Magical Girl Quest - The Fire That Burns

The human mind is a very different subject from physics.
Seeing that she was around for as long as humans existed, she should have seen it coming anyway.

Besides, physics is also a very different subject from magic.

forget the safeguards one time and suddenly your no longer a chesmasster with plots spanning centuries.
Another thing Hastur and other assorted entities can tease her about over the Divine Phone.
 
forget the safeguards one time and suddenly your no longer a chesmasster with plots spanning centuries.

To be fair, PtV in capable hands unsafeguarded is one of the most powerful abilities ever.

If Gaia wanted us all to be at the forefront and defend her/ use as a tool to expand her influence beyond the world, it is an excellent tool.

Just, uhh, don't expect "capable hands" to include teenagers or younger :V.

Frankly I kind of expect Gaia wanted to aim Big.

It is somewhat of a pet theory (though there is probably not enough actual basis) that Gaia created our trio to reflect the original Duo.

We have Beginning and End, which we can once we reach higher levels of mastery hit infinity, which is the first affinities (and therefore the ones most central to them) of both Cosmos and Void.

Our super ability strips reality away to nothing (leaving a "void") but if I am right uses the energy from that to Begin things anew create a new [Reality] in its place. Cosmos is currently [Reality].

Daiyu I already explained how she fits in here:

While Rukia's reply to you is satisfactory in one way, I also like to point out that this is an utter misconception for Crystalwatcher's universe.

Love and Protection are in no way the creation of humanity, not by a long shot.

Forget [ Time ], forget [Beginning], forget [End].

The only reason anything [Exists] at all is out of Cosmos' [Love] for Void. Out of that love she decided to instigate it all and force everything to exist.

Also Love is something specifically mentioned as a thing that Cosmos brought with her when she stepped into existence.

And there is a reason that both Cosmos' and Void have the "guardian of Cosmos" ability in reference to Void.

You could say that Love is what Cosmos represents most outside of her affinities, and that Protection represents Void the most outside of her affinities.

Rather, those two qualities are in ways more central to them than most of their affinities are.

[Beginning] and [End] might have [Existed] before [Love] but if not for [Love], [Beginning] and [End] would never have existed in the first place.

Love and Protection are nothing to scoff at conceptually in this world, and are every bit as fundamental to it existence as [Beginning] and [End] is, if not more so

Daiyu being what the two represent outside of their affinities.

PtV girl, we don't know much about but:

I'd say that PtV is nothing more than a cheap, bargain brand version of Nothing is True and Infinity Calculation
Void's Character Sheet said:
Nothing is True
-Void is capable of seeing both the past and present in it's entirety, simultaneously without any negative consequences.
Infinity Calculation
-Void is capable of using past knowledge to calculate the possible paths the future will take within an error margin of 0.000000000173%

Actually, in a sense PtV is a safeguarded version of this because you can answer questions about the past or plot a specific course in the future without your brain melting down because the sheer amount of information those two abilities give are far above and beyond human Calculation.

It is also exactly the type of thing that could perhaps at level 100 take advantage of that 0.000000000173% error margin.

Hence all three becomes reflections in some way of Cosmos and Void.

While I am unsure if Gaia would actually have done this as a plan to spread her influence enough that she replaces [Reality] (somewhat unlikely especially since Void would probably nip anything having a chance of harming Cosmos in the bud long before it actually gets to that level), making her Trio a homage to the legendary duo, with perhaps the ability to one day be their equal sounds right down her alley.

Of course now that the trio is broken…

Well it was probably never meant to be anyway.
 
Hey @Rukia, is this a thing? :V

Your Cellphone

Base Stats

Health: ∞
Base Damage: 10
Base Resilience: 5
Magic Modifier: N/A

Affinity: Technology
Abilities

Nokia
Your Phone is indestructible to anything bar attacks with Obliterate.

I mean, everyone believes they are indestructible after all...

Edit: Removed quote because it borked the accordion.
Edit 2: Original here
 
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Hey @Rukia, is this a thing? :V

Your Cellphone

Base Stats

Health: ∞
Base Damage: 10
Base Resilience: 5
Magic Modifier: N/A

Affinity: Technology
Abilities

Nokia
Your Phone is indestructible to anything bar attacks with Obliterate.

I mean, everyone believes they are indestructible after all...

Edit: Removed quote because it borked the accordion.
Edit 2: Original here
This amuses me.

If you sincerely try to do it, then I will make it possible to have an Indestructible Nokia.
 
I thought it was confirmed that Alpha and Omega was multi dimensional and effected every reality that was connect to the same place?
 
The next time we get the occasion to experiment with A&O, I have a few questions I want to find the answer of:
  • Are we able to make more than one appendange?
    • If so, what are their range limit?
  • How fast can we reshape the Barrier into different forms?
  • Exactly where the center of our Barrier is?
  • Are we able to change the color of the strange hue our Barrier cast over everything inside it?
  • Are we able to sense things that intrude inside our Barrier?
  • If we keep the Barrier under our skin, how long do we have to wait until it eventually start gathering energy?
    • Does it vary between locations?
  • How long does it take for our Barrier to become self-sufficient?
    • Does it vary between locations?
  • Are we able to lower the rate of degradation?
  • Why is it that the heat between the inside and the outside of our Barrier doesn't equalise, but the air pressure does?
  • Where does the stream of filtered magic come from?
    • If so, is it from [Nothing]? (we got a glimpse of it, might as well compare as long as it doesn't harm Cerys)
  • Are we able to reverse the process of degradation?
    • If so, are we able to shape reality while it is in the process of being recreated?
That's pretty much it. I can't think of anything else to look into without going (too much) into speculation.
 
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I noted those down.
However, some things like reversing the process is something I really do not want to do anytime soon. That might very well kill Cerys, considering that the origin of the aura is her soul.


By the way, I was thinking that the lightning bolt pinging off might be The Hungering Void in action. It says that it negates spells... but does not specify that it absorbs them.
That would fit with the fact that Cerys seems to temporarily unlock stronger Abilities when under a lot of stress, such as the buff we were told is for much later against the dark mage.
 
However, some things like reversing the process is something I really do not want to do anytime soon. That might very well kill Cerys, considering that the origin of the aura is her soul.
Yeah, that's why I put those last two questions at the end. They were the most dangerous to look into.

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Plate Armour
Level 7
-I am the Knight of Infinity-- Increase Base Resilience.
Plate Armour
Level 4
-I am the Knight of Heart-- Increase Base Resilience.
Knights Aria
-300xp
-Train with Daiyu
-Sync with Daiyu in combat, follow the rhythm of your heart, the flow of the fight.
No mention of Victory, it makes you wonder if Sayaka was really a knight. :p
But seriously, I wonder what's the flavor text Daiyu has for her ability. I can't think of anything with 'your infinity'.
 
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Yeah, that's why I put those last two questions at the end. They were the most dangerous to look into.

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No mention of Victory, it makes you wonder if Sayaka was really a knight. :p
But seriously, I wonder what's the flavor text Daiyu has for her ability. I can't think of anything with 'your infinity'.
Eh Gaia propably just sent us the latest patch notes right after PtV died,couldn't stop us from killing ourselves,(It's not a bug!It's a feature!) butshe can at least provide us synergy with our remaining Battle-Sister.
 
No mention of Victory, it makes you wonder if Sayaka was really a knight. :p

I have the feeling that I am the only one evil enough to actually leave these kinds of things untouched... which then leads to something like this:

Surpassing all others [No longer applicable]
-For as long as she is on the same battlefield as ????, !!!! has her Magic Modifier doubled and gains an additional attack per turn.
-For as long as she is on the same battlefield as ????, $$$$ has her Flight speed increased by 100mph and her base damage doubled


Looks nice and all at first glance... until you realise what it actually means.
 
Canon Omake: Home is where your sister lies
Omake: Home is where your sister lies

You lay next to big sis, hugging her tightly while avoiding putting any pressure on her stomach, gently blowing her long hair out of your face as she snores quietly.

You glance at her face, yet again looking for any trace signs of frowning, of injuries hidden when awake revealed in sleep.

It isn't there. You look at her stomach, unharmed. You frown.

If it wasn't for the fact that she was brought in sleeping, if it wasn't for Morgan telling you what really happened, you'd know nothing.

For all that magic is the absolute best thing ever (besides big sis, of course), you don't like not knowing.

She shifts in her sleep, holding you tighter.

You wonder if the other monsters she fought were as easy as she claimed.

You look towards Morgan, sitting on a chair close by, her usual smile when she looks at the two of you absent, her face still puffy from tears that looked like they could return at any moment.

You had cried too, but you stopped. It wouldn't do for sis to see that.

You fall asleep in her embrace.

You awake with a squawk as Morgan spreads herself over you to hug big sis. You groggily shift as you adjust to being awake, moving to gain maximum snuggles from your now awake sister after Morgan pushes her back down from her attempt to get up. Heh. If the situation wasn't what it was, you'd make a joke there.

Finally shaking yourself awake enough to hear words, you catch the tail end of a thanks, as Sis takes a sip of soup that you can only guess came from Morgan.

Sis' smile almost makes you forget how close she came to death.

You shuffle your way onto her lap, putting your head under her chin, as you hear Morgan chuckle behind you.

"Una, I'm here."

Words of comfort, that would normally make you feel the safest in the world coming from her, but today it isn't good enough. You hug her tighter and nod in acknowledgement, before saying with all the force you could currently muster, "You were hurt."

An understatement, but the words you wanted to say you couldn't bring forth. She sighs, as she rubs her hand through your hair, "I was, but I got better."

Her voice was gentle, soothing, and all too dismissive. It was that dismissiveness that gave you the strength to push forward, as you hug her tighter, "You almost died."

You feel her attention move away from you and settle on Morgan. You can't see her face, but the sudden tension in her body can't be hidden from you. You can tell what she realized, you can tell that she isn't happy about it.

You can tell that she didn't want to burden you. That she loved you, that she would protect you from anything.

So why does it feel like it burns, even as she gently brushes your hair with her fingers?

You focus on remaining calm, on not crying, on not being weak on not being helpless.

Eventually you calm down, and you feel her hands move you so that you are no longer leaning into her, but looking at her in the eyes, "I came back, just like I promised."

You frown at the missing intent behind the letter of the promise, but nod anyway. Sis always keeps her promises.

If only you had the courage to get her to make the right ones.

You move to lie down on her lap, not content, but not having the will to push the conversation forward, to take the final step. You listen to their conversation.

"Did anything else happen when I was gone?" You let her voice centre you.

Morgan shakes her head, "Not really, your team made it back fine, not even any injuries because of you." You're not surprised, Morgan looks like she wants to say more on the subject, like she'll pass the bridge you'd never dare to, but doesn't, "We are keeping the place on watch, but it's been quiet so far. Apart from that, Daiyu has started training so she can go out, she'll make an excellent sparring partner from what I've seen. She knows how to handle a sword." You slightly perk up, your gaze zeroing in on Morgan, as images and scenes from manga popping up in your head, "She already knew how to use a sword. Well, not the sword and shield she has, but it's apparently close enough. The only spell she's shown us so far is a barrier, but it's very strong. Her armour is pretty tough, but she's not as fast as you are. Honestly, it looks like the two of you were supposed to have appeared together in a Duo, but didn't for whatever reason."

You slightly smile at the fact that Sis is now part of a magical girl team, the other girl isn't as awesome as Sis, but perhaps together they'd be strong enough for Sis to not be hurt anymore.

You look up at sis, her forehead scrunching up,"huh, that's... Yeah." she nods. "I should spar with her properly."

Luckily Morgan is on top of things as she glares at her, "not today you aren't. You are going to stay in bed and rest."

Sis doesn't respond to that. Normally she'd never just lay and rest a day when there are things to do, and she would fight against it. Today she doesn't, and it gives you comfort.

There is a way even now to tell if she is hurting after all.
 
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Omake: Home is where your sister lies

You lay next to big sis, hugging her tightly while avoiding putting any pressure on her stomach, gently blowing her long hair out of your face as she snores quietly.

You glance at her face, yet again looking for any trace signs of frowning, of injuries hidden when awake revealed in sleep.

It isn't there. You look at her stomach, unharmed. You frown.

If it wasn't for the fact that she was brought in sleeping, if it wasn't for Morgan telling you what really happened, you'd know nothing.

For all that magic is the absolute best thing ever (besides big sis, of course), you don't like not knowing.

She shifts in her sleep, holding you tighter.

You wonder if the other monsters she fought were as easy as she claimed.

You look towards Morgan, sitting on a chair close by, her usual smile when she looks at the two of you absent, her face still puffy from tears that looked like they could return at any moment.

You had cried too, but you stopped. It wouldn't do for sis to see that.

You fall asleep in her embrace.

You awake with a squawk as Morgan spreads herself over you to hug big sis. You groggily shift as you adjust to being awake, moving to gain maximum snuggles from your now awake sister after Morgan pushes her back down from her attempt to get up. Heh. If the situation wasn't what it was, you'd make a joke there.

Finally shaking yourself awake enough to hear words, you catch the tail end of a thanks, as Sis takes a sip of soup that you can only guess came from Morgan.

Sis' smile almost makes you forget how close she came to death.

You shuffle your way onto her lap, putting your head under her chin, as you hear Morgan chuckle behind you.

"Una, I'm here."

Words of comfort, that would normally make you feel the safest in the world coming from her, but today it isn't good enough. You hug her tighter and nod in acknowledgement, before saying with all the force you could currently muster, "You were hurt."

An understatement, but the words you wanted to say you couldn't bring forth. She sighs, as she rubs her hand through your hair, "I was, but I got better."

Her voice was gentle, soothing, and all too dismissive. It was that dismissiveness that gave you the strength to push forward, as you hug her tighter, "You almost died."

You feel her attention move away from you and settle on Morgan. You can't she her face, but the sudden tension in her body can't be hidden from you. You can tell what she realized, you can tell that she isn't happy about it.

You can tell that she didn't want to burden you. That she loved you, that she would protect you from anything.

So why does it feel like it burns, even as she gently brushes your hair with her fingers?

You focus on remaining calm, on not crying, on not being weak on not being helpless.

Eventually you calm down, and you feel her hands move you so that you are no longer leaning into her, but looking at her in the eyes, "I came back, just like I promised."

You frown at the missing intent behind the letter of the promise, but nod anyway. Sis always keeps her promises.

If only you had the courage to get her to make the right ones.

You move to lie down on her lap, not content, but not having the will to push the conversation forward, to take the final step. You listen to their conversation.

"Did anything else happen when I was gone?" You let her voice centre you.

Morgan shakes her head, "Not really, your team made it back fine, not even any injuries because of you." You're not surprised, Morgan looks like she wants to say more on the subject, like she'll pass the bridge you'd never dare to, but doesn't, "We are keeping the place on watch, but it's been quiet so far. Apart from that, Daiyu has started training so she can go out, she'll make an excellent sparring partner from what I've seen. She knows how to handle a sword." You slightly perk up, your gaze zeroing in on Morgan, as images and scenes from manga popping up in your head, "She already knew how to use a sword. Well, not the sword and shield she has, but it's apparently close enough. The only spell she's shown us so far is a barrier, but it's very strong. Her armour is pretty tough, but she's not as fast as you are. Honestly, it looks like the two of you were supposed to have appeared together in a Duo, but didn't for whatever reason."

You slightly smile at the fact that Sis is now part of a magical girl team, the other girl isn't as awesome as Sis, but perhaps together they'd be strong enough for Sis to not be hurt anymore.

You look up at sis, her forehead scrunching up,"huh, that's... Yeah." she nods. "I should spar with her properly."

Luckily Morgan is on top of things as she glares at her, "not today you aren't. You are going to stay in bed and rest."

Sis doesn't respond to that. Normally she'd never just lay and rest a day when there are things to do, and she would fight against it. Today she doesn't, and it gives you comfort.

There is a way even now to tell if she is hurting after all.
Canon.

+20xp
 
Nicely done, another 20xp for the pool.
If we hurry it up and work together, we can still overtake Cerys' total EXP gains! :V

Anyway, I liked this.
We are talking our build in a much different direction. Instead of being able to tank everything I think we are going for be able to sense everything and destroy it far before we are in it's range. Should work on our thermal sense and mana sense.

If we could sensed those ghost it would have been a much different fight.
 
We are talking our build in a much different direction. Instead of being able to tank everything I think we are going for be able to sense everything and destroy it far before we are in it's range. Should work on our thermal sense and mana sense.

If we could sensed those ghost it would have been a much different fight.

Um... what does that have to do with anything right now?
I never planned on tanking everything... and sensing everything is probably out of our reach anyway. We have to look into that later.
 
I'm alive.
Maybe.

Sorry about the long break and intermittent posts, my sickness came back with a vengeance, but I'm mostly over it now.
No chapter today, but I'll give you guys an extra POV swap tomorrow with the chapter.
 
I'm alive.
Maybe.

Sorry about the long break and intermittent posts, my sickness came back with a vengeance, but I'm mostly over it now.
No chapter today, but I'll give you guys an extra POV swap tomorrow with the chapter.
It is fine. You not updating for a few days gives me hope to catch up one day with my more sedated pace.

On the other hand, 30k more words (roughly fifteen Updates) and you passed CW in terms of wordcount.
 
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I have also decided that a lot of the wonkiness that the levelling encounters is because I bent the system to work for me rather than trying to align to the system Crystal made.
Quick vote (I've already taken the votes and locked the previous one), do you want me to go over and move everything into compliance with the main system, as it should be? Or do you want me to leave things as they are?

If things are moved back, you will lose the exponential scaling on most things (Including Daiyu), bar A&O or IA. It will be possible to get that back, but you will need to get a sponsorship. (Gaia is valid and there is at least one other on Earth.)

[] Fix the system
[] Do not fix the system

Regardless of your votes, I've edited every other character sheet to work as it should be.
EDIT: If you vote not to fix it, the explanation will be that you are already sponsored by Gaia, this has it's upsides and downsides.
 
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[X] Do not fix the system

We already went this long with how things were, might as well continue.
Additionally, it would flow perfectly with the fact we were basically given our powers by Gaia so of course she is sponsoring us. Most other girls will awaken naturally, after all.

That is a sound explanation to me, at least.
Adhoc vote count started by Naron on Sep 26, 2017 at 10:25 AM, finished with 19 posts and 6 votes.
 
Additionally, it would flow perfectly with the fact we were basically given our powers by Gaia so of course she is sponsoring us. Most other girls will awaken naturally, after all.

That is a sound explanation to me, at least.
This was my though regarding the Knights, but I might as well put it to rest now, I've already fixed the derpiness of other things.
This also means that I don't have to go back and re-write 30,000+ words of combat
 
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