Green Sun, Black Shadows (CG/Exalted)

A Wind of Death Begins to Blow (GSP Ayane Makitako by ReaperofInterest)
A Wind of Death Begins to Blow​

'I failed.'

Thus were the thoughts running through Ayane Makitako's head. The young albino woman had tried to save a small group from a pack of hungry ghosts that were after them. She had done everything in her power to aid them, used every scrap of her knowledge of creatures of death so that they might escape, and she had failed. Completely and utterly. Not even a single person was left alive. Devastated, she began to cry.

She wept bitter tears for the poor souls who relied on her, for her family which she had lost to a death cult a few years ago, for the people who her unlamented late master had hurt, until she could eventually cry no more.

"You done yet?"

Whirling around, the woman tried to determine who spoke.

"Who's there?!"

A snort. "The name's Finac, and don't you look pathetic crying your eyes out. What's got you so sad?"

"Oh I don't know, maybe the fact that I just let down people who were counting on me to save them! They trusted me, they believed that I could help them, and I-I..."

A disgusted sigh rang out. "So you failed and now your going to sit there and feel sorry for yourself instead of actually doing anything?"

Fury wan through Ayane's body. She couldn't see the speaker, but he had talked long enough that she had figured out his probable location. Screaming, she punched at where she thought the speaker was, and was happy to feel the impact of a hit.

"What the hell? How did you...oh! Those gauntlets...they're artifacts aren't they?"

The voice which was at first angry sounded curious. It's next statement was laced with a tone of...respect maybe?

"And you just being a mortal. Well girlie, I think that it's time you got a look at who you're dealing with."

With that, a...something popped into existence in front of her. It had bony horns and protrusions, and was the color of spilled blood with a few brighter streaks mixed in. It was carrying some sort of saw-blade, mainly black with gold edges and a hilt like it was meant to be used as a sword.

"So what are you?"

"I'm an Erymanthoi. Blood Ape, to use the common term. I'm also a demon."

"Really? So what's a demon doing here?"

"To put it bluntly, I'm here because you failed. I'm here because I was determined to be more expendable than some other schmuck. I'm here to offer you power to right the wrongs the world has done to you. I'm here to gain a new servant for my masters efforts to escape their prison."

"And who are your masters? The Neverborn perhaps? I've seen the results pf this song and dance before, and I'm not going to become an Abyssal, thank you very much!"

"Actually, my masters oppose the Neverborn. You won't become an Abyssal Exalt, you'll become an Infernal. So what do you say? Want to fuck up the Neverborn's plans for Creation?

"Why are you being so forthright with me? Aren't demons supposed to be deceptive and tricky?"

"Some are, but not me. A craftsman whose known for being deceptive tends to windup needing a new job."

"Huh. Well, you do know how to make a decent sales pitch. I'm in."

With that, the demon smiled, put down the sword, and said "Consider the sword a starting bonus. It's useful against creatures of death."

The Erymanthoi pounced on the girl, and a chrysalis formed. About an hour later, it broke, and Ayane took her Second Breath. She then noticed something rather prominent.

"What the fuck happened to my hair?! And why do I have horns?"



Name: Ayane Makitako
Age: 20
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Caste: Scourge
Patron: Cecelyne


Motivation: To protect the innocent from predations of the dead
Urge: Create an organization that reveres the Yozis and work to destroy all creatures of death (Cecelynian)
Anima Banner: A graveyard full of bones and creatures of death being torn apart by wind and blades
Essence: 3
Willpower: 9
Virtues: Compassion 3, Conviction 3, Temperance 2, Valor 4

Attributes: Strength 4, Dexterity 5, Stamina 3, Charisma 3, Manipulation 3, Appearance 4, Perception 4, Intelligence 3, Wits 5
Abilities: Martial Arts 2, Melee 4, War 2, Integrity 3, Presence 4, Resistance 3, Survival 4, Investigation 3, Lore 3, Medicine 2, Occult 4 (Creatures of Death 3), Awareness 4, Dodge 3, Stealth 3, Linguistics 1 (Native: Japanese. Old Realm), Socialize 2
Background: Backing (Yozi) 1, Cult (Yozi) 1, Influence (Yozi) 1, Artifact (Stygian Gauntlets) 3, Artifact (Gold Saw Blade) 3, Unwoven Coadjutor (Finac, Erymanthoi) 1

Traits from Unwoven Coadjutor: She has grown red horns from her head and her hair has turned dark red with brighter streaks (-2)

Merits
Eidetic Memory +2
You can remember things seen and said with perfect detail. By gaining at least one success on an Intelligence+Awareness roll, you can recall any sight or sound, or even smell accurately, even if it was only for a moment. Three successes and you can recall an event perfectly. A boon for Sorcerers who may use this Merit to reduce their training times for spells.

Concentration +1
You have the ability to focus your mind and shut out distractions or annoyances. Any reduction from your dice pools from distractions, or even pain, are reduced by 2.

Flaws
Albino -1
You have no melanin. You once had pale white hair, and still have red eyes and no tolerance for sunlight. Pack sun screen. A lot. Other Solars and Spirits may take it as a sign that the Unconquered Sun finds you in disfavor.

Artifacts
Stygian Gauntlets: These war-gloves forged from Soulsteel have but a single purpose: to allow their user to strike at spirits without trouble. When used while unattuned, it allows the wearer's melee strikes to hit spirits as if they were materialized. When worn by an attuned user, it halts the previous effect, and instead forces all spirits within a 1 meter radius of the user to become material or suffer 1 unsoakable health level of bashing damage. In addition, spirits cannot become incorporeal until they leave the previously defined radius. These are both passive sorcerous effects, and can only be halted by unattuning the gauntlets.

Gold Saw Blade: This sword was the creation of the Erymanthoi craftsman Finac and was created from Soulsteel and Vitriol for the purpose of destroying creatures of death so that they would not interfere with the will of the Yozis. It allows it's attuned user to spend 1 to 3 motes per hit to upgrade a corresponding number of wounds on a creature of death by a single level. This effect cannot be used on living beings, and it cannot be used to inflict bashing damage on a creature of death instead of upgrading wounds..

Charms

General Charms
First [Yozi] Excellency, Second [Yozi] Excellency, [Yozi] Inevitability Technique, [Yozi]World-Shaping Cosmogony, [Yozi] Mythos Exultant
Cecelyne, Adorjan

Cecelyne Charms
Hellscry Chakra
Ephemeral Abrasion Curse
Transcendent Desert Creature
Sands Through Fingers Defense
Holy Land Infliction
Locust Mana Plague

Adorjan Charms
Wind-Born Stride (X3)
Who Strikes The Wind?
Joy in Violence Approach
Threat Monitoring Excitement
Thousandfold Typhoon Hand
 
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so she's been charged with founding a holy order dedicated to eradicating the undead in the name of the Yozi?
Pretty much. The in-story reason is that Cecelyne decided that Malfeas and Metagaos were onto something when they gave Alice and Mamami their Urges, the idea could use some support. A single Exalt, while great, can only do so much at a time after all. Creating an organization to help with that makes the job easier, and why not increase the number of Yozi cults while they're at it? The out of story reason is that I thought it might bring up an opportunity for a few laughs later.
 
Pretty much. The in-story reason is that Cecelyne decided that Malfeas and Metagaos were onto something when they gave Alice and Mamami their Urges, the idea could use some support. A single Exalt, while great, can only do so much at a time after all. Creating an organization to help with that makes the job easier, and why not increase the number of Yozi cults while they're at it? The out of story reason is that I thought it might bring up an opportunity for a few laughs later.
Pretty cool character concept. Now, for the most important question: What kind of name she will give for the holy order she will establish?
 
"fear not, the gods shall not forsake you!"
"worry not, even bound as they are the true lords of all shall shield you from the mistakes of the upsruper gods!"
"Excuse me? was it not the yozi who empowered the restless dead in there mad crusade against creation?"
"I don't know, but It sure as shit wasn't the yozi who spent thousands of years with nothing so much as resembling a credible threat letting the underworld built up its forces!"

now the trick is to make sure that there dogma encourages such arguments ending in a zombie killing contest rather than a brawl on the palisade.
 
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They would be treated the same as any other organizations. Probly have a higher loss of capital when undergoing leadership projects, but since that's at the story tellers discretion IMO.

The Creation ruling Mandate (MoJ's organization rules) is mainly for large scale actions, and not one (or even many) individuals actions. Even the giant busbase Lulu just got doesn't register, as it is just part of the organizations wealth (which I rated at equivalent to resources five currently) .
I see. Maybe I'll give it a look.
+3 Xp for you. I can't wait until she starts using Kimbery's Kaiju-making Charms *giggle*
Y'know what's awesome? Not getting any alerts about being mentioned in posts. :(

FORUUUMS! *shakes fist*
Ouch, that sucks. Did you make character sheet that now you have to discard?
Edit: Oh, speaking of Linguistics. C.C. Probably would just Love to help with it for her safehouse upkeep. No, it's not an punishment at all.
Great idea! Thanks for the tip, and welcome to the Quest! ;)
The last Malefactor. Someone to be a companion in Lelouch's suffering, so he has someone to mutually complain to about all the insanity inducing nonsense he's dealing with.
Freya: "You mean...this is normal for you?"
Lelouch: "Yes."
Freya: "My condolences."
Lelouch: "Thank you."

+3 Xp for you.
Hmm, I'm not an writer but little idea for Infernal exalted popped in my head.

Since Clovis started to purge purists, that means Kewell Soresi was among them.

Now her sister Marika worked under Cornelia before joining Knight of Ten protection squad.

Green Sun, Black Shadows (CG/Exalted) shows that one KoR was shot down and rescued with heavy casualties at MEF.

So, idea in all simplicity. Knight of Ten was shot (since it hasn't been said anywhere) Marika was part of the rescue party but got left behind. MEF forces captured her and basically left her to rot dead at desert after torture. There she curses her leadership, Clovis, Solars and all the gods, until demon comes that is.

Basically high willpower (stayed alive with almost that alone) survival type with some combat skills. Who has lot of hate for Clovis (and probably for the person who made Clovis to start purging people in first place. Makes an interesting situation if that comes out.)

Anyway, just an though. If anyone want to make something of that, feel free.
Oh? This is a pretty intriguing idea. Is anyone interested in writing it?

Honestly, Socialize 1 and a week of training doesn't sound like very much preparation for Malfeas at all, even for people more sensible than Akio.

Granted, Exalted learn faster than mortals and also GSPs are in a lot less danger in the Demon City than almost anyone else would be, but it's still a seriously alien place with any number of ways to get oneself into trouble.
Uhm, you're right. Gonna do some tweaking.
A Wind of Death Begins to Blow​

Create an organization that reveres the Yozis while destroying all creatures of death (Cecelynian)
I think the Urge work better worded like this: "Create an organization that reveres the Yozis and work to destroy all creatures of death (Cecelynian)". Beside that I didn't expect you to use Black Gold Saw, but I loved the surprise ^^. +3 XP for you.
 
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I think the Urge work better worded like this: "Create an organization that reveres the Yozis and work to destroy all creatures of death (Cecelynian)". Beside that I didn't expect you to use Black Gold Saw, but I loved the surprise ^^. +3 XP for you.
I'll go ahead and make the suggested change then. That does make a bit more sense than the current wording.

EDIT: And done.
 
Her artifacts make me raise an eyebrow. She fights against The Dead, but she uses soulsteel? Does she know what that stuff is made of?

Unless soulsteel was houseruled, then I find it hard to believe she'd tolerate something like that.
 
Actually, shoot that: I have been reading some good RWBY fanfictions lately, and I've got into the mood for a challenge. The Last Infernal is a Scourge with Ebon Dragon as Patron, so I would like to ask if anyone is interested to do a snippet about those two:


Who's the GSP and what kind of being the other is up to you.
 
Her artifacts make me raise an eyebrow. She fights against The Dead, but she uses soulsteel? Does she know what that stuff is made of?

Unless soulsteel was houseruled, then I find it hard to believe she'd tolerate something like that.

Oh she knows. It's just that it's the best thing she's got, and she doesn't want to throw such useful tools away. A few years of working for the Abyssals (even if unwillingly) taught her the value of using everything you can get your hands on as effectively as possible, and that morals might have to be compromised to achieve maximum effectiveness, not to mention what can happen when you let your morals get in the way of your job/duty. However, if she ever figures out how to make equivalent artifacts that don't require Soulsteel, you can guess what her first actions are going to be.
 
Actually, shoot that: I have been reading some good RWBY fanfictions lately, and I've got into the mood for a challenge. The Last Infernal is a Scourge with Ebon Dragon as Patron, so I would like to ask if anyone is interested to do a snippet about those two:


Who's the GSP and what kind of being the other is up to you.
I'll reserve it. Got some free time this weekend to work on it.
 
I'll reserve it. Got some free time this weekend to work on it.
Such great news!! If it can help you can go with the Lunar mate option for the second character, even if it was already used more than one time. Recruiting powerful allies is a must in the Reclamation, and Lunar partners for all Infernals will come up in the future, one way or another...
 
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Such great news!! If it can help you can go with the Lunar mate option for the second character, even if it was already used more than one time. Recruiting powerful allies in a must in the Reclamation, and Lunar partners with all Infernals will come up in the future, one way or another...
I was considering making the other one a Heroic Mortal. I just don't know where to find the Creation rules for them :p
 
I just thought something. @NSMS, didn't you call dibs on the Ophidian Scourge? I'm just checking to make sure.
Yeah- I'm a decent way into writing the omake (I have... about two and half scenes left to write in it, I think?), but it's coming along annoyingly slowly.
Ooops....Sorry Estro, I forgot. No Roman and Neo...:(
Honestly, I'm still going to finish the write-ups, and you can do with them what you will. If nothing else, I'll have NPC's done for my own game when I start one up. :V
I would like to read them.
 
Aww. Sad face. I was halfway through stating up the Melodic Cudgel (Roman's Cane).

Can't be helped, I suppose.

I'll just have to wait until one of the current infernals die! Bound to happen at some point, right?
 
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