Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Yeah, ultimately we're carrying out this investigation because a) we want to make sure it doesn't happen again, and b) going through proper procedure and being seen to do so and appearing to be fair is important.

Not because we realistically expect this to change what we have to do, which is to demand a formal apology. Unless something comes up to really drastically change the story - which seems unlikely - that's kind of required.
 
My eyes kinda skipped the pov change dots, and it was a bit of a trip when Li Suyin cursed in her internal narration, and then a second time!
(And then I caught on)
 
Hey, if you were promised quick free healing, you might as well use it while you can. The moment where CRX says that Qi is allowed to take a good hit and surrender, and Ling Qi finds a polite way to say "go jump off a cliff" without even needing a vote, is a very memorable one. She's going to fight at maximum capacity until she physically can't any longer. She has survived worse and she will endure worse if it means excelling in her new life.
 
Imagine that there are 2 mechanics, a man and a woman, working on a car's engine in the street. The female mechanic is about to make a mistake. Not something that will endanger her, but something that will cause a lot of trouble and will extend the reparations for several hours. To avoid that, the male mechanic tells her to stop and grabs her wrist when she doesn't do so.
Then a policeman that was standing nearby sees that and rushes over to punch the guy in the face.
Are you really telling me that they male mechanic holds some of the fault because he "initiated the aggresion through unwanted contact" or that we should understand that the policeman's culture includes defending women and punching their "aggressors"?
Has the male mechanic somehow commited a crime and infringed the female's mechanics fundamental rights, and so he deserves to be punished and has to apologize?

If the woman screams and says let go and he doesn't do so? Absolutely, legally, yes. The police officer is probably also at fault there because punching someone in the face is not standard and approved policing practices (though unlikely to be punished because police seldom are...that's a whole different topic, though), but grabbing someone's arm and forcing them away from a task just because you think you know better than them is unambiguously assault and you can get arrested for it if the person you grabbed chooses to press charges. And I suspect punching is much more 'approved practices' in the Polar Nations.

Punching being worse than grabbing is not a cultural belief, it's an objective fact.

No, it isn't. And even if it was, responding to 'lesser harm' things with escalation is often still considered appropriate if the 'lesser harm' is still assault.

"Not to be touched without one's permission" is a perfectly fine rigth to have in a vacuum. But then comes the one thousand exceptions. First of all, is that it's meant to be applied to unwanted advances, not to casual and innocuous contact like touching someone in the shoulder.

This was in fact an unwanted advance, though. This guy ignored the person telling him to stop working. Grabbing him because of that and forcing him to do so is not 'light and innocuous', it's grabbing someone and attempting to enforce your will upon them because you know better. That's assault, and should be. Like, if someone is in your way on the street and you tell them to please get out of your way and they ignore you, you do not then have the right to physically wrestle them out of your way, that's not acceptable.

If what he was doing was immediately dangerous, it's entirely excusable...but so is tackling someone, and that remains unacceptable outside of immediate danger situations.

If an individual has personal problems with physical contact, that's up to them to deal with. People who knows about their condition should respect it of course, but the world at large doesn't have the obligation of never touching another person unless explicit permission is granted.

Legally, in real life, in most first world countries (at least, IIRC...definitely in the USA), they do indeed have a right not to be touched. And even if they didn't, there's a huge difference between incidentally brushing someone and being grabbed and physically forced to perform or not perform an action.

We don't know the exact law here, but given modesty norms in both nations I suspect being touched without permission being pretty serious is in fact the law of the land absent specific mitigating factors.

Especially not when the situation does warrant physical intervention.

If it warranted that, yes. Did it? We don't know.
 
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Eh, I'm fine with that retcon. The entire point of the Phase 2 was to bait Liling into burning resources to make Meizhens final battle mechanically easier for her. Totally different narrative needs to be met for the RR version.
 
Retcons that lean in favor of what was hoped for instead of what happened under a crumbling mechanical system feels better for story flow.
 
If the woman screams and says let go and he doesn't do so? Absolutely, legally, yes. The police officer is probably also at fault there because punching someone in the face is not standard and approved policing practices (though unlikely to be punished because police seldom are...that's a whole different topic, though), but grabbing someone's arm and forcing them away from a task just because you think you know better than them is unambiguously assault and you can get arrested for it if the person you grabbed chooses to press charges.

I like what you are saying, but I think you are giving up too much ground in terms of the real world example.

A better one would be an American and a Soviet construction crew in like 1970 building a border gate setup. Then there is a disagreement about where the road signs go, no one can really understand eachother, and the American grabs a Soviet to force them to stop.

If that behavior isn't stopped immediately, it'll escalate to shooting very quickly.
 
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My recollection of the plan was if we managed to take out Dharitri (and not get immediately ganked) we would use an escape talisman to teleport away and prepare for a last stand. Which if succeeded would have pissed of Liling enough she would bring out the big guns, which would itself be a major advantage for Meizhen.

Imagining it always brings a smile to my face.
 
I'm not opposed to the retcon, yrsillar certainly knows the needs of their story better than I do.

However, I think it's a little unfortunate, because I remember the feelings of the moment, who close it felt, and how carefully the thread + math cabal had built up Ling Qi to make it possible. Of course that isn't something that can really be communicated, but for me it's not quite the same.
 
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A better one would be an American and a Soviet construction crews building a border crossing. When there is a disagreement about where the road signs go, and the American grabs a Soviet to force them to stop.

A better example would be that the Soviet guy is about to knock over a concrete mixer and the American grabs his wrist and yanks him away. Screaming "I didn't give you permission to touch me!" doesn't make it alright for another Soviet guy to punch the American. The Soviet are still entirely at fault.

If the woman screams and says let go and he doesn't do so? Absolutely, legally, yes. The police officer is probably also at fault there because punching someone in the face is not standard and approved policing practices (though unlikely to be punished because police seldom are...that's a whole different topic, though)

But the WS guy didn't scream to let him go. The empire geomancer didn't twist his arm or drag him away. She just grabbed his wrist because the guy was being a prick and refusing to listen to her. Not even a second letter, the WS guard punched her. With not a chance to explain herself or the situation.
Saying that the woman holds responsibility because she "committed assault" is blatantly blaming the victim.

grabbing someone's arm and forcing them away from a task just because you think you know better than them is unambiguously assault and you can get arrested for it if the person you grabbed chooses to press charges. And I suspect punching is much more 'approved practices' in the Polar Nations.
If you genuinely think that your coworker actions are going to cause serious delays and troubles to the project and they continue despite your explicit warnings? Of course you can force them away. It's not about "thinking you know better". It's about not letting mistakes that are going to severely negatively affect you and the project happen because apparently it's assault to do so.
If you are working at a construction site and see some mismanaging heavy equipment and they refuse to stop despite your warnings, you physically stop them. Ideally you would call an overseer or a guard, but that may not be always an immediate option.
You don't just let them continue because "you don't think you know better".

No, it isn't. And even if it was, responding to 'lesser harm' things with escalation is often still considered appropriate if the 'lesser harm' is still assault.
Yes it is. One is purposely meant to inflict harm and pain, to hurt the other person. The other is meant to momentarily stop them without hurting them. In case you haven't noticed, only one person is the medical bay getting a tooth regrown. The WS guy is perfectly hale and hearthy. Because grabbing someone writ is not comparable to punching them in the face.
Punching is assault, grabbing isn't. Saying that it is is an insult to all the victims of actual assault, resting severity to what they suffered.

This was in fact an unwanted advance, though. This guy ignored the person telling him to stop working. Grabbing him because of that and forcing him to do so is not 'light and innocuous', it's grabbing someone and attempting to enforce your will upon them because you know better. That's assault, and should be. Like, if someone is in your way on the street and you tell them to please get out of your way and they ignore you, you do not then have the right to physically wrestle them out of your way, that's not acceptable.

If what he was doing was immediately dangerous, it's entirely excusable...but so is tackling someone, and that remains unacceptable outside of immediate danger situations.

"Enforce your will upon them because you know better"? Come on. That's and intentionally extreme way of describing non-violent behaviour. She didn't tackle him. She grabbed his wrist for a single second.
Physically stopping someone from breaking something by making a mistake you are actively warning them against is not assault. No if you do it in a non-violent way like standing in their way or, yes, grabbing their wirst.
Or should we just let people cause problems and damage because apparently is inherently wrong to "force" them to not do so?

If it warranted that, yes. Did it? We don't know.
If the Empire geomancer genuinely thought it warranted it, then that's enough. Because she didn't enact any violent action, and definitely not assault. Her intention wasn't "to force her will on the guy through force"
If the girl had started things by punching the guy then, yes, she should be hold responsible. But it was the violent guard that started thowing punchs.
 
It's about not letting mistakes that are going to severely negatively affect you and the project happen because apparently it's assault to do so.

Ironically enough, not letting the mistake happen puts the entire project at much higher risk of irrecoverable failure. So pretty blinkered risk assessment if that was the reasoning.
 
Ironically enough, not letting the mistake happen puts the entire project at much higher risk of irrecoverable failure. So pretty blinkered risk assessment if that was the reasoning.

It's not her job to consider the higher-level ramifications of tension between the two sides in negotiation, though. They were there to help set up the Geomancy, she noticed what we think might be a big problem*, and tried to correct it before it could be worse.

She may well have fucked up, don't get me wrong, but it's also in no way her remit to spend every moment considering the larger strategic situation.

*We should talk to Xuan about it.
 
It isn't her job, no, but it is Jin's. I'm m assuming he's trying to push us into a favorable decision quickly in part because he realizes the empire is arguably at fault here.
 
Ironically enough, not letting the mistake happen puts the entire project at much higher risk of irrecoverable failure. So pretty blinkered risk assessment if that was the reasoning.
What puts the project at risk of failure is the guard punching her. Her risk assessment shouldn't include violent, unreasonable behaviour from others. The guard's actions are neither her fault nor her responsiblity.
 
But the WS guy didn't scream to let him go. The empire geomancer didn't twist his arm or drag him away. She just grabbed his wrist because the guy was being a prick and refusing to listen to her. Not even a second letter, the WS guard punched her. With not a chance to explain herself or the situation.
Saying that the woman holds responsibility because she "committed assault" is blatantly blaming the victim.

I'm talking about the actual law in real places here. Like, you can argue all you like that grabbing someone shouldn't be assault, but I assure you that it, in fact, is. And is even more likely to be in both polities presented in this Quest.

If you genuinely think that your coworker actions are going to cause serious delays and troubles to the project and they continue despite your explicit warnings? Of course you can force them away. It's not about "thinking you know better". It's about not letting mistakes that are going to severely negatively affect you and the project happen because apparently it's assault to do so.
If you are working at a construction site and see some mismanaging heavy equipment and they refuse to stop despite your warnings, you physically stop them. Ideally you would call an overseer or a guard, but that may not be always an immediate option.
You don't just let them continue because "you don't think you know better".

If a coworker is physically forcing you away from your task, then yes, that's assault. Both legally and, if the task is not immediately dangerous, morally. Like, costing time and money sucks, but you don't get to physically force people out of your way to get to an elevator just because missing it will cause you to lose time and money...you losing time and money is a motive for an assault, not a legal or moral justification for one.

If it's immediately dangerous (as in the example of heavy machinery) it's acceptable assault to save their life or the lives of others, and you shouldn't generally be punished for it, but that's true of tackling someone under similar circumstances as well...doesn't mean that tackling people is okay when there's not imminent danger.

Yes it is. One is purposely meant to inflict harm and pain, to hurt the other person. The other is meant to momentarily stop them without hurting them. In case you haven't noticed, only one person is the medical bay getting a tooth regrown. The WS guy is perfectly hale and hearthy. Because grabbing someone writ is not comparable to punching them in the face.

We actually don't know that. They guy in question could have a broken wrist for all we know...he probably doesn't, but assuming he is unharmed by someone grabbing him hard enough to prevent him from moving his arm is not a safe assumption at all. That can easily leave bruises or worse depending on how hard she grabbed him.

Also, grabbing is often a prelude to other violence. Do you think if someone has already assaulted somebody, the law enforcement personnel nearby should wait for them to escalate the nature of their assault before stopping them? I'm not saying punching her was correct (it was probably a bit too much escalation), but physically stopping her probably was.

Punching is assault, grabbing isn't. Saying that it is is an insult to all the victims of actual assault, resting severity to what they suffered.

I am talking, objectively, about real world laws. Which say grabbing is assault. Your issue is not with me, it's with actual real world legal codes.

This is also very much like saying nobody who's been punched can claim they've been assaulted unless they've been beaten into a coma, since that's insulting to the people who've been beaten into comas. Even if being grabbed isn't usually as bad as being punched, it can still be assault.

"Enforce your will upon them because you know better"? Come on. That's and intentionally extreme way of describing non-violent behaviour. She didn't tackle him. She grabbed his wrist for a single second.

By her own account. We haven't heard the other side yet. And, again, we're talking about physically forcing someone to do something...touching someone's wrist to draw their attention is very different from grabbing it and trying to force their arm not to move and equating the two is not correct.

Physically stopping someone from breaking something by making a mistake you are actively warning them against is not assault. No if you do it in a non-violent way like standing in their way or, yes, grabbing their wirst.
Or should we just let people cause problems and damage because apparently is inherently wrong to "force" them to not do so?

Grabbing someone's wrist is, in fact, violent. Certainly grabbing it hard enough that they can't move their arm is likely to leave bruises at the least. And letting people cause problems is bad, sure, which is why you escalate it to someone who has actual authority and can sort out who is in the right about how the project should be handled.

If the Empire geomancer genuinely thought it warranted it, then that's enough. Because she didn't enact any violent action, and definitely not assault. Her intention wasn't "to force her will on the guy through force"

Her will was 'stop doing that' and then she physically forced him to stop doing it. How is that not enacting her will through force?

If the girl had started things by punching the guy then, yes, she should be hold responsible. But it was the violent guard that started thowing punchs.

Punching is not the only form of violence that exists.
 
Yeah. Notice that Xia Lin was able to separate them and settle things down without punching the guard in turn. Because she's actually competent and has qualities such as "discipline".

If the guard had moved to separate them that would be fine, but instead we have them assaulting someone in a complete lack of discipline for a diplomatic situation. They've fucked up and if this is the level of discipline we can expect from their soldiers we need to be having words.
 
Yeah. Notice that Xia Lin was able to separate them and settle things down without punching the guard in turn. Because she's actually competent and has qualities such as "discipline".

If the guard had moved to separate them that would be fine, but instead we have them assaulting someone in a complete lack of discipline for a diplomatic situation. They've fucked up and if this is the level of discipline we can expect from their soldiers we need to be having words.

I still want to hear their side of the story. This is probably correct, but not in the unlikely event that the guy actually does have, like, a broken wrist.

Like, my own impression is that a guard intervening was 100% warranted but she probably intervened too hard and should thus apologize...but we need more details to know that for sure.

EDIT: Actually, re-reading it, there were 'further fisticuffs' once Xia Lin got involved, so she did in fact hit people. Of course, the hitting had already begun by that point, but she almost certainly did indeed punch the guard in turn.
 
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I really don't get what y'all expected from them here. They aren't co-workers. They aren't even operating under the same set of laws.

And they are aware they are vastly overpowered by us, especially with us being the stuff of tyrants and nightmares (high level cultivators active and running things) to them. They are going to have the mindset that if they give us an inch, we will take a mile and ask for more. So they are going to be VERY JUMPY about imperials starting shit.

You can't treat this as if everyone is partners and allies in the same enterprise. That's the hoped for outcome of the submit, not where we are now. Right now, a foreign soldier was getting rough with a non combatant and they have zero reason to believe that it wasn't a power play and would stop, so they stepped in and reminded the imperials not to trespass against them. And understanding that they were probably going to die for doing so. Which Xia they got was a stroke of luck for them.
 
If I remember right Ling Qi was actually very close to a win there, if we'd rolled better in the last exchange.
Do we know why? That seems inconsistent with the mechanics and strategy of the time.
Nah
Actually winning was never in the cards
The goal was to take out Dharitri in order to force Liling into showing more of her hand

The Quest version got close, and the RR rewrite actually had Ling Qi narrowly succeed in knocking Dharitri out
But actually winning the fight wasn't possible
The moment Dharitri gets taken out Liling would have said "fuck it" and nuked us and we wouldn't have been able to withstand it

The only reason why she didn't simply do that to begin with is that the whole point is to try to defeat Ling Qi with the least amount of force possible
 
"As I said, during daily work upon the meeting hall, our methods came in conflict with the foreigners and as a result of the flaws in such… experimental construction, the geomancy of the site was undermined. When an argument broke out over this, one of the foreign guards struck an imperial artisan with her fist. There were some further fisticuffs, but your Xia Lin stopped steel from being drawn, but this is quite grave no? It's unacceptable behavior."
Self-report. Jin Tae did it, because that's his job here.

...admittedly, I was going to blame Jin Tae no matter what went wrong. Fucking us over is the only interest the MiniInt has here, and he's likely being held back by his leader's Way making him go covert with his treachery. "Preserving the integrity of Imperial culture" is like preserving the Lings' maids' chastity.
 
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Look. We've had opportunities to offer face to the Ministry of Integrity and we've repeatedly chosen to not take them. The fact that they're now even more opposed to us is something that we kind of brought on ourselves.
 
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