Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Broken

Ice, glacial in color and care, stared out from death's visage. Human proportions had been taken to the flame, leaving melted and distorted features. Except for the eyes, which remained fixed on his, no matter how much other features melted and twisted. Its clothes were rich and well adorned, but at the edges they frayed, spinning off into the infinite mist that surrounded him.

Shadows flickered in the mist. Shadows whose eyes he was afraid to meet, lest death bare down on him; as unrelenting as a glacier. His hands sweated and constantly shifted on the shaft of his spear. Try as they might, a firm grip eluded them.

His spear slipped out of his hands. He reached for it, only, in horror, to realize he had stopped looking at death. His eyes snapped back up, but it was too late. Death's mouth was opening.

Its ruined face split. A mouth, twice as wide as a human's and blacker than night's vault, revealed itself. At the corner of his eyes, he saw shadows. Spinning around his spear flashed out to stop the first of the shadows he knew were coming. Nothing was there. Only churning mist. Pain and cold crawled into his side. He twisted his neck and saw the shadow next to him. Eyes of boiling blood set into a skull of darkened canine features stared up at him. It stood on two elongated and crooked legs. In its hands, a dagger carved from fresh snow – fresh snow now stained with blood. His spear spun, trying to strike, but coldness seeped in from his back. He didn't bother looking; it was another shadow striking him.

At this point, his knees gave out. While he fell, a shadow's jaw gripped his head from the side, fastened firmly to the crown of his head and his lower jaw. Before he could stop himself, his tongue rubbed against an impossibly cold incisor. Now his tongue was split in half while rapidly cooling blood filled his mouth. The jaws twisted, forcing him to look up, back into the eyes of death. Death's mouth was even wider now leaving no room for any other features on its face, except of course for the eyes. Cold and placid, glacial as always.

From that mouth came sound. A blizzard's melody. A glacier's march. Howling and uncaring. Kept in place by shadows and their daggers; all he could do was endure. Even at that he failed. Fingers fell away first, shattering next to his knees. Then came his hands. Up and up coldness crept. It crawled through his arms. With each piece of him that fell away, death drifted closer. He was so weak and small in front of all this power. A mouse to an oncoming glacier.

He closed his eyes as death's mouth reached his face, large enough to swallow his head whole. Music rushed past him, ripping off pieces of him, faster and faster. Ears tore away, spinning off behind him.

His nose tickled.

Zou Chen's eyes snapped open. It was a decision he immediately regretted as the afternoon sun, just emerging from some grey wool clouds, seared his eyes closed again. Shifting and groaning Zou Chen stood, blinking away stars and brushing off the leaf that had landed on his nose.

Nothing had changed in the clearing since he had arrived this morning. The mossy stone he had been resting against dominated the small space. A mixture of red and purple wildflowers spread through the short grass that separated the boulder from the thicker underbrush of the forest. Branches descended and shrubs rose creating a dark green edge to the clearing. A jaw trying to close. From that darkness came the rustling of branches.

Zou Chen swung his spear in a lazy arc to rest on his shoulder. Qi spread from him, feeling for the threat. He pulled it back a moment later. A fellow student, first year from the depth of qi. Just as Zou Chen sat back down the figure emerged.

The first thought Zou Chen had at seeing the younger student was that they were an irate pig. A pig with a swagger, too. How someone could act so dignified with branches and brambles jutting from their hair was an enigma to him. "Greetings, I am Zou Chen. May I have the honor of knowing your name?" Time to see how the man reacted.

The man, or boy really, glowered before puffing up like some bird meant for roasting. "I am Hou Jin. It wounds my heart that manners have fallen so low in the outer territories that a fellow noble does not even rise for greetings."

Poorly, Zou Chen thought, though he let none of it show on his face. "Should I assume everyone who wanders out into these woods to be a noble?"

Hou Jin seemed to glow red before he opened his mouth, but Zou Chen spoke before words left the man's mouth.

"I think we have strayed away from your purpose here, unless your purpose was to find me and natter on about etiquette?" Zou Chen said. "After all, this spot is quite far off the path. So, why have you sought me out?"

Rallying Hou Jin took some deep breaths. "Indeed," he said, "I have sought you out for a proposal."

Zou Chen straightened. If only slightly. Everyone knew he was the failure of the Zou. The one who had begged for every possible advantage only to fail. If victory needed no explanation, then failure required impossible answers. Why would anyone propose something to him? Instead of allowing his thoughts to surface he simply gestured with his hands to get on with it.

Puffing up even more, if that was even possible, Hou Jin started to speak. It lacked the smoothness a skilled orator had. It was quick, with short pauses randomly strewn about, as if the man had memorized the speech and was struggling to say everything before he forgot it all.

"You must have noticed the rats running around the mountain." Hou Jin said. "Gnawing at their betters. Trying to be something they are not. Grasping for things that don't belong to them. They find themselves with a fraction of power – stolen no doubt from their betters – and believe themselves beyond the manners and traditions of the Empire. Beyond their place in the world. They are not content with being slightly better than their kin and seek to be better than us. Us! Us whose blood and sweat built the empire they gnaw at! So in my bafflement about the inability of rats to understand I look towards like minded fellows. Together, and with others I have reached out to, we can make sure that the rats know where they belong, and are kept there."

Sadness. That was the only emotion Zou Chen felt as he listened to the talking pig. Such whispers had been spoken before, yet what came of them? Nothing. Hou Jin spoke, believing every word he was saying, unaware of the truth inherent in the world. Hopefully he learned the truth, before the truth broke him. Lineages, connections, names. None of those meant anything to strength. Not when everyone here was so small.

"If you are having trouble with rats on the mountain, you should tell the sect administration."

Face twisting into a vivid purple hue Hou Jin spat to the side. "So, you'll stand against me, a Hou?"

"I will stand neither with or against you." Air twisted and distorted as Zou Chen let lake qi spill out of him. Nothing overt, but a threat. "You face hills Hou Jin," Zou Chen said, "yet you delude yourself into thinking they are mountains. The sect cares for only one thing here. Strength. Gather your friends, beg your family, and when the end of the year comes pray you have enough strength." Zou Chen gestured towards himself with one hand. "Because if you don't, I am your future."

Hou Jin's face had paled, but remained defiant. "I see that you have become a coward then." He said. "Quivering in an abandoned glade, afraid of shadows that have passed you by. I offer you one more chance. Help me and I can make it worth your while."

Zou Chen shook his head in silence.

"Very well." Hou Jin said, quivering in place. "When you see the bounty you could have had remember your choice."

With those words Hou Jin stalked back into the woods. The last Zou Chen saw of him, he tore a twig from his head. Then he disappeared into the forest. Zou Chen let out a sigh and his hand raked his hair. Was that how he was back then? A self entitled boy who thought he knew how the world worked? Perhaps he still was, even if he had seen how small he truly was.

Darkness fell before Zou Chen moved again.

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A.N:
@yrsillar Omake for the Omake throne

So this thought niggled at me for a while, ever since I read Cobbler and Viper. Then the conversation with Zhengui happened and some things clicked into place. Zhengui might physical destroy and renew, but Ling Qi does the same socially or spiritually. We have one very clear case of that in the sidestory by Yrs 'Blade Thin Path'. Ling Qi changed someone's entire way. Not everyone handles those pressures well though and that is what I wanted to show here. That Zou Chen, the man who we crushed in the tournaments opening round, is now a broken man. If you have any critiques please share them, they help me become a better writer.
I enjoyed reading that immensely, so I decided to edit it :Ü™
 
Turn 11: Arc 3-2
"I think I am inclined to the forest path," Ling Qi said thoughtfully. "Is there really no other information on it though?"

"The last significant survey of this region took place in the days just after Ogodei," Cai Renxiang replied. "And that was not truly thorough."

Xia Lin frowned. "Unfortunate. I still believe dealing with and silencing human foes would be more reliable, than dealing with either unknowns or dragons."

"I do not doubt everyone's martial prowess, but stirring up the wrath of foes upon our prospective allies doorstep strikes me as rude," Meng Dan said.

"If they become allies, those tribes will be foes regardless," Xia Lin challenged.

"That may be true, but is it worth risking greater attention?" Ling Qi said carefully. "I trust in Sect Head Yuan and the General, but we do not exactly know the full extent of our enemies forces."

Xia Lin continued to frown, but eventually nodded. "A fair argument. If we must deal with spirits then, the forest seems the better path. Should the dragon be recalcitrant, we would have no recourse but to retreat. Scouting has shown no sign of such a spirit in the forest."

"I am sure that there will be a fourth realm or two in such a region," Meng Dan mused. "If things go poorly that would still be within the realm of our scout commander to intervene."

"That is true, but I trust in Miss Ling and Lady Cai to avoid that," Gan Guangli said confidently. "That is why I believe the forest to be the best path."

With their arguments made, they fell silent, waiting for Cai Renxiang to give the final decision. The heiress stared at the map in Xia Lin's hands for a moment later before nodding. "The forest then, let us prepare to depart."

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They left the camp within the hour, joining the outgoing scouting platoon. Twenty five soldiers, two in five of which was third realm with an accompanying spirit beast, all led by a core disciple of the fourth realm. Their task was survey the region, and as such they wouldn't be following them directly into the forest, instead providing a cover for their presence from any watchers afar and above.

With the scouts, their path lead south, over the rocky hills and valleys that lay between the greater peaks in the Wall. For two days they traveled straight south at a swift march, and the climate swiftly cooled. Although it didn't bother Ling Qi by the time they reached the forests edge, many of the soldiers had begun to don warmer gear.

The forest itself was a strange sight. It grew from a steep 'V' shaped chasm between two cloud piercing peaks, with thick old growth trees growing at odd angles from sharply angled rock. Thick, knotty roots pierced the stone and dirt, forming a rough ground, and curved trunks sprouted upward to face the sky with a dark canopy of needles. The bottom of the chasm then, was dark as night even at midday, lit only by the faint phosphorescent light fluttering insects that hung over the shallow, sluggish river that ran down the center. Viewed from above, Ling Qi saw it as a curving line of green that ran for many hundreds of kilometers toward the south horizon.

The first task would be one of pathfinder. Xia Lin and Ling Qi were going to go ahead of the group and determine the best path before returning to the others.

Ling Qi materialized on the low hanging branch a tree at the forest's edge, sending fragrant needles raining down into the water below, where Xia Lin strode up through the ankle deep waters. She bounced her halberd on her shoulder as she peered into the darkness that lay ahead.

"What are your orders going forward?" Xia Lin asked. She stepped out of the shallow water and onto the tiny strip of stony shore that lay beneath Ling Qi's perch.

Ling Qi raised an eyebrow as she peered down. "I don't think I am in charge like that."

Xia Lin cocked her head, peering upward at her. "I think we are both aware of who Lady Cai favors, Miss Ling. You are my senior in her service besides."

"Lady Cai doesn't think like that. I am sure she means us to cooperate," Ling Qi replied. She peered into the forest. The persistent gloom was hardly a bother. Ahead the shallow river fell over a short cliffside, leading deeper into the valley. The trees were silent save for the occasional twittering birdsong and the rustling of grass.

If you only looked with mortal senses anyway. The dark branches teemed under her spiritual senses. Among the trees, thousands of mismatched knothole eyes peered back at her. Little spirits of wood and growth, hiding behind every clump of needles and clinging to every trunk. The river's burble was a low pitched song, echoing from the forest deeps. Faeries of cold and wind danced among the frost dusted canopy, fragile snowflake frames tinkling like bells. <What do you think Sixiang?>

"Sleepy place, rivers not a regular flooder, so it shouldn't be a problem. No signs of anything real spooky yet. The little tree guys are cute, I kinda want one," Sixiang replied cheerfully.

"Zhengui does not like this place much," her little brother grumbled.

"Pfft, it's fine. You're just being grumpy," Hanyi scoffed.

Ling Qi did not allow the byplay in her head to distract her as she moved to the next branch, peering over the short cliff, it was only ten or so meters deep. Unfortunately down below the trees grew right down to the waterline, their gnarled roots forming a twisted bed that left not a spot of ground to walk freely on.

Xia Lin followed her, and where the faint light cast by her halberd passed, the tree spirits and faeries retreated, shying away. Things of shadow nesting in the darkness stirred, opening blinking yellow eyes that tracked the passing light with longing. "Miss Ling, it is not necessary to humor me," Xia Lin replied, looking down into the dark as well. "Your skillset is the more valuable one here."

Ling Qi paused, glancing down at the other girl. She wondered what had brought this on.

"She's gotten it into her head that little Cai doesn't much like her," Sixiang mused. "...and I suspect she might be feeling kind of extra."

Ling Qi blinked at the odd turn of phrase, but understood the intent. On the other hand, Xia Lin wasn't wrong, they wanted to avoid conflict wherever possible. "Well, if you insist. I think it would be best for you to stay on the river. The spirit of it seems calm, so if you can check down the run, and see if there's any obstruction to just using it, I can scout the periphery."

Xia Lin nodded sharply. "Understood. Meet here in one hour?"

"Yes," Ling Qi replied.

She stepped over the edge and fell into the dark, landing in the frothing water below without a splash. Ling Qi watched her stride forward through the now calf deep water for a moment before turning her attention back to the closely packed trees.

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Ling Qi kept a tight leash on her qi as she explored the forest, not letting her power leak out into the surroundings as she made her silent way through the branches. She didn't even flex her aura when faeries swirled close to toy with her hair, or wood spirits clung to her hems with little claws of sap and bark, letting her carry them for a time before dropping onto new trees or rare patches of unoccupied soil. It made it easier to listen. It made it easier to here the meaning in the soft song of wind in branch and the rustling of needles. The trees here were old and gnarled things, jealous of their places in the vale. For all the apparent silence and tranquility, the whispers of bark and root were harsh things, a silent competition and jostling for soil and sunlight.

Among the trees she found few beasts, mostly birds and rodents, though she saw signs of wolves and game beasts further from the river, where the grade of the valley lessened and fallen trees had cleared trails. But deeper in the valley, she began to find webs. At first in small patches but swiftly growing more thickly strewn. In the shadows, many legged silhouettes skittered, both tiny and large.

As she continued to descend, on the path through the chasm, it only grew worse. Only near the river did the webs grow thin, though a few delicate structures connected branches on either side. For Ling Qi, the webs did not provide any obstacle, but for her less dextrous companions, she could see it being trouble. There was little room to traverse without ruining the creatures homes.

Unless Xia Lin found something very troubling, the river would likely be the best path.

Upon meeting back with her and explaining this, Xia Lin's expression failed to instill confidence.

"The river is clear of hostiles so far as I went. The fish are not carnivorous, and the waters are calm," Xia Lin reported. They stood back at the forest's edge, where the faint light of the autumn sun was allowed to reach the ground. "However, at the lowest point of the valley there is a significant anomaly. At first I believed it to be a grove of petrified trees, but upon closer inspection, I noted the signs of artificiality. Upon further inspection, I noticed signs of energies being conducted into the further portion of the river and valley."

Ling Qi frowned. "Do you have any idea what it is doing?"

"I do not specialize in formation craft, but I suspect some form of large scale misdirection effect," Xia Lin replied, tapping the butt of her weapon thoughtfully against the ground. "A number of the northward 'trees' have suffered environmental damage, which may explain the lack on this side."

Ling Qi pinched the bridge of her nose. Cloud Nomads didn't do stonework or formations, did they. Some other additional unknown group then? She thought that was unlikely. A ruined imperial outpost? Wouldn't they know about it then?

Ling Qi glanced toward the web filled forest warily. There was one group, associated with spiders, known for their skill at illusion and subterfuge. The Hui, deposed dukes of the Emerald Seas. She met Xia Lin's eyes, and understood the grim set of her features.

"...You said the construction was weathered, suffering environmental damage, right?"

"It was," Xia Lin replied. "It implies a lack of active upkeep and hasty construction."

So it did, Ling Qi mused. They still had limited time. "Then, let's go and clear the obstacle."

***​

The site was as Xia Lin had described it, apparently petrified trees growing from the wide, shallow water, there were dozens of them. On the northern side a few had fallen, and taken their neighbors with them, scattering rubble throughout the river. With silver gleaming in her eyes, Ling Qi examined them, and confirmed Xia Lin's suspicions. The pillars were part of a large scale formation effect, a labyrinthine illusion that should have rendered the forest impassable.

Perhaps Cai Renxiang could brute force her way through the decayed illusions, but that would probably be quite noticeable. Exploring the site, Ling Qi considered just asking Xia Lin to knock down a few more pillars, to finish disabling it.

However… she was not expert enough in formations to know which others could be broken without setting off a feedback explosion, like she had so long ago in Elder Ying's Sect trial. And for a formation this size, the blast would not be so tiny. To disable it effectively, they needed to find the power source.

Luckily, Ling Qi was skilled enough to trace the lines of energy back and up the western bank, to a boulder that was not a boulder at all.

As the two of them peered down into the damp tunnel that descended beneath the ground, Ling Qi glanced at Xia Lin. This was enemy territory, most certainly. Perhaps she should let Xia Lin take command.

[] Pass command to Xia Lin
[] Maintain command

The above vote determines the way that you approach the event encounters, the social dynamic between yourself and Xia Lin, and the overall outcome of the event.
 
Hm, I am not sure what would help Xia Lin adjust better here - being a useful subordinate or taking command. I guess she could have a shot at the latter so we can see her style of command if nothing else.
 
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Even if there being a chain of command with two people in it is a little silly.
Xia Lin doesn't seem to do well at volunteering opinions, and also doesn't seem to have a "there is no chain of command" mode?

Which isn't necessarily bad, at the moment; as much as it's her job to protect CRX and Ling Qi, it's our job to sometimes determine that risk to ourselves better serves our purposes than not taking a risk, and I don't think she has an "off" mode.

I'm not sure how "domain responsibility" rather than "vertical hierarchy" is going to work out, though; I'd prefer she have more initiative in sharing opinions, 'cause Ling Qi being "higher rank" doesn't mean she always has the information to judge what the risks for a plan actually are.
 
I think giving over command would be actually a bad idea here.
Xia Lin is very straightforward and if the power source is a spirit, and everything powerful enough we have seen in the setting so far is sentient, her approach could backfire badly.

Ling Qi, on the other hand, will try diplomacy first, a better approach in my opinion.
 
I think giving over command would be actually a bad idea here.
Xia Lin is very straightforward and if the power source is a spirit, and everything powerful enough we have seen in the setting so far is sentient, her approach could backfire badly.

Ling Qi, on the other hand, will try diplomacy first, a better approach in my opinion.

We're agents of the Hui's usurpers, diplomacy isn't in the cards here and even Ling Qi doesn't seem to think it likely.
 
I'd rather give Xia Lin command to help build us into a cohesive group. I'd rather not create an in vs out group in this small setting. I think what it would mean we don't get any loot, which is always a shame though.
 
If you only looked with mortal senses anyway. The dark branches teemed under her spiritual senses. Among the trees, thousands of mismatched knothole eyes peered back at her. Little spirits of wood and growth, hiding behind every clump of needles and clinging to every trunk. The river's burble was a low pitched song, echoing from the forest deeps. Faeries of cold and wind danced among the frost dusted canopy, fragile snowflake frames tinkling like bells.

I've grown to really love your atmospheric descriptions, you always manage to make them feel completely magical in a way most fantasy I read nowadays doesn't.
 
Otoh, looking at things more like a heist than an assault might work better. Hard to say. Both should be fine imo.

In many ways I feel the more interesting questions are social though - how does this choice affect Xia Lin's growth and relationships? Especially given LQ does have some awareness of issues here.
 
I think, before we take a position on who's in charge, we need to decide what we're trying to do here. (Which is more Ling Qi's job than Xia Lin's.)

What do we know about the Hui, again?
 
We're agents of the Hui's usurpers, diplomacy isn't in the cards here and even Ling Qi doesn't seem to think it likely.
It's been two hundred years though. That's not a small amount of time even for cultivators, especially considering that no one especially high-levelled would escape here. Who knows what exactly awaits us in that bunker? Ling Qi's seemingly better adaptability might serve the mission better than Xia Lin's straightforward military experience.
 
Xia Lin seems like she's a great soldier, which would be tremendously useful and applicable if she was planning to spend her entire life embedded in a block of infantry-but not so useful to a ducal retainer who is meant to be an independent operative and exercise judgement of their own.

She has a brain so it'd be nice if we could get her to start using it, and the bunker may well be empty anyhow.
 
@yrsillar
" made it easier to here the meaning"

And while I'm posting:
" There was little room to traverse without ruining the creatures homes. "

So... that's just a super wholesome and delightful way to talk about lovely spooders.
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u should add crows to this story when there's room - and do it in a big way. Crows are best birbs.
The above vote determines the way that you approach the event encounters, the social dynamic between yourself and Xia Lin, and the overall outcome of the event.

So like. This isn't a challenging choice at all! Nope! Very clear and simple! The obvious solution is: [insert correct answer here]

Otoh, looking at things more like a heist than an assault might work better. Hard to say. Both should be fine imo.

In many ways I feel the more interesting questions are social though - how does this choice affect Xia Lin's growth and relationships? Especially given LQ does have some awareness of issues here.
Edt: This: The Correct path can be found, in all things; via looking at things as if they are a heist - because all things are heists.

So we need to ask ourselves; what are we stealing, and what/who from, and how can we and our posse make good on our escape/how can we misdirect the popo?
 
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Might be the place is boobytrapped and cursed, the Hui were decadent assholes the the extreme so it might not be worth it looking for loot if they planned for it cause there pricks like that.
 
We're agents of the Hui's usurpers, diplomacy isn't in the cards here and even Ling Qi doesn't seem to think it likely.
Remember the Volcanic Tyrant Tortoise that was powering formations in the Outer Sect? It wasn't there by choice. Depending on what we find down there, working for the person who overthrew the Hui could be a point in our favor.
 
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I wonder if we could push the "If I am the commander here, then you're obviously my more experienced second-in-command, therefore I need your active participation" thing with Xia Lin, similarly to what we did during our tour with the Sect? It might be a role she can use to find her footing.
 
Might be the place is boobytrapped and cursed, the Hui were decadent assholes the the extreme so it might not be worth it looking for loot if they planned for it cause there pricks like that.
We have only reputation to go off of, with only some documentation. We know they were masters of subterfuge and illusion, worked with spiders, and were powerful enough to have been a Ducal Clan.
Given the presence of spider webs, we know that there are almost certainly going to be some form of spirits/beasts abound in this tunnel and I postulate they are "guarding" the central power source for the array likely as part of an ancient pact to keep this bunker or what have you intact.
The presence of spirits/beasts I am confident saying is guaranteed, and if the Hui were involved it's likely to be of Spider origin. We have some knowledge of these spirits as well as substantial spirit ken and personal maneuverability to avoid disturbing or harming any lesser spiders of webs and can guide Xia Lin through them as well towards whatever main chamber houses the array's core.
Ling Qi I feel is likely a better commander for this situation as she possess great mobility, information gathering apparatus, and is also likely better equipped to handle initial contact with any spirits/beasts Ling Qi does meet as her Arts suite is intended to. Combined with lacking the LIGHT of Shenhua in her set up aside from the gown which has been building off of Ling Qi for goodness knows how long now. We are likely to make a better impression than Xia Lin.
 
I think if we want Xia Lin to adjust to being a retainer, and a part of CRX's circle, we should pass command to her. It implicitly says she has skills we don't, we acknowledge those skills, and starts to ease her into the cooperative mindset of a team, as opposed to the obedient mindset of a unit.
 
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