Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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There's also the underlying factor that Meizhen is confident due to lifelong education and context what she can away with as "Youthful indiscretion" whereas Ling Qi is both less sure of that and likely has a shorter leash if she wants to remain respectable.
While true, your comment misses the point that Ling Qi simply does not have an interest in pursuing those "indiscretions" in the first place and instead plays up caring about the decorum so as to avoid being viewed oddly for not being interested in them.
 
[X] What the internal response of the province had been like

I would like to show our boss that we are taking our social/political responsibilities seriously and not falling back on the first opportunity we get to be a murderhobo again.
 
[X] What the internal response of the province had been like

We can only know so much about our enemy, however we have a good amount of access to knowing yourself and our allies. It's essential to understand the system you work in if you want to have it working for you too.
 
Ling Qi was quiet, sipping her tea as she watched her friends converse. Out of the corner of her eye, she watched her mother. She saw Ling Qingge's careful, practiced poise, and the stewing concern under the facade as she answered a question of Xiao Fen's in a polite and demure voice. Though this had been an unexpected and sudden visit, her mother had been preparing herself very rigorously, had she not?

Wonder if this meeting will give Qinnge a bit of confidence. She hosted a small get-together with a freaking Bai, and it all went well and said Bai was courteous and respectful.

Xiao Fen arched a scaly eyebrow. "Oh, I am not speaking of any still extant individuals. How bold of you to presume that I would make such a gaffe," she replied coolly.

I do really like Xiao Fen's style of speech. She's proud and persnickety.

She glanced over at her friends, she could probably save them some trouble, it wasn't like this was some official meeting. "Would either of you be bothered if my little sister came out to play in the garden while we have our tea?"

"The hell kinda snob do you think I am," Su Ling snorted. "Just about done anyway, got stuff to do."

A thousand curses that we missed the scene of Biyu encountering Su Ling of the fluffy tails. Especially given that whilst she's a grump she's a good person and wouldn't have the heart to resist the ball of energy that is Biyu.

"Is she teethed?" Xiao Fen asked.

Ling Qi paused, caught short by the bizarre question from Xiao Fen. "...Yes?" Ling Qi answered.

"Then it is no trouble," Xiao Fen replied as if the question was totally normal.

I mean...given the eight Bai clans and various non-clan descendants are so numerous that they constitute an ethnicity in and of itself that's probably an entirely normal concern across the whole of Thousand Lakes.

Ling Qi was in a good mood by the next morning. After her friends had left, she had spent more time with her Mother and sister and discussed what they were going to do. The offer to fund a trip back to a settlement of their choice had been extended to the staff, and Ling Qi's mild surprise, no one had taken it. Given what the women had been doing before, Ling Qi wasn't too surprised though.

Yeah, it might be scary a bit, but what they have here? Worth facing a bit of fear for. They have safe and mundane work, primarily under the authority of an old friend, and they're safe from dodgy clients.

Well, she would work out the details with Li Suyin tomorrow. She had already sent a message to the other girl and received a reply, she would be happy to help. Ling Qi had even haggled her up to accepting more than cost for her work. Ling Qi chuckled to herself as she remembered the fierce battle of words against her friends generosity.

Right, well then, we have a scene for the omake writers to work on. Li Suyin dropping by the house and interacting solely with Qingge. Li Suyin is from a bit of a hybrid background, not a noble family but with cultivator ancestors, and her father is a Ministry official that has done very well for a mortal.

So, sort of a middle class background effectively, quite a safe meeting for Qingge to further cut her teeth on, plus another of her daughters friends she can meet.

Meizhen was, Ling Qi noted clinically, walking a bit closer to her side than was strictly appropriate, and the prickly Bao did not seem to find this objectionable.

Cute. Cute. Cute.

. "It might have saved you, but your body reacted to the sun qi about as well as it did to the poison.

Really not surprising given how deep into Moon LQ is.

"Manufactured for certain," Bao Qingling said. "Similar enough compositional traces that I suspect a master alchemist somewhere in the enemies supply chain."

Ah, Clan Pestilens is involved.

"And I cannot fully understand your reticence," Meizhen replied sadly. "However, perhaps life in Emerald Seas has made me soft, but… I find myself looking forward to a little youthful indiscretion. Life is to be lived, after all."

Wow. Gods Meizhen has grown and changed so much, I love it. She's not so curled in on herself.

[] What was known about the enemies that had attacked them

We don't know much, but we do know a little.

The Skaven (and by extension the other residents of the Under-Empire) are based on an utterly different and incompatible form of Cultivation. Surface air is inimical to them (and vice versa), and they don't have Beast Cores. They have some weird anti-cores that absorb and concentrate impurity. Which let Li Suyin develop her really cool Meridian tech, but nonetheless the Anti-cores are useless for the normal methods you'd use cores for.

Utter devastation. I wanted so desperately to read that scene.

If you want to read it you should write it :p

Another interesting detail. So there is a repel effect in sun and moon qi.

I'd guess it's possible to build a Way using both, but the themes are so antithetical it would be very difficult and very narrow. So you could do an Eclipse thing, but otherwise you'd be using only one or the other. Maybe you could use both if you only used them cyclically?

a/w

[X] What was known about the enemies that had attacked them
 
While true, your comment misses the point that Ling Qi simply does not have an interest in pursuing those "indiscretions" in the first place and instead plays up caring about the decorum so as to avoid being viewed oddly for not being interested in them.

Correct, which is why the second word in my post is "also"
 
[X] What the internal response of the province had been like

Know yourself first. We know some things about our enemies, but we know next to nothing what empire will do in this situation.
 
One thing that stood out to me:

Meizhen met her eyes then, and the girl blinked in surprise. Suddenly the pressure that surrounded the pair faded. "Ling Qi? I did not recognize you, are you well?" She asked, a touch of concern in her voice, interrupting whatever conversation they had been having.

Between being poisoned and burned by the sun, Ling Qi's qi wasn't even recognizable by her best friend. I think the damage was actually pretty significant. Also, I think calls for Anti-dark might be jumping the gun.

LQ's spirit is literally in turmoil.
 
[X] What was known about the enemies that had attacked them

Right now we don't have the War skill and Political insight to make proper use of info about our allies. We are most likely going to act as a scout as well and more info about our enemies will be invaluable here, and more important than domestic matters we cant affect as much.

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[] What was known about the enemies that had attacked them

Right now we don't have the War skill and Political insight to make proper use of info about our allies. We are most likely going to act as a scout as well and more info about our enemies will be invaluable here, and more important than domestic matters we cant affect as much.
Pls put an X inside the bracket
 
*Other Bai Cousins* "What the hell happened to Cousin Meizhen out at Argent? All that happened to us during our sect time was just kicking around imperial riff raff."

[X] What was known about the enemies that had attacked them
 
[x] What the internal response of the province had been like

The vote seems to be short term benefits of knowing your enemies vs long term benefits of knowing your allies.
There's also the fact that we'll obviously have other people telling us about the barbarians, but we most probably won't have anyone else tell us about the political situation in the background. At the very least, noone at the same level as CRX.
 
Wonder if this meeting will give Qinnge a bit of confidence. She hosted a small get-together with a freaking Bai, and it all went well and said Bai was courteous and respectful.
This visit should help hammer home just how big of a deal Ling Qi has gotten.
A member of a ducal family just visited, and was not only polite and respectful, but almost deferential (in a very sarcastic manner) towards the head of the house.
Sure the Ling clan maybe as small a family as you can get, and as low at the nobility totem pole as you can get while remaining nobility.
But they have retainers of ducal houses making social calls, and the head of the house is a direct vassal of a ducal heir.

It would be really interesting to get a point of view interlude from the servants.
 
[x] What the internal response of the province had been like

The vote seems to be short term benefits of knowing your enemies vs long term benefits of knowing your allies.
There's also the fact that we'll obviously have other people telling us about the barbarians, but we most probably won't have anyone else tell us about the political situation in the background. At the very least, noone at the same level as CRX.
Also long term benefit of knowing our enemies.
Like, sure, the barbarians and the skaven are a threat, but that should be a short term one for now, while our fellow nobles will remain a threat, forever.
 
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