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Why stop at just K/S? Why not have the entire Madoka cast as classmates? It's not like his school mates are anything other then background noise. Heck, did any of Shinji's canon classmates even to anything other then move around in the background, let alone even have names?Shinji and Kaworu
Tho given it's Stryp I see the confusion. I am halfway writing the first school chapter however so... Maybe the madoka immigrants can get a mention if Stryp likes.
Hikari, Touji and Kensuke are the only named classmates.Why stop at just K/S? Why not have the entire Madoka cast as classmates? It's not like his school mates are anything other then background noise. Heck, did any of Shinji's canon classmates even to anything other then move around in the background, let alone even have names?
Hikari, Touji and Kensuke are the only named classmates.
Of course, if you want to go with the theme - all three are named for characters in "Ai to Gensou no Fascism" by Ryu Murakami. So when I wanted names for classmates recently, I looked up other Murakami characters, heh.
Not as such? It's more like "whenever a name is needed". And I have no idea when this might be.Do you have plans for an Asami Yamazaki (or any part of her name) or a Shigeharu or Shigehiko Aoyama (or any part of his name)? (From Audition.)
That fits really well. Even if Fascism of Love sounds like something that would run me afoul of the mods.Hikari, Touji and Kensuke are the only named classmates.
Of course, if you want to go with the theme - all three are named for characters in "Ai to Gensou no Fascism" by Ryu Murakami. So when I wanted names for classmates recently, I looked up other Murakami characters, heh.
That fits really well. Even if Fascism of Love sounds like something that would run me afoul of the mods.
On another note a friend mine @jcmoorehead came out with a new fic that I would recommend since it just started.
Braver Than We Are (NGE Fanfic)
Write as you will, when you will.Alright, guys so I am sorry that this chapter is coming a bit slower than I hoped, I would say it is about half done so I should be able to put it out in a few days. In general, though I think the plan going forward will be a chapter every other week with an interlude in between. That gives me time to plan ahead more and hopefully not brick wall the fic. Here is a preview of a scene I have so far.
Careful not to trip on the sea of wires and cables beneath her, Ritsuko rose to her feet. She was in the heart of the MAGI, the brain of not just the Geofront but all of Tokyo-3. Mother's favorite child or at least a nice little copy of her. It had been hard, after Gendo had recruited her, to walk in the deep-worn footsteps of her mother. Many saw it as a pity appointment or just seeking a replacement Akagi, but these last five years had proven to not just herself that she was exemplary on her own merits and not just riding her mother's coattails. Dusting herself off and closing her device, Ritsuko headed towards one of the maintenance lifts.
Arriving at the main lab, she saw Maya in a similar condition to herself, overworked and underslept. Poor girl, Ritsuko thought. Your Pollyanna act can be slightly grating, but you're a hard worker and a good friend... It's a shame I can't give you what you want. At least you will soon have an intern or two to boss around – Shit I was supposed to do that.
The doctor swore under her breath as she walked over to one of the stations. Ritsuko picked up the bland brown folder that contained the list of candidates HR had sent for the intern positions, each sporting top marks, and an impressive technical skill set. To Ritsuko's tired eyes, however, they blended together.
"Maya, when you're done with what you're doing can you look over this?" Ritsuko asked as she placed the folder on Maya's desk. "It really should be me to make the decision but I'm falling down tired. And besides... It will be you who will be working with them most closely. Just... pick one you think looks good. If it doesn't work out we can always give them the boot..." Ritsuko looked around the room to see they were alone before continuing. "Unlike a certain doctor Makinami."
Again I would like to thank everyone for all the support and feedback, you guys are what really keep this thing going.
Alright, guys so I am sorry that this chapter is coming a bit slower than I hoped, I would say it is about half done so I should be able to put it out in a few days. In general, though I think the plan going forward will be a chapter every other week with an interlude in between. That gives me time to plan ahead more and hopefully not brick wall the fic. Here is a preview of a scene I have so far.
Careful not to trip on the sea of wires and cables beneath her, Ritsuko rose to her feet. She was in the heart of the MAGI, the brain of not just the Geofront but all of Tokyo-3. Mother's favorite child or at least a nice little copy of her. It had been hard, after Gendo had recruited her, to walk in the deep-worn footsteps of her mother. Many saw it as a pity appointment or just seeking a replacement Akagi, but these last five years had proven to not just herself that she was exemplary on her own merits and not just riding her mother's coattails. Dusting herself off and closing her device, Ritsuko headed towards one of the maintenance lifts.
Arriving at the main lab, she saw Maya in a similar condition to herself, overworked and underslept. Poor girl, Ritsuko thought. Your Pollyanna act can be slightly grating, but you're a hard worker and a good friend... It's a shame I can't give you what you want. At least you will soon have an intern or two to boss around – Shit I was supposed to do that.
The doctor swore under her breath as she walked over to one of the stations. Ritsuko picked up the bland brown folder that contained the list of candidates HR had sent for the intern positions, each sporting top marks, and an impressive technical skill set. To Ritsuko's tired eyes, however, they blended together.
"Maya, when you're done with what you're doing can you look over this?" Ritsuko asked as she placed the folder on Maya's desk. "It really should be me to make the decision but I'm falling down tired. And besides... It will be you who will be working with them most closely. Just... pick one you think looks good. If it doesn't work out we can always give them the boot..." Ritsuko looked around the room to see they were alone before continuing. "Unlike a certain doctor Makinami."
Again I would like to thank everyone for all the support and feedback, you guys are what really keep this thing going.
Damn it, Ritsuko... he's never going to give you what you want, or be who you desperately wish he was... You're just asking for heartbreak.Poor girl, Ritsuko thought. Your Pollyanna act can be slightly grating, but you're a hard worker and a good friend... It's a shame I can't give you what you want.
Me-yow. A little catty, Ritsuko? Or just paranoid about someone else smart looking through your files and maybe spotting secrets you really need hidden?
Hey the MAGI counts... sorta. What it lacks in a fleshy meat body it makes up for in processing power! Just don't ask it to open any pod bay doors"Don't worry Ritsuko you're an indispensable part of NERV's day to day operations since unless you have a sister we don't know about we're fresh out of Akagis after you!"
Little of column A little of column B. Rits is a genius but also a deeply emotional person and what is worse she is a deeply emotional person who hates that she is one so she bottles it up with a facade of stoicism until she snaps.Me-yow. A little catty, Ritsuko? Or just paranoid about someone else smart looking through your files and maybe spotting secrets you really need hidden?
Her feelings for him are deeply complicated. She isn't stupid, on some level she recognizes that she is being used, but in turn, she believes she is using him. In a twisted way, it is easier like that for her. To believe that its just two people using each other than the alternative... that she actually cares about him and is more emotionally compromised then she thinks.Damn it, Ritsuko... he's never going to give you what you want, or be who you desperately wish he was... You're just asking for heartbreak.
Thanks, I admit I am very new to this so I will make mistakes and slip-ups I just hope the ensuing train wreck will be fun to watch.
Alright, guys so I am sorry that this chapter is coming a bit slower than I hoped, I would say it is about half done so I should be able to put it out in a few days.
Thanks, I admit I am very new to this so I will make mistakes and slip-ups I just hope the ensuing train wreck will be fun to watch.
"Pollyanna act"? If she's acting then she deserves an Emmy, and for the people who hand them out to stop giving them out cause Maya's not going to be topped.Alright, guys so I am sorry that this chapter is coming a bit slower than I hoped, I would say it is about half done so I should be able to put it out in a few days. In general, though I think the plan going forward will be a chapter every other week with an interlude in between. That gives me time to plan ahead more and hopefully not brick wall the fic. Here is a preview of a scene I have so far.
Careful not to trip on the sea of wires and cables beneath her, Ritsuko rose to her feet. She was in the heart of the MAGI, the brain of not just the Geofront but all of Tokyo-3. Mother's favorite child or at least a nice little copy of her. It had been hard, after Gendo had recruited her, to walk in the deep-worn footsteps of her mother. Many saw it as a pity appointment or just seeking a replacement Akagi, but these last five years had proven to not just herself that she was exemplary on her own merits and not just riding her mother's coattails. Dusting herself off and closing her device, Ritsuko headed towards one of the maintenance lifts.
Arriving at the main lab, she saw Maya in a similar condition to herself, overworked and underslept. Poor girl, Ritsuko thought. Your Pollyanna act can be slightly grating, but you're a hard worker and a good friend... It's a shame I can't give you what you want. At least you will soon have an intern or two to boss around – Shit I was supposed to do that.
The doctor swore under her breath as she walked over to one of the stations. Ritsuko picked up the bland brown folder that contained the list of candidates HR had sent for the intern positions, each sporting top marks, and an impressive technical skill set. To Ritsuko's tired eyes, however, they blended together.
"Maya, when you're done with what you're doing can you look over this?" Ritsuko asked as she placed the folder on Maya's desk. "It really should be me to make the decision but I'm falling down tired. And besides... It will be you who will be working with them most closely. Just... pick one you think looks good. If it doesn't work out we can always give them the boot..." Ritsuko looked around the room to see they were alone before continuing. "Unlike a certain doctor Makinami."
Again I would like to thank everyone for all the support and feedback, you guys are what really keep this thing going.
Thanks. I admit due to my own issues I often struggle to see my stuff as worthwhile to write so it is always reassuring to hear people are enjoying it.Take as much time as you need, I always go by the thing of any progre4ss is good progress when working on my fic. Be it a sentance, a paragraph or an entire thing. Just don't pressure yourself to have it done by a set time.
Far from a train wreck, it's very good so far!
It's less that she is acting and more like Rits is just commenting on Maya's deeply optimistic personality. Something rare to find in the upper echelons of NERV. Nothing quite quashes the spirit then finding out a doomsday cult is controlling the world. There is, however, something to be said of cynical types like Rits assuming that everyone is as cynical as them."Pollyanna act"? If she's acting then she deserves an Emmy, and for the people who hand them out to stop giving them out cause Maya's not going to be topped.
Also do i smell fraternizing in the workplace coming?
What EvaUnit01 said. I liked what you've done so fr, and i like what i see here.
I think that's a fairly common issue among those who create. A friend of mine who does art has complained about feeling this way in the past. Just try and remember that ultimately, your writing is for your satisfaction, not ours. Us liking it is just a side benefit.Thanks. I admit due to my own issues I often struggle to see my stuff as worthwhile to write so it is always reassuring to hear people are enjoying it.
I know the feeling.Thanks. I admit due to my own issues I often struggle to see my stuff as worthwhile to write so it is always reassuring to hear people are enjoying it.
It's less that she is acting and more like Rits is just commenting on Maya's deeply optimistic personality. Something rare to find in the upper echelons of NERV. Nothing quite quashes the spirit then finding out a doomsday cult is controlling the world. There is, however, something to be said of cynical types like Rits assuming that everyone is as cynical as them.
New chapter is almost done, I was going to finish it yesterday but I got kinda sidetracked writing smut
May we have some context?
I too am curious.
Funny you say that because it's A&T smut. Might post to QQ later if I ever feel the muse to finish it.
Well, so no Ritsuko/Maya even possible here. Which is probably for the better: There is no indication whatsoever Ritsuko swings that way, and having her swing that way is just so... convenient.It's a shame I can't give you what you want. At least you will soon have an intern or two to boss around
What did you expect, Mari? You allowed this!When Shinji was gone, Mari turned the key to the ignition and drove gripping the wheel tightly. "Dammit."
Well, that's a large divergence from canon, heh.
Given what beast mode is...Mari had installed Unit 4 with the emergency beast mode. But that was less of a golden super move then a last rasping gasp for air, something to use on death's door and even then... Shinji shivered thinking about those tests. They had left him feeling... dangerous.
How... surprisingly socially aware of Rei.Rei looked at Kensuke and then at Shinji and seemed to shrug. "Kensuke Aida is... what you may call an enthusiast of Evangelions and of NERV. He can be grating but... is mostly harmless."
I think Rei is aware of the people around her she is just apathetic about their actions or decisions. She knows about Kensuke and his interests because Kensuke has bugged her for info like he did with Shinji but with Rei got a brick wall.
By way of @Strypgia and A&T. Don't worry though there will be no magic cat rabbits or magic girls here. There may be some soul crushing depression... But that comes with evagood chapter. the details about Shinji's other classmates are rare to see. and most welcome.
And was that a puella magical girl cameo?