[x][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.
[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Drilling Air Bullets
[x][Mizuki] - Keep an eye on Mizuki all day. You don't trust him as far as you could throw him.
 
[x][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.
[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Shadow Clone
[x][Mizuki] - Don't get involved. You're sure whatever he tries to pull the village will stop. Probably.
 
[x][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.
[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Shadow Clone
[x][Mizuki] - Keep an eye on Mizuki all day. You don't trust him as far as you could throw him.
 
We haven't seen much of it, since the narrative focussed on Hisana, but I'm curious what the skill difference between canon Sasuke and this Sasuke is.

He's definitely gotten a tutor of his own with the clan funds, and while he doesn't have a Sharingan, Hisana's probably more than willing to directly teach him any particularly useful jutsu. The benefits of an on-par sparring partner shouldn't be underestimated either. Plus, of course, having the Hawk summons for half a year before canon.

Same goes for Naruto, but the changes are more obvious there.

Also, is it just me, or did the "dojutsu specific iryojutsu" selection do nothing? I didn't see any mention of medical techniques in the update, and Mystical Palm is still unfinished.
 
[x][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.
[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Drilling Air Bullets
[x][Mizuki] - Keep an eye on Mizuki all day. You don't trust him as far as you could throw him.
 
We haven't seen much of it, since the narrative focussed on Hisana, but I'm curious what the skill difference between canon Sasuke and this Sasuke is.

He's definitely gotten a tutor of his own with the clan funds, and while he doesn't have a Sharingan, Hisana's probably more than willing to directly teach him any particularly useful jutsu. The benefits of an on-par sparring partner shouldn't be underestimated either. Plus, of course, having the Hawk summons for half a year before canon.

Same goes for Naruto, but the changes are more obvious there.

Also, is it just me, or did the "dojutsu specific iryojutsu" selection do nothing? I didn't see any mention of medical techniques in the update, and Mystical Palm is still unfinished.
Sasuke is, somewhat obviously, stronger than canon (though he's probably trained less) and is in a much better mental state. Not being the last of the Uchiha, and having what was essentially a big sister to take care of him has done a lot for his psyche.

It didn't get included in the update because I was already struggling for time/words, but it should have been on the character sheet. You now know the Eye Plucking Technique.

It's exactly what it sounds like.
 
[x][Receptors] - Don't use them. The few extra points and a cool factor aren't worth it.
[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Drilling Air Bullets
[x][Mizuki] - Don't get involved. You're sure whatever he tries to pull the village will stop. Probably.
 
Sasuke is, somewhat obviously, stronger than canon (though he's probably trained less) and is in a much better mental state. Not being the last of the Uchiha, and having what was essentially a big sister to take care of him has done a lot for his psyche.

It didn't get included in the update because I was already struggling for time/words, but it should have been on the character sheet. You now know the Eye Plucking Technique.

It's exactly what it sounds like.

Right. Thanks, I suppose.

I'm still a little salty about people going for it over genjutsu, but at least we'll have it ready in case the need comes up, I guess?
 
It didn't get included in the update because I was already struggling for time/words, but it should have been on the character sheet. You now know the Eye Plucking Technique.

It's exactly what it sounds like.
How hard is it? How long is the recovery from the eye transfer? Basically, is it viable to swap an eye with Naruto for a day or two? And then swap back.
 
[x][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.
[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Shadow Clone
[x][Mizuki] - Don't get involved. You're sure whatever he tries to pull the village will stop. Probably.

We don't need to get involved with Mizuki.
 
[X][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.

[X][Credit] - Show the examiner your chakra storage seal

[X][Mizuki] - Don't get involved. You're sure whatever he tries to pull the village will stop. Probably.
 
[X][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.

[X][Credit] - Show the examiner your chakra storage seal

[X][Mizuki] - Don't get involved. You're sure whatever he tries to pull the village will stop. Probably.
 
And... what excuse would we give for this, when it's inevitably noticed?
Outside of mangekyo, for which each eye has its own special technique, as far as I know, one sharingan is basically as good as two sharingans. Giving someone a sharingan is a massive boost (genjutsu resistance, jutsu copying ability, etc). Giving Naruto a sharingan is a SUPER massive boost, even without OCP knowledge, because shadow clones times sharingan? Almost a gamebreaker. Even outside of shadow clone training.

So, temporarily giving Naruto a sharingan eye (if the procedure doesn't damage it or Naruto's eye) would be quite useful for the purpose of missions, building team cohesion and such.

And then there's OCP knowledge: Kyuubi, Uzumaki blood and all that accelerating and improving our sharingan every time he uses it. Basically, think of it as investment. We loan Naruto a sharingan to use during missions and training. He, in his Uzumaki body with his transmigrant soul and Kyuubi chakra, uses it, likely increasing the rate of its advancement many times. We then take it back, getting an improved sharingan.
 
Why the hell would we swap eye's with naruto? For even a day?

I would down vote and vehemently argue against that shit if it's even proposed.

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Kyuubi is more likely to try and make Naruto fucking blind than improve the Sharrigan. He absolutely hates that shit.
 
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[x][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.

[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Drilling Air Bullets

[x][Mizuki] - Don't get involved. You're sure whatever he tries to pull the village will stop. Probably.
 
Let's not just give people one of our magical eyes please.

  • We'd just be making them a target.
  • It requires us to remove our eye.
  • I'm not sure Sasuke would react well to us giving someone a Sharingan eye.
  • Pretty sure Naruto won't want us to remove our eye for him.
 
Why does Sasuke not have his sharingan? Wouldn't the inserted character know that he unlocked it during the massacre, yet forgot about it. Tell him to direct chakra towards his eyes, directed via the characters own sharingan if it's help, until he turns it on.
 
I don't know why people are still going on about this. The QM has already said it's not viable. And even if it was, as it has been said, do any of you think Kurama of all people would enhance a sharingan eye for the benefit of an Uchiha? He hasn't even warmed up to Naruto yet, which is something we might want to accelerate, now that I think of it.
 
I don't know why people are still going on about this. The QM has already said it's not viable. And even if it was, as it has been said, do any of you think Kurama of all people would enhance a sharingan eye for the benefit of an Uchiha? He hasn't even warmed up to Naruto yet, which is something we might want to accelerate, now that I think of it.

Our character wont be able to accelerate that without some very pointed questions. Like how we know he has the fox in him in the first place. Especially since Naruto likely isn't even going to know he has the fox in him as we derailed canon pretty badly regarding that. So we will have to tell him that he has a demon fox in his belly and tell the hokage how we know he has the demon fox in his belly.

We don't have the excuse of being high up on the Uchiha latter either, being a bastard and all.
 
Our character wont be able to accelerate that without some very pointed questions. Like how we know he has the fox in him in the first place. Especially since Naruto likely isn't even going to know he has the fox in him as we derailed canon pretty badly regarding that. So we will have to tell him that he has a demon fox in his belly and tell the hokage how we know he has the demon fox in his belly.

We don't have the excuse of being high up on the Uchiha latter either, being a bastard and all.

I can't imagine that Hiruzen would keep it from Naruto for much longer. It's going to come out and he would be an idiot to let it come out on anything other than his own terms.
 
I can't imagine that Hiruzen would keep it from Naruto for much longer. It's going to come out and he would be an idiot to let it come out on anything other than his own terms.

I think his plan was to tell naruto when he was a chuuni, along with info about his parents, or at least a bit older than he currently is. Even then we have to wait until Naruto himself tells us. Or maybe when he is a full genin under a Jonin. Even then, trying to use meta artificially accelerate their friendship near the end is just going to end poorly. Let it run it's own course, trying to manage that is just going to end in tears.

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We have more pressing things to worry about than to meddle with and outsmart a cranky like 1000 year old fox chakra construct.
 
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I am going to strongly suggest that instead of individually recalculating jutsu costs?
You simply put a [-X% discount to all techniques unless otherwise specified] next to the Chakra Control attribute.
Or group it as [-X% discount to C-rank techniques],[-Y% discount to B-rank techniques] et cetera, changing as her Chakra Control improves.

Simplify your book keeping.

"Oh don't you worry about him. I have something for him that'll blow both your minds." Hisana said, and grinned. Learning the Shadow Clone jutsu had been hard - they really did take prodigious amounts of chakra - but worth it.
So Naruto picks up Shadow Clone, on top of the Great Breakthrough.
I wonder what observers have been thinking over the last four years, because you know we've been under scrutiny.
And given how competitive his class were, just how much they stepped up their game in response.

I mean, AU Sakura knows Mystic Palm before even stepping out of the Academy.
Wanna bet where Ino is in response? Or Hinata?
Hisana had payed for an A-Rank mission, yes, but she hadn't quite been expecting this. Standing by the gates, waiting for her and Sasuke, was a team of four ANBU. Including one with a dog mask she was about a thousand percent certain was Kakashi. He'd dyed his hair, but she was certain he'd let a few silver roots show on purpose. The cheeky bastard.
Anyone wanna bet there's a ROOT member in there?
Not to mention the fact that both Uchiha children left the village for several days while one of them was toting a fuckmassive seal scroll is going to have drawn the attention of every intelligence agent in the village.

Kakashi is testing Hisana and Sasuke I suppose.
Or reassuring them. Or it could be a third party.Who knows.
I guess that by the time we get jounin-sensei, if this was Kakashi, Hisana will recognize his chakra.

The cache was hidden within the ruins of an abandoned city, which looked strangely modern to Hisana's eyes.
Really not happy about this.
The revelation of the cache location means we can't reuse the location for anything.
Water under the bridge now.

Hisana and Sasuke walked into the cache, and found themselves amazed. Everything from chakra-metal swords to rare weapons taken as trophies to sets of armour that looked like they dated back to the Warring States Period to scrolls filled with rare jutsu. They went around sealing things into Hisana's scroll, stopping when they finally found the summoning scrolls.
This is not an arms cache; this looks more like an attempt at preserving clan history that also happens to include usable weapons.
The variety of things here suggests that the Uchiha set up a fallback plan when village tensions began to rise post-Kyuubi.
Someone moved this shit out of the village piece by piece.

They were also sad reminders of the Warring States Period. Hisana knew her modern sensibilities were being ground down by Konoha's rather skillful indoctrination, but she thought that even they would have objected to the smallest of the swords.
Point of order:
Warring Clans Period, not Warring States.
Interesting bit of fluff there, if we're talking weapons for children young enough that an employer of child soldiers would object.

Atop Hisana's forehead, between the Gates of Opening and the Gate of Healing, sat a red diamond.
Given the GM's emphasis on how deception is a thing here?
I guess that Hisana has been wearing makeup on her forehead ever since she figured this out, else someone is going to have recognized it by now.
And she'd have had an interview with Sarutobi.

She'll probably be wearing her hitai-ate over her forehead forthwith.
Chose one choice from each of the categories below, voting is by line.
Showing off shurikenjutsu is inconsequential enough that I can't see why not.
Hisana is an exceptional student, and not actually showing much off would arguably draw more attention than showing stuff off.
So have a little fun.

I notice all the ninjutsu options are B-rank techniques.

Showing off the Shadow Clone pretty strongly fingers us as the source of Naruto's knowledge of Shadow Clone; dude has never been a great scholar, and I doubt that changed in this AU. Nor is he particularly subtle; betting everyone in his class knows he can use all the D-ranks and some C-rank ninjutsu.
It doesn't reveal anything else that we don't want to show off though, and given how Naruto already knows some ninjutsu after hanging out with Uchiha, it's hardly a big shocker.

Both Drilling Air Bullets and our chakra storage seal reveal capabilities that only our private tutors and close friends know we have.
Especially the chakra storage seal.
I see no reason to show off B-rank Wind Release or chakra storage seals in a genin Academy test.

Not keeping an eye on Mizuki is just begging for Bad Things to happen.
We don't need to follow him; in the last turn we learned Shadow Clone, and we went to the trouble of signing a summons contract.
Send a henge'd Shadow Clone, or summon a raven and ask it to shadow him, if we don't think our stealth is good enough.

Do note that this is an AU Mizuki, so he might well be entirely harmless.
But sticking one's head in the sand has never been a predictor of good outcomes.
 
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Hmm. I'm a bit worried by the multiple significant power-ups, even if those could be attributed to the perks of meta-knowledge, Uchiha clan resources, and several years of prep. I can't figure out whether the QM is implementing the multiple power-ups for the sake of fun & awesomeness, or is setting Hisana up for a major crash later. Or maybe both? I dunno.
Oh, someone as paranoid as I am.
We are being given access to stuff that suggests the opposition coming our way is going to be...interesting.


VOTE
[x][Receptors] - Do use the receptor tagged shuriken. Spelling your name in shuriken after bouncing them off random objects after throwing them backwards is gonna be so cool.
[x][Credit] - Show the examiner your Shadow Clone
[x][Mizuki] - Keep an eye on Mizuki all day. You don't trust him as far as you could throw him.


REASONS
Shuriken are cool, and we're allowed to show off a little.
Naruto is almost certainly showed off his Shadow Clone, or will; doing so ourselves doesn't say anything besides our having at least D-rank chakra capacity.

Track Mizuki via Shadow Clone or summon. It's good practice.
The village has no reason to suspect him; you do.
Besides, the dude has access to your school records; he has the potential to do you or your friends significant damage.
Not paying sufficient attention to the rest of the village got the Uchiha Clan killed; let's not repeat their experience
 
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