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Crystalwatcher's Magical Girl Quest!

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LostDeviljho said:
Not sure how to define combatant though. The ability is supposed to very broad by design, so I can't just go "humanoids" or something, because then he doesn't get points for the hell beasts that magical girl over there just mulched.
Suggestions?


Battle flies. Really?
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If they're used to attack people, through pheromones or something, then they're battle-flies.
LostDeviljho said:
How's this look?
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Sounds good.
 
(Unified Light) Magical Girl Dead Empress

Nathan Roosevelt
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Stats

Health: 1,600
Base Damage: 1,000
Base Resilience: 750
Magic Modifier: 250

Affinity: Death | Horror | Epic
Weapon


Scythe of The End
Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: 1
Affinities: Death
Ability: Judgement

The Skull Servant
Level 1
Base Health: 1,500
Base Damage: 1,000
Base Resilience: 500
Attacks Per Turn: 1
Affinities: Death
Ability: Auto-Assault
Spells

The Touch of Death
-Dead Empress curses a foe to a wasting death.
Level 1
Base Damage: 1,000
Magic Modifier: 500
Affinity: Horror
Ability: Murder

Abilities

The Empress's Eyes
Level N/A
-Dead Empress can see everything any of her constructs can.

The Herald of Decay
Level N/A
-All corpses in Dead Empress's presence decay into bones at an extremely rapid rate.



I decided to go for a evil necromancer queen vibe with her, then turn it on its head by having her join up with the Unified Light. If she survives, I very much expect her to pick up necromancy and at least one spell to make a zombie apocalypse.
 
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(Unified Light) Magical Girl Insight

Shirley Locke
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Stats

Health: 450
Base Damage: 150
Base Resilience: 125
Magic Modifier: 100

Affinity: Prediction | Information | Legend Maker
Weapon

Moriarty
Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: 2
Affinities: Prediction
Ability: Unerring
Spells

Your Next Words Will Be...
Level 5
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Prediction | Information
Ability: Stun
Abilities

Endurance: Level 5
-Controls HP and Resilience.

Elementary, My Dear
-Magical Girl Insight may devote a single action per round to observing a foe, and discover one new element of their character sheet per action spent.

Quantified Combat
-Magical Girl Insight may sacrifice all her actions to negate a single opponent's actions, and gain a free counter.

This Mustn't Register On An Emotional Level
-Magical Girl Insight is resistant to most harmful mental effects, and nearly immune to emotion-based ones.


Her parents were fond of classical literature and puns.
 
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(Independent) Magical Girl Crimson Hood

Daphne Grimm
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Stats

Health: 1000
Base Damage: 500
Base Resilience: 375
Magic Modifier: 250

Affinity: Fear | Insanity | Myth
Weapon

The Woodsman Controls all stats.http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net...hainsaw.png/revision/latest?cb=20120314201845
Level 5
Attacks Per Turn: 2
Affinities: Fear
Ability: Mode Change | Murder (handsaw) | Catastrophic Damage (chainsaw)
Spells

What Big Wounds You Have!
Level 5
Base Damage: 100
Magic Modifier: 200
Affinity: Insanity
Ability: Vorpal | Murder
Abilities

High Speed Combat (LVL 2)
-Crimson Hood is able to track objects moving up to 180mph.

Over The River And Through The Woods
-Crimson Hood is not effected by terrain modifiers.

Host Of A Nightmare
-If The Big Bad Wolf is ever defeated, it will respawn from Crimson Hood's body


(Unaligned) Nightmare of Crimson

The Big Bad Wolf
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Stats
Health: 50,000
Base Damage: 3333
Base Resilience: 999
Magic Modifier: 666
Affinity: Fear | Change
Weapon
Fangs of The Monster
Level 9
Attack Per Turn: 9
Affinity: Fear
Ability: Armor Pierce | Vampire
Spells

Soul Eater
Level 6
Base Damage: 999
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Change
Ability: Consume | Assimilate
Abilities
False Existence
-Increase resilience by (Incoming Damage x 2). Reduce Resilience increase by (25% - Myth, 50% - Legend, 75 - Epic, 100% - Divinity).

High Speed Combat (Level 4)
-The Big Bad Wolf can keep track of, and react to, objects moving up to 360mph.

The Better To Hear You With
-The Big Bad Wolf can operate on sound alone just as easily as it can sight.

The Better To Smell You With
-The Big Bad Wolf can operate on scent alone just as easily as it can sight.

Who's Afraid Of The Big Bad Wolf
-The Big Bad Wolf inspires terror in all those around him, and grows stronger the more scared people are.

Morphic Nightmare
-The Big Bad Wolf can shapeshift freely, changing its body composition, growing additional heads and wings (which give it Flight LVL 10), and even splitting off smaller versions of itself.


See, the thing about wishing the monsters from your nightmares out of your nightmares is... Where can they go, but the waking world?
 
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LostDeviljho said:
See, the thing about wishing the monsters from your nightmares out of your nightmares is... Where can they go, but the waking world?
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Neat! I see we had the same idea as to where to find appropriate Red Riding Hood pictures. However, I see a slight potential problem. Greater Nightmares like the Wolf are supposed to fulfill some desire of the person they're spawned from. What does Red desire, that such a being formed to almost perfectly fulfill that desire would be...well, what you made?
 
ReaperofInterest said:
Neat! I see we had the same idea as to where to find appropriate Red Riding Hood pictures. However, I see a slight potential problem. Greater Nightmares like the Wolf are supposed to fulfill some desire of the person they're spawned from. What does Red desire, that such a being formed to almost perfectly fulfill that desire would be...well, what you made?
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Chronic night-terrors from early childhood lead to the thing she wanted most being, essentially "get it out of my head!". So now it's not in her head anymore.
 
LostDeviljho said:
Chronic night-terrors from early childhood lead to the thing she wanted most being, essentially "get it out of my head!". So now it's not in her head anymore.
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Ah, I see. Monkey's paw at its finest(?).

You know, I was rather tempted to use your topmost Wolf picture for my own Red Riding Hood's Wolf, but I decided against it at the last moment. I decided that it was a tad too 'nightmare', and not enough 'fighter'. Seeing what you've used it for, I find myself rather glad about that. Your use is much more appropriate for it than what I was originally going to use it for.
 
Makuta said:
So I'm guessing Big Bad Wolf is one of the few Greater Nightmares that hasn't lost their mind because 'Monkey's Paw Wish Yo'.
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On the other hand, Daphne's sanity probably isn't looking too good, what with a literal embodiment of her childhood nightmares hanging around. And what's worse for her, as long as she lives, it will come back to haunt her, no matter how many times it dies.
 
ReaperofInterest said:
On the other hand, Daphne's sanity probably isn't looking too good, what with a literal embodiment of her childhood nightmares hanging around. And what's worse for her, as long as she lives, it will come back to haunt her, no matter how many times it dies.
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And this is why sealing stuff in containers exists. Though on the other hand, I can see the Big Bad Wolf being sort-of protective of Crimson because of the fact that if she dies, so does it. Self preservation you see, not to mention that Crimson can't suffer from its presence if she's dead.
 
Makuta said:
And this is why sealing stuff in containers exists. Though on the other hand, I can see the Big Bad Wolf being sort-of protective of Crimson because of the fact that if she dies, so does it. Self preservation you see, not to mention that Crimson can't suffer from its presence if she's dead.
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While I have no doubt that object sealing does exist, the chances of sticking Wolfy in a jar are pretty low. Daphne sure doesn't know how to do it, and most people aren't gonna be able to do it to Wolfy before he kills them, eats them, assimilates their powers and abilities, and repeats the process on their friends.

You're right about the protecting Crimson bit though.
 
Y'know, while making these is fun, I've gotta wonder if any of these MGs we make will ever actually show up.
Maybe as canon fodder (or the cannons, in some cases) when whatever-that-operation-to-retake-Hope-is-called happens?
 
Where are those pictures from? It looks like something that might be worth reading.
 
Makuta said:
Okay, I know Nightmare of Crimson has a spell that has the Assimilate ability, but I'm pretty sure that it shouldn't be able to do that. Otherwise you made it overpowered compared to the rest of it.
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Well it doesn't get all their stuff. But if he assimilated, say, a tank, then he'd get armor and a gun, and if he assimilated a fire-themed MG he'd get some fire powers, etc etc.
He loses all of those if he's killed and needs to respawn, as well.

Sereg said:
Where are those pictures from? It looks like something that might be worth reading.
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Sugar Bits. It's a Bleedman comic.
 
@crystalwatcher, I've given it some thought, and I was actually wondering if I could add Dead Empress to the Fairy Tale Heroes after a few modifications. Her 'Evil Necromancer Queen' theme works well as evil royalty, which is a common staple in fairy tales. Her Skull Servant could have its Affinity could be switched to Horror and be given a Vampire Ability for the weapon matching, her Touch of Death spell could be switched to something where she fires off a green flame, given a Death Affinity and a Detonate Ability, and her current two abilities could be switched with an ability that protects her, her allies, and their golems from instant kill effects. The scythe could be unlocked later after the Skull Servant has been leveled up high enough, which might mean that the other four might be able to get regular weapons if they're golems are leveled up enough. The revised spell's name could be Deathly Flame, and the ability's name could be Empress's Protection.

I think that her addition would make the team better, as her revised ability would protect them form something that their range of abilities currently does not cover, depending on how necromantic constructs are counted, Beast Trainer's ability could make them better and more effective, and the addition of a 5th weapon would make it easier for them to defeat their enemies and protect themselves.

So what do you think?
 
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