Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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So, the lesson here is, the if you are a man, stay far away from Ling Qi unless you are a white, and to be on the safe side, even then.
Also make sure all your sisters/daughters get introduced to her.
 
So, the lesson here is, the if you are a man, stay far away from Ling Qi unless you are a white, and to be on the safe side, even then.
Also make sure all your sisters/daughters get introduced to her.
I mean, huh, Suyin lost an eye, Xiulan got an arm constantly on fire, and Zeqing exploded. It's not just men being in danger around Ling Qi.
 
I mean, huh, Suyin lost an eye, Xiulan got an arm constantly on fire, and Zeqing exploded. It's not just men being in danger around Ling Qi.
Su Ling also got into a fight way above her weight class. Like, twice! Once during our first adventure with her, then again with our next adventure with her.

Moral of the story, if your girl you should survive hanging out with Ling Qi. You may not like what happens though. Tends to be traumatizing.
 
That makes it sound like Ling Qi is a cultivation aid.
Well, Hanyi was yellow before she became our sister, and now look at her! She's a green who is making connections with the greater Emerald Seas and is having a debut concert promoting her music.

Or Xiulan who sought out dangerous tribulations to more quickly advance her cultivation and power.

Or Li Suyin who found precious resources and treasures to advance her craft in the corrupted caverns.

Or Su Ling who found a spirit companion to help guard her back at the moonlit tower.

So I'm not saying we are a cultivation aid... but we are a cultivation aid.
 
I mean, huh, Suyin lost an eye, Xiulan got an arm constantly on fire, and Zeqing exploded. It's not just men being in danger around Ling Qi.
I suspect Xiulan would be the first to proclaim the whole thing worth it. Suyin lost an eye, but got into the inner sect and seems like a rising star (and i'm usre she can replace the eye with something better and more murdery).
Zeqing was, according to Xin, already on the way to imploding.
 
I suspect Xiulan would be the first to proclaim the whole thing worth it. Suyin lost an eye, but got into the inner sect and seems like a rising star (and i'm usre she can replace the eye with something better and more murdery).
Zeqing was, according to Xin, already on the way to imploding.
"Already on the way to imploding" is more or less the same way Jiao is "already on the way to dying of old age", though.

Xiulan's totally going to proclaim it's worth it now that she has escaped the dreaded Ling Qi clutches, but Shen Hu also said the whole Bloody Moon test was worth it, even if he died there while protected villagers from a beast tide. If Liao Zhu survives, he might also get a 'power up' like Suyin might in the future (but who knows, maybe Suyin will die from eye infection instead).

Basically, it's easy to joke about how the men are having it worse in consequences, but until this turn women were leading in deaths/crippling/loss, and even now we have to consider Elders we barely know as equal to Zeqing.
 
I mean, huh, Suyin lost an eye, Xiulan got an arm constantly on fire, and Zeqing exploded. It's not just men being in danger around Ling Qi.

Meizhen had her heart broken, Renxiang is being Renxiang.

Actually, thinking on it, was there anyone who actually had an all around great time in the Outer Sect? The Ma sisters had a pretty good year I think...

Maybe the world just sucks? :p
 
Meizhen had her heart broken, Renxiang is being Renxiang.

Actually, thinking on it, was there anyone who actually had an all around great time in the Outer Sect? The Ma sisters had a pretty good year I think...

Maybe the world just sucks? :p
Ling Qi kind of went from starving in the streets with no friend and estranged from her family to a direct retainer to a ducal heir Baroness with almost a dozen friends and caring for her family.
 
Meizhen had her heart broken, Renxiang is being Renxiang.

Actually, thinking on it, was there anyone who actually had an all around great time in the Outer Sect? The Ma sisters had a pretty good year I think...

Maybe the world just sucks? :p
Meizhen did pretty great, all considered. Yeah, she faced a bit of heartbreak and it hurt for some time, but she seems to have gotten over it without permanent scarring. In return, she managed a decisive win against get rival in a fight that had great political importance, plus made some friends, plus formed a relationship that made her happy.
 
Ling Qi is a walking tribulation. Which is a good thing! We're helping others grow!

and if they roll badly that's hardly our fault. I mean. Han Jian failed and he barely was scratched. Plus! We broke up the faulty friend circle unintentionally which would have lead to weak cultivation and heart demons later on. This is actually good for him even though he failed, since Xiulan is a big winner even if she's on a bus in golden fields right now
 
But all the girls Ling Qi interacts seem to be doing great.
Best Snek found herself a girl, Lan Lan's cultivation soared and she got rid of her unwanted fiance, CRX is doing better...
Li Suyin is getting elder attention and has a hunky guy helping her make a dubious super suit, Su Ling is a baron and made Inner on meritorious service, Xiao Fen got friends who don't mind her beating them up recreationally and gets to terrorize her peers by pretending to be a supernatural horror, the Ma Sisters are gonna go double baron and one got a boyyyyyfriiiiend.


Remember Gan Guangli? He ended up being held back in the Inner Sect after the tournament.

Can't believe I missed my boy Gan.

The evidence is stacking up!
 
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Turn 10: Arc 2-1 Debut
"You are distressed by something," Renxiang observed.

Ling Qi looked away from Elder Zhu. "...Yes. This probably isn't the place for it though. When do we start preparing for the meeting?"

Renxiang considered her for a moment. "The third hour, the communications array requires the light of dawn to activate, and three hours time should be sufficient to prepare. Your time until then is free."

She had a lot of people to check on, Ling Qi thought, and things to consider as well. "What will you be doing with your time, Lady Cai?

"Recovering and cultivating," the heiress replied immediately. "In addition to penning a number of missives and messages."

Ling Qi glanced at Renxiang out of the corner of her eye. "I'll be there at the first hour."

"As you wish. We may cultivate and speak simultaneously if need be," Renxiang allowed

Ling Qi smiled faintly as they turned away from each other. That was a sentiment she could get behind at least.

"Of course that's the thing you'd bond over," Sixiang sighed in exasperation.

Ling Qi felt the humor drain away as she left the debriefing room though. She dearly hoped that everyone was alright.


***​




The Medicine Hall was a hive of frantic activity. Disciples rushed back and forth with supplies and equipment. Potent medicinal energies suffused the air, filling it with conflicting scents of flowers and spices and blood.

Ling Qi stood in the entrance hall, one among many. On the wall before them was posted a roll of names. There were fifteen of them in total now, but Ling Qi knew that more had been added since the first posting. It was a list of the Inner Sect Disciples who had died.

There was a name there that she recognized.

Shen Hu had been assigned to the mission below, to defend the construction and formations disciples. Already there were rumors, a whisper from one of the production disciples he had defended. He'd taken one of the tunnel entrances and held it against all comers until the defensive arrays behind him had finished, and Elder Jiao's project had snapped into place.

It seemed he had really taken the Bloody Moon's Dream to heart, Ling Qi thought absently.

It was a relief that it hadn't been someone she knew better. That it had not been Li Suyin or Su Ling, or even Xuan Shi. The thought shamed her, but it was there all the same. She had liked Shen Hu well enough but… there had just never been time to get to know him better. Now she never would. It was a bitter feeling.

"I don't think its wrong exactly, to think that way," Sixiang whispered. "It's not wrong to be glad others aren't gone."

It was probably a little wrong that she didn't feel something more though, Ling Qi thought. He was only an acquaintance, but shouldn't she feel something more? Something more than a muted sadness?
"I don't think there is a right way to feel," Sixiang said carefully.

"Ling Qi?"

Ling Qi looked away as someone called her name. There was Li Suyin, looking haggard and exhausted wearing a physician's smock, spattered with blood and other things.

"Li Suyin? Are you alright?" Ling Qi asked, stepping out of the crowd. She scanned her friend for injury, silver gleaming in her eyes. She saw only exhaustion. There was the echo of burns, and the lingering marks of cleansed shishigui corruption. "Were you one of the ones down there?"

Li Suyin nodded tiredly and swayed. Ling Qi was at her side in an instant, catching her before she could fall. At some point, Ling Qi noted absently, her friend had reached appraisal stage in her cultivation.

"I was, but I wanted to keep helping. Went to the Medical wards after," Li Suyin muttered as Ling Qi helped her move out of people's way. "Elder sent me away, ordered rest."

Ling Qi grimaced, that sounded like Li Suyin alright. "Was Su Ling down there too?" She asked, dreading the answer.

Li Suyin leaned against her, eyes drifting shut. "No."

That was something. "Li Suyin, what happened down there?"

"They just kept coming," Suyin whispered, her voice barely audible over the noise of the hall. "They fought and they died and it just didn't stop. Dying only made them stronger."

Suyin paused and took a shuddering breath. "Elder Jiao was fighting, and it-it felt like we were the infection, and they the body fighting back."

"There was so much pain."

Ling Qi thought back to the fourth realm she had encountered down there. The nails driven into it's flesh, and the self mortification she had witnessed in their rituals. She tried to imagine what it would feel like, to be in the presence of something like that except scaled to fight an Elder, to match the thing that had come from over the Southern mountains.

Ling Qi felt a chill.

"C'mon, let me help you get home," Ling Qi said quietly, turning her friend toward the door. "You should rest."

She cast one more look at the list, eyes scanning down the names. She paused briefly as her name caught the last name on the list. She hadn't noticed it before, focusing on Shen Hu.

It seemed Yan Renshu had died down in the dark as well.

At least she didn't have to feel bad for not mourning him.


***​



"It feels a little surreal, doesn't it?" Ling Qi asked quietly.

They sat together in Renxiang's study. The furniture had been pushed aside to make room, and yet, even then Renxiang's rooms were a study in clockwork precision. Everything spaced just so. Her liege sat across from her at the center of part of the repeating geometric pattern in the carpet.

Ling Qi sat opposite, in the center of another. Briefly, she had considered seating herself just a touch to the right, but she didn't have the energy for jokes.

She kept remembering that list of names. Had she known any of the others on that list, Ling Qi wondered, spoken to them and immediately forgotten their faces?

"We were already at war," Cai Renxiang said quietly.

"It didn't really feel like it before," Ling Qi said. "The barbarians just got a sucker punch in, using a method we didn't expect. That was what it felt like, didn't it. They weren't a real threat. That's why we were still worrying about Sect ranks and the Elders were still taking volunteers instead of giving orders and…"

Cai Renxiang's fingers tightened on her knees, and Ling Qi fell silent. For anyone else it would have been nothing, but she could read the frustration and regret in the girls posture. Their talk from before the mission felt a little wrong now.

"You weren't acting differently from anyone else in the Sect," Sixiang whispered. "It's not like anyone else treated it differently until it was."

"Matters have indeed escalated beyond heightened raiding," Cai Renxiang replied blandly. "Tell me Ling Qi, are your spirits well?"

Ling Qi ducked her head and accepted the deflection from the subject. She tried to focus inward as she organized her thoughts. The cultivation of Playful Muse's Rapport was not coming easily to her right now though.

"Probably not much use where your going," Sixiang muttered, uncharacteristically bitter.
"Zhengui is well. He's very tough, even the injuries he took will be better in a couple of days, now that the impurity is out of his system," Ling Qi replied. She had visited them after their release from the physicians. Zhengui seemed satisfied by his performance for once. "Hanyi… she'll be fine too, given time."

"I believe you had an event planned for her, will her wounds allow it to go forward?" Cai Renxiang asked. Faint radiance flickered in the room, casting shadows at perfect right angles.

"She won't let it stop her, even if it takes awhile to heal, it's not like she actually needs her throat to sing, any more than I need my flute to play," Ling Qi said quietly. She was confident in Hanyi because hanyi was confident in her. Half of healing the body came from the mind. Her eyes strayed to Renxiang's own bandaged throat. "What about you? I saw those stains on your domain weapon."

Renxiang continued to breath steadily and rhythmically in her mediation. "The stains will out. It is merely a matter of time. Their resistance is vexing however."

"Do you think your mother will notice?" Ling Qi asked quietly. It wasn't the real question. Obviously the duchess will notice, but will she react.

"They are not permanent," Cai Renxiang said. Ling Qi didn't comment on the faint tremor that entered the girls voice. "We performed above any reasonable expectations, given the situation."

Did they perform above the Duchess' expectations though, Ling Qi wondered. She had to hope that they at least met them.

Of course that left aside the matter she had been avoiding. After the Medine Hall, she had hesitated. She had almost gone back to the Elders.

But… if there was a chance to make those lists shorter in the future, shouldn't she take it?

"I think it's the right thing to do," Sixiang whispered. "But I have to wonder if you can really succeed."

Thanks for the vote of confidence, Ling Qi thought wryly.

"Hey I'll do what I can," they chuckled.

"Lady Cai," Ling Qi said, speaking up carefully. "Before we start preparing, I think there is something I should tell you."

Maybe it was her tone, but when Renxiang opened her eyes, Ling Qi thought she saw a hint of dread there, even with the radiance shining from her pupils.
...She wasn't that bad, was she?


***​




The court of Xiangmen was overwhelming.

It was not merely the crowd of cultivators standing in, the very weakest of which matched or exceeded her cultivation. She had endured crowds before after all. Last years tournament had let her experience that. It was not the baleful radiance shining down from the throne above, the terrible pressure that crushed down on her shoulders. After the attack, she could endure the mere passive attention of the Duchess.

No, it was Xiangmen itself.

It thrummed with power, this place. Even projected here by the formations device, Xiangmen itself threatened to overwhelm her. Each of the twelve bone columns that supported the ceiling hummed with a primal beat. The stamp of hooves, the howl of wolves, the shrieks of birds. It resonated in her ears, cacophonous and distracting. The march of all the forest enraged. The disc of marble which made up the floor of the court, held in tightly curled branches, practically vibrated with uncounted ages of formationwork.

The air was thin here. There was so little wind, but solar and lunar qi were thick here. So thick that even as she watched, motes of it congealed into the fluttering forms of faeries that drifted about providing light to the court.

Then there was the tree itself. Stretching out in the sky beyond the court, immense branches supported a canopy of leaves that stretched for kilometers in every direction, penetrated by dappled beams of sunlight. There was power in the ancient bark that supported the platform, power in the sail sized leaves that drifted down on the wind, power in the immense branch which supported the Duchess throne. It was a quiet, steady, and patient power. Power fit to endure the world's ending.

It was one thing to know that Xiangmen had been here before the Sage, before the Diviner, before even the meanest of recorded history.

It was another to feel it.

Ling Qi shook out the distractions from her thoughts as she followed Cai Renxiang down the central carpet which led upward to the Duchess' throne, sheltered in the curl of a single branch, so high above. She maintained a perfectly appropriate distance. Five paces behind, no more or less.

She didn't let herself meet any of the many gazes around her, instead she focused on the speech in her head, the one she had rehearsed with Renxiang in those early hours of the morning.

But although she kept her eyes low, she could not help but fix her gaze on the throne. Cai Shenhua sat straight backed in her throne, and around burned a colorless sun. It was difficult to make out more than her silhouette. At her side was the minister Linqin, dressed in a resplendent rose pink gown, a circlet of roses adorned her wavy brown hair. Her hands were hidden in voluminous sleeves, and she looked down upon them with a cold and blank expression.

At the base of the throne branch were arrayed warriors in shining and ornate plate. Plume's of blinding white rose from their helms, and their faces were hidden behind blank steel masks, with only eye holes for features.

One among them stood out, a slender woman as tall as Shenhua herself, who stood in the direct center of the path leading up to the Duchess. In her hands, held point down to the floor was thin naked blade inscribed with etchings of herons in glittering diamond.

Renxiang had coached her on the important faces. Heron General Xia Ren was the Duchess' primary military commander and among her most loyal supporters. Ling Qi's eyes strayed briefly to the sides, she marked out the representatives of each of the count clans, the ambassador from the empress, and a few other notables.

Cai Renxiang knelt, Liming pooling around her feet, and Ling Qi followed her, lowering her head to almost touch the rich red carpet.

"My daughter, I see that you bear the scars of war. Rumor swirls and messengers fly, scattering tales of matters in the mountains," Cai Shenhua spoke, and her voice was light and sensual, almost idle in tone, despite her posture. "I would have you provide me with clear vision on events."

"Honored Mother, it pleases this dutiful daughter that I might be your eyes and ears in this matter," Cai Renxiang said. Her voice rang clearly as she raised her head. She remained kneeling, but no longer in full kowtow. Nonetheless, the faint rasp in her voice was all too audible in the silence of the court.

"On yesterday morn, we set out on a mission from the Sect. A punitive expedition against a barbarian gathering. Thought to be a trap, the Sect spun an ambush to entrap the enemies scheme, and slay those that were gathered there," Cai Renxiang said, speaking with machine-like precision. "My retainer and I chose to join the initial assault in order to bring victory to the name of the Cai. She was chosen for the role of scout and spotter, and I given to be the tip of the spear."

"It does not appear to have went well," Minister Linqin said evenly.

"Baroness Ling performed most admirably in her role, reaching and observing the meeting without detection," Cai Renxiang continued. "We discovered that it was a meeting between factions, discussing tribal alliance, attended by those allied with the underground beasts. They revealed a cache of potent material, known as starstone, as a token for alliance."

Shenhua hummed to herself, and Renxiang immediately fell silent as the faint tap of a fingernail on wood echoed through the court. "How large, precisely was this cache, Renxiang?"

"Eight meters and thirty seven centimeters in diameter," her liege answered immediately. Ling Qi wondered how she had been able to measure it so closely. "It was roughly spherical in shape."

The radiance above pulsed as whispers broke out throughout the court. The jewel encrusted representative of the Bao stroked his beard, a glint of avarice in his eyes. The Luo representative's hand tightened on the hilt of his blade and he looked ready to spit. The Wang representative, who looked like a much older, much hairier Wang Chao, drew together bushy brows that threatened to devour his eyes. The Meng representative, a thin and willowy woman in heavy stylized makeup merely pursed her lips. The Jia representative tugged nervously at his oiled beard.

"I see, this asset was denied to them?" Shenhua asked.

"The starstone itself was, thanks to the Baroness Ling," Cai Renxiang said carefully. They had talked about this, in order for her words to have even a little weight she had to be talked up a little.

"Continue your recounting of events," Cai Shenhua said flippantly, waving her hand.

And Renxiang did. In great and precise detail, she described the events of the raid. Her own battle in the Caldera, Ling Qi's stand against the bulk of the barbarian forces, the clash of Elders. She described their escape, and the coming of the thing in the south. She described the hatching of the starstone and the spirit within.

By the time she was done, the atmosphere of the court had darkened, and there was much grumbling and whispers among the courtiers. At least until Shenhua raised her hand, silencing them all at a gesture.

"It seems that you became involved in matters significantly above your head, my daughter," Shenhua said. "It is good that you sustained only minor injuries."

Ling Qi saw a tiny bit of tension bleed out of her liege.

"But, you're report is not done, is it?" The Duchess, asked, and Ling Qi had to work not to swallow nervously. "You have brought your retainer here today. I assume she has some important insight?"

"Baroness Ling was able to observe certain events with far more clarity, due to her role and position," Renxiang said. "I thought it prudent to allow her describe them herself."

"Hm, I see," Cai Shenhua did not sound particularly approving or disapproving. Minister Linqin looked as if she was about to speak up, but she fell silent as a Radiant hand clasped her own. It was a bizarrely intimate gesture, given the setting. "You have not erred in your judgment thus far. Baroness Ling, you may raise your head and speak."

Ling Qi could hardly breath as she straightened up. She scanned the crowd. Most seemed indifferent to her, merely eyeing her with idle interest. They didn't really expect anything of interest from her. They thought Shenhua was merely indulging her daughter. A few eyed her with something more like interest or disdain, but it was only a few.

Of the representatives, the Bao gave her an encouraging smile. The Wang representative seemed generally approving, though it was hard to read his face behind his beard and brows. The Luo and the Jia watched with disinterest. The Meng frowned at her but… didn't seem too hostile, actually.

The ambassador from the peaks, a man who reminded her of an older Kang Zihao, simply continued to observe in silence, his arms crossed over his chest.

Ling Qi prepared herself, together with Renxiang she had decided…

[] To appeal to military pragmatism. If their enemies were divided there was no need to unite them. (+Wang, +Jia approval, -Meng approval)
[] To appeal to culture. She spoke a variant of the hill tribe tongue, and bore other markers of civilization. Better to bring into the fold as the Weilu and the Xi once did. (+Meng, +Luo approval, -Diao approval)
[] To appeal to profit. If there is another force out there civilizing the southernmost tribes, perhaps there is gain to be had? (+Bao, +Diao approval, -Wang approval)
 
Our clearest and most honest motivation is :
[X] To appeal to military pragmatism. If their enemies were divided there was no need to unite them. (+Wang, +Jia approval, -Meng approval)
 
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Oooh, liking this quite a bit. It makes sense that CRX and Ling Qi decided in advance what was best to say.
MUCH better vote.

Please, those who have the patience to reread the story, who are these factions, again?
Wang/Jia are the 'new' count clans evalated by Shenhua, with Wang being military heavy and Jiao being Diao lackey.
Diao is a old-ish cound clan that's heavily allied with Shenhua, given her husband and lover are from it, but the relationship is kind of complex too given Shenhua wants to make her own ducal clan
Bao are in the north of ES, and rich traders.
Luo are an old clan in the east (next to Golden Field, and somewhat hurt by the Fall too). They are hunting based a bit.
Meng are also an old clan, and to the west. They used to be allied to the Bai, but they are more recently allied to the Sun.
 
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Hmmm, my initial ranking would be:
  1. Military
  2. Profit
  3. Culture
With Culture honestly just seeming weird to make as the main argument. Like, I wouldn't be opposed to Ling Qi having some sympathies there, and even playing to it later on, but it just seems weird to make as the primary argument to everyone else here.

Military is simple and straightforward and logical, while Profit I feel is a strong secondary contender with interesting links there.
 
Who do we give a damn again?
Lets see... Wang is the same clan as the dude we where told to befriend and helped form a group around. Jia we have not met. Meng is the clan that supported Sun over Bai and tots had nothing to do with the bandit attack and BINO. Luo we got some minor contact with with the dude that wants to marry Meizhens girlfriend, also Alingge is a vassal of them. Diao we got no contact with, Shenhua´s second (Diao leader) does not like CRX tho. Bao are the merchants and pretty good people going by the three of em we met.
 
Hmmm, my initial ranking would be:
  1. Military
  2. Profit
  3. Culture
With Culture honestly just seeming weird to make as the main argument. Like, I wouldn't be opposed to Ling Qi having some sympathies there, and even playing to it later on, but it just seems weird to make as the primary argument to everyone else here.

Military is simple and straightforward and logical, while Profit I feel is a strong secondary contender with interesting links there.

I don't like Profit because of the negative hit on Wang, which are both the clan who we're currently landlocked by as well as the social link group we're trying to push.

I'm Military then culture for that reason.
 
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