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Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Lena27 said:
Having a real, fleshed out scene now is needed help establish a firm plot thread to Li Suyin and Su Ling's stories later. If its not properly foreshadowed now, its gonna seem really random when it comes up later--in the middle of fief stuff, diplomacy and all the other Projects we got going on.
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We've got like, multiple firm plot threads to Li Suyin and Su Ling's stories later. Like vote for whatever we want but the idea that either is so poorly foreshadowed that it'll seem random later just seems downright silly.
 
[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.
 
[X] Visiting Li Suyin and Su Ling, to say her goodbyes to some of her oldest friends
[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.

Not gonna be sad with either of these :D
 
[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.
 
yrsillar said:
Refinement. She'd been trying to do too much at once with the technique, Ling Qi thought. It had left it sloppy and unfinished. She didn't think she would call it complete now, but it was certainly closer, the intent behind her technique, to gift the energy stolen from the targets to her allies and empower them as she stepped back from the stage, it was clearer now. And she would have to step back after using it she thought, the cost of striking so powerfully would be immense, even for her rather impressive reserves.
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I'm curious how this is being received by those who only voted for the power up, because they thought they could use it early in a fight, instead of at the end. The funny thing is that her "finisher" actually finishes her from the conflict as well.

(Just a little salty we passed on the healing option.)

As for this vote, I want to see her reaction to the musician couple, after her nightmare tribulation.

[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.
 
I just don't care that much about the other musicians. Though I won't be particularly upset if outvoted.

[X] Visiting Li Suyin and Su Ling, to say her goodbyes to some of her oldest friends
 
[X] Visiting Li Suyin and Su Ling, to say her goodbyes to some of her oldest friends
Some people have argued that we will be meeting them anyway.
Yes, we will, by picking this option we can see even more of them.
 
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[X] Visiting Li Suyin and Su Ling, to say her goodbyes to some of her oldest friends

No contest
 
[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.
 
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