Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

Voted best in category in the Users' Choice awards.
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.

It has been her nature to quietly suffer to be who she thinks she needs to be, and this is leaning into that. If she must pay a cost, let her once more be great and inspiring.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.

If Ren Ren acts as a beacon, that does not mean she fights alone. She can choose the best defensible location, rally the White Plumes and noble retinues for an organised and concentrated defence where waves of unorganised enemies can be broken upon them. We could see Xia Lin and GG do real heroic actions and cover themselves in glory. This would also be a great coming together for the whole ES since feelings from such events linger for a long time. Vote for the defining moment of the summit to be epic.

The other option is not even that much safer and is much more bland in my opinion.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.
 
I don't think there was any relationship at that time? I think that Cai Shenhua had a crush, and a bit of a flame, and she kept it alive and decades later came to Diao Linqin. It wasn't teacher-student, because presumably back then there was nothing mutual between them.

As Cultivators live very long lives, a lot of the usual things about age gaps frankly stop mattering once they're all adults, anyways.
Yeah, we don't actually know about anything noteworthy having happened before a fully adult Shenhua saccharinely saved Linqin from the abuse she suffered for all her life, right after having coincidentally turned herself into someone tailor-made to bring suffering to everyone responsible. I just feel like both characters get much cooler if there was stuff before that point and Linqin just kinda deserves to have an active role somewhere.

It's honestly less of a theory and more me running around with a narrative dowsing rod:V
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.
 
Yeah, we don't actually know about anything noteworthy having happened before a fully adult Shenhua saccharinely saved Linqin from the abuse she suffered for all her life, right after having coincidentally turned herself into someone tailor-made to bring suffering to everyone responsible. I just feel like both characters get much cooler if there was stuff before that point and Linqin just kinda deserves to have an active role somewhere.

It's honestly less of a theory and more me running around with a narrative dowsing rod:V

There's a big time gap between Shenhua as a student and that. I think their relationship almost certainly predates Shenhua saving her, sure, but there's a big difference between that being true and it happening when Shenhua was a student. Like, very plausibly decades of difference.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[ ] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.

Lures the enemy from other defensive/engagement priorities, allowing more operational flexibility, at the cost of personal danger. Real chance of that freed up flexibility collapsing into unit commitments trying to keep Renxiang alive, in which case they're fighting on more exposed terrain.

[ ] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.


Less aggressive approach, defenses and units are strained more uniformly, not allowing as much flexibility in response but also not exposing any segment of forces to heightened stress. Something that stands out to me which I haven't seen other people discuss is that it does look like Renxiang will be drawing in nightmares with her light to some degree, matched to the endurance/kill-rate of those she links up with. She's still taking pressure off of the whole in this option, just much much more reservedly.

Ultimately, my choice is
[X] Killer_Whale
 
She's not Shenhua, the perfect city that does everything. She's Renxiang, the clockwork administrator, who steadily orders and improves everything for the people below.

I love how you said / summarized it! It is very accurate!! Ahahaha

On the other hand, do you think Cai Renxiang's Name will include the word "Administrator"?

[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
Man, Yrsillar's votes always leave me torn between two tempting choices. Especially with how enthusiastically people in this thread argue for their position.

[X] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.

I can't resist the epic imagery of glorious beacon of hope Cai Renxiang.
 
I kind of love the visual of LQ in traction but still at the negotiating table at the summit, gamely trying to smooth over the fact that she just did something crazy
This is Ling Qi, who, when wanting to learn about her new neighbours, decided to go chat up an aspect of ENDING.
"This is just how i roll/cultivate" is probably a fairly easy sell from Ling Qi.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang rose into the sky, and let loose with her Mothers Light, her light. In this nightmares of stagnancy she could feel her opposite. They would come to snuff her out, in exclusion of all else, relieving the other parties involved at cost to herself.

Option 2 is very sensible, but Option 1 is LQ being a bad influence.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.

The ith'ia incursion is all the evidence I need that the We Live In A Society option can still be cool.
 
Is this the first time in the quest where it became possible to influence actions of any other (than Ling Qi) character by voting? Or were there any other moments?
 
[X] …And Cai Renxiang remained on the earth, letting loose her light with caution, in close coordination with the harried White Plumes left in the lower valley away from the conflict raging on the cloven mountain. Relying on their defenses to preserve what was important, until the tide receded.
 
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