@DragonParadox It really seems like heroes crop up in Viserys' service quite organically. One could say that he gives people the opportunity to become the best version of themselves, just like he himself is ironically the best version of himself, considering canon.
 
Elaheh quietly nodded, seeing where this was going. "And then you saw Gogossos." "Indeed. So much knowledge, so many wonders, all within my reach. So many years wasted to rediscover the scraps of what Valyria could achieve. I once believed the mind to be more valuable then the flesh, for it could be molded by study and discipline while the body is static. Now I see you twist your flesh each and every day, while I struggle to leave the paths I took years and decades ago. Even the power that felt so liberating when it returned to the world reminds me every day of the limits I've set upon myself with the paradigm I had chosen." Again he shook his head, this time turning from her. "I will show you when I have something worth showing and not earlier. That is all I can promise."

He took a step away and this time she didn't stop him.
I can't wait to bookify an Aboleth and an Ulitharid. The flesh-forging secrets we could pry from their heads... And maybe one day we'll get a bookified Beholder as well.
 
The Artisans Pride V
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In a city of wonders, where the plants spoke and spirits of flame shared the sky with titans of steel, the mundane was easily overlooked. Mind, even in other cities, nobody would have given the man on the bench much of a second look. Just an old man waiting for something or someone, enjoying the warm, southern breeze and the treat in his hand. Sweet Cloud the merchant nearby called it, some delicacy from the Plane of Air, made of tiny filaments of sugar. It was significantly more noteworthy then the man idly plucking bits of it from the stick and eating them, or at least that what the average passerby assumed.

The woman who stepped too the bench though? She drew far more eyes with her dress that was far from decent, revealing most of her back and the rather gloomy tattoo of butterflies impaled on a thorny rose bush. A few began to whisper about the pair to each other, wondering what the two of them could have for business with each other. When the woman fiddled with something in her purse for a moment and began to speak, many ears suddenly loosing interest in the pair. Their discussion was very mundane and boring, and took far too much effort to listen to, so nobody bothered. It was in fact so mundane and boring that everyone who did try to listen immediately forgot what they heard and just wandered off, certain that there was nothing worth noticing here.

"I wouldn't have taken you for someone who preferred not to be noticed," the old man said, then plopped another bit of sugar into his mouth. The woman laid a hand on her chest, an exaggerated look of shock thrown back at him. "Wisdom Qyburn! Do you want to call me vain?" He made no move in return, just calmly chewing his treat. "I think the word is 'extroverted' in Low Valyrian. Would you truly try to claim otherwise, what with your attire today?"

"Ah, but it's so freeing to finally have some aspect of my art I can show in public without startling the poor souls here." She turned around, turning her back to him and drawing her hair aside to give him a better view. "Don't you like it?" "I'm afraid my sense for the arts is woefully underdeveloped, my lady, so I will refrain from judging it." Thus she turned back, making a point of looking sulkily at him. "You are a cruel man. First you invite a lady to the festival and then you shun her." She didn't wait long to see if she would get a rise out of him, knowing perfectly well that she would have better chances with a rock. "Why are you here anyway? I thought you wanted to continue our project while I took a few days off for my own projects."

"Such as the woman running from your shop last week?" He arched and eyebrow at her, though Elaheh just nodded in response, seeing nothing wrong with what happened there. "I hope you are aware that the king might be cross with you if he hears of this. She is one of his foundlings." Despite his stern voice, she waved him off. "I'm sure he understands, if he cares at all. He brought her to me after all, so I figured I might as well help her out a bit." "By terrorizing her?" "By helping her to gain a new perspective on things." "I'm not sure if that has worked, though she certainly gave me a new perspective when she bowled me over on her way out."

When this familiar complaint surfaced, she crossed her arms and glared at the old man next to her. "I've already apologized for that, even though I don't see it as my fault in the first place." In return a smiled. It was small, crooked and looked like one of those smiles you never wanted to see in person, which made Elaheh huff in annoyance at having been had. It was easy to forget that even Qyburn would join in some friendly ribbing, if prodded long enough. After a moment of silence, she turned back to watching the crowd. It was getting thicker by the moment, everyone trying to get to the Circle of Battle in time to hear the kings speech. "You didn't answer my question though. Why did you want to meet here?"

"I meant to ask a favor of you. There are some books I need to look over in the library, but I can't copy them, so I need someone to take care of young Ramsay for me tomorrow." "Oh? He is here too?" "Yes. It was pointed out to me that a young man shouldn't spent all his time in a gloomy cavern with the living dead." Elaheh hummed thoughtfully, her gaze shifting to the sky and watching a flock of phoenixes passing by. "I was wondering when Vee would object to his presence." "She didn't. It was Lord Saan who said that to me. He was worried that the boys hair would turn grey and his loins wither before he is old enough for a beard." He threw an annoyed look at the woman, who had begun snorting at the comparison. "His words, not mine."

"Where is he then?" "Currently he is with young Ser Royce's ward and the princesses' gremlins. I felt it would defeat the point of the exercise if I were to tag along. They'll watch the fireworks from the keeps gardens later and I would ask you to keep an eye on him from then to noon tomorrow, when he has an appointment at the Scholarium." "So you want him to leave Gogossos entirely? You seemed rather fond of the boy." Qyburn nodded once, then quietly murmured the words of a cantrip to clean his hands and have the now empty wooden stick in his hand float to a can at the nearby stall of the seller. "I am, but I don't have as much time to teach him and keep him out of trouble as I used to. Lord Bolton was clear that I should take good care of him and I feel the Scholarium is better equipped to take care of his special needs."

At this, Elaheh turned back to him and studied him carefully. "What special needs? The boy seemed decently bright and eager to learn. Polite too." "Eager he is. A bit too eager sometimes. There was an incident with one of the less favored servants at the Dreadfort that displeased Lord Bolton greatly." He meaningfully glanced at the bustling crowd on the street, silently conveying that this tale was nothing to be told in an open street. "I do not wish to have to explain myself for letting something similar occur again."

"Fine then. I will look after him for the day. Given how the beer and wine is flowing, I doubt that I would have many pleasant customers tonight anyway." Qyburn rose at that moment, but before he could take his leave, Elaheh grabbed one of the folds of his robe. "Under one condition though. I want to know what books you are reading that are so delicate that you can't bring them to Gogossos." In return he sighed, gently pushing her hand away. "I would have not expected that there would be so many people trying to pry into my private work when I made my pledge to the king." "So? You are asking me for a favor, so I can ask you for one in return. Tell me what you are doing."

For a moment he looked thunderous, an expression that she had never seen on his face except when talking about his past at the Citadel, but it quickly mellowed into resignation. "It is not ready to show anyone. Idle thought experiments and aimless tinkering." "The question is if you feel to need to do this alone or if you would accept some help." "Maybe, but it's more a matter of..." He quietly trailed off, shaking his head with a mien of regret. "My work on the matter of the unliving was never an end in of itself. My goal had always been to unearth the secrets of the living flesh. Later on I realized that the unliving flesh is similar, yet distinct, so I began to study it and other states more deeply, seeking to blend the states."

Elaheh quietly nodded, seeing where this was going. "And then you saw Gogossos." "Indeed. So much knowledge, so many wonders, all within my reach. So many years wasted to rediscover the scraps of what Valyria could achieve. I once believed the mind to be more valuable then the flesh, for it could be molded by study and discipline while the body is static. Now I see you twist your flesh each and every day, while I struggle to leave the paths I took years and decades ago. Even the power that felt so liberating when it returned to the world reminds me every day of the limits I've set upon myself with the paradigm I had chosen." Again he shook his head, this time turning from her. "I will show you when I have something worth showing and not earlier. That is all I can promise."

He took a step away and this time she didn't stop him.



AN: Some more slice of life from the dysfunctional artists commune.
Neither Elaheh nor Qyburn seem dysfunctional to me. Merely...complicated.

Is Qyburn working toward a major retraining in addition to whatever project he's cooking up behind close doors?

The formatting of the chapter is kinda weird, BTW. Having Elaheh and Qyburn's speech side by side is jarring. If not for her words being in purple, it would have been much more difficult to read.
"Yes. It was pointed out to me that a young man shouldn't spent all his time in a gloomy cavern with the living dead."
Perhaps he would like a position working in the menagerie as a dinosaur attendant?
 
@DragonParadox, once Imperial Steel is made, what would it take to ritually convert our more important blades to it? Dark Sister, Oathkeeper, Valaena's Valyrian Steel Spiked Chain, etc.
 
Is Qyburn working toward a major retraining in addition to whatever project he's cooking up behind close doors?
Yes. What he is working towards is... radical isn't quite able to express it.
The formatting of the chapter is kinda weird, BTW. Having Elaheh and Qyburn's speech side by side is jarring. If not for her words being in purple, it would have been much more difficult to read.
I was intentionally experimenting with that, since I want to go away from making an own paragraph every time someone speaks since that just provokes me to fill the space with useless cruft.
 
I can't wait to bookify an Aboleth and an Ulitharid. The flesh-forging secrets we could pry from their heads... And maybe one day we'll get a bookified Beholder as well.
Since all Aboleth's have unbroken racial memory stretching back to the beginning of their race, the "book" generated by a Scribe's Binding spell affecting one of them might be kinda...hefty. Viserys might need to assume Dragon form just to be large enough to physically turn one of the pages. :lol:
 
[X] See to the meeting of the giants
-[X] Viserys, Richard, Dany, Lya, Vee, Waymar, Tyene, Rina, and Xor.

[X] Vee Level Up
-[X] Class: +1 Mystic
-[X] Skills (5 points): +1 Concentration, +1 Handle Animal, +1 Heal, +1 Knowledge (Nature), +1 Spellcraft
-[X] Spells:
--[X] 7th Level: Brain Spider
--[X] 8th Level: Greater Angelic Aspect
 
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One mid-length research action for all of them.
Worth it. Absolutely 100% worth it. Bring on the Ghost Touch.
Since all Aboleth's have unbroken racial memory stretching back to the beginning of their race, the "book" generated by a Scribe's Binding spell affecting one of them might be kinda...hefty. Viserys might need to assume Dragon form just to be large enough to physically turn one of the pages. :lol:
I'm counting on it. :D

[X] Goldfish
 
Man cotton candy as a Djinn treat makes so much sense. Also interesting to see that Bolton made Qyburn Ramsey's minder for a while now and is slightly more proactive than Robert is when it comes to dealing with violent kid tendencies. Wonder how not being raised by Reek and allowed to murder/rape with impunity will affect the kid?

And man, it's always fascinating to see the social by plays between Elaheh and Qyburn. Very amused by the extrovert bit and Qyburns great teasing poker face. And man know I'm really curious about what Qyburns doing if it's considered a far fetched fancy in his circumstances.

How ever, I do have to admit the blocks of text with multiple people speaking in one paragraph thew me off. Even if it causes more lines and line breaks I personally vastly prefer different people speaking being broken up in their own paragraphs.

Also nice to see Viserys inadvertently clowning on Lanna with a goddamn andamantine fake limb and somehow doing the how knightly order and honors thing better than Robert could dream of? Alas Robert's too focused on training to fight to futilely attempt to outdo the "Traitors Tourney"

[X] Goldfish
 
Also interesting to see that Bolton made Qyburn Ramsey's minder for a while now and is slightly more proactive than Robert is when it comes to dealing with violent kid tendencies. Wonder how not being raised by Reek and allowed to murder/rape with impunity will affect the kid?
Well, when Ramsay was brought to the Dreadfort, Reek was kinda put in charge of him at first, though the boy took a liking to Qyburn, so it was only natural for Roose to assign the duty full time to Qyburn after the incident. Also, Ramsay was mostly brought there as a bag of spare organs in case Roose ever needed a new kidney from somewhere, so it doubly made sense to keep him close to the surgeon.
 
Well, when Ramsay was brought to the Dreadfort, Reek was kinda put in charge of him at first, though the boy took a liking to Qyburn, so it was only natural for Roose to assign the duty full time to Qyburn after the incident. Also, Ramsay was mostly brought there as a bag of spare organs in case Roose ever needed a new kidney from somewhere, so it doubly made sense to keep him close to the surgeon.
I guess it's a good thing, for Ramsay at least, that Roose decided on that freaky eye graft replacement thing.
 
Due to people complaining about the paragraph structure, I decided to break it up after all. @Goldfish, @A_Somebody, is this better in your opinion?
Yeah, I personally vastly prefer it. And thank you for being apparently one of the few internet authors that realizes when breaking up dialouge paragraphs that the paragraph shouldn't always start with the quote and should have related preceeding actions/adverbs attached... Can't fucking count the number of times I see silliness like this:

Character A said slyly,

"character's a dialouge." character b replied tersely

"character b's dialouge"

Thats not how it works!!!!

Well, when Ramsay was brought to the Dreadfort, Reek was kinda put in charge of him at first, though the boy took a liking to Qyburn, so it was only natural for Roose to assign the duty full time to Qyburn after the incident. Also, Ramsay was mostly brought there as a bag of spare organs in case Roose ever needed a new kidney from somewhere, so it doubly made sense to keep him close to the surgeon.

Ah of course. Well. Still kinda counts as being more proactive than Robert with Joffrey?
 
So we go to the Giants with a small party, just after setting fire to a hornet's nest with our actions at Thenn Valley?
I think we should be fine. It was an action for an action. We provoke the Others in Thenn Valley, the Others responded in that Valley and mostly used up their free response.
Well, when Ramsay was brought to the Dreadfort, Reek was kinda put in charge of him at first, though the boy took a liking to Qyburn, so it was only natural for Roose to assign the duty full time to Qyburn after the incident. Also, Ramsay was mostly brought there as a bag of spare organs in case Roose ever needed a new kidney from somewhere, so it doubly made sense to keep him close to the surgeon.
The organ industry should be blossoming these days. Flesh Forges are amazing.
 
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I guess it's a good thing, for Ramsay at least, that Roose decided on that freaky eye graft replacement thing.
That came first. While fixing up Roose with his new arm and eye, Qyburn remarked that he was lucky to not have lost something more vital since he would need a compatible donor to repair more extensive damage.

One week later, he was introduced to Ramsay.
 
Yeah, I personally vastly prefer it. And thank you for being apparently one of the few internet authors that realizes when breaking up dialouge paragraphs that the paragraph shouldn't always start with the quote and should have related preceeding actions/adverbs attached... Can't fucking count the number of times I see silliness like this:

Character A said slyly,

"character's a dialouge." character b replied tersely

"character b's dialouge"

Thats not how it works!!!!
It took me two reads to understand this, I have never seen it before and I have a spontaneous urge to visit violence upon anyone who abuses poor defenseless paragraphs in that fashion.
 
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