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It was recommended twice about 3 years ago, two years ago there was a post about the move to SV, and about a month ago it was mentioned in this thread.

Personally I think that this story fits the rational archetype about as well as most of the stories posted there. Uplift, protagonist using their abilities intelligently is their main power, conflict arises due to differences in ideology, events happen because of in universe reasons rather than being driven by narrative, the magic system is analyzed and quanitified in order to use it better, emphasis on the power of science, etc. Not every theme is hit upon in every episode, but the above are all reoccurring themes in this story and in the rational genre.
 
I'm extremely curious how you fry the liquids in that list. Fried ice cream seems like it wouldn't work, but it's simply fried for a very brief period of time while still solid. Do they freeze the beer, then fry it? How does it work? How is it served?

None of those seem like good ideas, but some of them don't even seem possible to fry.

Generally by putting them in stuff and then frying it.

Like the club salad is put in a wrap and then fried, the butter is coated in cinnamon-sugar, frozen and then fried, etc.

So the beer is put inside a coating of salty pretzel like dough, and then fried.
 
What? I can honestly say that in my entire life, I've never seen a candy bar named "Mars"

Also, just because I'm American, doesn't mean I fry everything. And why would you fry a candy bar? That sounds horrifying.

....Actually I don't fry anything come to think of it. Well, perogies sure. But they make such a mess that I haven't bothered in years.
 
So are you flat whating at the deep fried mars bar or at the fact that @Maxx Crowley doesn't recognize it?
Both.
What? I can honestly say that in my entire life, I've never seen a candy bar named "Mars"

Also, just because I'm American, doesn't mean I fry everything. And why would you fry a candy bar? That sounds horrifying.

....Actually I don't fry anything come to think of it. Well, perogies sure. But they make such a mess that I haven't bothered in years.
It's nougat, caramel and milk chocolate. Heating it increases the strength of the smell (and most taste is smell) and gives a strong texture contrast between the crisp batter and melted chocolate.
 
The tradition of frying foods is also alive and well at fairs, the Texas State Fair has included fried- bubblegum, butter, beer, coke, PB banana cheeseburgers, chicken fried bacon, jelly beans, pizza, cadbury chocolate eggs, kool-aid, french fry coated hotdogs, pecan pie, lattes, PB and jelly sandwiches, salsa, pop tarts, margaritas, Smores, club salads, pumpkin pie, pineapple upside down cake, oreos, cheesecake, jambalaya, and bacon cinnamon rolls.

Hmm, a grand total of three of the above sound like they might be worth trying to me, I imagine that's a higher number than some here though. :)
Chicken fried bacon could work... french fry coated hot dogs actually sound pretty good, like a corn dog but with potato instead... pecan and pumpkin pie, huh, hadn't thought of that but those would work... PB&J is fairly obvious... pop tarts I've heard of, it's too rich for my tastes but it works... s'mores and oreos are also pretty obvious... Deep-fried cheesecake is GOOD STUFF, you can actually buy it premade in the freezer section at Walmart... Bacon cinnamon rolls sound like one of those interesting flavors already, it should work, and deep-frying makes sense, but holy crap that's a heart attack waiting to happen.

It was recommended twice about 3 years ago
*raises hand* That's how I found it!
 
Generally by putting them in stuff and then frying it.

Like the club salad is put in a wrap and then fried, the butter is coated in cinnamon-sugar, frozen and then fried, etc.

So the beer is put inside a coating of salty pretzel like dough, and then fried.
Apparently, for some things the trickiest part is the coating it in batter. Personally, I found the guys who figured out how to batter and fry water to be the most impressive. Even if it turned out as tastless as it sounds, it was a rather cool technical achievement.
 
What? I can honestly say that in my entire life, I've never seen a candy bar named "Mars"
Are you familiar with Snickers, M&Ms, Skittles, Twix? These are all products of... Mars Incorporated. That's what one of the Ms stands for, in M&Ms. It's possible you haven't seen an actual Mars bar, since they're fairly rare in America, but if you haven't heard of the company at all, that'd be odd.
 
Warning: Warning
Call me when a character I care about does something important.
so we're still spinning our wheels. call me when something important happens.

warning @Angelform @Fluffy I think I've already made it clear that post stating "This arc is boring. Call me when something interesting happens" are not welcome.

They have no constructive value, are insulting to the author, and encourage aggressive responses from those who actually enjoy the arc.

If you have a critique about the pacing of the story, then state it in a constructive manner. Those posts, as they are, say nothing beyond "This is bad", and in rather blasé manner to boot.

As this is your first instance of such behavior, I'm leaving it at this warning. Be more considerate about your posting in the future, and see that it does not happen again.

Carry on.
 
Wha...what? What kind of relationships have you been seeing people in? I don't understand.

Communicating clearly and honestly is basic shit, right? Am I going insane?
it's both basic shit and depressingly rare :c
it takes a lot of effort to go against cultural expectations for a lot of people, but in some subcultures it is the norm and those are great places to be
 
Sure, and that's why he's a bad person. It's no reason to hate him as a CHARACTER, though.
If we're talking about Truggs, I hate him as a character because he's annoying, and detracts from my enjoyment of the story.

I am reminded of an anime I once watched where there was an epic battle going on to decide the fate of the universe and the protagonist decided to ignore it so he could go out for lunch...
... OK, now I am curious. WTF?
 
Quite enjoying Paul navigating the treacherous shoals of polyamory? Multidating? If he meets a 3rd Jade, would it just be assumed at this point? ;)
 
Quite enjoying Paul navigating the treacherous shoals of polyamory? Multidating? If he meets a 3rd Jade, would it just be assumed at this point? ;)

Probably not, the most likely third Jade for Mandate Paul to meet would be Jade Canary aka Lady Shiva.

Although what Mandate Lady Shiva is like might be interesting. Is she a superfunctionary? Has she been taught actual supernatural martial arts?

Are supernatural martial arts ala Sensei of Delta Chi Delta or Peter Cannon Thunderbolt more common? After all, this Chinese Empire was started by a martial artist monk.

Hmm, Sensei would be another character that might show up. The Sensei of DCD is a three hundred year old samurai from Japan who reached enlightenment, he can manifest his soul/ki like the Human Torch to fly, sense emotions via aura sight, heal, energy blasts, as well as having about 3 centuries of martial arts skills while still looking young enough to get carded at bars. Hopefully he wasn't nuked here.
 
Mandated (supplementary, Renegade option)
23rd October
08:30 -6


I smile at Ms Kimble as she enters the living room, escorted by a smiling Miss Amane. "Miss Kimble, thank you for joining us."

"Like I had a choice." She glances back at her escort, who closes her eyes and smiles at her. "Am I getting out of here now?"

"Perhaps. Please." I gesture to the chair across from me with my right hand. "Be seated."

Bit quicker on the uptake than some, this one; she does a quick scan of the room and then takes the seat I've offered her. Miss Amane takes up position a little way behind her, pole arm in hand.

"First, a quick update for you. The rest of Persuader's recruits have been taken into custody by the Department of Metahuman Affairs and their equipment confiscated. Their training area is being occupied and picked apart by forensic investigators and any interesting technology will be passed to their research teams. You have the thanks of a grateful nation. Even Kal-El asked me to thank you on his behalf."

"Great. So I can go now?"

My eyes narrow slightly. "Do you really want to go home?"

"Beats being locked in a room here." She smiles viciously. "Or are you going to make me an offer?"

I lean back slightly, and nod. "Something like that. As you can tell from Miss Amane's presence, I do recruit people with useful skills. And in return for their work, I both pay them and.. help them in certain ways. In your case, locating your father was a simple matter and you're now old enough to request that you be transferred into his care regardless of your mother's wishes."

"You found D-?!"

She bites down her wave of excitement, most likely realising how much it weakens her negotiating position. Stuart Kimble didn't exactly impress me, but as far as I can tell he's just about the only person Miss Kimble actually cares about and I believe that it's best to steer clear of recruiting outright sociopaths.

"To forestall your next question, when he and your mother separated she told him that if he attempted to gain custody of you she would go to the police and claim that he had been assaulting her for the duration of their marriage. And since I've had telepaths studying her mind for the past few days, I think I can write that one up as a believable threat. One which she will not have access to any longer. Your father has indicated that he is very much interested in getting custody, so if you'll give it the nod we can get started on that."

She nods.

"Having looked over your school records-."

"Those are private."

"I'm a Federal Agent investigating a supervillain. I can get access to all sorts of things." Legally, even. "Your grades range from C to D in every subject save P-." Ugh. "Save gym class. Not helped by the fact that you stabbed your maths teacher to death."

"What the fuck! No I d-!"

"Oh, don't even. One stab through the neck with a serrated blade which you kept. Though I was mildly amused by the fact that one of your classmates apparently paid you for the hit." I slouch back in my seat. "To be honest, that surprised me more than the fact that you killed him."

"I wanna talk to a la-."

"No you don't. You want this to go away. You want to have a tearful reunion with your father, change school and put the whole thing behind you." I raise my eyebrows. "Don't you? Because the rules concerning evidence gathering while investigating supervillains are fairly generous. If you insist on talking to a lawyer, I have to stop talking to you. But you will be convicted of the vicious murder of a loving husband and father and spend the next forty years in prison. So: think carefully before insisting on exercising your legal rights."

She glares at me for a moment.

"What do you want?"

"Assuming that you remain at large… Where do you see yourself in a few years' time?" She doesn't reply. "Now, be honest. I already know you're a murderer, it's not going to make me think any less of you." Still nothing. "You see, one thing I noticed about his body was the lack of bruising. You didn't assault him first, you just… Snuck up behind him and stabbed. The level of missing persons reports in your home town are fairly normal so I'm guessing that you haven't been practising… Did you plan to continue that sort of work? Because without some very particular connections it isn't easy to get work as a freelance assassin. Did you plan to join the military?"

"I dunno. Yeah?"

"Not a terrible choice, but I think you would have found being constantly shouted at by the drill instructors uncomfortable. And of course there's the chance that someone might have found out about the murder... Though… They're not exactly thorough about background checking, you might have gotten away with it, and.. some people respond better to that sort of physical discipline than they do a classroom…"

"Are you actually going to make me an offer at some point?"

"I've employed people with.. shady pasts before. To flat out kill someone like that, at your age and without formal training, takes a very particular mental state and I'm sure that I could find a use for you. My problem in your case is the potential for blowback if anyone else works out that you killed your teacher. But, you brought my attention to the Persuader and I'm loath to simply hand you over to the police. So here's your choice. You can move in with your father and make the best life for yourself that you are able. Or, you can enter my employ."

"Do I get my axe back?"

"If you work for me, yes."

She eyes me cautiously. "What does it pay?"

"During your apprenticeship, you get expenses. You also get a telepathically implanted education to replace the one you didn't bother paying attention to at school, superior equipment, physical augmentations that will allow you to survive the rigors of super powered combat and training in how to use them. Once you are ready, your pay will be proportionate to the tasks I set you."

She nods cautiously. "Is.. that it..?"

"That's it." There's a boom as a tube opens to my right, and I gesture to it with my right hand. "You are free to go. I will be in touch in a week for your decision."

She waits for a moment, presumably to see if there's another shoe coming down. I lean forward and wiggle my hand a little. "You can go."

She gets up and strides through the tube, which shuts down as she passes. Hm. I'd say there's a seventy percent chance of her accepting. Getting her out of a toxic environment might lead to her reforming on her own… But I rather doubt it.

"Master?" Miss Amane pointedly glances at the door, then nods her head towards it.

Again? I get up and walk over to the door, kneeling down before I open it.

Ten year old Cassandra looks up at me, then down, then all around as she tries to make sense of my body language. I bring my hands up to where she can easily see them as her G-Gnome escort scampers up behind her.

"Hello, Quiet Girl." I sign as I speak, and since there isn't a sign for 'Cassandra' I settled on that as the name least likely to get confused with anyone else. "Were you looking for me?"

She doesn't actually understand sign language any more than she does spoken or written language, but the G-Gnomes think it should be easier for her to learn it. They can't implant language without completely messing up her existing neural pathways, and from what Jean was saying I got the impression that wouldn't just cost her her combat skills as it did in the comics. The less violent way is to nudge her brain to increase its plasticity so that it becomes easier for her to learn languages the normal way, and that's what we're doing. She does have concepts of things, just not concrete labels for them.

She raises her hands and signs 'Hello Gray hello Man hello'.

"Just one 'hello'. At the beginning."

She just blinks, then signs 'play now play now now'.

I nod. "Yes." I stand and step back into the living room. "Fast Girl, could you fetch the Frustration board, please?"
 
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Huh, he actually legitimately grabbed Cassandra Cain. Good for Grayven. That's one way to get a loyal hand to hand combatant with odd prophecies attached ridiculously loyal to you.
 
It's amusing in a way, but for once I'm actually more happy about getting a scene with Rene-Paul then Para-Paul. At least with Grayven you know things matter more. With regular Paul we're just waiting for things to start heating up :/
 
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