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Not a correction, but something I noticed while going through history:



It seems a bit rich to blame Paul for this. Orin knew the arcane significance of his bloodline much better than Paul did; he should have known that it was a really bad idea to sow his royal oats around the place from a magical point of view, quite apart from the implications as a potential (absent) parent and the impact on his kingdom's succession. He did it anyway, and never once checked on his former lover, whether to discover he had a child or simply to say hi and inquire after her health and happiness. If Paul should have followed up sometime in the past 10 months, then Orin definitely should have followed up within the past 12 years.

And now that someone else has discovered what he should have already known? Instead of taking responsibility for what was objectively a big mistake (possibly leaving a magically significant heir around the place and never even checking whether he had or hadn't), he's angry at them for not having already fixed it for him.

Maybe, if Paul was an Atlantean citizen, then you could argue that he would have had a responsibility to take action to address such a threat to the stability of the kingdom. He isn't, and the responsibility rests squarely on the shoulders of the king.
He didn't know about his son. He could have checked but since the mother didn't contact him had no reason to think about it. OL did know and because he didn't share the information Orin's son and everyone around him was put in danger and Oceanus got to return. They both dropped the ball but OL did it far more recently and very easily could have done something.
 
The muscles, nerves, ligaments, etc aren't a perfect match. If you just mirrored it and cloned it onto your stump, I would bet that at the very least, you couldn't move it because all the nerve would be slightly off and thus completely disconnected.

If he can mirror every tissue group in one arm without mirroring the cells or molecules, transplant that arm onto his opposite side, and arrange all the nerves and blood vessels to line up correctly, then he's by far the smartest humanoid seen so far in this series.

A five-year-old knows how to play connect-the-dots. Obviously you can't just copy-paste, and you'd want to mirror it at the tissue level instead of at the molecular level to avoid chirality problems, but there's only a fairly narrow interface region that needs any effort. Mortal human doctors can reattach severed fingers. Scaling that up isn't hard, just time-consuming, and taking repetitive tasks and doing them faster is what machines do best.
 
pull the qwa-blade of one Thunderer into the arm of another. The resulting energy discharge blasts the arm to pieces, burns the armour protecting the Thunderer's side and probably causes all kinds of internal injuries. It also allows Guy to grab the man's severed hand with a construct, said hand still holding his qwa-blade. Guy then uses that to stab at a third Thunderer from odd angles, removing his left leg in a flash of yellow energy.

The bobblehead malware enforces a very Technical Pacifist approach to "no killing". It's like they didn't actually care, they just thought that they ought to.
 
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He didn't know about his son.
He knew there was a possibility. Unless his parents were even more negligent, and never explained to him how children come to be?

He could have checked but since the mother didn't contact him had no reason to think about it.
He's a king. Keeping track of the succession is something he really needs to be on top of, and he shouldn't be waiting around for anyone else to do it for him. He needs to know about any possible children, siblings, cousins, or other relatives who might possibly inherit the throne. Checking whether or not an ill-advised teenage fling actually resulted in a child should have happened years ago. If the royal blood is magically significant, it's doubly negligent.

They both dropped the ball but OL did it far more recently and very easily could have done something.
He could have, but of all the people who could have, most of them had more responsibility than he did. King Orin, first and foremost, should have followed up. Kako really should have said something to him when she found out she was pregnant. Queen Mera probably should have checked his romantic history, for the same pragmatic reasons he should have. If Orin's parents were around (I'm not sure), then they should have kept an eye on him and instilled more responsible habits. Just because Paul happened to know, doesn't mean it's his job to do anything when half a dozen other people could and should have beaten him to it.

And as he pointed out, it likely wouldn't even have stopped the kidnapping. It just would have meant that Truggs killed whatever token guards were sent. Nor can Orin complain about having been excluded from his son's upbringing, because that's all on himself and Kako. Lots of people made mistakes here, but Paul is near the bottom of the list, if his actions really were a mistake at all.
 
0) Steal a green lantern for Alan.

Really, that's what this trip is all about. Everything else is just gravy.
You really expect them to find a Green Power Battery just laying around? Why would the Qwardians even have one?

I personally think assimilating Kalmin would be a just punishment for someone who makes slave rings, but that's me. Paul may disagree, but that whole spending time as an alternate version with one of those rings may be what pushes him over the edge.
Kalmin knows they are coming, and he seems to have a pretty good understanding of Power Rings/Batteries since he was able to create the Yellow Ring. And he seems to have at least a small understanding of the Orange Light, I doubt he's going to expose himself to them without considerable defences.

I really hope that we get some commentary on this about how it is, at best, pointless and at worst counter productive.
Kalmin wants Paul to live, at least long enough for Kalmin to get some new data/get Paul to do something that presumably is easier with a Power Ring
 
Authority (part 21)
22nd August
16:18 GMT


"Ragnar, good to see you with us." I form cold gun constructs and transmit my targeting solutions to Guy. "You're on rearguard duty. Keep moving downwards at best speed, and otherwise do your best to kill anyone following us."

His head appears over my second ring, flickering and glitching as its ancient and primitive systems try to cope with his ersatz ring's transmissions. "This feels like fleeing."

"
It may feel like fleeing but it's actually a tactical manoeuvre which brings us closer to our objective. Feel free to turn and face Lantern Duran once we're out over the Ash Plains."

Okay, the tunnel going downwards is sixty metres in diameter. It probably used to be used for spacecraft or missiles, but from the cargo lifts built into the sides I'm going to assume that it is now used mostly for transporting goods, supplies and personnel. Should I be surprised that the Qwardians don't have a teleportation system, or would that just be because if they can teleport from one point to another any potential attacker would have the same ability? This way, anyone who wants to get in has to either blast their way through miles of rock or breach a heavily fortified location.

I spin across the passageway as the first blasts from the automated defences fire, fat orange/yellow Kirby Dot impregnated beams of something firing up at me and mine. Shots are… Relative velocity… About half a second long, the guns' capacitors taking an appreciable amount of time to charge up between shots. I see Guy firing bolts of green energy at them… Still bolts, but at least he's not projecting them directly from his ring anymore. The guns have energy shielding… What kind, I wonder? I aim my cold guns at the ones he's already weakened and fire, even as I generate railguns to replace-.

Oh my goodness me, Guy just made a railgun. For a fraction of a second I'm so flabbergasted that I just blink. Yes, I gave him some ammunition for Christmas but I never actually thought that he'd use it in combat. Okay. I fire at the other turrets, crumbler rounds striking and disintegrating the… Plasma shields. Those we can deal with. The armoured cowling is made of the same stuff as the Thunderers' shields but rings are nothing if not precise instruments and the guns are fixed. Hitting the lightly armoured areas is no problem.

Flying downwards fast like this is actually quite an odd experience. I'm blasting towards a ground I can't see… Can't even detect, really. I mean, I got a reasonable map of the place from Guy so I know roughly how far down we're going but I'm very glad that my ring is making it so that my inner ear thinks I'm flying level-.

Dull green beams flash past me and score the sides of the tunnel.

"Ragnar, have-?"

"I checked the angle. I knew he would miss."

"
If you're hard pressed, I can fire-."

"No! I have this!"


On his head be it. Duran doesn't appear able to fly faster than us, so the melee weapons he and Ragnar both favour are off the table. Energy bolt exchanges are largely ineffectual, with both of them able to absorb shots better than they can land them. There isn't.. really an easy way for me to assist Ragnar. Duran appears to have decided that the best approach is to keep Ragnar between him and us, and neither of them are dodging that much. I can't get a clear shot with a crumbler-.

Another volley from the tunnel guns fires upwards. One gets a glancing hit on my construct armour, abrading it but otherwise causing no damage. Guy isn't using armour, he's just maintaining an armoured plate in front of him and letting it fail as he takes hits. It's probably a lot easier for a Green Lantern to do it that way than making conventional armour. We both target the new guns and open fire, blowing them apart in a hail of railgun rounds, energy pulses and cold beams. The wrecked guns from our initial exchange flash past me-.

The guns further down open fire, this time with light speed weapons. I increase the reflectivity of my construct armour in response, causing the lasers to splash off harmlessly. A pink-agh-.

Ugh. I shove off the wall, recreate my engine constructs and resume my full throttle downwards blast. Okay, quantum detonators aren't affected by shininess. I send Guy a revised targeting schedule at the exact same moment I receive his. I send an acknowledgement, then start firing. Actually, I should probably start firing something at the armoured door at the bottom of the shaft. Or at least at the walls near the end, because we're probably going to either come out into a fortified building in a Qwardian city or a fortress in the middle of nowhere. Yeah, let's get-.

My shots pass harmlessly through the weapon hardpoints as they shift out of phase.

Aaaaahhhh… That's a problem.

"Guy, phasing turrets. Don't have any Nth Metal on you, do you?"

"Actually, no."


Okay… Okay… I've got phasic rounds. It's just a matter of matching phase, and there are only a few dozen that are usable with the energy requirements that other frequencies have. Um, select a target, set the round to a frequency at random, fire-.

Below me, Guy blasts a chunk out of the tunnel wall next to a phased turret, causing the rock and metal to explode outwards and send the turret tumbling downwards.



Okay, brute force and ignorance it is then.

I dismiss my existing weapon constructs and generate two large railguns, load them with crumbler rounds and fire.

"Ragnar, if you get the chance, try to provoke Lantern Duran into throwing a qwa-bolt directly down towards the bottom of the shaft."

"He is not some puppet I can play at your convenience!"


I fire again, smashing another pair to guns off their mounts. "Try taunting him."

"I am taunting him!"

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Try taunting him more." Another pair of shots, but this time the lasers switch their attention from me to strike at my rounds. The simple kinetic strike that results when the crumbler mechanism is destroyed does nothing like enough damage to prevent the gun from-.

Araugh!

Constructs gone, I'm hurtling downwards… Slower than I was a moment ago. Ah, let's see, construct armour gone, weapons gone, armour… Somewhat battered but actually doing-.

Lasers pierce my right arm, chest and left leg, and-. Okay, the ring prevents me from feeling pain exactly but it's still bloody disconcerting. I re-establish my construct armour-. No, thicken it, I'm not going to have to fight anything particularly manoeuvrable in it. Good, thrusters back on and try catching up with Guy-.

"Guy, are you alright?"

"Been better. Still… Flyin'."

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Okay, we should only have a minute until we're inside Qward and can try breaking out. Did you ever get around to adding a kinetic barrier to your costume?"

"Yeah? Why?"

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Because I'm not totally sure where the bottom is, and I want to make sure that we'll both survive if we fly into it at full force."

"…good thinkin' thereooooh crap."

"
What?"

A qwa-bolt burns through the air to my right.

"We got incomin'."
 
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I'm still enjoying the OL / Ragnar interactions...
"Ragnar, have-?"

"I checked the angle. I knew he would miss."

"
If you're hard pressed, I can fire-."

"No! I have this!"

"Ragnar, if you get the chance, try to provoke Lantern Duran into throwing a qwa-bolt directly down towards the bottom of the shaft."

"He is not some puppet I can play at your convenience!"


I fire again, smashing another pair to guns off their mounts. "Try taunting him."

"I am taunting him!"

"
Try taunting him more."

Ammunition for Chistmas, that's so sweet!

Oh my goodness me, Guy just made a railgun. For a fraction of a second I'm so flabbergasted that I just blink. Yes, I gave him some ammunition for Christmas but I never actually thought that he's use it in combat.

OL's always happy to learn...

Okay… Okay… I've got phasic rounds. It's just a matter of matching phase, and there are only a few dozen that are usable with the energy requirements that other frequencies have. Um, select a target, set the round to a frequency at random, fire-.

Below me, Guy blasts a chunk out of the tunnel wall next to a phased turret, causing the rock and metal to explode outwards and send the turret tumbling downwards.



Okay, brute force and ignorance it is then.
 
He didn't know about his son.
But the mother did know about the son and didn't tell him. So that's one involved person deciding he isn't entitled to know. If we are talking about what OL should do, that is the precedent of someone more informed than OL giving a vote against.
He could have checked but since the mother didn't contact him had no reason to think about it.
Unless there has been some shenanigans, He is the one responsible for keeping track of where his royal dick has been.
He is also the one who knew about the Royal Artifact McGuffin that allowed the whole plot and didn't tell anyone about it and was activated by royal blood. His secret royal artifact, his responsibility. His dick that begat the kidnapped son, his fault because he didn't order a magical scry once he knew about the artifact.

Holy shit, given the way green rings work that is impressive. like low-end super-genius levels of mental capacity impressive.
No necessarily. You could make a construct car without needing an engine, just have the wheels turn by will. If he can form the energy that accelerated the slugs directly, he doesn't need to know how all the fiddly bits that normally generate that electromagnetic force operate.
 
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Not really, if you can skip the whole making them part and know how they work, rail-guns are kinda simple. That cowboy Green Lantern made one right away.
 
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