Fate/Clusterfuck (Fate/Stay Night)

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Think I'll be locking this one soon, hope people enjoyed the reveals. This quest has taken a lot out of me over the years, lots of worries and struggles. But it's been an enjoyable ride.
 
[X] [It was a girl with an eyepatch, she looked mauled]

Erien said:
Adhoc vote count started by Erien on Mar 22, 2025 at 6:49 AM, finished with 24 posts and 18 votes.
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Results so far. Hope peeps enjoyed that one.
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It was great, but man, that "I don't like being lucid" from Mordred hit like a rock. I hope Circe and Shirou's kid has pig magic.
Erien said:
Think I'll be locking this one soon, hope people enjoyed the reveals. This quest has taken a lot out of me over the years, lots of worries and struggles. But it's been an enjoyable ride.
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Thanks a bunch. This has been a solid and engaging exploration of the setting with a few more chaotic elements supplied and you delivered on that in a big way.
 
Erien said:
Think I'll be locking this one soon, hope people enjoyed the reveals. This quest has taken a lot out of me over the years, lots of worries and struggles. But it's been an enjoyable ride.
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Your Quest told a Wonderful Story.
Feel Proud of your work

Now, I thing I noticed wasn't talked of last chapter
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Her features harden. "No. I won't."

"Illya?"

Illya stares at you for a few moments, the room as silent as the grave. Then she speaks. "Shirou… I need to speak to Leysritt."
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Illya Is going to use the "Dress of Heaven"

Now, seeing how few Servants have died, the Lesser Grail shouldn't be ready to appear, Let alone the Gate of the Greater one

But I feel Illya has something in mind that isn't her Heaven's Feel Sacrifice
 
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Erien said:
Adhoc vote count started by Erien on Mar 22, 2025 at 6:49 AM, finished with 24 posts and 18 votes.
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At some point my general mood went from "haha what a clusterfuck" to "Oh. What a clusterfuck." *huffs long drag from cigarette* and the prior somewhat-levity never really came back in full.

Okay. Let's do this. Once more unto the breach.

[X] [It was a girl with an eyepatch, she looked mauled]
 
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Your thoughts come to a pause, as a faint sense of unease fills you. "Oh, if we survive this…"

"Issei is going to kill us." Ayako finishes.
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Well, they had a good run. Hopefully the aircons are still around and need fixing, Shirou can bargain for his and Ayako's life from there.
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"You misunderstand me Shirou. She is alive. She is no longer a figment of the past, she is no longer a shade retaining form. She is now alive enough that Alaya accepts her existence in this world. She isn't a remnant, she simply is a being from the Age of Gods walking in this time."
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Oh.

I like Circe, so knowing she isn't going to disappear in a puff of logic is good. On the other hand, I doubt Shirou actually had much to do with that. I'm very worried it's related to whatever the Dark Lord of the Rings is doing. He has a vested interest in being alive and real for his plans, most likely.
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"... How?" you manage.

"A Magic of some variety I would imagine, I finally managed to get Circe to speak of it. Though we still do not know all the details. But she is alive." She continues to stare at you for several moments, then she speaks again, her voice barely above a whisper. "As am I."
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Yeah, extra worried now.
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"No, the cause of my vexation is the fact that you have impregnated Circe."
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Ah.

Yes, I can why Medea might have thoughts about that. Interesting that she was the one who told us and not Circe though, you'd think all this, and that last bit in particular, would be something she'd love to tell Shirou herself, with him in line of sight where she can watch his reaction.

So maybe she's letting Medea do the honors, knowing she might have something else to share beside returning to life herself?

... Ah, Medea is probably pregnant too, and Circe wanted to let her share the news herself. But she's being Medea about it and hiding behind the life and pregnant Circe thing. I'd say the odds at two for two pregnancies with what is, in the grand scheme of things, very little sex is astronomical. But we are deep in magic and absurd odds anyway, so I can believe it.

Though thinking about it...
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Ayako blinks slowly, then sticks out a hand, flattens it, then presses it to a spot just above her hips but below her stomach. "You got pretty deep in humanity though?"
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... Three for three, perhaps? Those two had better figure out a plan, or Issei really will kill them.
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"This is nice too… I don't want to lose this, not again." Her features harden. "No. I won't."

"Illya?"

Illya stares at you for a few moments, the room as silent as the grave. Then she speaks. "Shirou… I need to speak to Leysritt."
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Oh? Now what's her plan and why does she need one of her maids? Curious.
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How'd I do?
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Very good! I can only hope we can bring out everyone we brought in this place, alive and well. This is going to be the greatest and harshest clusterfuck yet.

[X] [It was a girl with an eyepatch, she looked mauled]
 
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Nottheunmaker said:
I like Circe, so knowing she isn't going to disappear in a puff of logic is good. On the other hand, I doubt Shirou actually had much to do with that. I'm very worried it's related to whatever the Dark Lord of the Rings is doing. He has a vested interest in being alive and real for his plans, most likely.
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I mean, ya'll did vote for the Sixth magic.
 

Fate/Clusterfuck (Fate/Stay Night) Mature - Fantasy - Modern

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GHlDyBYH9NY [It's Circe and Medea] Magic training. The Age of Gods. The Sixth Magic. Thanks to @Armoury for the beta! — "It's open." You say. You hear the nob jiggle, and you glance towards the door to see… no, you had accidentally locked it. You begin to...
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What this means however, is yet undiscovered.
 
I enjoyed the chapter. Seeing Shirou spending time with everybody, it makes me wonder of what could have been. Things like Mordred having her second, and possibly last talk, with Shirou without the madness. Sakura being thankful with Shirou for being there, but not having the same relationship she had in Heavens feel. How Circe said that she was meant to be dead, and that this timeline is the only one where Shirou and Medea became close. I would love to do this adventure again after this one finishes, though I can understand if you want to move on to other projects.

I wonder what happened to the others though. Ruler, Kairi, the others, did they die, run off? I didn't think they would do nothing and stand by.

[X] [A guard]

It's probably way too late to vote now or make my case, but I do like having sudden turns of fortune in the future.
 
Adhoc vote count started by Erien on Mar 25, 2025 at 7:59 AM, finished with 42 posts and 25 votes.
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Vote locked.

[Megumin]

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