[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
Ah, yes, of course. Shisui used Kotoamatsukami on us with the command "git gud, scrub". It all makes sense, now. :V
This would just prove that Shisui was smarter than Itachi.
His plan worked.

It does imply it; hence the name.
Else it would be something like Dancing with The Hurricane or some such.
It may be implied by the name, but the name of an unknown ability isn't a good basis for making declarations about the details of its function.
 
[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
Why would it?
Hisana was 8 in-universe the night when Shisui died, and the Uchiha massacre happened less than six months later.
No way he'd have anything to do with her paternity.

What they'd wonder is if he used his Mangy Eye to do something to her; teach her something, implant memories et cetera.
It's not even far-fetched; it's something Sharingans have been able to do, and we know Minato and Kushina did something similar by sealing away their chakra inside Naruto when they died.
It was just a weird quirk of the way the sentence was written which...I probably shouldn't keep talking about, because Shisui was...an unspecified age?
 
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.

Okay, here's the important bit to me: It's able to let us replicate most, if not all, of the function of the other two. An adjustment of Shunshin can let us make our sword strikes and kunai supersonic fairly easily, if we bother to make Shunshin do that.

Seriously, one of the peeves I have with a lot of anime is that they don't do anything with rapid movement techniques other than just get from point A to point B. Why aren't there any anime that have a guy use the rapid movement technique to get a blow through the opponent's guard while moving too fast for the other guy to hit them? It isn't teleportation, you are moving from point A to point B. You should be able to hit a guy while doing it.

The only decent explanation I can think of is that the people using these techniques can't handle the impact forces of hitting someone while at those speeds. But this has an additional problem in some series: Rapid regenerators. So what if your arm shatters from the impact, you can regrow it in 2 seconds. Similarly, with durability enhancement, you can not break your arm doing it.

Like, there's nothing I can think of that makes it so that Shunshin wouldn't let us at least have the attack ready when we stop. Being able to flash-step freely is a lot stronger than being really good at dodging or able to screw with momentum to have two sword attacks at once.
 
I don't.
In this village, I doubt Jiraiya would have missed it anyway.
Sincerely hope it's like some random carpenter/musician/scholar somewhere; no need for genetic destiny here.

I didn't know this was a theory. But I'm ambivalent to it. However, Jiraiya could have easily missed it.

It's a good sized village. It could have bee one night stand, and after that they don't see each other again (not all that hard with Jiraiya being out of town a lot and the Uchiha in their own section of village), and Hisana's mother never told anyone who the father was.
 
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[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shunshin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
This would just prove that Shisui was smarter than Itachi.
His plan worked.
Or just more experienced.

Remember, when Itachi executed the Massacre, the poor kid was all of 13 years old or so.
At his death in Shippuden, he was just 21.
At the age when he killed his clan, Kakashi was still a shithead quoting regulations, and proposing leaving a team member behind.

You don't expect good plans out of young men that age; that's how people like Danzo managed to browbeat him and Shisui into unwise decisions.

It may be implied by the name, but the name of an unknown ability isn't a good basis for making declarations about the details of its function.
Fair enough.

It was just a weird quirk of the way the sentence was written which...I probably shouldn't keep talking about, because Shisui was...an unspecified age?
At least 16, I think. Possibly closer to 18.
Older than Itachi, at least, who was ~13 at the time of the Massacre.

I didn't know this was a theory. But I'm ambivalent to it. However, Jiraiya could have easily missed it.
Doubt it. And if he did, others wouldn't, from Sarutobi down to the officer corps.
An Uchiha shinobi(chuunin?jounin?) in good standing whose daughter was denied the Uchiha name would draw attention.

And of course, the Uchiha aren't stupid; why would they refuse to claim the half-Uchiha daughter of an S-class nin?
They marry even civilians into the clan; if you look at the funeral scene in this AU, one of the mourners was a trader whose daughter married into the Uchiha and had two kids.

Something else was going on.
 
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[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
[x] Write in: Back off and wait. Gaara can kill someone you don't care about before you go ahead.
[x] Dance Between Raindrops. This trait allow the user to more effectively evade the aim of their enemy, their speed confusing the targeting ability of their opponents even further.

We're not aiming for the minor leagues here. The thing that separates the S-Ranks from the A-Ranks has always been God-Tier defense. If you don't get that, you fall by the wayside. If we get Raindrops, then we've got the fast reactions neccessary for the first step of making us Minato 2: Swordtastic Boogaloo.
 
Canon Omake: Swift
In which I try to justify how we got to A-Rank speed after like a couple goddamn months of being a genin.

Swift

Hisana wasn't built for strength. It was genetic - not that she was a girl, because once chakra enhancement entered the picture, baseline differences like that became negligible, but that the Uchiha Clan in general had a tendency to lean more towards lanky speed then bulky strength. And while her chakra control was good, it wasn't anywhere close to Sakura's "perfect control" - given her rate of progress there, there wasn't a chance in hell of her copying Tsunade's technique unless she spent a few years doing nothing but chakra control exercises.

She didn't have access to any of the esoteric durability enhancing jutsu that popped up in the story from time to time either - a bunch of them were bloodline based, and the ones that weren't were often just plain weird. Seriously, how the hell had Konan transferred her conciousness into a mass of paper? Honestly, most of them had some sort of gimmick that defeated them anyway, from what she remembered.

So... speed was her main - perhaps her only - recourse for survival. Be a dodge-tank. It doesn't matter if you can't take hits if you don't get hit. And as an offensive tool, it was even better. The faster ninja controlled the time of the engagement, the place of the engagement, could disengage more easily, achieved surprise more often... the list went on and on. With Iaido becoming her primary sword technique (although she retained a few Kohoha style stances and grips, due to their better integration for ninjutsu), it was clearer then ever that she needed to refine her speed as much as possible.

And if you were someone who wanted to get as fast as possible, as thoroughly as possible, and had access to the Uchiha Clan's remaining archives? There was exactly one place to start. Was there a secret to Shisui Uchiha, the ninja whos reaction times were so fast, he could control his movements in the middle of a Body Flicker?

Unfortunately, it wasn't quite as simple as she had hoped. Shisui's remaining personal effects were sparse indeed, and the Konoha records she could access were blotted out with line upon line of black ink. The Uchiha Police Force records were less censored... but didn't hold much she could use to understand his abilities.

There were a number of explanations - perhaps he or Itachi had gotten rid of anything like that before the coup attempt, or he'd naturally been cagey enough to not write anything down. Maybe Danzo had gotten his hands on it, possibly the Hokage had classified it. It didn't matter. She left the storage rooms no more enlightened then she had entered.

He had undoubtedly been a genius among geniuses, of course... But speed was a physical attribute. It didn't matter how skilled you were, the limiting factor was your body. Since he hadn't been famed for his overwhelming strength as well, it clearly wasn't simply a matter of channeling more physical energy...

Luckily, there was in fact a lead - Shisui's former students, from the genin team he had lead. One member, now working in the Intelligence division, had flatly refused to speak with her. Another was away on an extended mission for the next 2-6 months (she didn't have the clearance for a more detailed timeframe). And so... she raised her arm to the door, and knocked.



The man looked tired and worn, to a degree out of proportion to the age on his file - she'd have guessed him to be at least a decade older, if she hadn't known. His face painted an expression of mixed longing and distrust, which only served to draw more attention to the ruined remains of his eyes, and his movements were shaky in a way that retired ninjas rarely exhibited.

The neighbors had been surprised to see a ninja show up to their apartment building - apparently to them, the person she was here to see was nothing more than a blind old civilian.

Nonetheless, he was able to orient on her and move around with an ease that belied a decent degree of sensing skill, and while small, the apartment was well cared for. "There's no point in being polite, kid. I know I look like shit. This is what happens when you get a neurotoxin straight to the optic nerves. Now shut the door, there's a draft."

Hisana was suddenly struck with an intense sense of awkwardness. She'd come with the intention of simply leading into a few questions about Shisui, but now... it felt disrespectful as all hell. Should she ask about the injury, how he was coping? No, of course not, he'd be well and truly sick and tired of inquiries about it at this point. So-

"So who are you, anyway? Here to finally shut me up for good, or what?"

Right. Introductions.

"Um. I'm Uchiha Hisana, Genin, Student Mentorship Team Seven."

He leaned back at bit at her rank, an eyebrow twitchily rising over the ruined gash in his face. "Huh. Not bad. Had you pegged as a chunin, or one of the masks." His expression darkened. "And what's one of our village's prestigious graduates doing talking to someone like me?"

'I was hoping to pry some secrets about your mentor out of you' seemed like the wrong answer, but she had in fact come up with a more thoughtful alternative. "I was looking into the surviving associates of some of the Uchiha clans more well known figures. I spoke with the Hokage, and he permitted me to put together a memorial anthology."

The Hokage had in fact given her permission to ask around, when she asked him a bit over a year ago. At the time, it was an excuse to poke around some of the items in storage, but it was pulling double duty now.

"...huh. Yeah, I can spare some time to say a thing or two about sensei. The man was incredible, really. Insane, but incredible."

"Insane?" It was an honestly questioning tone. From everything Hisana knew about Shisui, both in this world and from her memories, Shisui had been an unusually level-headed, practical, and generally good person. Still, from one of his students... this was worth listening to.

"He was a genius through and through, and that made him naturally inclined to be a godawful teacher. When Masaru didn't immediately get water walking, it took him two weeks to figure out how to break it down into simple enough steps to explain it." The years briefly began to recede from the man's face, as he took on the wistful countenance of someone lost in memory.

"He hated that he wasn't able to do something well immediately, although he tried to hide it. It was kinda... cute, almost. He'd have a different handbook on teaching methods on him every day, and apparently he sat in on Academy lectures a bunch of times to see how they did it." A smile. "He wasn't much older then us at all when he was initially put in charge, and one of our clients mistook me for the team leader once, since I was the tallest on the Team. He went with it, put me on the spot, and made me have to scramble to act like I thought a jonin would. He called it leadership and infiltration training once we were finished."

Hisana nodded, diligently taking notes. (The odds of him not noticing her pen not moving, with chakra enhanced hearing and years of experience blind? Infintesimal.) "Heh. Sounds like a good story, I'll definitely include that. But you said he was insane? That all sounds pretty normal." She considered her words. "Positively well adjusted, considering his childhood prodigy status."

He snorted. "Nah, he was as crazy as the rest of them, just hid it better. He messed with jutsu modifications live - no theory work, no planning, he'd just modify the handseal sequence to make a lightning bolt curve or whatever - apparently by feel. Should have blown himself up ten different ways, but he had the devil's own luck. He had to be hospitalized, though, once, right before we were supposed to go on a mission, because he'd almost torn open his second Gate while 'messing around with his chakra' - his words, not mine."

Hisana's eyes opened wide. This was exactly the sort of information she'd been looking for. Just a subtle probe... "Wow. But it worked, didn't it? Nobody was able to keep up with him - especially with the Shunshin."

The older man's expression immediately snapped shut. "... Did you come here just to pry that secret out of me?"

Shit. Damage control. "Not at all. I was-"

"You were just leaving is what you were. Get out!" His trembling fingers reached to his waist, before grasping at nothing, no weapons being holstered there.

No. She needed this. She knew what kind of insanity lay ahead, the kinds of foes that would be coming up, and without skills of this caliber, as many as she could scrounge up, she was as good as dead - she was the reincarnation of a 14 year old civilian, instead of the child of practically a goddess. "Please!" She realized, belatedly, that she was on her knees.

He stopped.

"Please! I really do care about what you're saying - I lost everyone, and I was eight years old, without a Sharingan! I'm forgetting them, day by day! These memories you're sharing, you and other people, I need them, to understand. And..." She took a deep breath. "And I'm going to hunt down the person who did this, and make it so he can't hurt anyone else the way he hurt me again." Not Itachi, though of course she didn't say that - Danzo Shimura. That old bastard was responsible for half the things that went wrong in the story, had his hooks impossibly deep in Sarutobi, leaving her living in constant suspicion and suspense, and had ordered her mother killed.

"And I'm not strong enough. I'm not a genius, like Itachi, or like Shisui. So please. You said there was a secret."

The former shinobi took his time considering his approach, before finally shaking his head. "No. I'll tell you, but you can't use it. Not if you really aren't on his level of brilliance. He had this technique - I don't know what he called it, he never told me the name - where he'd mess with the chakra near his own brain directly. He was on a whole other level when it comes to genjutsu, which is messing with other brains. and he applied that skill there, although it was both physical and mental energies. Apparently, if he held it just right, he'd speed up his processing speed a shitload. Couldn't hold it too long before his brain would melt, of course, but for a couple of microseconds, for the shunshin?"

Hisana blinked. She vaguely realized her expression was horrified. "That's... he did that manually, through pure chakra control? He could have died! He should have died! If anything interrupted him at all-"

He sighed. "Like I said. He was insane."

She picked herself up. "That's..."

He finished the sentence for her. "That's not something you can use. I don't keep this quiet because it's some super special technique he wanted hidden - if he could spread it to every ninja in Konoha, he would have. I keep it quiet because I don't want some kid's death on my conscious." He continued, quietly enough that the average chunin wouldn't have heard, "Not a single one more."

"That's... Yes, I'll take that into consideration." The shaking hesitancy in her voice wasn't entirely faked. "I'll... I'll be going now. And I won't do anything rash." If he could tell that she was lying, he didn't mention it.

She'd use it. She couldn't not use this knowledge. But, to be fair, she had some advantages. The Sharingan, for one - it already slowed down her relative experience of time. If she mapped what parts of her brain had different chakra flows when she had it active, and filtered out the ones associated with memory...

For another, she already had experience making seals that altered internal chakra flows. Shisui might have done it manually, because he was a lunatic, but a seal could do the same thing with a greatly reduced chance of catastrophic failure. Yes, this could work. All she'd need...

She stared at the distant figure, clad in all green, speeding down the Konoha streets. All she'd need was to train her body enough to handle the speed and stress of repeated Shunshins. The tracksuit didn't have to be green, right?
 
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[x] Genjutsu him and his team and sneak by. Between you and Sasuke you should have them thoroughly confounded. Fly if you can. If he notices then go at him with Naruto clones and sheer speed to occupy his attention for a short while.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.

Well I'm now convinced to grab shushin.
 
The thing that separates the S-Ranks from the A-Ranks has always been God-Tier defense.
Not really. S-rank just means "really fucking dangerous". Most of the kages don't have especially noteworthy defenses, and most of Akatsuki uses their offensive techniques to create a defense. Deidara's defense is explosive clay that looks like him, Konan's is that she can be paper, Nagato's is that he puppets corpses to even join a fight, Itachi doesn't actually have any defensive techniques, Kakuzu uses a mix of Earth Grudge Fear and having multiple lives, Minato teleports and is Ninja Ricky Bobby, Hiruzen just fights good, Tobirama only seems to have Flying Thunder God as a noteworthy defense, Tsunade regenerates what she can't block, Kakashi doesn't seem to have any notable defensive techniques... Do you see where I'm going with this?

I mean, we're basically building toward Fourth-Hokage-with-a-sword, so by the time we're actually S-rank I expect we'll have defenses at least equal to his. If we work for it, we could easily end up with a combat style that's the nightmarish combination of Minato, Tsunade, and Mifune, with a heavy pinch of Asuma. Well, we're already set to be a combination of Mifune and Asuma, with heavy parallels to Minato even if we don't pick up Flying Thunder God (and why wouldn't we, given the chance); it's only really Tsunade that might not be an influence we integrate into how we fight.

If we get Raindrops, then we've got the fast reactions neccessary for the first step of making us Minato 2: Swordtastic Boogaloo.
We have A-rank speed. All 3 of these options represent us having the reactions you're talking about.
Also, being Shunshin no Shisui, Jr. puts us pretty clearly on a similar path to Minato. In fact, if we follow the path to that conclusion, there's an argument to be made for us being better than Minato by virtue of having multiple options for our Go Faster.

edit: Just to clarify, I don't think any of these options could prevent us from being "Minato 2: Swordtastic Boogaloo", or that any of them would make us bad at being that. It's just that Shunshin Mastery gives us an early, direct parallel to the Flying Thunder God.
 
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@azoicennead My only problem with your logic is, whats the point in having two abilities that do the same thing, and probably don't stack?.


Honestly though, IDC either way. I'm certain we can make good use of either trait.
 
@azoicennead My only problem with your logic is, whats the point in having two abilities that do the same thing, and probably don't stack?.


Honestly though, IDC either way. I'm certain we can make good use of either trait.
Flying Thunder God requires setup, Shunshin doesn't. Shunshin can be used to help set up Flying Thunder God.
(Also, Shunshin works as a backup should we, somehow, be prevented from using Flying Thunder God.)
 
Flying Thunder God requires setup, Shunshin doesn't. Shunshin can be used to help set up Flying Thunder God.
(Also, Shunshin works as a backup should we, somehow, be prevented from using Flying Thunder God.)

Setup in this case being literally touching something.

Honestly, this is all under the assumption the FTG is something we can even get.

It's been a while, so I looked it up in the Wiki (god knows how accurate that is.), and according to the wiki it's closer to straight up teleportation rather than fast travel (you can use it on other ppl that your touching.). Also, apparently once you mark something, that mark never wears off. So, theoretically, we could use jutsu formula left over from when minato was runnign around >_>.

Edit: Physical contact allowing you to mark stuff does explain why minato was big into CQB.
 
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Setup in this case being literally touching something.

Honestly, this is all under the assumption the FTG is something we can even get.

It's been a while, so I looked it up in the Wiki (god knows how accurate that is.), and according to the wiki it's closer to straight up teleportation rather than fast travel (you can use it on other ppl that your touching.). Also, apparently once you mark something, that mark never wears off. So, theoretically, we could use jutsu formula left over from when minato was runnign around >_>.

Except we can't, because sealing is personal in this take on the Narutoverse. If we study a lot of examples of Minato's sealing, enough to get a feel for his approach and mindset, we might be able to glean some insights on how to use the FTG by examining his formula, but we'd still have to make our own version of the seal to actually use the technique.
 
Except we can't, because sealing is personal in this take on the Narutoverse. If we study a lot of examples of Minato's sealing, enough to get a feel for his approach and mindset, we might be able to glean some insights on how to use the FTG by examining his formula, but we'd still have to make our own version of the seal to actually use the technique.

Tobirama was able to use FTG seals laid by others, but I understand that it isnt permitted in this quest because it would be fucking game breaking.
 
according to the wiki it's closer to straight up teleportation rather than fast travel
Which has advantages and disadvantages over fast travel. For example, skipping the distance between points ignores obstacles, but also doesn't let us sword things on the way. And we can't leave marks on the way there, so we can't set up for crazy shenanigans.
Also, apparently once you mark something, that mark never wears off. So, theoretically, we could use jutsu formula left over from when minato was runnign around >_>.
We'd have to recreate the exact version Minato used to do that, and we'd still have to hack it to accept us. However, there's a good point to that: We can use it as the center of an "arcane mark" Jutsu set that let us do crazy things with a single mark. So we mark something, then we can teleport it, make it explode in a way that removes the mark, toss the marked item around telekinetically and so on. Heck, we can use it as a shortcut to making seals for crazy stuff by using it to apply Jutsu from a distance.
 
[X] Write-in: back off, consolidate your forces and try to work out how to defeat him. RIght now is the best opportunity to take his team out of the exam, since all three of them have to pass, and they have to have two scrolls. Brief your teammates on what you know about their abilities and work out the best plan to take that team down.
[x] Dance Between Raindrops. This trait allow the user to more effectively evade the aim of their enemy, their speed confusing the targeting ability of their opponents even further.

Because right now is the best opportunity to eliminate Gaara as a part of the exam. In all points afterwards it'll be harder. Here we can have a legal opportunity to neutralize him without directly fighting him. Later, we'll have to fight him one-on-one, and not from an ambush, but in direct combat.
 
Because right now is the best opportunity to eliminate Gaara as a part of the exam.

How?

As long as Gaara is active, he can pass the test by bringing the unconcious bodies of the Sand Siblings with him - and he can trivially acquire two scrolls from weaker teams.

So we'd have to kill Temari and/or Kankuro - and beyond the ethics of it, removing a moderating influence on Gaara can't possibly end well.

The only alternative is to somehow incapacitate Gaara in a way that would last for the remaining time left in this exam - multiple days. Oh, and we have to do it in a way that doesn't rouse Shukaku.

This is a horrible idea on a huge number of levels.
 
The only alternative is to somehow incapacitate Gaara in a way that would last for the remaining time left in this exam - multiple days. Oh, and we have to do it in a way that doesn't rouse Shukaku.

Well for the sake of consideration, we could just kill him. There is the possibility that Shukaku will dissipate with his death-and deep in this forest, even if Shukaku does emerge in full, with the Sandaime and the elite jonin at the Tower, it's not a bad position.
 
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