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This is her house, she literally rules here.
Besides, Shiro owes her quite a number of favors.
 
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The Grail War had been going on now for a week, you'd be surprised if anyone was left.

Oh Ophelia. Silly Ophelia. You're entering the Swagger Zone.

Ayako stares at you, saying nothing for a good few moments, then. "Annoyingly, yes."

Looks, it's not just in character, it's CANON.

"Shirts… shirts are banned in archery now."

"I think the principal would complain."

I'm about 95% certain Ruby would help you put up a bounded field to prevent anyone from noticing.

You squeak involuntarily as her hands sneak down to grope your ass. Ayako pulls back a moment later, grinning. "Think I could ban pants too?"

"I do-"

Make that 100%.

"Not when the hallway smells like sex." Leysritt replies dully, then begins to wet the mop.

God-DAMN. I don't know if Leysritt is going to be able to recover the room if the smell made it through the door.

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Let's get some Ilya attention in here! She's a good girl, we've just asked her for multiple major favors, the least we can do is play with her!
 
[X] [You have to check up on Sakura, then get to your training]

Sakura was, uh, kind of in the middle of her crest worms acting up last we saw her. Best to at least check up. (Sorry, Illya!)
 
The semi-lewd was good, very characterful. I'm surprised Ayako could go so many rounds after she trained to the point of collapse, but I suspect Ruby was helping her out. She really needed that serotonin. Shirou probably did to. It was cute.


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Please let me know what ya'll thought of that one! Was tricky figuring out that semi-lewd.
I like how you didn't go overboard on the details. Made it way easier to read, and the dialogue was entertaining.

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This will definitely come back to bite us but we've gotta make up for lost time.
 
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Please let me know what ya'll thought of that one! Was tricky figuring out that semi-lewd.
Oh it was lovely.
And like Shirou said:
"Is this the part where I stop talking?"
Yes Shirou, this Is the Time where you shut up and go all bases with your Tomboy Magical Girl

And you better stop thinking you aren't "girly" enough Ayako. Shirou must have proved how much he appreciated your charms for...actually quite a while

Speeaking of, neither Sella or Leysritt Will let Shirou hook free after his Seggs Time with Ayako

Finally, really wanted to check on Sakura

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But Illya does have a point, besides Shirou owns her A Lot. And her Maids Will spill the beans with their Mistress just what Shirou was doing the Past 2 hours...
 
A fun chapter. Always nice to find an excuse to jam in the jam it in meme. I guess I might've just jamceptioned that (please don't ban me from the thread I'll be good).

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Unreasonably long shitpost in honor of Shirou finally being with his actual girlfriend. Sorry in advance.

I close my eyes and peer deep inside. Time slows to a crawl.
I see them, the imaginary channels running through my body and soul, lying inert.
I rack them back, and the hammers come crashing down. Three, twelve, twenty seven, the circuits run flush in vibrant green. Not as much as hoped, but it will do.
It's a process nowhere near as advanced as real tracing in principle, but the application requires precision previously unknown to me.

I picture a map of it, every groove and impression, all the gaps and flaws in my integrity, and channel every ounce of energy I have into it, as careful as a sculptor working with clay.
Blood rushes, my heartrate picks up, and heat clouds my mind. It feels as if I'll combust in the process, leaving the War in disgrace.
I bite on my tongue to fight the pain and clear a path through the flames, grasping the finished pattern.

"------I put on my robe and wizard hat."

The heat fails to stop me and reinforcement begins in earnest.

"What are you talking about?" Her voice rings against the confines of my mind, but I can't lose focus now.

"Trace, on."

Skin becomes steel, blood turns to cold fire, and every imperfection is being filled with mana.

"Seriously, what the hell are you doing?" No response is possible, every part of me honed towards one goal.

"Trigger, off."

"Shirou? Shirou!?" Fight the fire, grasp the pattern, stabilize, reinforce, complete.

"---------I cast Strengthening Level Eigh-"

I am promptly smacked upside the head.
 
I like how you didn't go overboard on the details. Made it way easier to read, and the dialogue was entertaining.

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This will definitely come back to bite us but we've gotta make up for lost time.
Over detailing leads is more smut for smuts sake.
Thank you.
A fun chapter. Always nice to find an excuse to jam in the jam it in meme. I guess I might've just jamceptioned that (please don't ban me from the thread I'll be good).

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One more and I will.
 
OPHELIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PHAMRSOLONEEEEEEE I'm so happy she's doing (relatively, comparatively) okay my beloved babygirlllllllll
But you were just one mage, and not an amazingly powerful one at that.
To be fair, maybe not super amazing and exceptional in power like Wodime, but I think it's fair to say she's still a pretty strong mage in her own right. You don't get chosen to be on Team A for being middle of the pack. Also, Mystic Eye abilities do be kinda strong in Fate, and Ophelia's Mystic Eye is in the rank classified as "second-strongest rank, on the level of divine abilities" (Medusa's eyes are also Jewel rank). As far as I can remember, there haven't really been any servants in the quest who could pull Brynhildr's trick to get past the Eye through pure obsession (except maybe Mordred, but not anymore now that Seibah's gone).

Point here being, don't count our girl out!
'I am not Christian.'

'That can be fixed.'
LOL wait until this servant finds out about the Sunday trauma. Funny interaction but maybe don't get your hopes up.

Lewd was good. Waiting for the continuation probably later in the evening? with Medea.

Good chapter.
 
The smut was light and good. Too much detail takes all the fun out of the eyebrows wagging, so implication is best.

Especially with the little-big sister not too far away.

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We have kinda taken advantage of her hospitality several times over. She is owed some family time. And I'm also worried if we ignore her any more she will decide we don't need all our limbs.
 
The being there, the being playing at being a fae, whatever it was. It wanted the grail, it wanted more power.

Oh look, the next plotlines messenger.

a second later those same golden eyes look at you, slightly… accusatory. "Did you… learn that from the skinny one?"

Ayako debating if she needs more practice in bed or face the challenge head-on and seduce Circe.

The first time was a rushed, hurried thing, filled with awkwardness, the next… eight, and frankly you didn't know how she got the stamina, was far more intense.

Archery practice, I'm assuming. Also - DAYUM.

"Get it out of your system?" you ask.

"I got a lot of yours into mine," Ayako says

Get yourself a girl who can do cheesy sex-related one-liners in the middle of a Fight-to-the-death mage war.

"This is why nobody joins the archery club."

Cowards, the lot of them.

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Because we have enough stuff going on that we have to juggle; we talked to Sakura 2ish hours ago. We can follow up with her later - Illya hasn't been talked to at all though. So she gets some time.
 
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