Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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[X] Let Bao Qian mingle with the other guests. Its very likely she is here for you
 
[X] Let Bao Qian mingle with the other guests. Its very likely she is here for you
Can't remember if i voted, so just to be sure.
Really exited about this development, and really happy we went for the weilu instead of courting imperials, might have had been somewhat awkward backgroudn music for the conversation. :V
 
Discreet =/= secret
Her positioning is deliberately ambiguous whether she's just a fan of this type of music(note the Meng's origin story, they have reason to particularly favor checking out talents in this genre), whether she's here to touch base with Ling Qi politically, or whether its a public statement that "we are considering our options".
Sixiang snorted in her head. "For what its worth, looking below, seems like she's deliberately avoiding spooking people. Seems like a lot of them haven't even noticed who she is."
It's the proper thing to do. You don't show up at a small performance with your aura at full blast. It's rude, like wearing white at a wedding. Obviously she doesn't want to make a scene but she isn't hiding her presence. Some have noticed her already, she's just discreet enough to not make a big deal out of it. I don't expect we'll see much of a malus from ignoring the nobles once rumor spreads, even if they're here at our invitation.
 
Rumor mill is going to have a field day with us meeting with the Meng representative at the duchesses court.
 
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"Sure I'll help squirt!" Sixiang announced cheerfully. "Just want to clear something up first. The girl in the song isn't meant to be you, right?"

"Tch, obviously not," Hanyi scoffed. "She's supposed to represent like, the mystique of winter and stuff. You can't make a song about yourself until you have something to brag about."

"Naturally," Ling Qi said, covering her smile with her sleeve. It looked like Hanyi was at least a little self aware.
She's aware of that much, seeing as she's been in the shadow of significantly more powerful individuals all her life.

Though...it's who she wants to be, if I'm reading this right.
"Right, just figured I would make sure," Sixiang chuckled. The rays of evening sunlight refracting from the hanging icicles shimmered, forming the muse's silhouette as she took on a lecturing pose. "So, the main problem I see so far is that the song is kind of directionless. It's pretty and all, but it doesn't feel like it's about much."

"Well, it's supposed to be about the first deep snow of the season," Hanyi said dubiously. "And how cool and pretty and peaceful it is right after the snow settles."

Sixiang nodded agreeably. "Mhm, in that case, I think you're missing something a little by starting the song after everything is settled. You might want to work on the beginning a little. A song isn't like a book, but you still need something of an arc to help keep your listeners attention."

"Mm, I guess so," Hanyi said slowly, looking back and forth between Ling Qi and Sixiang. "What do you think Sis?"

"I think a good song can't be the same intensity all the way through," Ling Qi mused.

"Build up and pay off," Sixiang said lightly. "Then we can figure out the wrap up. If the song's about a winter morning, what do you want to try and say with that?"

Hanyi blinked, cocking her head to the side cutely. It made Ling Qi want to ruffle her hair. "Huh? I want to say that the morning is pretty and quiet."
Sixiang pursed their lips. "That's… fine. I mean, what feeling are you trying to evoke in the audience?"

Ling Qi laughed under her breath as she found a seat on a fallen trunk. Hanyi swiftly took a seat beside her. They were probably going to be here for awhile yet.
Simple statements. Probably need to work behind that to get what she means by pretty and quiet. How is it contrasted against, and was what came before and after as pretty?

Compare it to the noise of the storm that laid down the snow perhaps, or to the beauty unseen of the night before? The sun as a transition, terminal to the snow, but essential for bringing out its beauty.
The performance hall lay in the center of the town, past the innermost walls. The hall mostly hosted performances from journeyman musicians, common cultivators seeking patronage and minor nobility seeking to make a name for themselves outside of their parent's courts. The baron of this town was an eighth generation cultivator, with an ear for the arts, so it was a good place to find opportunity.

Bao Qian naturally, was friends with said baron's son, and had pulled a string or two and called in a favor.
That sounds like quite a few strings, it sounds like a place not easily booked on short notice.
Ling Qi stood inside, gazing out of a window on the second floor. Hanyi was in the room behind her, probably making trouble for the young ladies who had been assigned to help her get ready for the stage. Ling Qi didn't particularly envy them.
Hah, all the airs of a diva but with the patience of a twelve year old.
Zhengui was napping, and she didn't plan to wake him up before the actual performance.
Good idea, seeing as him napping through that would make Hanyi miffed!
"Miss Ling," he greeted back with a bow of his own. "How is our performer?"

"Excited," Ling Qi said absently, listening with half an ear to the sounds coming from the room. "Although she doesn't much like applying cosmetics it seems."
Hmm...she looks like a drowned child, so its Double Down or Mitigate. Usually with a child you don't need much.
Double Down probably goes on to maximize the contrast, draw attention to her nature. The classical chinese movie method would be using overkill on blushes to emphasize how pale the rest of the look is, or black lipstick and whitened teeth with eyeshadow to accentuate the lack of blood.
Or mitigate and try to just smooth things out so she looks a bit unearthly, but cultivator unearthly over undead unearthly.

"Still, I hope she has prepared well, we have a surprising number of guests."

Ling QI hummed, she knew Bai Meizhen and Bao Qingling were going to be here, and she had offered an invitation to Suyin and Renxiang too, even if both girls were too busy to attend. She had even weeded Wang Chao and a few others into coming just to boost the event a little.
Oh no Ling Qi has gone full mom and has dragged all her friends and coworkers into the recital.
"I am a little surprised we even managed to still have the event," Ling Qi admitted.

"With the events in the south you mean?" Bao Qian asked, leaning against the wall a few steps down from her. "People of the Empire cannot be so easily spooked."

Ling Qi glanced at him, noting the wryness in his tone. She knew what he actually meant. It was a matter of face. Everything was fine. It was handled. Just a little scuffle in the mountains. Yet, for all that, Ling Qi had not missed how many soldiers were on the walls, or the new bolt and net throwers being installed on the towers. Even the hum of qi under the paving stones spoke of furious maintenance and readiness. Emerald Seas hadn't actually forgotten their lessons.
Maintaining the appearance of everything being fine while preparing hard and writing in the histories that "nothing went wrong ever".
Future generations are going to have a hard time indeed.
"And what do you think of news from the capital," Ling Qi asked.

"I think that it is good that our wise Duchess sought an end to conflict that would not harm our prosperity," Bao Qian said formally. "Why, it's almost as if she didn't have to battle the barbarians under Xiangmen at all. Merely… how did she put it? Go for a stroll. Perhaps have a chat."

Ling Qi gave him a sharp look, noting the humming of qi in the air, sealing their conversation. "Yes, I was surprised," Ling Qi admitted slowly. "With what I saw under the earth, it did not seem like it should have been so easy, or at least Xiangmen should have felt more of the Duchess' wrath."

"Well," Bao Qian said. "Some people are more reasonable than others."

Ling Qi looked at him silently, and he met her gaze evenly. He was being remarkably candid here, in so openly implying what he was. Cai Renxiang suspected that the Bao knew something but…

Perhaps they knew someone.
People are all different after all.
The ones under Xiangmen would have been acutely aware of the Tree's presence, compared to the relative frontier under the Argent Sect.

That breeds rather different attitudes about the capabilities of their neighbors..and if they project their own structure onto others, perhaps they might not have realized that the Empire was a larger and more coherent entity.
It was a bitter pill to swallow, and it stirred memories of misty graves, stoking an ember of anger. However, could she really say anything? "I certainly hope that you are right," Ling Qi said quietly, turning back to the window, watching people below in the street.

"I certainly hope I am as well," Bao Qian chuckled. "It can only take a few unreasonable people in the wrong places to ruin things for everyone."

"I will have to hope I can speak to reasonable… people then," Ling Qi said
Very hard for anyone to not treat things like this personally.
Its always easy to generalize enemies. People aren't archetypes and nations are not just very large persons.
"Did you ever investigate that matter we spoke of, regarding the Bao and the Luo," Bao Qian asked idly.

Ling Qi blinked at the change in subject, turning toward him. "I… haven't had much time," she admitted. "It was… some kind of land swap that went sour, right?"

"Something like that," Bao Qian chuckled. "During the conflict with Ogodei, we sold them an iron mine and its surrounding infrastructure, they needed it for armaments, and all we asked in turn were a small payment and a swap of a defunct barony nearby."

"Of course," he continued, stroking his chin. "Shortly after, there was a fortuitous find in the swapped land, a vein of Spirit Stones, deep in the earth, and the mine well, without Bao techniques the vein would swiftly go dry. Terrible, but we could provide service, for a fee."

The Bao had tricked them, Ling Qi thought, although she wasn't so rude as to say it. "How… unfortunate."
Doing this at war is a great way to lay grudges for generations.
Not that doing it at peace is much better, but they literally have to consider whether they want to spend lives or money here.


Bao Qian nodded along. "Isn't it though. Seeking the Law of Wealth in such a destructive way is so very tempting, but the costs always outweigh it in the end, or so I believe, even if it is your descendants that pay them. Much better to be a reasonable man and accept a little less now for far more later."
Law of Wealth?
Somebody ascended as the Great Spirit of Money?

"That is enough philosophy though," Bao Qian said cheerfully. "Really I wanted to speak with you about our guests."

"Oh?" Ling Qi asked. "Is there a problem?"

"Not a problem persay," Bao Qian said evasively. "Rather do you know what Lady Meng Diu is doing here?"

Ling Qi frowned, who was that? It came to her a moment later, one face among many in that opulent court. She had simply thought of her as 'the Meng representative' even if Cai Renxiang had naturally drilled her on names.
Still the good old airhead.
When she's not exerting her attention such things just don't stick.
"I-perhaps she is just here for the performance."

Bao Qian shot her a dubious look. She felt like she should be a little offended on Hanyi's behalf, but that wasn't reasonable. "Ling Qi, below is an audience composed entirely of young men and women not beyond the third realm, drawn by our invitations and the novelty of the event, and in the rearmost seating there is a fifth realm who is the younger sister of a sitting Count."

Well, when he put it like that.

Sixiang snorted in her head. "For what its worth, looking below, seems like she's deliberately avoiding spooking people. Seems like a lot of them haven't even noticed who she is."

That was… probably good?

"I'm not sure why she would be here," Ling Qi said slowly. "I mean, she seemed to approve of my arguments at court, but…"

Was that really it?
Hmm, that probably IS it actually. Her one interaction got enough interaction to show up to hopefully have a sequel talk.

Not a bad political move either - Shenhua showed interest, and that is always important for the winds of court.
Bao Qian nodded thoughtfully. "Regardless as the hosts, we should be mingling with the guests. That was my original reason for coming up here."

Ling Qi grimaced. Of course, she had been quietly hoping Bao Qian would take care of that and she could just chat with Meizhen until the performance started. Then after, Hanyi would hopefully be the center of attention.

Well, they had spent all of that time preparing Hanyi to hopefully make a good impression on the more traditional nobles. Maybe she should make use of that?
Renxiang Elsewhere: "Why do I feel an urge to facepalm?"
 
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They will surpass us if we don't pay attention guys
 
A good argument for waiting would be if we wanted her to meet and interact or see us interact with Hanyi.

Hoping we can introduce her afterwards regardless. We come across best when we are being sincere and being a proud older sister is a pretty good scene.
 
So, I don't know if anyone has discussed the next level of Melody of Spirit Seekers, but it looks like it will be a fun one!

Essentially, if I am reading it correctly, it will allow us to safely communicate with Cyan level spirits who might be dangerous to others by their existence, either powerful weather effects or other extremes. As long, of course, the other spirits are friendly enough to communicate with.

I can imagine that this technique could be very useful in approaching the more powerful spirits and getting their attention. After all, it's not every day that someone can go and communicate with them and not suffer the effects that surround the spirit.
 
A passing Storm
A Passing Storm

Lightning rumbled above, laughing at the play and actors below. Li Shen knelt on the ground, head bowed to the hammer beats of rain. An older man stood behind him, an arm bound to his chest and head wrapped in bandages revealing a sorry state. Li was little better, cuts and scrapes from the wild escape burned, his left eye blurry and unfocused from the blows sustained. Neither of them were in a state to fight, let alone run. With a sigh Li stood up and canceled his art.

"Hu. They have found us again."

The old man nodded once, a nod of dejection heavy with weary. "What now, Lord?"

"Do you remember the abandoned mines?"

"Yes."

"They are the village's best chance. I have been unable to contact forces of the clan or duchy. Given the strength of this incursion it may be some time before we can be found again. Travel by night and when you reach the mines stay inside. Some may be sent out to forage if food becomes dire. Minimize time spent outside and wait for imperial relief."

"As you say Lord. Where shall you meet up with us?"

Li Shen wiped away rain from his eye. "Such arrangements won't be necessary."

Old Hu's hand twitched, as if he almost reached out to drag Li Shen away. Then Old Hu bowed his head. Between one lightning flash and the next he was gone, whatever sound his departure made masked by the rumbling laughter of uncaring skies. Li Shen was alone.

Alone. Had he ever been alone? Bodyguards had shadowed him since he could crawl. Even as lowly placed in the family as he was, he was a Li. Even during his private cultivation there had always been a sense that someone, somewhere, was watching him. Now, now there was peace. The peace of being alone. The peace of being at the end of a journey.

He found himself standing at a pond. His father's pond. Above him stretched the indomitable Black Lotus Mountain and around him the flowers his mother loved waved in an autumn breeze. Kneeling at the edge of the pond, he watched as a single droplet rose above the still waters, a single memory to play out.

He had been much younger, kneeling in this same spot, watching ripples while his brother lounged on nearby rocks. Earlier that week an assassin had almost reached him and he hadn't left his room since, until then. When his brother came and dragged him out.

They had talked a lot that day. More than any day before or after. They talked about life, courage, and fear. Li Shen etched the words spoken that day into his heart. Had them guide his steps. To here.

It was the laughter that drew him away from his memories, of autumn flowers and changing leaves. He was no longer alone. A group of twelve sat astride their mounts before and above him. He could hear their voices despite the storm. Hear the barbaric and near senseless noise they made to each other. See blood still staining their beasts fur even as the rain pounded down and slickened everything. Wind and lightning crackled under hoofs as they discussed how best to kill him.

Li Shen's fingers gripped his sword tighter, flexing with the beat of the rain. He could feel where water had wormed past even as the worn handle flexed with the pressure he exerted. The blade, what was left of it, twisted slightly as he rotated his wrist. Chips and cracks marred the once beautiful blade. It was a full third shorter than it had been three days ago. Even the spine of the blade was now crooked, the haft having split and rebounded.

The apparent leader made a decision. A sharp gesture had the rest knocking their bows. Li Shen held his blade up, looking at his reflection one last time. As the barbarian leader knocked his arrow, Li Shen repeated the mantra that had guided him to this point. "With the sword, I seek courage." The arrow came as he finished his words. His blade rose to meet it.

His blade flashed through the storm. He watched as it split rain, wind and wood. Beautiful in form, perfect in function. The arrow, split in half, spun away from him, harmless. It was the best swing he had ever done, but a single raindrop is not a storm. Even if he repeated such beauty a hundred times over, he could not stop a storm.

A minute later the leader nodded in satisfaction. His mount wheeled him away, higher into the storm. The rest followed shortly. The cliffs were finally left in silence. Silent, except for a passing storm.

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A.N
@yrsillar Omake for the Omake throne
This piece is meant to take place during the start of the Ogodei's war. Thank you for taking the time to read it.
 
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