of stories. The past was made of people. Stories were never quite as complex as people, in all their contradictions.
It's a lot simpler and easier to twist and each story is the creation of the storyteller.

"Your thoughts are heard. Harmonious accord is well tread purpose."

"Was it yours once?"

"No. Little memory remains. But my purpose was not so accommodating."
The spirit can respect it even if it wasn't it's own purpose.

"Shrine/Attunement node acceptable. Outer Shrine, beyond shadows, under light of sun and moon. Inner Shrine, in my light, limited access. You. One other. Only this."
I'm guessing the Inner Shrine is for the high priest and LQ.

"Who says there's going to be a next time?" Ling Qi wondered.

Su Ling scoffed.

That was fair. It might be awhile, but she didn't doubt they'd venture out again.

"I will prepare myself for tribulation," Gan Guangli said, voice grave.

"You better," Su Ling grumbled, scrubbing a hand through her hair. "So, did everything work out down there? Can see you're not hurt, and nothings exploding, but…"
They know how LQ adventures work.

We bring Bro with us to fuck up the glacier star spirit. Sun+Moon > Stars.
It's a really neat theme.

Liked the bit of speculation about the Hui and the admittance that the story of Tsu and the Beast Kings is mutable, changing to mean whatever the story-teller wants.
Yeah she understands how it became a thing.

Nah. Everyone has their own kind of Ling Qi Adventure.

With Suyin, it's max luck.
With Su Ling, it's max unluck.
With Ling Nuan, it's new spirits.
With Renxiang, it's loot + trauma.
With Xuan Shi, it's deep historical lore and understanding.

Guangli needs to find his definition of a Ling Qi Adventure ™, and he can't do that with others present.
I'm hoping for something like really cool fights and maybe understanding through that.
 
I think the two notable Meizhen adventures were the one where she got Zhengui and raiding Yan Renshu's bases. And, uh, if getting the worm art was supposed to be Ling Qi picking up another kid, then she put that one up for adoption real fast.
I may have forgotten the second when i was making that joke before bed :V Though the worm art was something we got during the moon-incited yan renshu raids, not the meizhen backed raids :p Perhaps learning how to kill with pure musical doots was the child born that day...
 
Q&A stuff:

Commissions Yrs enjoyed writing, and which ones he's especially looking forward to:
I think I really enjoyed writing Bearing Destiny, and of course Journey which came from some of the first commissions
lay of the lakes was also a fun writing challenge
and so was rivers of time
oh and smugging moon of course
I'm looking forward to the Heizui commissions, sands of destiny and a few others
Views on the afterlife:
Imperial stuff is pretty scattered but centers around notions of ancestor worship, with the idea of various GS' overseeing a waiting room sort of afterlife where ancestors can watch over their descendants while they contemplate the Dao until they're ready to join with a great spirit(in the core everyone's ancestors are literally the staff of the heavenly bureaucracy) Others less so Dreaming way goes with reincarnation and so do some other local strains of faith.
Polar's view death as cessation. There is some notion in certain sectors that there is a period of rest and bliss for the virtuous dead, but eventually the dead rejoin the world as part of the land, literally building more world to replace what is lost to the gates and other wounds in the world
which is kiiiinda reincarnationy
The Cloud tribes believe in an aftlife where their virtuous dead ride forever among the stars, and see things like meteor showers as sacred events,
Things are wibblier over in the Emerald Isles, and Banu has spaces where the royal families can communicate with what seem to be their ancestors directly
Liminal use in the Duchies:
Posts death metal album cover again (Golden Fields)
ES is the province with the most liminal use followed by Alabaster sands and Ebon rivers
Thousand lakes is very very spooky if you aren't specifically following the rites of Bai Spiritwalking to navigate it properly
the Celestial Peaks is also a much more ordered and difficult to travel liminal bespecially for someone like Ling Qi who definitely hasn't filled out all of her travel papers
The most hardcore tea Renxiang wants to try out:
Hmmm... Yin-Yang Dew grown only in the imperial palace, as the exact geomantic center point of the palace systems, and the imperial garden, among other highly reactive and potent reagents. Servent only to the imperial family, and their most honored guests
What if you kill a Great Spirit avatar like Xin or the Emerald Dancer:
They would be dead dead, and the great spirit's influence and connection to the region would wane until another one comes online
depends a bit on the region but... for the sun or moon probably a new one starts growing into the roll within 50-100 years
another great spirit might take longer
If you keep spawn-camping them:
Then you start getting an angry great spirit noticing your individual existence
Sage Emperor reaction to hypothetically getting beaten up:
He was probably too human to react with the same grace as a firmly defeated dragon, if he was truly unarguably defeated he would definitely withdraw inward to lick his wounds and powerlevel, but he'd be back for another go in time, his pride would demand it
She'd (dragon mom) want him to temper himself and be certain he had changed the calculus before challenging again, which IS the draconic thing to do, if you're ambitious
its unvirtuous to cclash frivolously when you know your place but if you;ve genuinely grown stronger its wrong to leave a false hierarchy in place
What if the face-eater had been killy enough for Yao:
Oh no
Well, I suppose in that case things stay the same for awhile longer even as a Snake never meets a fisherman, but there's a buzzing in the norththe tramp of chitin armored feet and skittering bodies. The other spirit lords in the northern sees go silent and black and green banners rise and toxic miasma chokes the air. Eventually there is an almighty clash between the White Serpent and the Usurper...
and if the Face Eater was Killy enough for Yao then she had definitely eaten a lot more faces you know?
The Yao the Slayer and the Black Centipede descend on lake Hei with all of their young, and in the catacylsm that follows the serpent is skinned. But I think Yao and face eater would be damaged enough that they would need a long time recouping, so the borders would settle a bit
Celestial peaks probably gets partially conquered too and the proto Zheng probably have to respond to that
so the Empire is maybe never a thing in quite the same way
 
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"The children serve as is their lot," Spake the King of the Gods, a mighty beast resplendent in gold, whose body filled the sky and whose eyes were as cruel stars. "It is mercy that we even allow the children to live. The world is our jewel, to do with as we will. Those Who Were are gone and all their children subdued. Who are you to dare to speak of duty to a King."

In the Mother Moon side story we were told how the dragons subdued all the 'children' (humans). I somehow doubt they would bother to do this themselves.

"Six Hundred and Seventy Ninth Incarnum of Discordia Realignment Orchestra."

"No. Little memory remains. But my purpose was not so accommodating."

She felt a grinding down in her bones, like the gears of a grist mill, crushing all which was placed between them, producing a fine, even powder for use in other things. What went in did not matter, unless it was so hard as to break the teeth of the gear.

It put her in the mind of Crucibles and flame, of the molten ore, undifferentiated, that was once a million lives and objects and thoughts

And now, we learn how the purpose of this spirit was to 'realign discord' and grind 'lives and objects and thoughts' to dust.

It makes it sound like the the main purpose of the Argent Vents and/or the construction in Celestial Peaks was to control people, the great quantity and quality of spirit stones perhaps being more of side product.

This makes me very scared about the 'great project' that the MOI is doing in the background.

(Or maybe I'm just misinterpretating things. Feel free to set my mind at ease.)
 
In the Mother Moon side story we were told how the dragons subdued all the 'children' (humans). I somehow doubt they would bother to do this themselves.





And now, we learn how the purpose of this spirit was to 'realign discord' and grind 'lives and objects and thoughts' to dust.

It makes it sound like the the main purpose of the Argent Vents and/or the construction in Celestial Peaks was to control people, the great quantity and quality of spirit stones perhaps being more of side product.

This makes me very scared about the 'great project' that the MOI is doing in the background.

(Or maybe I'm just misinterpretating things. Feel free to set my mind at ease.)
Grind and unify the spirits into a stable organized shape. Order vs Harmony.

Order can be harmonious but it clearly wasn't a priority
 
Year 45 Month 12, Arc 4-1 Stories
She was a bit sad to see Su Ling and Li Suyin go, but they had their own lives and their homes and projects to get back too, and she wouldn't deny them that. So she had bid them farewell with a smile as the sun dawn the next day, and turned her attention back to her duties at Shenglu.

After making her report to Cai Renxiang of course. She had to let her liege know they were sitting on something ancient beyond words after all. She might have been losing her touch though. Either that or Renxiang was being inoculated against her.

Regardless she now had a writ to covert he cost of a simple barrier over the cave entrance and a minor outpost for long ranging patrols. She supposed she'd be overseeing that for the rest of the week.

"Haha! Indeed Miss Biyu, I AM very tall!"

As a result of both of them lingering to report to Renxiang, discuss potential routes to the cavern and have a brief spar to check themselves for lingering impurity, Gan Guangli had finally met her family. Honestly. Biyu hadn't looked so starry-eyed since she flown the girl up to the room of their old house.

Her little sister was up against the railing dividing the outer walkway from the training yard, hands up on the rail, stretched up onto her tiptoes to peer over, wide eyed and gleeful. Mother was behind her, still lingering near the doors inside.

Since they had only been lightly sparring gan Guangli was only some five meters tall.

"Can I go up?" Biyu asked, all but pulling herself up the rail.

What was this? She was right here, hovering at the same height as Guangli's head, her hair fanned out and sparkling under the light of the early morning sun, in the way that usually made her little sister's eyes sparkle.

"Oh no, little sis is cheating on big sis," Sixiang chuckled.

"Ah, Biyu, you should not pester Lord Gan and your elder sister, I am certain they are busy," Mother said, drifting forward to lay hands on her shoulders.

"Awwww."

"If Madam Ling is not against it, I am certain we were just wrapping things up," Gan Guangli said, looking to her. She nodded grudgingly.

Her Mother sighed, rubbing her forehead. Ling Qi could see she wasn't really worried though, she understood at this point, just how difficult it was for them to be harmed while Ling Qi was nearby.

…Biyu crashing head over heels down the stairs while running in the halls had just left her crying in confusion rather than hurt after all. It hadn't made her mother's scolding any less severe though.

"Very well, if Lord gan will allow it," Ling Qingge said.

"Haha, of course!" he grinned as he crouched down, holding out his open palms like a platform.

Biyu leapt in, and giggled with delight as Gan Guangli made a show of slowly standing up, raising her higher and higher into the air. Biyu turned a bright smile to her, waving furiously. "Hi Sis! I can fly too! See!"

"Of course you can," Ling Qi chuckled. Well that was fine then. She swooped down, scooping the little girl out of Gan Guangli's hands to do a loose, slow spin on the way back to the ground, making her sister shriek in delight.

But, as she set her sister back down on the porch, she caught a flicker of movement out of the corner of her eye. She raised her hand, and allowed the paper bird to land in her palm, unfolding into a neatly pressed paper missive.

"Oh, what is that?" her mother asked as Gan Guangli allowed Biyu to leap into his outstretched hands again.

Her eyes flicked across the neat characters painted on the page. "It looks like we have a guest. I wasn't expecting him to have a free moment too soon."

"Who?"

"Xuan Shi, I asked if he could check the installation of the panic room formations."

***​

He hadn't changed too much, physically. The same dark heavy robes decorated with geometric patterns, dark green cut through the lighter lines and hemmed in black, but the high collar of the outer robe was unclasped in the front, showing a little more of his broad featured face. He hadn;t replaced the gauntlets she had destroyed, using amidst the General's flames either,but his shell patterned hat was repaired, no longer riven by cracks.

It had also acquired a new occupant, or rather, she had outgrown the little hidden shelf beneath the brim, and had claimed the top of it. The little bobbing chick had rapidly sprouted up into an imperious hen. Xuanji was a fine, sleek specimen with lustrous black feathers, shading to midnight blue at their edges and a sharp hooked beak. Her comb was a stark blue white shade, a shocking splash of color. But though she was much less plump than the farmyard hens Ling Qi was familiar with, she was still, unmistakably a chicken.

She was also already in the second realm, despite not being more than half a year old.

"Thank you for coming so swiftly," Ling Qi said, clasping her hands and bowing her head, she stood before the door of the manor house, having arrived to greet her guest on the steps

"This one would not leave this waiting, a builders pride still beats in this chest. A deviation in such a vital work is unacceptable."

"And yet it's only at a chance because we disturbed it with our move. It could hardly be called an obligation," Ling Qi said, straightening up. She considered him. No different in body, but… he felt more solid now. He had always been a formidable if subtle presence, but…

He felt like a castle, standing on her doorstep, with foundations of bedrock and unscaleable, invulnerable walls, free of any defect. Though standing here, the gates were open.

Xuanji clucked once, looking down her beak at Ling Qi

"You are fortunate my Father is kind."

"I suppose I am," Ling Qi replied back without pause. Spirit beasts could grow up so fast. She remembered the chick's exciteable babble. Her smile conveyed that, and the hens feathers puffed up indignantly. "Would you please come in."

Xuan Shi glanced upward with a huff. "Peace Xuanji. My apologies, she is not usually like this."

Ling Qi nodded agreeably. She didn't voice what she saw, in the young beast's demeanor. It was a bit funny, she was a dutiful daughter indeed, standing between her Father and a woman who might prey on his feelings.

"Oh you can bet that bratty cousin of mine has been giving her ideas," Sixiang whispered to her from further in the manor. "Got the work space cleared out by the way!"

Ling Qi sent back a feeling of acknowledgement along their bond as she stepped aside, allowing Xuan Shi to to step past her and enter. The door closing with a moment's thought and a pushing wind from her, she stepped ahead and began to lead him down the hall. "I've heard the news of the Sect recently, but how have your own projects been going?"

He hummed thoughtfully. "Fire and lake, purgation and preservation, the fragments of the old fascinate. The version two now well underway. Another two or three months, to be worthy of removal from the workshop shade."

Ling Qi bowed her head. "I am still very grateful and hope I may find ways to repay the labor and wealth that you sacrificed for my sake, in lending me your gauntlets, but I am glad you've gained something from it."

"This one gained greatly, without any such thing."

She lowered her head a little. Yes she probably wouldn;t have survived without those gauntlets. Sixiang definitely would not have survived without them.

"Lady Ling has recovered swiftly, recovered and grown still, impressive."

She smiled. "Ah, I might go mad if I sat still for too long, remind me to tell you about the trouble I've gotten into just these last months. Though I am curious, do you intend to march with the Sect?"

"One who is sheltered well, shames himself should he shirk his duty when war comes calling… The Sect has been a second home."

So he would be, yet another joining them down in the dark. "And your clan has no objections."

His smile turned wry. "Nay."

"I suppose that is a foolish question. They would want to show solidarity with their allies," Ling Qi said.

"To chide Father for his honor would be beneath a great family," Xuanji clucked.

She could feel Kongyou commenting too… She could have listened… but she knew their internal rapport was not for her.

They made their way further into the manor, speaking casually, of their plans for the coming months, he, mostly in research and craftwork, her in preparing for the expedition, like Bao Qian he would by the nature of his cultivation probably be in the rear echelon, securing and fortifying ground as they took it, rather than being in the tip of the spear as it was, as Cai Renxiang expected them to be.

Sonn they emerged into the rearmost section of the manor, here where it abutted the cliffside, there had been some tentative chambers carved into the rock, little was in them yet, and it had made this area the secure place to install the panic room formations.

"Heya!" Sixiang greeted, waving from near the end of the still rough stone passage, where the now incongruous room which had been removed from the old house was installed after being carefully disassembled and transported. They bounded up, the faint whirr and clatter of components under their illusory figure audible in the cramped space. "Oh wow, you've gotten cute quick huh, Hats here is raising you right."

"Of course," preened the hen.

"And… cuz. Can feel you in there, still squirmin around huh? You should prolly try comin out more often," Sixiang continued only giving the beast a nod.

"Oh buzz off cuz, most us aint into jamming ourselves between dead wood and gears," Kongyou's voice oozed from the shadows in the room, distorted and warbling.

"But it pinches so good," Sixiang shot back in a faux breathy voice.

Ling Qi swatted them on the back of the head. "Hey, whatever that was. Too much."

"Awh, fiiine."

Xuan Shi had unfortunately frozen stock still, dark color rising on his cheeks. She was concerned for a moment, before he shook his head violently, causing Xuanji to squawk and flap her wings for balance. "This one would examine the the arrays please. Cold stone is no open air and constructed wood, the components will not be efficacious."

He still sounded a little choked, and was absolutely avoiding Sixiang with his eyes.

What exactly was untoward about pinching, she wondered.

He strode swiftly toward to open door of the room, and she trailed after. Sixiang followed, laughing into their hand.

Ling Qi shook her head. "I'm sorry for them."

"This one understands well how a muse may say unfortunate things," Xuan Shi said, staring ahead at the array he was examining.

"Yes," Ling Qi agreed, peering over his shoulder at a respectful distance. She frowned as she considered the words she was about to speak. Even now she was a little uncertain of them. "Ah though before you get too deep into your work, I did have a question."

"This one will hear it."

"Once this is done, will you accompany me out for the day. I was thinking that…"

[ ] I would show you along the lakefront

[ ] We could could walk the hill trails, and see the geysers
 
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