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Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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[X] Visiting Li Suyin and Su Ling, to say her goodbyes to some of her oldest friends

More screentime for them both is a must have for me.
 
Having a real, fleshed out scene now is needed help establish a firm plot thread to Li Suyin and Su Ling's stories later. If its not properly foreshadowed now, its gonna seem really random when it comes up later--in the middle of fief stuff, diplomacy and all the other Projects we got going on.
 
[X] Visiting Li Suyin and Su Ling, to say her goodbyes to some of her oldest friends

Every time we thought "well we can just do that later" it's always come back to bite us.
 
[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.

I had a vote written up for the other option, but the active commitments we do have with the other two that Oliver listed does mean that seeing them in the future is not an abstract.
 
[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.

I have been swayed by the argument that Su Ling and Li Suyin will appear in future actions, while the music group are much less likely to. As such, they deserve a proper send-off.
 
[X] Visiting the musician disciples, the little troupe she had helped to bring together.

This one is, hmm, an organization born of the sect. Feels fitting for an arc about saying goodbye to the sect.
 
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