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Is he supposed to be referring to them as fictional out loud? Or is the quote mark misplaced and he's talking to himself in his own head?"O-? No." I shake my head. "No, that… N-. No. I mean, she's my best friend's mother." Sniggers all around. "And even if this is a work of fiction, it's not that kind of work of fiction. Honestly, I don't think of her in that sort of way."