Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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We do have something very important and urgent for her to do. Our future fief will be on (or, at least, near) the imperial border. This obviously means that our clay will be sparsely populated, filled with dangerous spirits and under constant risk of barbarian raiders.

Basically, our fief will need frequent attention from a Green+ cultivator just to keep our family, subjects and mooks alive. We are CRX's retainer so will not have enough time to manage our lands once we actually get landed.

If we don't use Yu Nyan for this, we will just have to hire some random Green to do it.

This is incorrect, young Greens are capable of going on prolonged adventures without threatening the integrity of their holdings. This frequently leads to their death and the complete lack of a Green means a settlement is doomed but it appears that it takes quite a while for their absence to have a deleterious effect.

Wards are a very mature technology and are sufficient to the task of protecting a settlement.
 
Turn 12: Arc 6-2
"I have to wonder, even if they're busy, isn't hiring someone like you to do work like this pretty expensive?" Ling Qi asked idly. It was a nice day out, only a little cloudy. The wind was brisk and cold, blowing past her as the wagon trundled down the well kept gravel road.

"You are correct, although I have been discounting my services quite a bit," Bao Qian replied cheerfully. He sat at the other end of the drivers bench, a warm red fur cloak wrapped around his shoulders.The reigns hung loose in his hands, the horses pulling the wagon needing little guidance.

"Why would you do that?" Gui piped up. Her little brother as their 'chaperone', sat on the bench between them.

"More shiny rocks are better, yes?" hissed Zhen. Right now Zhengui was only the size of a large dog, so their voices had regained some of that cute squeaky quality that Ling Qi sometimes missed.

"If I had to guess its probably a long term ploy in a way," Ling Qi said absently, she glanced back into the shadow of the wagon, wear Hanyi had decided to take a nap, bored by the trip.

"Miss Ling is insightful," Bao Qian chuckled, leaning back on the padded bench. "I have said that I have many advantages and this is one of them. With the wealth of my clan stipend at my back I can easily cut my rates so much that no competitor can compete while I build relationships with my clients. Most troubleshooters of this type are second and third children of small barons after all, who need to amass their own fortunes."

"And you're fine with that?" Sixiang drawled, appearing as a phantom face peering over Ling Qi's shoulder. "Didn't you say you wanted to build something on your own?"

"Indeed I did, but this is not my business, it is merely networking," Bao Qing replied cheerfully. A short tug on the reigns brought them around a turn, trundling into the forested hills that abutted the Wall in this region. "That said, there are other reasons why the local Baron is not handling this 'in house'."

"What are those?" Ling Qi asked idly.

"Mainly the value of priests capable of proper last rites. It is not a popular profession and one way or another, it seems likely their services will be in high demand in the future," Bao Qian said. "That is why we are going to demolish the building in the end, and let wild spirits reclaim it. It is considered more economical than a true exorcism."

Ling Qi frowned. So far things had been contained, but they couldn't expect that to stay true. She supposed bao Qian was right, those priests would be getting a lot of work. Silence fell over them as the conversation petered out, leaving only the sound of horses hooves, the south wind and the wagon wheels.

Eventually, Bao Qian coughed into his hand. "I do hope my sudden request didn't give you any trouble with your Mother, you mentioned informing her."

Ling Qi nodded, she was working to be better at keeping her Mother informed. She'd been worried of course. "Zhengui is a very dependable chaperone, aren't you little brother."

"Yes! We will keep an eye out for Grandmother," they both chirped.

Ling Qi rolled her eyes a little, Bao Qian chuckled.

"To be serious, no, my Mother trusts me with the matter," Ling Qi said.

"That is good. I would not have minded meeting her to make my case though," Bao Qian said idly.

Ling Qi glanced his way. That would feel like taking a step she wasn't ready for yet. "I don't think that's necessary."

"Maybe after the tourney. Your Mom is putting a lot of work into making things presentable," Sixiang said.

Internally, she sent a nasty look Sixiang's way. The muse whistled innocently in her head. "I suppose if we're talking about that kind of thing, what about your parents?"

"Ah, that is probably a long way off. We would probably need to come to an actual agreement first," Bao Qian replied carefully.

Ling Qi caught what she thought was his meaning though, and wrinkled her nose."I suppose there is that much difference in status huh?"

"That was not my intention," Bao Qian deflected. "They are just very busy individuals. Even I do not see them often. Their business is such that it can only be set aside for major events and festivals."

"My apologies then," Ling Qi replied, feeling a bit sorry. She should probably try to take less things personally. "What do they do?"

"My father is the overall administrator of the clans business in the eastern half of our county, serving under the clan head himself," Bao Qian replied. Watching his face, she thought she saw some genuine pride there. "Mother is one of the most renowned jewelers in the Empire, and spends much of her time in her homeland of Celestial Peaks. Several princes and princesses are among her clients."

"I suppose they wouldn't have much time then," Ling Qi said. "Do you have any siblings?"

"Only two, I have a brother and a sister some decades my elder," Bao Qian replied. "Apprenticing under my parents at the moment."

Ling Qi nodded as Bao Qian in turn, began to ask a few careful questions about her own situation. It wasn't an unpleasant way to while away the remaining hour of their trip.


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The old manor lay deeper in the forested hills, whatever ground which may have once surrounded it long reclaimed by nature. Her first glimpse of the building itself had come through one of the winking wisps which she had sent out to surveil as they entered the woods.Through it she had spotted a crumbling stone wall at the top of the ridge.

They had left the wagon behind at the point where the road failed entirely overgrown with new trees, and followed the patchy grave lpath up toward the manor. Given its age and abandonment it was in surprisingly good condition. The garden wall still stood mostly intact, and inside the grounds had been overgrown by leaves and vines, the building itself formed an arch shape,with two wings built out from the central structure, one of those wings had wholly collapsed under the weight of a massive fallen trees, but the rest was still recognizable.

Burnt, sagging and rotted, but recognizable.

Ling Qi grimaced as she peered down into the scum covered poolthat had once been the garden pond. Zhengui, still shrunken, stood at her side, peering around in curiosity. She took his lack of agitation as a good sign. There probably wasn't anything truly nasty here.

"Ugh, what a dump," Hanyi said, kicking a stone into the goopy pond.

"But it's a dump that might have some treasure," Sixiang said cheerfully.

"Hm, I guess so," Hanyi said dubiously.

"We do have the right of salvage, but I wouldn't expect too much," Bao Qian chuckled, bustling through the crumbling gates to stand beside them. On his back was a bundle of wood stakes, roughly the size of fence posts carved with identical formation arrays.

They would have to place those at the right points in and around the property to contain any spiritual pollution from the demolition leaking out. Ling Qi shaded her eyes as she looked up squinting into the shadows that lay beyond the second floor window. The fact that she couldn't immediately see through them told her the darkness was unnatural.

"I'm a little surprised the barbarians left the place standing at all," she mused.

"The fragmentary tribal alliances left in the Great Khan's wake did not have the might to raze all in their path to the ground," Bao Qian said, starting down the path toward the front doors. "They were dangerous and deadly, but not so overwhelming that they could act with impunity."

Nudging Zhengui with her foot, Ling Qi took Hanyi's hand and began to follow after him. Wissps carrying her vision darted out among the weeds, spooking the muddy crawling things that lurked there. "I'm still surprised that things remained so bad. Even really neglectful rulers should have been woken up by Ogodei, shouldn't they?"

"Hm, I can only speculate," Bao Qian replied, testing his weight on the sagging wooden steps. Ling Qi mounted them without a single squeak or groan. "But, the destruction of the southern counts left the region unadminastrated, and the Sect's aside, the Hui refused to parcel out the land they had gained to the remaining counts."

Ling Qi crinkled her nose as the scent of mildew and wood rot reached it, a wave of her hand kicked up a breeze pushing the scent away as she peered through the broken doors. Insects and other scuttling things scattered before her searching eyes. "I suppose if they had time to absorb it that much land would give them an advantage over the counts who were left."

"Just so, those old villains feared and despised their own vassals more than any foreigner," Bao agreed. "I can put myself in the mind to understand it, but all the same, I find them a contemptible lot."

Ling Qi considered Hui Peng, and considered his overweening arrogance, maintained even when nearly all else had rotted away. She doubted every Hui had been the same, but if he had been of an average sort…

"I suppose so," Ling Qi mused as they stepped inside. Haunting noises echoed in her ears, soft sobs, the crackle of flames, the clash of flesh and metal. At her size, Zhen hissed and snapped forward to devour a squirming worm spirit that had been caught between bent floorboards and Hanyi peered around toward the direction of the ghostly sounds, looking vaguely hungry.

"I suppose a little hauntings not really much of a spook for us huh," Sixiang drawled.

It wasn't Ling Qi mused.

"If you would, Miss Ling, the ritual song I provided?" Bao Qian said, shifting the weight of the stakes on his back. "We'd best start in the basements I think."

Ling Qi nodded absently, and gestured, materializing her flute from storage.Bao Qian had given her a simple piece to memorize, it was meant to pacify the unquiet dead until their remains could be dealt with. For a ruin this old such spirits could no longer simply be put to rest though, this would keep them from interfering with their work.

Soon the melancholy strains of the funeral song echoed through the halls and they set off.

"Sad though it is, I do like this song," Bao Qian said. "There is a polished elegance to works so old."

Ling Qi nodded faintly, not needing to actually physically play for something so simple, she glanced his way.

[] Follow up regarding the Hui, you're a little curious to hear Bao Qian's thoughts on the recent history of the Emerald Seas.
[] Ask him about the song. It
is beautiful, even in its simplicity. You're curious about the musical traditions of the Emerald Seas.
 
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I like Bao Qian for the idea of his connections more than for himself. I feel no spark, and so I am leaning towards his perspective on musical traditions over his perspective on recent history, as that seems slightly more Ling Qi focused to me.
 
[X] Ask him about the song. It is beautiful, even in its simplicity. You're curious about the musical traditions of the Emerald Seas.

I think this one is very clear, even if it hurts to let go of that LORE.
 
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Ling Qi replied, feeling a bit sorry. She should probably try to take less things personally. "What do they do?"
Don't feel too bad Ling Qi. I mean to be honest that was pretty rude of him. Especially since he said this not a minute earlier:

"That is good. I would not have minded meeting her to make my case though," Bao Qian said idly.

Even if his parents are legitimately important and very busy holy hell was that rude.

The language choice around his sort of not actually an apology doesn't help either. Emphasis mine:
"That was not my intention," Bao Qian deflected.

Honestly this interlude has actually made me like Bao Qiuan a bit less [Edit: and I liked him a fair bit before]. His casual talk of how he's using his wealth to undercut the local baron's children when talking to Ling Qi the baroness and former streetrat didn't do him any favours even before we got to that part.
 
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"I suppose they wouldn't have much time then," Ling Qi said. "Do you have any siblings?"
"Only the one, I have a brother some decades my elder," Bao Qian replied. "He's apprenticing under my father at the moment."

@yrsillar I thought Qian had a younger sister? Didn't he mention her in the sidestory with Hanyi?

Edit: Found it
She huffed, the very picture of a young girl trying far too hard to be an arrogant young miss. It reminded him of his own younger sister, trailing after his mother like a duckling.
 
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So I am inclined to ask Bao about recent Emerald Seas history. The music option feels a little bit like a rehash of the conversation we already had at with the dinner scene. I am sure that we will get more information, but it still feels like retreading ground. I am interested in something new!
 
[X] Ask him about the song. It is beautiful, even in its simplicity. You're curious about the musical traditions of the Emerald Seas.
 
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Hmm, prop gonna vote for music. Qian is a music nerd so would be intresting to see his take on this.

And we gotten quite a bit of Hui history lately, so I would like the poke music more due to that.
 
[] Ask him about the song. It is beautiful, even in its simplicity. You're curious about the musical traditions of the Emerald Seas.

Screw the Hui, I have yet to hear anything about them that is the least bit interesting and I haven't seen anything to suggest that Bao Qian would be the one to change that.

At least we know that Bao Qian is passionate about music and that LQ has been studying some music history/theory due to their conversations. Who knows, maybe this way we'll learn a little bit more about him beyond what he's like as a business partner? Also LQ has been repeatedly coming up against the fact that, despite being an artistic cultivator, she has a hard time appreciating it due to her poor background.
 
This is more relevant I think. We already spend enough time and energy on music. If this is a date, we could try to make an effort to converse on a subject of mutual interest.

[] Follow up regarding the Hui, you're a little curious to hear Bao Qian's thoughts on the recent history of the Emerald Seas.
 
Musical tradition is one of the things we only really talk about with Bao Qian and it feels like it's the way Ling Qi might connect with him on a deeper level. Qian is a decidedly practical person and that's probably one of the major barriers in this courtship, since Ling Qi prefers practicality to be tempered by sentiment. But he also has an appreciation for music, art and beauty, the loneliness of Ling Qi's compositions spoke to him, yet was disappointed she didn't share his scholarly interest in music. But she is, and has become more so over the last few months, and them starting to have actually interesting conversations about culture and music is probably the way to go if we want something in common that isn't work. Ling Qi can probably tell Qian a thing or two about the Emerald Seas' ancient musical culture and we can only make it a part of her character to engage with and learn about the rich traditions of the past if we select scenes where such is shown.

I feel like we have a pretty good idea about who the Hui were and how they operated. Better to leave the next lore dump for when we need exposition for our inevitable next encounter with the clan.
 
[] Ask him about the song. It is beautiful, even in its simplicity. You're curious about the musical traditions of the Emerald Seas.

I understand Nesh's reticence to rehash old conversations, but it could also be seen as a continuation about an area of shared interest. That's the sort of thing you do on dates isn't it? Sort of a, "I know we touched on this before, but I'd like to hear more." I think it would show LQ respects and values Qian's opinion and insight on the matter.
 
It's pretty clearly a date, since Qian makes it clear that he's inviting her out to this as opposed to a more traditional date-venue like the last one we went on with him:
"Well honestly, We're both busy people and so we haven't gotten as much opportunity to get to know each other as I'd like," Bao Qian said. "Since I know you have some free time, I wanted to invite you out."

"Out where," Ling Qi said warily.

"Well, I'd hoped to give you a choice on the matter. You know I perform some odd services for local nobility, and being the active sort of woman that you are, I thought you'd enjoy a little light adventuring to something more idle like a dinner or theater performance."
[X] Ask him about the song. It is beautiful, even in its simplicity. You're curious about the musical traditions of the Emerald Seas.
 
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[x] Follow up regarding the Hui, you're a little curious to hear Bao Qian's thoughts on the recent history of the Emerald Seas.
Either or really but I think we usually talk about music so I wanna extend our range of topics.
 
[x] Follow up regarding the Hui, you're a little curious to hear Bao Qian's thoughts on the recent history of the Emerald Seas.
 
[X] Ask him about the song. It is beautiful, even in its simplicity. You're curious about the musical traditions of the Emerald Seas.
 
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